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Can't Take My Eyes Off You
sunny33315 Reviews | 7.0/10 (315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )
Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.
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sunny33
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You
Yay! I'm so excited by their progress that I want to jump up and make it a group hug *contemplates the safety of actually trying that* It seems that it just might be possible for a Snape-Sneyd hybrid to emerge after all. And even though he didn't come to her room, and she doesn't have a plan, and he said he loved her in code, I am confident they are going to get there. Can't wait to see the sparks fly. Loving this, as always!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
I love this chapter....Such a great surprise to see an update..can't wait for more...Well done....I agree Hermione needs to ignore him till he sees the error of his ways..LOL!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I'm trying to update soon after it falls off the front page, so every 5-7 days. It's all written and ready to post. :)
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Oh that's wonderful, It's such a joy to see an update...Can't wait to see what Hermione does...LOL!!!
Great chapter and amazing story. I love the way it's written, only from dialogues and thoughts. It's really original and it gives an insight into the characters that's very, very entertaining. Please update soon.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks. It was a real experiment to write it like this, but it was a lot of fun. :)
i want the next chapter. now. haha. just joking. seriously, I'm looking forward for the next chapter!keep up the good work!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Hehe. You can't have it until next week. :P
Response from rubyanjel (Reviewer)
aww. next week. It seems like bad news for me 'cause i'll be having my summer class. :) i'll try my best to wait for it and read!!!!! yeah!
Was that an admission of something? Hmmmmm I wonder....well anyway great chapter and keep updating.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
He admitted something. I think Hermione's plan may just work.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
You'll see soon! :)
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Hope not to soon... because I'm kind of enjoying this lol
"And you love me for it.”“Indeed.”Wow!! That is the closest he ever got to admitting his feelings for her. It's a huge improvement. I think everything will be fine now. Althought I long to see how class will go after that.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
She knows he loves her, he knows he loves her, but it just kind of slipped out! :)
I think she may have him convinced.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
She has a way to go yet, ;)
“Do you wizards always kiss and make up after you have fought?”“Er… no, Amelia. But I see what you mean about close.”LOL!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks! :)
Yay! His patronus changed!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Yep. He was over the whole doe idea! :)
glorious update! thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thank you. :)
This just gets better and better. Hermione's friends are hilarious. I can't believe they asked him to do the speech. No wait, I can believe that they asked him. I just never thought he'd actually do it!I think in RL, it makes him all the more enticing to know that he wants to be appropriate in terms of a relationship with his student. *psst... Severus. This is fanfic, not RL. You can do anything with anyone at anytime. We don't judge. A little drooling, and melting, and fanning of selves, but no judging.* What is he waiting for?!?!Oh, I hope he doesn't look into her mind, because if he sees what expectations she has for him in the bedroom, he will definitely run away screaming.Can't wait for some Grimmauld Place action!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Don't you think it's funny that as readers, we all think Hermione and Severus are made for each other, and what are they waiting for, whereas if it was real life, we'd be horrified! I suppose that's why they call it fantasy! :)
Right.....yes it would be Katrina, my best mate as she really was a bit witchy. I loved her though......in a very platonic, non-lesbian way you understand. Christ, we were man mad. But I digress. Hermione really did the only decent thing after making such a dreadful comment and I'm glad that it was mutually beneficial to both of them. You do have a lovely writing style that flows easily but has a delightful soupcon of just being a little tongue-in-cheek. I love it. Oh yes, the second bit of spookiness that really toppled me when the three suspects were named is that my forenames are (drum roll) Morag Alicia! Not many of us about even when I grew up in 60s/70s Scotland and certainly not when I moved to Manchester. So imagine how good I felt when on my first reading of Philosopher's Stone, not only was there an Alicia Spinnet but a Morag McDougall too. Christ I might get a mug with my name on it at last. Thank you Sunny for giving both me and my mate a nod in the realms of HP fanfic. Best wishes, Love Morag Alicia xxxxxx.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
That really is uncanny. And my sister was a McDougall for some years before she divorced LOL. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as it unfolds. :)
Nice hugs, nice kiss.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Nice is not what we want though, is it? ;)
Should I try to imagine the racquet as an extension of me when I try to play tennis; or could I have Snape watching me to improve my technique? The magic between them is building.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I think the latter would work just fine... ;)
Ooo dang... Can't wait for more! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Coming up soon to a screen near you! :)
You're not originally from Ayrshire in Scotland are you Sunny? There's too many coincidences here I'm afraid. We're the same age and when I lived in Ayrshire until 1976 (I now live in Lancashire) my best mate was called.......Hermione Grang....(only kidding).....Katrina Wallace! There is also another big "coincidence" but I'm not revealing that one yet. Ooooooh this is getting weird and very spooky. Love the story by the way and your extremely pervy Sev is certainly floating my boat. Pure magic! Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
That is spooky. No, my only visit ever to the UK was in 2001 when we spent 2 weeks in London and West Sussex. Katrina's first name is a nod to one of my colleagues, as are the other girls. They were all instrumental in helping me concoct the plot over morning tea! Very productive we are. *whistles innocently* Can't wait to find out the other big coincidence! Incidentally, Seth Sneyd and this story were inspired by the new music master at my son's boarding school. I first saw him at a concert in August last year. He was the right age and had the leanness, the nose, the unsmiling demeanour (and when he did smile it was more of a smirk). He worked in the Music Basement and waved his baton like a wand. He was originally from the UK. I swear it was Snape incognito. I've never spoken to the man himself - he'd probably be horrified he had inspired a smutty story! LOL. :)
You are such an effing tease :) I am officially going to rename this chapter "Dipping A Little Toe Into The Pool Of Temptation."I did like the Dumbledore conversation that precipitated the kiss. They've been dancing around the issue for so long, it was going to take something extra to spur them into action. I, like Hermione, was hoping for a bit more action, but hey, baby steps are good. At least they love each other, whether they admit it any time soon, or not.I was afraid in the beginning of this story that there was no mystery wizard or witch at this school, but that Kingsley (and who knows what other coconspirators) recognized that they would make a good pair, but that they would never come to that unless forced into close proximity. So he made up this whole thing. I say I was afraid, not because it would make for a bad story, but was afraid of what these two would do to Kingsley if they found out. Anyway, will be anxiously awaiting more.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
There is definitely a mystery to solve, and like good intrepid investigators they will get to the bottom of it. Not without a few diversions along the way... ;)
Ah. That’s the trick. Pretend they are Snape’s balls you are hitting over the net. If he ever mentions this at Hogwarts, it’ll be canaries for him!Boy is she a force to be reckoned with! Her friends are so intrigued as to the nature of her relationship with Mr. Sneyd, and I think it only makes it worse that she is so nonchalant every time it comes up. I'm surprised that they haven't tried to follow her to see if there is anything to talk about.I love it when I finish a chapter and there is another one at the ready for my viewing pleasure. This should become a habit!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
But then it would all be over far too quickly. :)
wow! the computer screen was sizzling! great stuff. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
LOL. Soon they will have to actually work on their mission, bit the hijinks continue. :)
Squeeeeeeeeeeeee...an Update, Oh I love it, FINALLY they kissed, now if Severus would just stop this teacher/student/I'm not worthy of love complex..LOL...Bless his heart....Looking forward to more...WELL DONE!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
! :)
2 chapters in a row! That's almost like Christmas. And A KISS *hourray* I just hope Sev' will come to his senses and act upon his feelings.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
I thought the first one was a bit short, so I gave you two! :)
At least she didn't chose ballet. Poor Sev would have had a hard attack seing her in a tutu.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)
He would indeed! :)