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Heaven or Hell

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 04

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 06

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Epilogue

Heaven or Hell

MsTree

358 Reviews   |   358 Ratings, 0 Likes, 35 Favorites )

Humor Romance General Potions Under Duress 69,134 Words 38 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Other Canon Witch/Wizard Severus Snape Minerva McGonagall

Severus is found alive after the final battle, and the Wizengamot, in their wisdom, sentences him to five years of probation at Hogwarts.

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Chapters (38)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 04

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 06

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Epilogue


About MsTree

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MsTree

Member Since 2007  |  11 Stories  |  Favorited by 106  |  999 Reviews Written  |  918 Review Responses

A citizen of Calontir, living in the State of Misery, located north of Are-Kansas and south of Iowewaytoomuch. Writer of fiction who reads more than is healthy for her and owned by two terrors... I mean, terriers. ^_^

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Reviews for Heaven or Hell

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10/10

ClayPotter

I don't know what Hermione was thinking. When Malfoys make wagers, there is always something kinky going on!And now that he knows what they are planning, Severus has something up his sleeve.This sound like so much fun. I can hardly wait.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Next chapter goes into the queue this evening, so it may be a couple of weeks. There's quite a few stories being validated right now. ^_^

10/10

Marty21

LOL Im with Narcissa, Hermione will beat out Draco in the NEWTS...course Im not sure I want to hear Draco sing...maybe they will pass out earplugs for the students lol

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Oh, yes. Let the games begin. *evil laugh* ^_^

0/10

ofankoma

"Merlin save me from managing witches." (I think Severus protests too much on this one.) Three cheers for Hermione emerging as an equal! And another three for the willful manipulation of the Ministry - if anyone can give them a run for their money (quite literally), Minerva McGonagall can.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

I always thought she was rather undervalued in the books, even in the fight scenes. ^_^

0/10

ofankoma

Hufflepuff know-it-all, not choosing Ravenclaw because of self-esteem issues? That breaks my heart a little bit. Beyond the fact that the poor girl doubts herself, she made a choice not to go where she fit in, rather than choosing Hufflepuff because she valued something like fairplay or hard work more than sheer intelligence. It also shows what the general consensus is on the House of Hufflepuff, that you can go there if you're not good enough for someplace else. Ouch.That being said, it's nice to see Severus relax a bit. And do we need to be concerned about a certain Greek professor?

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

You mean as in "Beware of Greeks bearing horses"? Or was that gifts? *shrugs* Oh, well. I'm not too sure how he'll work out so I gave him my cousins' last name. ^_^

0/10

ofankoma

Hermione does seem the most likely of the trio to befriend a Slytherin, doesn't she? Certainly not Ron! I'm hoping this antagonism between our Slytherins and Gryffindors is being firmly established now so that Ron and Harry can come around in due course?

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

*grin* Keeeep reading! ^_^

0/10

ofankoma

Out of curiosity... why did Hermione choose this song for Draco to sing?

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Because his voice is really terrible? *grin* I thought of using "Friends in Low Places", but Joe Cocker got into my head and wouldn't leave. ^_^

Response from ofankoma (Reviewer)

Ha!  I'm trying to picture Draco as a bass, pulling off "Friends in Low Places." Uff. That would have been even worse!Bad singer karaoke, Hogwarts style.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

*light bulb moment* Story idea!!! ^_^

Response from ofankoma (Reviewer)

Ack!! Now I've got this image of Harry serenading Ginny with "Every Little Thing she does is Magic"... followed up by Lavender trying to win over anyone with "Afternoon Delight." Then we'd need someone to knock back one too many to acquire the nerve to pick up Pink Floyd and direct the line about 'no dark sarcasm in the classroom' to Snape!

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Great Idea! You want it? ^_^

Response from ofankoma (Reviewer)

I'm afraid I'm not actually funny! I leave it to your much more capable hands!(Of course, the real question is what song to give Dumbledore... or Sibyl? Or Lockhart!)

0/10

ofankoma

I can see the re-write now: 'Call me Severus.'The Moby Dick reference is remarkably apt, particularly as you note the interchangeability of roles.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

I thought the book was apt considering the imagery. Glad you liked it. ^_^

10/10

Olivain

Just discovered this story today. I really like it so far, and I look forward to updates. Any idea how many chapters it works out to, yet? I know you said it was for your NaNoWriMo entry, so I assume it's completed but being beta'd or even partially rewritten before posting here. Great job, so far!

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying this little story. It's the first fanfic I've written even though I've posted two other drabbles before I started posting this, and I really enjoyed listening to the voices in my head once I got used to Lucius hijacking my story. *grin*There are 38 chapters total including the my version fot the infamous Epilogue. Anything I have to rewrite is included in the original chapter so I doubt very much there will be more. Of course, don't quote me on that. ^_^

10/10

mimmom

I am enjoying this.  I can't wait for more chapters!

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Thank you. I am so glad people are enjoying this 'little' tale. It's my first fanfic ever because I wrote it before I wrote the others even though I'm only posting it now. Chapter 8 is in the queue. ^_^

10/10

mimmom

hermione is in demand!  This is a good story.  I am intrigued.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

LoL! You think she's in demand, now? Just wait! ^_~

0/10

sunny33

Hehe. Methinks Severus is a little henpecked! :)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

LoL! Narcissa has him in her power, n'est pas? I'm glad you're enjoying this. Chapter 8 is in the queue. If you think he's got woman troubles now, just wait! ^_~

10/10

mimmom

Ooh, excellent start.  I'm okay with friendly malfoys. 

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Considering Lucius hijacked the story from Severus and took it to Malfoy Manor rather than Spinner's End, I have to say I agree with you. ^_^

10/10

Nessa

They will just have to get together when she has finished uni.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

That will be approximately four years from now since they still have to finish 7th year. ^_~ Glad you're enjoying the story. ^_^

0/10

sunny33

Ooh, a snag. What will he say?:)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Just wait and see. *semi-evil laugh* ^_^

0/10

sharris

Well that is an interesting twist. I expected her to accept his offer.  Can't wait to see what is next! Keep it coming!

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

I have a lot of interesting twists and turns to come. *semi-evil laugh* Glad you're enjoying the story. ^_^

10/10

mimmom

Ha!  This is fun!  I look forward to reading more.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Glad you enjoyed it. My last comment to you should have been here. Next chapter: Draco, Hermione, Ginny, and Ron. Oh my! ^_^

10/10

mimmom

:)  That was fun!  I'm glad they can be friends.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

More fun to be had in the next chapter and it involves Ginny. 'Nuff said. ^_~

9/10

debjunk

This is a charming story, Ms.Tree.  Although the Ministry is awful!  I do hope they get theirs in the end.  Well, I guess with Hermione's new title, they are getting some of it right now in lost revenue.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

I'm afraid, like all governmental institutions, the Ministry will always be the Ministry. Especially with Percival Weasley working there. *grin* Of course, having to pay Master prices for Hermione's brewing does rather put a cramp in things seeing how she doesn't *have* to sell to them. Thanks for reading. The next chapter will be uploaded to the queue as soon as I get it back from my britpicker. ^_^

0/10

gersknightlady

Great start to this story I have enjoyed each chapter very much, I hope you update soon :)  Very much looking forward to more.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

And the fireworks are just beginning. *grin* I want to try and add some humour to the story. I hope I'm succeeding. Chapter 4 is in the queue. Hopefully it will go up sometime next week. The admins are really good about catching commas my beta missed. ^_~

0/10

sunny33

Nice to see him apologising to Minerva, even though he did what he had to do. :)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

I know. Now that he doesn't have to play a role, he wants to try and repair the few friendships he once enjoyed (and since it's my story, that's how it's gonna be). ^_~

0/10

sunny33

Choc mousse.  Now, that's what I call healing food! :)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Didn't you know chocolate is the universal healer? ^_~

0/10

sunny33

Ahh, good old Muggle immunology! :)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Of course! Not everything can be solved by magic every time. ^_^

10/10

Red_Garnet

Brava! Brava! Bravissima! Sorry, I'm currently addicted to The Phantom of the Opera. :) This is an awesome chapter, keep it up! Please update soon!

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Oooo! Look at the shinies. *grin* Chapter 4 went into the queue today. Hopefully it will be up sometime next week. ^_~

10/10

indigo_rose

Arrrgh, these chapters are too short!  It's killing me!    Anyway, great letter to Minerva in this one...also really enjoyed the ongoing banter between Severus, Hermione and Draco.  Will you be going into any detail regarding Hermione and Draco's seventh year at Hogwarts, or skimming over that and picking up detail again with the apprenticeships?  I'm good either way, I'm just wondering and attempting poorly to trick you into giving future plot tidbits away.    Is it working?

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Sorry about that! I was writing mostly in the evenings so my time was limited. I think some of the later chapters are a little longer. All I can say about future developments is Keeep Reeeading (to quote JR Ward). ^_~

10/10

indigo_rose

Severus is awake and wasting no time in handing out the sarcasm!  That's how you know the cure worked...  I really enjoyed Narcissa laying down the law on him; Hermione should take notes for future reference.  I ought to write more, but I am impatient to get to the next chapter!

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Yeah, Narcissa didn't waste any time, did she? Glad you're enjoying this. ^_^

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