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Heaven or Hell

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 04

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 06

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Epilogue

Heaven or Hell

MsTree

358 Reviews   |   358 Ratings, 0 Likes, 35 Favorites )

Humor Romance General Potions Under Duress 69,134 Words 38 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Other Canon Witch/Wizard Severus Snape Minerva McGonagall

Severus is found alive after the final battle, and the Wizengamot, in their wisdom, sentences him to five years of probation at Hogwarts.

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Chapters (38)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 04

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 06

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Epilogue


About MsTree

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MsTree

Member Since 2007  |  11 Stories  |  Favorited by 106  |  999 Reviews Written  |  918 Review Responses

A citizen of Calontir, living in the State of Misery, located north of Are-Kansas and south of Iowewaytoomuch. Writer of fiction who reads more than is healthy for her and owned by two terrors... I mean, terriers. ^_^

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Reviews for Heaven or Hell

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0/10

phoenix

Definitely at aptly named story. So much fun to see Severus arguing.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Believe it or not, when I wrote this story in November of 2009 (it was my NaNoWriMo entry), I didn't know what to name it. Since I was going through so much turmoil, I jokingly called it "Heaven or Hell". The name stuck and seemed apt by the time I finished the story 30 days later. Thanks for reading. ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Believe it or not, when I wrote this story in November of 2009 (it was my NaNoWriMo entry), I didn't know what to name it. Since I was going through so much turmoil, I jokingly called it "Heaven or Hell". The name stuck and seemed apt by the time I finished the story 30 days later. Thanks for reading. ^_^

0/10

phoenix

Interesting start. Of course any story that starts with Snape not having died is good. :) Can't wait to see where this goes.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. ^_^

0/10

color

I like the story, but this chapter makes absolutely no sense.  MM thinks that SS/HG might be angry with her and she wants to apologize and repair whatever damage she's created.  To do this, MM invades SS's privacy, makes SS/HG very uncomfortable by smirkingly butting into SS/HG's personal sex life (like a controlling, busy-body aunt who has no social sense, self-control or respect for a younger adult's personal boundaries--let alone the personal boundaries of a professional colleague and subordinate), deliberately makes a childish and disrespectful power play by sitting in SS's favorite chair, and inserts herself into their personal weekend time when it's obviously grossly unwelcome?  If anything, SS/HG should be telling MM to mind her own business and get the h*ll out.  By doing what she did, MM cemented just how little respect she holds for SS/HG.I don't see either SS or HG putting up with that for the simple reason that they're not children.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

She learned from Bumblebore. What else did you expect? Thanks for reading. ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

She learned from Bumblebore. What else did you expect? Thanks for reading. ^_^

0/10

noodle

Yikes!  Between the 'Severus War', prospective mother-in-laws (gets image of circling sharks with really big teeth), and escape routes blocked by the probation, that's quite a... situation.  Sometimes 'Bloody Hell' is the only thing that can be said. 

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

You said a mouthful! Thanks for reading. ^_^PS: Looking forward to Chapter 23 of "A Place in the World". Where is it? ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

You said a mouthful! Thanks for reading. ^_^PS: Looking forward to Chapter 23 of "A Place in the World". Where is it? ^_^

0/10

Bettina

and Severus, the third is a charmOr does he have a meddling mum hidden in his sleeves, too?

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Since Eileen is no longer in the picture, I would guess Severus is on his own. ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Since Eileen is no longer in the picture, I would guess Severus is on his own. ^_^

10/10

debjunk

Bloody hell indeed.  Geez, what meddlesome parents.  If I did that to my kids they'd never speak to me.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Molly has always been meddlesome. *grin* Narcissa just wants the best for Draco (and who could be better than Hermione). ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Molly has always been meddlesome. *grin* Narcissa just wants the best for Draco (and who could be better than Hermione). ^_^

10/10

debjunk

Seems like Hermione was right about forgiveness.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

She seems to be the forgiving type, at least after she exacts a little revenge first. ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

She seems to be the forgiving type, at least after she exacts a little revenge first. ^_^

10/10

debjunk

Lol.  Minerva deserved the chewing out.  The end was definitely worth it.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Glad you enjoyed it. ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Glad you enjoyed it. ^_^

10/10

keske

what about between you and sev, mione-luv? oy stop throwing things at me! it were only a suggestion! ow! stop it! ~ducks~

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

She may end up throwing things yet. ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

She may end up throwing things yet. ^_^

10/10

sunny33

She'd better off and elope with Sev before the mothers from hell have her tied to one of their sons! :)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

They can't elope until after the New Year or they'll be spending their honeymoon in Azkaban. ^_^BTW: When are you going to update "Limited Exposure" again? I'm needing my artistic fix! ~_^

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

Oops, sprung.  Have done half a chapter but then got tied up getting my tax return ready (what a chore!).  Will be back on it this week.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

They can't elope until after the New Year or they'll be spending their honeymoon in Azkaban. ^_^BTW: When are you going to update "Limited Exposure" again? I'm needing my artistic fix! ~_^

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

Oops, sprung.  Have done half a chapter but then got tied up getting my tax return ready (what a chore!).  Will be back on it this week.

10/10

sunny33

Was a bit suspicious being seen snogging the night before then not turnng up for breakfast! :)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Caught in the act (almost), as it were. *grin* Minerva's a good egg, however. ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Caught in the act (almost), as it were. *grin* Minerva's a good egg, however. ^_^

10/10

sunny33

I like that sort of experimenting! :)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Yes, the results can be shattering at times. ^_~

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Yes, the results can be shattering at times. ^_~

10/10

jenidralph

Oh, poor Hermione!  Everyone wants to be her mother-in-law!I am so glad you're updating again!  Thank you for the lovely chapter!

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

I wonder what it's like being so popular with prospective mothers-in-law? I certainly wouldn't want to hurt their feelings now, would you? *ducks incoming hexes* ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

I wonder what it's like being so popular with prospective mothers-in-law? I certainly wouldn't want to hurt their feelings now, would you? *ducks incoming hexes* ^_^

10/10

just harry

So injoyed the update. I wonder will Severus & Hermionie be announsing theiri engagement, I hope so its about time. 

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Keeeeep Reading! ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Keeeeep Reading! ^_^

10/10

mick42

Poor Hermione, Molly and Narcissa, have more in common than they think.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Shhh! Don't tell them that. ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Shhh! Don't tell them that. ^_^

10/10

wyndnfyr

25 chapters and only a chaste kiss!  Get a move on, girl!  :P

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

The story is rated "conservative" because I can't really write sex scenes well. It does heat up a little bit further on, but still not R or X-rated. Sorry. ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

The story is rated "conservative" because I can't really write sex scenes well. It does heat up a little bit further on, but still not R or X-rated. Sorry. ^_^

0/10

Severus49

Hermione became a cat? Well, no suprise there. Though the type is unusual, but it's nice to know Ron appreciated her fine form! I wonder what Severus will turn into??

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Don't know. The plot bunnies haven't been cooperating with me lately. *grin* Glad you like her inner kitty. ^_^

10/10

sunny33

Poor Sev. He'll be bossed around something awful! (and love it) :)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Ya really think so? ^_~

10/10

sunny33

Hermione's been busy! :)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Hasn't she though? What do you think of her inner kitty? ^_^

10/10

sunny33

Makes me very keen to know just what happened at the Grangers' wedding. :)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Everybody, and I mean everybody wants to know. *grin* Unfortunately, Matthew and Elizabeth won't tell me. ^_^

0/10

Bettina

how about a sun-hungry lizard?

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Huh? You sure you got the right story? *grin* I don't remember a lizard and I wrote the thing! ^_~

Response from Bettina (Reviewer)

Sorry, I meant Snape's animagus-form. He'd have to spend hours sun-bathing.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Ohhh! I get it now! That's an idea, although I don't get into it in this story. Maybe a side story--like some of my one-shots in this universe--if the right plot bunny strikes. ^_^

10/10

ofankoma

Hmm... Will this be the beginning of more for Hermione and Severus? I find myself quite curious to see how you finally break the ice between the two of them, since they're so comfortable here in your story as friends.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

That's still a few chapters down the road. A hint, though. Minerva's unwittingly responsible. ^_~

10/10

ofankoma

Ah, a reconciliation between Narcissa and Andromeda! I love it. I wonder, in canon, just how long it takes before the two remaining Black sisters learn to forgive and forget. (One of the many reasons I find JKR's epilogue unbelievable, since the it would make Teddy an important point of commonality between Harry and Narcissa, and thus Harry and Draco.)

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Oh, I have to agree. Being Draco's 2nd cousin, Teddy would probably want to get to know him better if only to understand the division between the three sisters. Of course, he's luckier than Harry. Teddy had his grandmother and an extended family in the Weasleys if the Malfoys wanted nothing to do with him. However, I can't see that happening. JLR's epilogue didn't go far enough. It felt like she was tired and just threw all the loose ends in together and called it 'done'. ^_^

10/10

Persevero

How appropriate that the motto of the Muggle University of Cambridge is Hinc lucem et pocula sacra - From here, light and sacred potions. Hermione's Muggle qualification would be a BA, not a BSc, whatever her subject of study.

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Thank you. Appreciate the correction. My britpicker must have missed that. ^_^

Response from Persevero (Reviewer)

It's an Oxbridge quirk.

10/10

ks51689

It will certainly be an interesting holiday for Severus lol.  I look forward to reading all about it!

Response from MsTree (Author of Heaven or Hell)

Thanks. The next chapter is in queue. ^_^

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