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Can't Take My Eyes Off You
sunny33315 Reviews | 7.0/10 (315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )
Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You
The WILF badge had me rolling! Actually, all of the gifts were great. This could very well be the most gifts he has ever received at one time.The bathroom scene was great! If she continues to be so bold, he'll have to give in eventually. I always enjoy the interaction when all four housemates are there. The boys are so endearing, but clueless. There are comments and private jokes between Severus and Hermione that go way over the boys heads, and I like their reactions to the way she talks to him.And then it had to leave off at the mention of New Year's Eve. I'm with Snape, I hope she finds him! And by find him, I mean snog him senseless (or whatever else she can get away with). More soon please!Oh and it would not do to leave out the fact that I thoroughly enjoyed the story of the naked woman jumper. Makes you wonder what she puts on Arthur's!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Glad you liked the jumper snippet! :)
I really shouldn't be laughing so hard. I really, really shouldn't. At the very least, it's bad for my fine sculpted cheeks.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL. Laugh away! :)
Response from lucyferr (Reviewer)
The LOLing has been reduced with time to mere SASing (smirking and sniggering) ... fyi, the parts I liked most were Molly's sweater designs (she'd be so much cooler if she really did do that) and the line “Professor, you do realise you don’t have to do what she says. She’s bossy enough at the best of times; if you start giving in, she’ll make our life hell.” which is, given who said it, surprisingly logical :)
Whoohoo, an update..I LOVE IT....Glad Hermione walked in on Severus, I could KILL Ronald Weasley...Grrrrr..... WILF....PRICELESS!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next..WELL DONE!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
WILF? Mebbe you should sell those. Snapylicious!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Someone already is! :)
MILF!!! ROFL!! And she's wearing it?!! I too hope she'll find him so they can properly celebrate the New Year.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I'm glad everyone got the WILF thing. :)
I'm not sure what I think of Hermione spilling everything like that. I wonder if the other girls will keep their promises. And what will happen when she meets the rune salesman?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
You will see. :)
I think you have done a very good job of writing the hotter scenes in first person or dialogue only. That can't be an easy thing to accomplish.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
It was tricky in places, but I was determined to continue as I started. :)
*gigglesnort* Quick, Sev... find your inner rage.This should be interesting. ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL. Thanks. :)
I definitely sense a little flirtation going on in this chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
You think? ;)
Severus doesn't know what to do with his new-found popularity. It's a pleasure to watch these two interact with each other... although I'd like less snarking and more... interaction... if you know what I mean. ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Patience, my dear, patience! :)
That speech is amazing. I'd melt in his class and NOT because of the steaming cauldrons!! They do deserve each other. Hopefully she'll break him soon. But however I don't mind for now sitting back and watching how she does it.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL. She's working on it! :)
I like this story. I can totally see why Snape would be concerned. Of course, he has forgotten that Hermoine has been exposed to war and that matures a person faster than normal. She is still a teenager though.....
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Yes, he is trying to do the right thing. :)
Crookshanks, perhaps? hehehe
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL :)
The little truth taken as a lie. I love it!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
She's learned a few things off Sev. :)
Severus is so darn stubborn...Hopefully Hermione will break through that armor he is wearing....Well done, I love it! I especially loved it when he went to his office and came back banging the door shut to say his speech...Whoohoo!!! *MELTS*
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I think he hoped he'd scared the bejeezus out of the girls so they wouldn't get too friendly! :)
OMG. I'm swooning, I think. ROFL
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
What, you're not sure? :P
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
when one swoons, one gets a little goofy in the head. ROFL.
You have her so right as a teenager - completely convinced she has all the facts and understands it all correctly. You can't tell her anything.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
It is Hermione, you know, Hogwarts biggest bossy-know-it-all! :P
Watch your back Sevie Darling. You'll never recover from what she has in mind (Well, I hope do for her sake ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
She'll get to him eventually. :)
woah! i was lucky to read it just now! wah! i can't believe she could hold that grudge! stupid bloody snape, he's just pretending not to love her.:( aww...! i hope the next chapet's in queue...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
He's trying to convince himself, really. :)
Oh wow, that was some chapter. I can't believe Hermione is strong enough not to use that key. I wouldn't be! We'll have to wait till next chapter to see them at GP, i guess. Great work!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
loved the duel! especially the reparte! great update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
I lovd their termes of endearment whime dueling. It's so cute. And where precisely do they have their hands. I'm really curious now.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Hehe. You'll never know. :P
Oh another great chapter. And the PDA loved it!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)