Gahhh that ending was adorable 

A very sweet ending to a lovely story! 

This was brill! Very funny, and realistic! So many fics depict Severus as a sex god, whereas yours embraced his flaws and made him lovable and sexy anyway. Kudos!

So funny! Good job :)

LOL Not quite a romantic ending, but a very Severus ending. And hopefully now that he's gaining some experience he'll be able to control his urges a bit more. Congrats Hermione on popping that cherry

That is one way to finally address the situation. Now that his tension is released, perhaps she can some of hers taken care of?

So close, yet so far. Just talk to him for Merlin's sake!

I know I shouldn't laugh, but I love the seduction comedy of errors. She's just as hardheaded as he is. Hopefully it goes slightly better with Minerva's suggestion.

Shame she was too drunk to execute any of plans C-Z. Love that the ladies of the staff could see all the clues and inform her he's a bit dense on the social aspects. Of course none of them seem to have come up with best plan of just being direct.

Well, they are talking and he was being less curmudgeonly than usual. Shame neither of them has the guts to be more straightforward, though he is being pretty dense to the clues she's giving him

If she keeps this up, she'll find herself a virgin 20 years on, too. ;)

The plot thickens. I love his comment about her writing an essay criticizing his masturbation techniques. I also love who his cock has become a character in the story. Nice touch

The plot gets thicker. I can't wait to see how he reacts to seeing whatever it is in the magazine and then whether he decides to shoot the messenger.

Well, you definitely have me curious about not only what wonderfully cruel joke has been played on Severus, but by whom.

Quite zippy. :D If only humans in real life have such patience with each other! ^_^

Well, she really put her foot in her mouth, didn't she? Perhaps Hogsmeade weekend will give her a chance to redeem herself?

Oh poor Severus. Rita and the wizarding equivalent of photo shop - never good. He'll not have peace for a long time, I think

Well, move over and pass the chocolate sauce, and pass a cigarette to those who might be so inclined! Thank you for another very titillating and satisfying tale, sunny!

Oh, Lordy, lordy, lord...almost there! *whew* They definitely need a repeat performance with Severus having his liquor tolerance level strengthened enough that he can, um, pursue and enjoy the feisty witch giving him the best lap dance of his life--well, practice makes perfect--hehe! reading on! ps Truly enjoying this whirlwind of a saucy, *teasing*tale! Just what the doctor ordered: a good lusty dose of sunny!

Cute ending. It makes me wonder what harm can chocolate sauce do?

Oh, yes, Severus, now you know what all the fuss is about, silly, lucky wizard! Now, on to the bedroom people!!!

Oooooh, the slow burn between these two along with the massage is sending me over the edge (in a good way--lol!) Love Hermione taking the initiative and starting to take matters into her own hands--great chapter!

Well, we might have to put Severus' name on the nomination list for the Janus Thickey award--the Thicky of the Year, the dear sweetheart... Yes, what does Hermione have to do? *tearing my hair out* Great chapter!

Oh, poor Severus--little does he know that sometimes when a witch gets comfy enough to talk about her sex life, well... Let's see if he figures some of it out--hehe! Hermione is doing a wickedly wonderful job of keeping Severus all ruffled and *agitated* Great chapter!

Heh heh....not only sleeping on the job but one wonders if Brewer's Droop......if you'll pardon the pun........might not also be a potential symptom of Sev's incapacity to hold his liquor. Oh the shame of it! No self respecting Northern lad should be that way. But sad to say they often are! And so realistic. But just remember...it's not all grim up north!LOL! Great tale Sunny and certainly brightens my day when you update a story. Best wishes, Love Ali xxx.