Can't Take My Eyes Off You
sunny33315 Reviews | 7.0/10 (315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )
Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You
That was fun - love both perspectives. Although the mystery is good, I'm really looking forward to progress between Severus and Hermione! Thanks
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you! :)
Oh, you got the so close! How could you do this to us (and them)? The better to torture us, I suppose. I love this story. The way you have them speak perfect truth, so outrageous that no one believes them (". . . he's such an amazing kisser and has hands that light fires all over my body"). I love Hermione's combination of bumptious cluelessness (bringing up Dumbledore) and then having the sensitivity to do the right thing (put her arms around him). Never stop writing!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I'm pleased you like Hermione in this. :)
wah! you made me so crrrrrrrrrrraaazy! why is it a bit short! wah!!1 you're making me wait for the next chapter! *pouts* awww. hehe. i just love this story... and i've bee waiting days just to finish this... kudos to you!:)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I'm not sure why that chapter ended up so short. I think it was just where it naturally stopped. I'll post the next one now just for you. :)
Response from rubyanjel (Reviewer)
yeeepeeee!!! well, i i was so excited to read this before after reading chapter one and i printed out chapters one to four (they were the only chapters that time)...i printed them so that i would save electricity, hehe. and then i got so excited after knowing that there were a few more chapters added... is it okay that i print chapters 1-11, well, all for my self, and to some of my friends who are interested of course. hehe. i really love this story.. hope it's okay with you...:) thanks so much, love, anjelica:)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Sure. Share the love! :)
whoooeee! ain't we got fun! great update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL. Thanks! :)
Whoohoo..I love this chapter...Poor Severus, he really likes her..and Hermione, she is resisting the truth, lol Loving this story...cant wait for more....Well done!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
So, she doesn't have a lot of experience. Well, I'm sure as the ever concerned teacher that he is, he'll show her what to do (more what he likes) *snicker*
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL. Maybe. ;)
No vampire outifit. No clothes at all! Very naughty.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
But we like naughty... ;)
Hahaha!!!! From chapter 1 to 9 I can't get rid of that grin on my face! It's just so bloody funny! Never thought Snape would speak like that though. Can't wait for the next chapter! Especially when Snape goes to Hogwarts with this new style of his! Oh, McGongall's going to faint and I bet half the student population would choke on their drinks!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Glad you are enjoying this. Lots more fun to come. :)
wah! i was sooooo looking forward to another chapter!!!!! i really love this story!!!! and it was freakinly hilarious!!!!:) i love it!!!! infinite thumbs up! but it was disappointing that hermione did'nt join the potions master during his play time. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
All good things will come to those who wait... ;)
LOL. Oohh that was fun!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
What?! She just left?! Ok, so she doesn't have a lot of experience under her belt (literally) but he could show here a few things. What are teachers for, after all? There were a lot of great lines in this chapter, but my favorites have to be:It’s bloody hard to keep a straight face as if I regularly share coffee with semen-splattered men. Probably would have totally fucked with their minds. Should have told them, really.Thanks for another fun chapter. I'll be expecting an increase in action next time!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL. Thanks for reviewing! :)
love the inner dialogue! he is being rather obvious, tho and the other girls are noticing. great update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
hehe, that he is. :)
LOL. I love it. Snape and Granger really are so good together. Of course HP books are all for kids so JKR couldn't even SEE this I'm sure, but really, they've jumped up out of the book and taken on lives of their own and so often they end up together. ROFL.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Yes. JKR's audience certainly wouldn't appreciate the way those two fit. :)
Please wipe the drool of Snape's vampire outfit and get him ready for the next chapter
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
He won't need an outfit for the next chapter... ;)
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
No outfit, interesting . No clothes?
This is very funny! The dialogue style works really well, I think. I'm really enjoying this.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you! :)
I wonder if she wore that dress on purpose... And she could use her emergency key right now. I'm sure Sev' won't complain to see her barge in in the middle of the night clad in her night cloths *evil grin*
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
His inner pervert would be happy at least! :)
I think they may have thrown caution to the wind, had she decided to go tell him her info tonight instead of waiting until tomorrow. But alas, she does have some sense of outward appearance. This continues to be clever and funny. I hope they find out what it going on with the mystery magic user soon. Then he can get back to his regularly scheduled ogling. Pervert.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL. Just wait until the next chapter, and you'll see just how much of a pervert they can both be. ;)
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
I'm going to hold you to that promise!
When Kingsley first gave them the assignment, Hermione questioned "what's in it for me?" So I have been waiting to see. What is in it for her?If everything goes back to business as usual at Hogwarts than I can guess the answer is "nothing." 
Hmmm. But what if Seth came back to teach defense? Or more like Seth with the ability to pull Snape out when he wanted to? Now that could make this whole thing worth something. 
I am enjoying your story and looking forward to finding out what is in it for Hermione. Thanks.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
'Seth with the ability to pull Snape out when he wanted to?' Now, that would be a sight to see! :)
Response from mikimoto (Reviewer)
I guess I am also concerned with how unconcerned our heroes are that someone could imperio them with just a well-placed amulet. They seem a bit complacent about the danger they are in. It reminds me of this nature video I saw with these turtle doves splashing and playing in shallow water and then a turtle snuck up and grabbed one and ate it. I remember thinking "what kind of a bird are you that you can be caught by a turtle!" But if you aren't paying attention, even a turtle has a chance to score...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
That's true, but I think they would be very suspicious if someone came up and gave them an amulet out of the blue. LOL :)
love their witty back and forth. you have indeed a real talent for dialogue! (or did i already tell you that? if so it bears repeting) thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks. Must come from practice - I love talking to people! :)
Oh, fuck. Here they come. Seth Sneyd’s fan club. How I wish I could treat them to a dose of Severus Snape. They’d probably wet their bloody pants.ROFL!Those girls wouldn't know what hit them!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Hehe :)
Oh ... I can just imagine the expresion on Ron'r face if he knew someone would call Snape 'Mr Dreamy'! I have to agree with Hermione, though. Snape without the sneering is very weird.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
The thing is, she knows he's only acting. :)
I'm so glad that the other girls are ga-ga over Seth. It will make Hermione see him in a different light, make her appreciate him more.This story is so much FUN!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Good. That's exactly what I intended. :)
I love their inner monologue. Especially Sev' Pervert indeed ;) but for the good cause.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks. I'd hoped that would come across OK. :)