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Ladder
ubiquirk912 Reviews | 7.45/10 (912 Ratings, 0 Likes, 311 Favorites )
Victory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit. Multiple award winner.
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I am a longtime fanfic fanatic, having entered the realm via Buffydom. One day I read a Willow/Severus crossover and I was hooked – on Snape that is! He's been in every HP story I've done so far.
I write in multiple fandoms on LJ, esp. BtVS and Firefly. If you're interested in reading my fic for other/crossover fandoms, it can be found at:
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Reviews for Ladder
Things seem to be falling into place for Hermione -- some of the Weasleys (besides Ginny) are okay with her now, and Tonks is sweet and supportive. It's been three months, which isn't a long time when you're coming off an engagement to someone you've known since you were twelve, but Hermione and Ron were distant for a long time before she broke it off. I'm eager for her to be ready, if that makes sense.
But how's Severus doing? She knows he's watching her, and that he's waiting for her.
*hopeful prod* Is it Wednesday yet?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter! It's also good to hear that you find the pacing believable and like her interactions with NT and GW!
I can't believe that I didn't leave you a review when I first read this chapter.... Bad-moi! I'll bypass my ritual piece of chocolate for this time. *sulk*Ok! Back to the story. Has Hermione finished beating herself to the ground over this? The girl needs a real good talking to... seriously. She's seen what a good relationship looks like, now its her turn to pull herself up by the bootstraps and fall all-over Snape. If she doesn't, I personally know a few ladies that would gladly take her place. (ok... they would shove her away and take all that he has to offer. Yum!)Great job, as usual.... Cheers!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter! It's only 3 months since her break up, but watching NT and KS does seem to have given her something to think about, eh?
It's been three months since her break-up with Ron. Hermione is really taking her time - a good thing. I'm glad that Tonks has her thinking about Severus and what a relationship with him could be like.
I'm desperate to know what is going through Severus' head at this point. Can't wait for more!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked the chapter and that the pacing of the story is working for you! I'm trying to make it mimic real life as well as her desire to not make another overly quick relationship decision.
Congratulations ubiquirk,from something that started out looking very much like PWP your story has turned into a temptingly paced tale. I particularly admire the way that you are putting H & S through their paces when it comes to dealing with their personal issues. It is refreshing to see a H&S story that doesn't have the characters rushing towards the usual kind of conclusions. My only (small) quibble is about the sometimes overly-detailed way that the characters' clothing is described: I always see this as being unnecessarily girly...but maybe that's just me. Very much looking forward to see where the story goes next.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you're enjoying the pacing of the story! I'm trying to mimic real life, which is why this is a drama instead of a romance.On the clothing thing - I think you may be joking because I didn't describe a single thing that anyone is wearing in this chapter or in many of them. Sorry if you're sying that you actually like those details - it's not a big element for me.
*whinges*Potions master! Must have!I love the description of Tonks and Kingsley; of all the times I have read their pairing, you have made it the most real for me.Go, Hermione! Get your verion of happingess!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter! And thanks for saying how well this NT/KS works for you!
It is late and I doubt I will be nearly as articulate as I usually am. Having said that, this was a great transitional chapter. Now the question is, where do we go from here? I cannot wait to find out.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter and some of the work it did for HG!
Very controlled, very much in character.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Love it. I am so happy for KS and NT. And I'm crossing my fingers for SS and HG. I know exactly what Tonks means. Both Remus and SS were "good" in the sack, but KS is the one that does it for her. Just like SS and HG do it for each other. Great job.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter and NT with KS! Yep - it's me hitting the old compatability thingy again - glad you liked it!
I get so excited when I get the e-mail saying "Ladder has been updated" and you never ever disappoint! I loved the talented Sev and Hot Cinnamon and small leather pants! Ok, so I guess my favorite parts were the entire chapter. Seriously though, if Hermione doesn't go after Sev soon, just send him my way ok. I promise I won't make him wait like she has. :)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter and the sexy bits I snuck in!
again, I'm so pleased that you've updated!
while reviews to you are like chocolate... updates, to me, are like chocolate too! :D
I liked this chapter a lot, despite the lack of Severus. Tonks and Kingsley really seem happy together. And those pair of tiny leather pants amused me to no end, haha.
I like how much Hermione is thinking about Severus as she observes this scene. And when she thinks Talented, eh? Oh, yes – very much so. Haha :D
Lovely chapter; well done! Can't wait for the next one :)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and HG's thoughts! It's also good to hear that you liked NT and KS!
OOH!!!! Hurry and write another chapter. I just found this story today and it's brilliant. AND, I've found another fic that I can blame, er, credit, for not getting my own chapters out quick enough.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Welcome! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Next chapter next week!
Yay Ladder update! Nice interaction with the Weasleys and Tonks.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and the interactions between the characters!
*cheers* to YOU for making ME think about fit, well-oiled men running around in small leather pants. I prefer blue... but red will do. *wink*a fun chapter to read
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and the visual imagery involved!
So glad you took the time to make your story perfect, despite our demands for you to hurry up. lol. I always seem to enjoy the Severus rungs a little more. Maybe it is my inner Slytherin trying to come out. Anywho, despite no Severus I really enjoyed this chapter, and I am glad that she seems to be ready to move on sometime soon. Can't wait for more of Severus's talent. he he he.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and the pacing! I'm trying to mimic real life! SS next!
Cannot help to think about what it would have been like if Snape would have been at the party--talk about tension, especially with the gifts. . .
Good grief, how long does the girl have to think on things.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Well, it's only been 3 months since the break up.
Response from Myst (Reviewer)
AAAANNNDDD? Your point is?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
(evil laugh) Things take a long time in real life!
Response from Myst (Reviewer)
RIIIIGHT. Its better that way. AND a way to torture Snape. Okay, I'll be quiet . . .for now.
I'm guessing the "little monster in her man" was from the same place *I* first heard the name Veruca. BTVS.
I like your exposition--it flows well and isn't as preachy or 'this is to impart information-y' as a lot of exposition tends to be.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter and my writing style! I don't like too much expostition either.
Yep - Buffy!
Finally!!! She's feeling a little left out in the cold! A girl just can't cuddle up with a good[?] book [on Algebra?!] the same as she can Hot Cinnamon!! Though I'm having a great deal of trouble picturing Severus ... nahhhh. Drape him in something that slithers, like silk... mmm much better picture.
Write more, please.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter and the way HG is thinking!
It's nice to see Hermione geting along with Ginny. It must be difficult for everyone, and so emotionally charged.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter and the interactions between HG and GW! You're right - it's difficult all around!
Oh, Hermione! I love the way you develop her inner monologue throughout this chapter, and I can't wait to see what Severus is doing during this party. There's only one drawback. Thinking about fit, well-oiled men running around in small leather pants is not conducive to heading off to work now! ;-)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter and watching HG come to some inportant realizations!
“It doesn’t have to be Arithmancy – an all-around love of swottiness will do.”Eureka!(and I didn't even know what swottiness meant...)well done (once again)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! I'm not sure how you made it this far without being hit up the side of the head with swot since I am one! (laughs) Think ubergeek!
Hopefully it won't take Hermione long to get the answer to that question. It's not as if she needs arithmancy to solve it- or maybe that's the problem?More soon?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! Hee - arithmancy! I love it!
Her thoughts head in the right direction. If they could speed a little... Poor Severus would really have deserved her.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! Well, it's only been 3 months since the break up, but she's getting there!
Ok I don't know if it was your intention or not, but this one had me laughing so hard I spit my frosted mini wheats on the monitor.In my mind I have always pictured Kingsley to look like a dark skinned mr clean, so here I sit with this vivid picture of mr clean in his tight leather undies with both cheeks hanging out. So Severus snuck up on Hermione in this one, can't wait to hear his take on the events. Deanna
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter and found it funny! Yum to KS!
:sigh: Tonks has a heart the size of Texas. And this was such a fun chapter.
I was very happy to see that you'd posted. A real day-brightener.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter and found it day brightening!
Good. Good for Tonks. Good for Kingsley. Good for George. Good for Ginny. Good for Hermione.And good for Severus.She thought about it and has reached her decision. Two more chapters until she voices it right? With the usual rythm of this story, my guess is two more. Perhaps, three more with the last one being smutty.Good for us, readers, too.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter and the actions that are occuring for the various characters!