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Can't Take My Eyes Off You
sunny33315 Reviews | 7.0/10 (315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )
Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You
Obliviate them all! Especially after they've seen the real magic between Severus and Hernione.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Hehe. You meanie! :)
Ooo PDA! :) LOVED IT! As usual, of course. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks, they couldn't help themselves! :)
Whoohoo!!! EXCELLENT CHAPTER!!! I LOVE IT! I'm so glad they finally kissed and in front of Kingsley and the girls...Can't wait to see what happens next....WOW!! I LOVE IT!!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL. More PDAs to come! :)
Where are those hands?!?!?!?!? Now they can have a little fun?? Hmmm they deserve it after all.... Great chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Where, indeed? ;)
wah!i'm so glad! another chapter! just what i was waiting for. i lol-ed after reading these parts..."do you wizards always kiss and make up after you have fought?""er...No Amelia. But I see what you mean about close."just like her, i wanna know where those hands were up to.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Feel free to use your imagination. ;)
Wait, I can't see where their hands are! Out of my way, girls! Their work is over, now they can play, right? Thanks for brightening up an otherwise gloomy day!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
You're most welcome! :)
Fabulous chapter as always.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks, mate! :)
What a great chapter! Oh my Hermione is going to have alot of explaining to do to her friends. Or she could just obliviate them all. I guess I will have to wait and see.Thanks for the update.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you for the review! :)
Yay! Go the girls! Katrina's a bit feckless isn't she?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
She is. Can't think why I named her that... ;)
oh, at last!!!! well, looking forward to the next chapter! it's so much fun reading this...and always worth the wait!!!! i so much love this!!! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you! :)
LOL. Hee hee, that was fun!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
LOL. Well worth the wait to read.Can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
They have a wee bit of explaining to do! :)
A cat??? Isn't Hermione's an otter?? Hmmmm.. Loved the chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Yep, a cat. Wonder why? ;)
Thank God they've finally admitted it. Well, I'm not doing the happy dance yet because knowing him and his profound stick in his arse... He might change his mind ten times before they really try for a relarionship.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
You're on the money! ;)
Oh dear, I do hope Severus and Hermione can make those nosy girls understand what is going on, I'm so glad he finally kissed her....Well done, can't wait for more! I love it!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you! :)
I just adore this story. I'm quite addicted to the dialogue only format that in the beginning seemed to me like it would never be able to work forever, but it really does. This was a great chapter all around, but what really made me laugh was that Professor Masterspy was boasting his super stealth at not being noticed, while her three friends were watching them, plain as day. And this version of Snape and Hermione are so much fun, that while this story will no doubt end at some point, I'd like to persuade Kingsley to take them on full time, solving the world's mysteries one location at a time. *nudges you Kingsley in that direction*
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
. I must admit, when I started I wasn't sure i could pull it off, but it seemed to work. Only problem is, I want to write all my dialogue this way now, with no extras! :)
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Ok, do it. I don't see that as a problem at all :)
Ooh, it just gets better! Hermione is a big surprise here, spilling secrets like that. And now they have a whole posse of inept Nancy Drews on their trail. I love it and am really glad you update regularly. I would give this more than 5 stars if I could.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Poor Hermione. It was all too much for her. Thanks for your review. :)
Can you trust Amelia to keep a secret? She seems like a bit of a blether to me.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Amelia has a heart of gold, and she's very protective. :)
awww, poor Snape. Needs a hug. :(I love it.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
He'll get one later on. :)
And she didn't ask if he took his coffee with cream? Or wanted some 'sugar'? He He!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL. Perhaps she thought he had all the cream he needed? ;)
As usual another stellar effort...I love it. I have read from the start to here and find the dialogue exquisite. Just the right amount of venom from Snape and pluck from Hermione, that transforms into a believable relationship. I love that Hermione gives back at least as much as she gets! I will certainly be on the lookout for updates.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks, reets! :)
Ooooh, we are getting in deeper and deeper. None of her friends seemed to react at all to her story, so they are not likely involved in any way. But, three Nancy Drews on their team could really help, or really wreck things. At least she doesn't have to be quite so secretive about going to his rooms and such... if he'll even let her in that is.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Yeah, at least they can cover for her. :)
Whoo hoo an update, Just made my day....Poor Hermione, I hope Severus will see things her way eventually...Can't wait to see what happens next, but I fear telling those 3 girls will be trouble, big trouble....Well done!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
. :)