Oh, lol!Somewhere in the last chapter (maybe after the towel part? I passed out after the towel part :D) they must have married. - Because they clearly are in this chapter.Hilarious dialogues!And they practically live together.*sigh*It's like a lovely romantic sitcoms. (I don't watch these, of course. *cough* *looks shifty*)

Mh...  if even only briefly, it featured the idea of Snape in a towel...So, I might have to re-read it, because I think I stopped paying attention afterwards 

OOOH, she is having her fun with him, isn't she?  What would she have done if he hadn't ignored her teasing, but actually stopped her for a "teensy snog?"  Let's find out shall we? *nudges author*The beginning made me laugh where Seth, who was so worried about Hermione slipping up, wiggles his way through a conversation full of near misses.Looking forward to more boarding school stakeout!

I'm sick and laughing causes me to cough very hard. But I don't mind. And the last few lines were pure genius.

The banter is getting more and more hilarious.And I'm not quite trusting in the almost peaceful way they managed do deal with each other in the end. And as much as do not believe in the concept of PMS, this "They’ve learned to bring me chocolate. Lots of chocolate" made me think of her as some strange inca goddess that gets worshipped by inca-priest!Harry and his brainless sidekick inca-priest-!Ron. And I'm still giggling at the idea.*g*And furthermore I'm not a particular fan of makeover!Snape, especiallly when anyone is going to touch his hair.But that's one tricky excuse to make it plausible!When it comes to waistcoats, though, mhhh... *drools*He'll make a pleasant looking teacher! Just like all my music teachers, btw. Never had nerdy ones. phewSo despite this review being seemingly full of nagging, I loooved to read this chapter and laughed so often that I've got to deal with the stitches now.

LOL.Great minds think alike - or rather: would get killed by the same persons for their thoughts.Witty!And that?!..:I do fancy her tits though.rofl! At least he's honest in that point, eh?Interesting start. Already as god as gotten rid of the annoying redhead and made her have some nice little character trait there:Caution, Slytherin when bored!

Oh, the naughtyness!I almost fell out of my chair when I read the "talented with the flute"-part!Explicit and inexplicit naughtynees - this chapter is full of both!Loved it, of course.

I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens in the library. Love the Seth fanclub!

I don't know why I didn't start this before.  I love the thoughts and dialogue only format, although I don't really even notice it as I am reading.  This has given me a really good laugh tonight!  I love that Seth has groupies.  Hopefully Harmony will become an official member of the fan club.  She does seem a bit jealous, and in this case, that can only be a good thing.So she is a student, big deal.  She is old enough, so I say go ahead and perv away Sev, I mean Seth ;)

Another know-it-all to deal with. How tiresome for such a sex god

i'd pay a dollar to see that!  the real deal prob'ly would scare the pee out of them.  terrific update.  thanks and mucho smoochies

I love this chapter more than the first one I think. I can't wait to see them interact in that school. Musics players? the both of them? I believe that when I read it. *wink*

Being nice to muggle dunderheads is going to be such a struggle

A music teacher? This is going to be interessting.....nice job!

Music teacher! Ha, I love it. My husband has a degree in music, he wanted to be a conductor/music teacher and hated all the brats who thought they were so much better than everyone else. This should be so fun!And she's so blunt with him. I love their relationship already. I look forward to another chapter soon! :)

i do remember the first part and i love the continuing internal dialogue.  i look forward to the rest.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Oh ! *clap hands* I can't wait to read the other chapters. This is going to be so much fun. Wonder how many detentions she will earn in a over-heated dungeons? *wink*

Oh, awesome! I loved the original drabble, and I really like how you've continued it here. Wonderful, as always, ma'am. You go! Cat

This was too funny.  Too bad Snape didn't get hit with a water balloon.

Deliciously clever and snarky and funny. Hermione is wonderful!Brava!!!

Ooh!  I' looking forward to more of this.  You write their thoughts beautifully (only I think I'd like you to fast forward at least 6 years so poor Severus can deal with a fair-gae, grown up and no longer clueless Hermione).I don't know of that any stories with alternating first-person point of view, and it's a wonderful vehicle for a good writer, which you clearly are.  I know this is going to be delicious!

Bloody fantastic !brilliant and hilarious! Thank you for the amazing reading piece ! 

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Lovely and highly amusing story, thank you so much!

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I love this story! I really haven't ever liked stories that were just dialouge or monolouge, but this one is fantastic.  I'm glad I didn't skip it over.  Funny, witty and playful- just the way I like it 'cause there aren't enough of those out there! Oh, and I love that Harry and Ron are kind of freaked out about the whole thing, but that they don't completly exploded or act like jerks about it.  There are a lot of stories that I just couldn't keep reading because it just went around and around for 20 chapters about Harry and Ron being upset.  So kudos for that too!

I'm rereading this and see that I didn't leave a review.  This was a cleverly written story.  It was fun to see how much plot and character development you could get in with no dialogue.  Occasionally, the thoughts of our characters were a bit wordy when they had to give the background of the story, etc., but overall very well done.  And with your usual fun sense of humor!