Chapter 21
Chapter 21 of 38
MsTreeSeverus is found alive after the final battle, and the Wizengamot, in their wisdom, sentences him to five years of probation at Hogwarts.
ReviewedDisclaimer: The characters depicted in this fiction belong to JK Rowling, her heirs and assignees, except for those who belong to me.
Author's Notes: Kudos to noybate for stepping in as beta for this story when my other beta went MIA. This chapter has not been Britpicked, so any mistakes are my own. Now, on with the show.
Chapter Twenty-One
"Now that end of term exams are over, what do you intend to do for the summer holiday, Hermione?" Flitwick asked, taking advantage of a rare lull in student activity to check his box in the staff lounge. Hermione looked up from the Transfigurations Today periodical she was flipping through to answer.
"Minerva's going to work with me to see if I can complete my training and become an Animagus as part of my Transfiguration mastery. Why, Filius?"
"I thought you might want to begin an apprenticeship in Charms, is all," he said disarmingly. "Of course, becoming an Animagus can be time consuming, and not everyone succeeds."
"I have a feeling that if anyone can learn to transform, Hermione can," Minerva said, coming through the door with an armful of scrolls.
"Oh, here, Minerva, let me help." Hermione jumped to her feet and relieved Minerva of her burden. "What is all this?"
"Some of the exams from my Sixth year students," Minerva said. "If you would help me mark them, we can have them back to the students before the Leaving Feast Friday evening."
"Of course I can help," Hermione told her. "I've finished marking the exams for the lower years and left them in your office."
"I found them, dear. Thank you."
"Can I get you ladies anything?" Filius asked, holding up a bottle expectantly.
"No, Filius, thank you. I think Hermione and I have everything we need except the peace to get these done. But your offer is appreciated." Minerva looked down at the stack of parchments and grimaced.
"In that case, I'll bid you both adieu and check on the noise in the Entrance Hall. No doubt some student has managed to smuggle in a contraband Weasley Wizarding Wheeze. I believe a detention will be called for with Argus this evening."
"You do that," Minerva said rather absent-mindedly, since she was already immersed in reading the first of the exams on the table in front of her. Hermione grinned and Summoned quills and ink for the two of them, and soon the only sounds in the staff lounge were the rustling of parchment and the scratching of quills as they worked quietly together.
* * *
The Hogsmeade train station was awash with students. Some were trying to get on the train, others were loading trunks into the baggage cars, and still others were hugging their friends and making plans for the summer. Hermione strolled into the midst of the chaos and let her mind drift back to her own leave-takings while she was a student. She didn't remember it being this loud and chaotic, but perhaps she was remembering it through a haze of fond remembrances.
"Miss Pendragon, watch where you're walking, if you don't mind." The silky tones of Severus' voice caught Hermione's attention. She watched, a slight smile on her face, as he extricated himself from the aforementioned Miss Pendragon, who had been reading a large tome and managed to walk into him.
"Sorry, Professor Snape," Miss Pendragon apologised, her eyes wide with apprehension. "Maybe I should get on the train now?"
"Maybe you should," he sneered. "Then the platform will be safe from your absent-minded predations."
Hermione winced. She had done the same thing a time or two, but thankfully never with Severus. Speaking of which...
"I thought you weren't supposed to leave Hogwarts grounds," she said, walking up to where he was supervising the younger students and making sure they made it onto the train.
"I'm not," he sneered. "But the Ministry, in their infinite wisdom, deemed this part of my community service. Perhaps they thought I, by myself, could herd a group of prepubescent cretins onto a train and make sure none were left behind."
"Shall I leave you to it, then?" she teased, turning to walk away.
"Merlin, no!" he gasped, reaching for her arm. "Don't leave me by myself. Abbott, I don't care if your sister is getting married here on Saturday next. You will get on the train and come back with the rest of your family at that time. Now move it, boy!"
"Well, it just seems to me..."
"Hermione, for the love of Merlin, I can't do this by myself. I believe that is why Minerva asked you to help, is it not?"
"I guess so. Aren't any of the other professors here?"
"They're not insane enough to go through this. Usually Hagrid is here, but Minerva has him doing something to the school grounds. That leaves the criminal and the newbie..."
"Did you just call me a newbie?"
"If the shoe fits..." he said with a smirk. "Miss Brown, are you performing exploratory surgery on that young man's tonsils? I suggest you cease and desist immediately and find a seat on the train."
"Any relation to...?" Hermione asked in an aside.
"A younger sister, I believe." He sighed. "And, of course, a Gryffindor."
"A rather precocious Gryffindor," Hermione smirked. "Lavender at least waited until third year before showing interest in anything in trousers. Mr Abbott," she snapped, "Professor Snape told you to find a seat on the train. Now do it!"
She cast Sonorus on her throat and announced, "Your attention, please! The Hogwarts Express will be leaving in ten minutes. Anyone not on the train will have me explaining to their parents why they were left behind, Miss Brown."
The students around her laughed as, flushed with embarrassment, the young lady so addressed stopped snogging her fellow student and fled for the train. Her snoggee grinned sheepishly and strolled further along the line of cars before swinging himself up and into an empty compartment.
"Slytherin and Gryffindor," Hermione remarked. "That's taking inter-house cooperation to a new level."
"It's not the first time," Severus said. "Her older sister was caught several times in the corridors with Slytherins. Mostly Blaise Zabini, but I believe I caught her with Gregory Goyle at least once."
"It figures." Hermione sighed. "She went after Ron in our sixth year, and he let himself be caught for a while. Maybe I should have let her keep him."
"Mr Weasley still annoyed with you?" he asked, raising an eyebrow. "Can we expect more histrionics at the Longbottom-Abbott nuptials next week?"
Hermione waited while the engineer blew the steam whistle and the last of the students quickly hopped onto the train. As it pulled out of the station, she waved back at the students who waved wildly from the windows until the train was a small dot on the horizon.
"Probably," she replied, sighing once again. "Especially after we put your plan into action. By the way, just whom am I supposed to end up with...Draco or Ron?"
"Why don't we leave that to the young men?" He smirked, turning to walk back to Hogwarts. "After all, the whole point of the exercise is to try and clip Miss Skeeter's proverbial wings."
"Well, that should prove interesting." She looked over to see him smirk once more as he strode out of the train station.
* * *
"You're not concentrating, Hermione," Minerva said Monday afternoon. "You should be meditating, not thinking about Saturday."
"I'm sorry, Minerva. I just..."
"Yes, I realize you're nervous. That's why you should concentrate on becoming your inner animal and not on what's to happen in the future. That will take care of itself in time."
Hermione settled herself in the chair and, taking a deep breath, tried to wipe her mind of all extraneous thought. It was harder than she'd thought it would be. Her mind kept going over everything that could go wrong at the wedding.
Minerva sighed, looking at her. "Perhaps we might have better luck after the wedding," she said briskly. "In the meantime, I have some books for you to study. Pay particular attention to the act of Transfiguring yourself. And don't stay up all night reading. I want you fresh and well rested on the morrow."
"Yes, Minerva."
"I'll send a house-elf in to check on you about midnight."
"I don't need someone to look in on me, Minerva." Hermione was indignant. "I am quite capable of keeping track of the time." She reddened at the knowing look from her teacher. "Well, most of the time," she added.
Minerva nodded. "I'll tell Winky to look in on you at midnight and that she's to remind you to go to bed."
"Yes, Minerva."
* * *
Ferret,
Who knew studying to become an Animagus could be so hard? Minerva is constantly telling me to relax and concentrate on my meditation, but I keep thinking about what is to happen this Saturday. Then she has the house-elves come and tell me to go to bed if I'm up past midnight so I'll be rested the next day and we can start over again.
I asked Severus just whom I was supposed to end up with in order to spike Skeeter's guns, but he just smirked and said things would work out. I hope so, but I can't help feeling that something is going to go wrong.
Herms
* * *
Herms,
Just relax. Severus is the consummate Slytherin. He probably hasn't told us the entire plan, but I'm sure he has everything well in hand. What time do I need to be at Hogwarts on Saturday? I don't want to be too early, but it's considered gauche to come into a wedding after the bride. Let me know, okay?
Ferret
* * *
Ferret,
Minerva says to come for lunch. Since the wedding is scheduled for two, that will give us time to finalize our plans. She says our parents are also invited and will be dressing here at the school to give the impression of a wedding party in preparation.
I think she's been talking to Severus.
H.
* * *
H,
Lunch it is. I'll bring my dress robes and change there as well. See you then.
D.
* * *
Severus,
Granger is getting nervous about Saturday. Is there anything you can do to settle her down? She'll ruin the fun if she's too tense. I can't believe you didn't tell her the whole plan.
Draco
* * *
Draco,
You leave Hermione to Minerva and me. We'll make sure she comes up to snuff. You just worry about Mr Weasley and his reactions. I didn't want her giving everything away with her expressions.
Severus
* * *
Severus,
Just how badly am I allowed to hex him?
D.
* * *
D,
Not fatally, of course. Minerva and Molly would have our hides. And, if you do throw the first hex, make damn sure nobody sees you do it. Otherwise, protect yourself. I assure you, Weasley will be protecting himself if nothing else.
S.
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358 Reviews | 6.88/10 Average
Wish you could draw out the last chapter a l'll more :D maybe 2 paragraphs or so? :D
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I believe I wrote all I needed to for the epilogue as I couldn't think of anything else to write. I AM writing a sequel about the wedding, however, to be posted when it is completed. ^_^
Thank you for the entertaining story you've written, I've had a very good time seeing the development of friendship between Hermione and Draco, their parents - that's been a first, and very well done to boot - and also the relationship of H&S at the end.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I always felt Lucius and Narcissa really didn't know any Muggles personally, but were making judgements based on Muggle-born witches and wizards, which isn't a very wide sample of the population. So I asked myself 'what would happen if they met Muggle parents with the same family values they themselves held, ie family first, etc.?' The results are before you. I'm glad you approve of my little story. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I always felt Lucius and Narcissa really didn't know any Muggles personally, but were making judgements based on Muggle-born witches and wizards, which isn't a very wide sample of the population. So I asked myself 'what would happen if they met Muggle parents with the same family values they themselves held, ie family first, etc.?' The results are before you. I'm glad you approve of my little story. ^_^
Can we get a hint as to the title of the sequel ?? Pretty Please??
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Tentatively, I'm calling it "A Heaven or Hell Wedding". Narcissa's helping Elizabeth plan the wedding, but Molly wants to butt in and Severus just wants to elope. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Tentatively, I'm calling it "A Heaven or Hell Wedding". Narcissa's helping Elizabeth plan the wedding, but Molly wants to butt in and Severus just wants to elope. ^_^
You have spun a fine tale, thank you. I like how the elder Grangers and Malfoys found common ground.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
You're welcome. If you think they found common ground in this fic, just wait until the sequel comes out. Can you say "wedding planner"? ~_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
You're welcome. If you think they found common ground in this fic, just wait until the sequel comes out. Can you say "wedding planner"? ~_^
What a wonderful ending. I like this epilogue much better than the original. I would love to see Albus sorted into Slytherin. I know Hayy said he was okay with it, but would he really be? Thanks for a great story.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Harry and Severus have a complicated relationship. On the one hand, Harry likes how Severus makes Hermione happy. On the other hand, he remembers how miserably Severus treated the three of them, even if it was an act. I think Harry would prefer Albus be in any house but Slytherin, even Hufflepuff, but he won't hold it against his son. Thanks for reading. Stay tuned for the sequel--as soon as I get it finished. ~_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Harry and Severus have a complicated relationship. On the one hand, Harry likes how Severus makes Hermione happy. On the other hand, he remembers how miserably Severus treated the three of them, even if it was an act. I think Harry would prefer Albus be in any house but Slytherin, even Hufflepuff, but he won't hold it against his son. Thanks for reading. Stay tuned for the sequel--as soon as I get it finished. ~_^
Such a lovely story!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. I'm working on a sequel right now that would cover the next six months up to the wedding. It's more than 9.5K and I'm only in the first week of February. So much for a short (8-10 chapters).
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. I'm working on a sequel right now that would cover the next six months up to the wedding. It's more than 9.5K and I'm only in the first week of February. So much for a short (8-10 chapters).
Yay! She accepted the right one!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Did you really expect her to say "No"?
Response from jenidralph (Reviewer)
Well.. no, but it never fails to warm my heart and make me squee. :)
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Did you really expect her to say "No"?
Response from jenidralph (Reviewer)
Well.. no, but it never fails to warm my heart and make me squee. :)
I'm glad they all made up.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Minerva's too much of a friend for them not to forgive her.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Minerva's too much of a friend for them not to forgive her.
Yay!! FINALLY!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
You had to know I would get there sooner or later.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
You had to know I would get there sooner or later.
Love your version of the epilogue! Much better. :D
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
*elvis voice* Thank you. Thank you very much. ^_^If you liked this story, you'll love the sequel.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
*elvis voice* Thank you. Thank you very much. ^_^If you liked this story, you'll love the sequel.
Wow! Three proposals in one chapter. Or at least two real ones and one hinted at! :D
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Yeah! Popular girl, our Hermione. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Yeah! Popular girl, our Hermione. ^_^
I am sad that this story has ended . I have loved it from chapter one. But I will be looking forward to your next story. I'm glad I was along for the ride with you.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. A sequel is in the works, dealing with the trials and tribulations leading up to the wedding.Coming Soon! "A Heaven or Hell Wedding"! Look for it at an archive near you!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. A sequel is in the works, dealing with the trials and tribulations leading up to the wedding.Coming Soon! "A Heaven or Hell Wedding"! Look for it at an archive near you!
I loved this story from beginning to end!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. I'm working on a sequel for the six months between January 1 and June 30, 2004. So far, I've written over 9.5K and I'm only in the first week of February. This is gonna be some ride! ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. I'm working on a sequel for the six months between January 1 and June 30, 2004. So far, I've written over 9.5K and I'm only in the first week of February. This is gonna be some ride! ^_^
Poor Hermione having to endure all those proposals until she had the right man ask for her hand. I've really enjoyed this little ride and nice to see that Kingsley does have respect for Severus despite all the other idiots out there.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. There's a short epilogue in the queue. I'm hoping it will be up sometime in the next week or so. Depends on the moderators. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. There's a short epilogue in the queue. I'm hoping it will be up sometime in the next week or so. Depends on the moderators. ^_^
Yay!!!!!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
*ahem* {Elvis voice} Thank yew! Thank yew very much! *ahem* ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
*ahem* {Elvis voice} Thank yew! Thank yew very much! *ahem* ^_^
Of course it was the logical thing to do! With confidence intervals of 99% I'll reveal myself as a shameless nerd and ask if they are going to test for Goodness of Fit?
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I guess you'll just have to "keeeeep reeeeeading", to quote one of my favorite authors. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I guess you'll just have to "keeeeep reeeeeading", to quote one of my favorite authors. ^_^
They're getting somewhere at last!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
It does take a while to become friends if you want a real romance to last. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
It does take a while to become friends if you want a real romance to last. ^_^
YAY! Finally!!! *does happy SSHG dance*
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Chapter 35 is *ahem* very amusing. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Chapter 35 is *ahem* very amusing. ^_^
What a great solution!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you. ^_^
Very funny chapter MsTree, finally some lemons. Loved when they got caught glad it didn't stop them,
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
They're scientists. More experimentation is required. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
They're scientists. More experimentation is required. ^_^
snerk! ^.^ yes further testing is, indeed required!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Of course it is. Isn't that what scientists do? ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Of course it is. Isn't that what scientists do? ^_^
Ten points for climbing a tree? Awwww c'mon ~ooops, there goes another ten~ Sod it! ~and another ten~ That was a fun and immensely satisfying chapter. I wish I had read it before our workplace Christmas function for some inspiration of how to buck an imposed (and increasingly ridiculous) trend with style!
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I think I was channelling D. L. Sayers' book "Gaudy Night" with the tree climbing bit. *looks at MsTree's bookshelf* Yep, there it is, with the requisite Oxford undergrad prank of climbing every tree within the University walls. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
I think I was channelling D. L. Sayers' book "Gaudy Night" with the tree climbing bit. *looks at MsTree's bookshelf* Yep, there it is, with the requisite Oxford undergrad prank of climbing every tree within the University walls. ^_^
Great story, really enjoyable. I'm loving your taste in books and authors as well. Clearly you also write brilliantly. Thanks.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you for the kind words. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
Thank you for the kind words. ^_^
It's funny that their friends don't suspect the obvious. Wll, Hermiones friends. Sound like there's a fun night ahead.
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
People see what they expect to see. Always have; always will. "Fasten your seatbelt. There's a bumpy night ahead." ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)
People see what they expect to see. Always have; always will. "Fasten your seatbelt. There's a bumpy night ahead." ^_^