Chapter 8
Chapter 8 of 38
MsTreeSeverus is found alive after the final battle, and the Wizengamot, in their wisdom, sentences him to five years of probation at Hogwarts.
ReviewedDisclaimer: I own the plot. JKR owns the characters and places. GrammarPolice and SlytherinsHeirx should own the pain au chocolat for their help in beta- and Britpicking this melee. Much thanks and virtual chocolates also to the admins who keep my commas in line. ^_^
Chapter Eight
...Two weeks later...
"Sir, are you sure?" Draco was perplexed. "I know you've made grand progress, but I'm not so sure about this."
"I refuse to continue simply pacing the upper hallway for the rest of my stay," Severus snarked. "I want to sit at a table and eat like a civilized person, not eat dinner in my room again."
"Draco," Narcissa interrupted, "if Severus thinks he can manage the stairs, then perhaps we should let him."
"But, Mother, he's..." Draco protested.
"But, nothing," Severus interrupted. "If I fall, it's entirely on my head. Let's go."
* * *
Hermione and Lucius stood at the bottom of the wide staircase and watched Severus slowly make his way downstairs followed by Narcissa and a frowning Draco. Once he reached the bottom, Severus took the walking stick Lucius held out to him with a grunted "Thank you."
"You're welcome," Lucius said with a smirk. "Keep it and consider it an early holiday gift."
Severus glared at him, then turned and walked into the dining room followed by a smiling Narcissa, who felt she had a rather lovely, if unconventional, family all of a sudden. Severus stopped next to a chair and waited while Lucius and Draco helped Narcissa and Hermione to their chairs. When the ladies were seated, the men took their seats, and Narcissa rang the silver bell sitting on the table at her right hand. With a "pop", bowls of soup appeared on the table in front of each of them and dinner began.
* * *
Minerva,
I appear to be progressing in my recuperation much faster than Draco believes I should be. I see no problem in teaching again come the winter term, but I'd prefer to remain in the old Potions classroom rather than move to the ground floor as suggested. I see no reason to coddle the students and have them expect never to have to brave the dungeons again.
I assure you I will have no problems in climbing staircases and patrolling the halls for miscreants. In fact, I believe I will enjoy the exercise.
Severus
* * *
Severus,
I know the terms of your probation say you are not to leave the grounds, but I expect you not to take out your frustrations on the students.
Of course, I'll keep the Potions class in the dungeons. That's the safest place for it. Whoever told you I was moving it to the ground floor?
I look forward to seeing you next month as do the rest of the staff. Filius says that he can't teach me the spells you used because he doesn't recognize them. I will definitely be coming to you to learn them.
Minerva
* * *
Minerva,
Why? Do you think I would give away my secrets that easily?
Severus
* * *
Severus,
You old fraud! Of course you'll teach me. Otherwise, I'll make your life under Voldemort and Dumbledore seem like a tropical holiday. So, what's it going to be?
Minerva
* * *
Minerva,
I suppose I will have to teach you then. Merlin spare me from managing witches.
Severus
* * *
"Well, you seem to be in a good mood," Narcissa said from the door of the library where Severus had taken up residence once he was able to move about. She walked in, levitating a tray of tea and a second tray of cakes and other pastries. "Is the news from Hogwarts that good?"
"The Headmistress and I are just having one of our civil conversations, albeit by owl rather than face to face," Severus answered with a smirk. "I believe your son has gone behind my back and suggested that the Potions classroom be moved to the ground floor, rather than the dungeons."
"Actually, I did that," Narcissa confessed. At Severus' scowl, she quickly explained. "I remember those stairs to the dungeons. They are steep and can be slippery at times, and I was afraid that you might lose your balance and fall. I truly didn't mean to infer that you were an invalid to be coddled."
"I should hope not." He sniffed and then took a deeper breath. "Do I smell pain au chocolat?"
Narcissa smiled. "Yes. I asked the house-elves to make some for our tea. Hermione is quite fond of the pastries."
"I take it Miss Granger will be joining us then," Severus growled.
"Why, Severus, I do believe you don't want our company." Lucius' snide remarks as he entered the library made Narcissa laugh, and Severus scowled at both of them. He started to say something, but was interrupted by Draco and Hermione's bickering voices.
"I still say he's trying to do too much too soon," Draco said.
"Nonsense, Ferret," Hermione shot back. "If he feels he can do something, then he should at least try. That's the whole idea behind physical therapy. The patient usually knows what he can and can't do."
They walked into the library to find Lucius and Narcissa beaming at them while Severus scowled.
"What?" Draco said, coming to a halt. "What'd I do now?"
"Nothing, dear." Narcissa smiled. "Come and have your tea."
Draco and Hermione exchanged puzzled looks on Narcissa's inexplicable affability and obeyed, seating themselves in the chairs on the other side of the tea table.
* * *
Severus waited until Draco took a sip of his tea. "I understand you don't believe I should be out of bed yet," he said.
Draco sputtered and started coughing. Hermione started up out her chair and he waved her away. "I didn't say that, sir," he said. "I just said I thought you were pushing too hard. The book..."
"The book is just guidelines," Hermione interrupted. "It's not the bible of physical therapy."
"The what?" Lucius asked. "I don't believe I've heard that expression before."
Severus smirked. "I do believe the Gryffindor Know-It-All has discovered that not every answer can be found in a book."
"Actually, sir, they can," Hermione said. "You just need to know how to interpret the information you're reading."
"Five points to Gryffindor, Miss Granger," Severus said. "I have been trying to teach you that since your first year. At least you no longer regurgitate the information word for word."
Hermione looked stunned. "D-did you just give points to Gryffindor, sir?" she asked.
"Did you lose part of your hearing in the final battle, Miss Granger?" he countered. "I find that I no longer have to coddle the members of my House in order to play a role. Therefore, when I return to Hogwarts, I will be giving and taking points appropriately.
"Even from Slytherin," he warned as Draco started to smirk, causing him to frown instead. "As to the expression Miss Granger used, Lucius, it means that there are other resources that may not agree with that particular volume and not to rely on it entirely."
"I see," Lucius said, reaching for the last scone. "So, Draco, do you still want to go to university after Hogwarts?"
"Yes, Father," Draco said. "I would like to learn more about how Charms can be combined with Potions. Professor Flitwick said that a university curriculum was better than an apprenticeship for learning to combine the two subjects, and he offered me an apprenticeship to complete my studies after I graduate."
"He did what?" Severus sputtered. "Why, that bandy-legged, little excuse for a teacher. If he thinks he can steal my apprentices..."
"Severus!" Narcissa said, shocked. "And you were doing so well, too."
"If you will excuse me," he growled as he reached for his cane and stood up. "I find I have a letter to write."
* * *
Author's Note: Pain au chocolat (translation: chocolate bread), for those who don't know, is a wonderfully flaky croissant crust wrapped around a stick of dark bittersweet chocolate and baked. Some bakeries roll hazelnuts or almonds up with the chocolate before the pastry is baked. They are delicious and very rich, which makes them perfect for chocolate lovers, in my opinion. I've even had them with an icing glaze drizzled over the top. Yummy!
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358 Reviews | 6.88/10 Average
Wish you could draw out the last chapter a l'll more :D maybe 2 paragraphs or so? :D
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I believe I wrote all I needed to for the epilogue as I couldn't think of anything else to write. I AM writing a sequel about the wedding, however, to be posted when it is completed. ^_^
Thank you for the entertaining story you've written, I've had a very good time seeing the development of friendship between Hermione and Draco, their parents - that's been a first, and very well done to boot - and also the relationship of H&S at the end.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I always felt Lucius and Narcissa really didn't know any Muggles personally, but were making judgements based on Muggle-born witches and wizards, which isn't a very wide sample of the population. So I asked myself 'what would happen if they met Muggle parents with the same family values they themselves held, ie family first, etc.?' The results are before you. I'm glad you approve of my little story. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I always felt Lucius and Narcissa really didn't know any Muggles personally, but were making judgements based on Muggle-born witches and wizards, which isn't a very wide sample of the population. So I asked myself 'what would happen if they met Muggle parents with the same family values they themselves held, ie family first, etc.?' The results are before you. I'm glad you approve of my little story. ^_^
Can we get a hint as to the title of the sequel ?? Pretty Please??
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Tentatively, I'm calling it "A Heaven or Hell Wedding". Narcissa's helping Elizabeth plan the wedding, but Molly wants to butt in and Severus just wants to elope. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Tentatively, I'm calling it "A Heaven or Hell Wedding". Narcissa's helping Elizabeth plan the wedding, but Molly wants to butt in and Severus just wants to elope. ^_^
You have spun a fine tale, thank you. I like how the elder Grangers and Malfoys found common ground.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
You're welcome. If you think they found common ground in this fic, just wait until the sequel comes out. Can you say "wedding planner"? ~_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
You're welcome. If you think they found common ground in this fic, just wait until the sequel comes out. Can you say "wedding planner"? ~_^
What a wonderful ending. I like this epilogue much better than the original. I would love to see Albus sorted into Slytherin. I know Hayy said he was okay with it, but would he really be? Thanks for a great story.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Harry and Severus have a complicated relationship. On the one hand, Harry likes how Severus makes Hermione happy. On the other hand, he remembers how miserably Severus treated the three of them, even if it was an act. I think Harry would prefer Albus be in any house but Slytherin, even Hufflepuff, but he won't hold it against his son. Thanks for reading. Stay tuned for the sequel--as soon as I get it finished. ~_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Harry and Severus have a complicated relationship. On the one hand, Harry likes how Severus makes Hermione happy. On the other hand, he remembers how miserably Severus treated the three of them, even if it was an act. I think Harry would prefer Albus be in any house but Slytherin, even Hufflepuff, but he won't hold it against his son. Thanks for reading. Stay tuned for the sequel--as soon as I get it finished. ~_^
Such a lovely story!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. I'm working on a sequel right now that would cover the next six months up to the wedding. It's more than 9.5K and I'm only in the first week of February. So much for a short (8-10 chapters).
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. I'm working on a sequel right now that would cover the next six months up to the wedding. It's more than 9.5K and I'm only in the first week of February. So much for a short (8-10 chapters).
Yay! She accepted the right one!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Did you really expect her to say "No"?
Response from jenidralph (Reviewer)
Well.. no, but it never fails to warm my heart and make me squee. :)
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Did you really expect her to say "No"?
Response from jenidralph (Reviewer)
Well.. no, but it never fails to warm my heart and make me squee. :)
I'm glad they all made up.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Minerva's too much of a friend for them not to forgive her.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Minerva's too much of a friend for them not to forgive her.
Yay!! FINALLY!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
You had to know I would get there sooner or later.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
You had to know I would get there sooner or later.
Love your version of the epilogue! Much better. :D
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
*elvis voice* Thank you. Thank you very much. ^_^If you liked this story, you'll love the sequel.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
*elvis voice* Thank you. Thank you very much. ^_^If you liked this story, you'll love the sequel.
Wow! Three proposals in one chapter. Or at least two real ones and one hinted at! :D
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Yeah! Popular girl, our Hermione. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Yeah! Popular girl, our Hermione. ^_^
I am sad that this story has ended . I have loved it from chapter one. But I will be looking forward to your next story. I'm glad I was along for the ride with you.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. A sequel is in the works, dealing with the trials and tribulations leading up to the wedding.Coming Soon! "A Heaven or Hell Wedding"! Look for it at an archive near you!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. A sequel is in the works, dealing with the trials and tribulations leading up to the wedding.Coming Soon! "A Heaven or Hell Wedding"! Look for it at an archive near you!
I loved this story from beginning to end!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. I'm working on a sequel for the six months between January 1 and June 30, 2004. So far, I've written over 9.5K and I'm only in the first week of February. This is gonna be some ride! ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. I'm working on a sequel for the six months between January 1 and June 30, 2004. So far, I've written over 9.5K and I'm only in the first week of February. This is gonna be some ride! ^_^
Poor Hermione having to endure all those proposals until she had the right man ask for her hand. I've really enjoyed this little ride and nice to see that Kingsley does have respect for Severus despite all the other idiots out there.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. There's a short epilogue in the queue. I'm hoping it will be up sometime in the next week or so. Depends on the moderators. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. There's a short epilogue in the queue. I'm hoping it will be up sometime in the next week or so. Depends on the moderators. ^_^
Yay!!!!!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
*ahem* {Elvis voice} Thank yew! Thank yew very much! *ahem* ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
*ahem* {Elvis voice} Thank yew! Thank yew very much! *ahem* ^_^
Of course it was the logical thing to do! With confidence intervals of 99% I'll reveal myself as a shameless nerd and ask if they are going to test for Goodness of Fit?
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I guess you'll just have to "keeeeep reeeeeading", to quote one of my favorite authors. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I guess you'll just have to "keeeeep reeeeeading", to quote one of my favorite authors. ^_^
They're getting somewhere at last!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
It does take a while to become friends if you want a real romance to last. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
It does take a while to become friends if you want a real romance to last. ^_^
YAY! Finally!!! *does happy SSHG dance*
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Chapter 35 is *ahem* very amusing. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Chapter 35 is *ahem* very amusing. ^_^
What a great solution!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. ^_^
Very funny chapter MsTree, finally some lemons. Loved when they got caught glad it didn't stop them,
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
They're scientists. More experimentation is required. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
They're scientists. More experimentation is required. ^_^
snerk! ^.^ yes further testing is, indeed required!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Of course it is. Isn't that what scientists do? ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Of course it is. Isn't that what scientists do? ^_^
Ten points for climbing a tree? Awwww c'mon ~ooops, there goes another ten~ Sod it! ~and another ten~ That was a fun and immensely satisfying chapter. I wish I had read it before our workplace Christmas function for some inspiration of how to buck an imposed (and increasingly ridiculous) trend with style!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I think I was channelling D. L. Sayers' book "Gaudy Night" with the tree climbing bit. *looks at MsTree's bookshelf* Yep, there it is, with the requisite Oxford undergrad prank of climbing every tree within the University walls. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I think I was channelling D. L. Sayers' book "Gaudy Night" with the tree climbing bit. *looks at MsTree's bookshelf* Yep, there it is, with the requisite Oxford undergrad prank of climbing every tree within the University walls. ^_^
Great story, really enjoyable. I'm loving your taste in books and authors as well. Clearly you also write brilliantly. Thanks.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you for the kind words. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you for the kind words. ^_^
It's funny that their friends don't suspect the obvious. Wll, Hermiones friends. Sound like there's a fun night ahead.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
People see what they expect to see. Always have; always will. "Fasten your seatbelt. There's a bumpy night ahead." ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
People see what they expect to see. Always have; always will. "Fasten your seatbelt. There's a bumpy night ahead." ^_^