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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Breaching the Otherworld
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Breaching the Otherworld

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

Breaching the Otherworld

Southern_Witch_69

850 Reviews   |   850 Ratings, 0 Likes, 412 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 142,839 Words 46 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28


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I adore the world of HP.



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Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld

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10/10

BrenaMarie

This is such a great chapter! I loved how Hermine is getting little snippets of her memory back and how she's doing her research. It was also nice to see her hanging out in their home. Very sweet and sentimental without being too depressing. I'm going to go read the next chapter. I'm sorry about the delay in reading/reviewing... but I know you're firmiliar with RL getting in the way. Much Love ~Brena

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

thanks! :) Have more up now, hope you like it. Take your time in reviewing! That's never a problem

10/10

Lkmaide

Please tell me she gets to give L what-for.  I bet he manufactured the pictures and had Ron tied up somewhere.  Heehee, too bad for Ron-  I love her with Sev!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Lucius has been doing lots of things. Bad boy. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Lucius has been doing lots of things. Bad boy. :)

10/10

Shadow

Nasty, tricky Lucius! I wonder what his real reason was to bring Hermione and Severus together?Cant wait to see what happens next!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He's definitely naughty, isn't he? He has plans...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He's definitely naughty, isn't he? He has plans...

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

This is so gripping! This is Severus, right? There's no chance that Lucius really brought back someone else into his body, is there? That would be too scary! LOL But why does Lucius want to bring Severus back? And now I'm questioning where the tome came from and if it's actually Lucius responsible for its "sentience." Hmmm, I'd noticed the doctor at the hospital was described with the same kind of teeth as Lucius. It was unnerving, and now I think there might be a connection after all? Is there anything to that?


For Hermione's sake, I'm hoping her and Severus will be quite happy with thei situation and that all those eerie dreams of him were only due to the spirit's outrageous desire to be in flesh again…


So many questions and ideas… I can't wait to see how this plays out. Thanks for such a compelling story  =)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yep, it's Severus. I'll have some of these answers for you soon. thank you for reading. I appreciate that and the feedback.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yep, it's Severus. I'll have some of these answers for you soon. thank you for reading. I appreciate that and the feedback.

10/10

Bookwyrm333

I LOVE IT!!! the characters are spot on and realistic while still being completely diffrent from the books

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much. :)

9/10

CharmedForce

Gah, that Lucius is so slippery! Was it really necessary for him to do that? Would Hermione really have backed out? It's almost like Lucius would have been better served to be planting seeds of doubt in Hermione's mind the whole time, rather than using a liquid Imperius.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Slippery snake indeed. Hermione was having second thoughts earlier, but she would have gone through with it. Lucius is taking precautions, I suppose. Sooner or later, though, she'll find out.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Slippery snake indeed. Hermione was having second thoughts earlier, but she would have gone through with it. Lucius is taking precautions, I suppose. Sooner or later, though, she'll find out.

0/10

tinytexans

Hot damn, I hope so too!!!


Gotta tell ya, Lucius' little antics took me for a loop. My hands flew up to my face in shock! Heehee! Good stuff. Hope he doesn't ruin what so far seems like a good thing...


Oooo so many fun twists and turns! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Twisty twisty. Hehe. Glad you are liking this. More up soon.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Twisty twisty. Hehe. Glad you are liking this. More up soon.

8/10

orm irian

Good chapter.  I am eager to find out what happens next.  There's one mistake here though: the whites of the eyes are NOT the retina ("Back were the white retinas, though the centers were still black as night.") FYI:  The white part is called the sclera--the retina is inside the eyeball at the back of the orbit.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. I was a bit lazy and asked a friend in messenger what the whites of the eyes were called. She said retina. Hahaha... I've put in sclerae. Thank you very much.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. I was a bit lazy and asked a friend in messenger what the whites of the eyes were called. She said retina. Hahaha... I've put in sclerae. Thank you very much.

10/10

crimsonserpent

Wow, no kidding on more Snape, lol.  Gotta love conniving!Lucius, so pretty and so sneaky.  And the sex, ooahh the sex, lol.  Wonderful and can't wait for the next chapter.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

glad you enjoyed!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

glad you enjoyed!

10/10

blue artemis

Wow, that was something.  And I hope she manages her revenge on Lucius.  He deserves it.  And Ron, well, that was really sucky.  He should have told her it was over. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Ron should have, but perhaps he was unable. O_o

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Ron should have, but perhaps he was unable. O_o

0/10

KiraAlexia

Great story. Dark in some places. Lucius hasn't changed much has he?  Can wait to see what happens next.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much. Lucius knows when to toss on the charms :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much. Lucius knows when to toss on the charms :)

10/10

DayLightDancer

I dont remember in which fanfic I read it from but I remember that Lucius did the same thing, befriended her then betrayed her (I think), then Hermione beat his but up. Like crucio and everything, hahaha that was great, hopefully the revenge will be something like that XD =D

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Wow, she really got into it then! LOL She'll find out about his plans soon enough. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Wow, she really got into it then! LOL She'll find out about his plans soon enough. :)

0/10

CourtneyPaige31

yay, he's back *smiles*still pissed off at Lucius tho, wat a butt.and snape scared me there for a minute with the black eyes and all, i thought 'oh crap, what has she gotten herself into this time' but i hope it all works out!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yeah, wait till you see Lucius in the next chapter. Smooth as ever. Hahaha :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yeah, wait till you see Lucius in the next chapter. Smooth as ever. Hahaha :)

0/10

OpalJade

Very clever plot! The writing is awesome too! Like everyone else, I have tons of questions...but I guess they will be answered in due time.Great job "Hidden author"! Can't wait until your identity is revealed.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much. More up next.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much. More up next.

10/10

harrypotterwanter

I am glad that Hermione finally accepted the fact that she and Severus will be together. Hopefully she doesn't change her mind after the potion wears off. I am curious why Lucius wanted to bring Severus back. Perhaps there is some potion that he wants Severus to make for him. Were those pictures truly of Ron? Perhpas that was another trick he used to force Hermione to do his bidding.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yeah, there's no reason to kick and scream about it, really, what's done is done. I'll have more of these answers for you soon. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yeah, there's no reason to kick and scream about it, really, what's done is done. I'll have more of these answers for you soon. :)

10/10

roadrunna

my finger is poised over the refresh button eagerly waiting for more. keep up the good wor

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

hope you like what I have now :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

hope you like what I have now :)

10/10

Sampdoria

First of all, thank you for a brilliant update!!!!! Seccond, you leave my somewhat bevildered about if I am going to be mad at Lucius or not. I really hate that he tricked her like that, and proving that for him she is no more than a lowly mudblood who was useful to reach his goal. I honestly think there should be a price to pay for him for that. On the other side, would Hermione been able to go through with it all without the drug Lucius used on her? That is the only redeaming thougth I have about him at the moment, that no matter his intentions, Hermione is just where she is supposed to be, in the arms of Severus and bonded with him so there will never be any room for ickle Ron to worm his way back into her life. I hope this Severus was so real that Hermione doesn't have to get hurt by a Severus who now throws her away in a misguided attempt to save his poor hearth and mind. If he does, neither he or Lucius should ever be forgiven, there is only so much betrayal I would allow them to inflict upon Hermione, and after all she has been through lately, she at least deserve that what she experienced with Severus was based on truth and that they have something to work on, building their future together. Update again soon!!!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

As you now know, there is much more to Lucius than meets the eye. Yeah,Ron's lost his chance, hasn't he? :) (This is a good thing. LOL). Hermione won't be miserable in her marriage. I promise.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

As you now know, there is much more to Lucius than meets the eye. Yeah,Ron's lost his chance, hasn't he? :) (This is a good thing. LOL). Hermione won't be miserable in her marriage. I promise.

10/10

Dungeon_Butterfly

Yay!! He's back! Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks!

8/10

Anonymous

Welcome back, indeed! Excellent story-telling skills, m'dear. Tho I really hope that Hermione doesn't forget what Lucius has done. Never mind that she is enjoying this- Lucius should get what he deserves for being deceitful...



Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you are liking what's going on. I can say that she will eventually remember it all.

10/10

Mazzy

Hmmm... will he be the the snarky bastard she grew up with, or will he be a true husband?? I wonder... Can't wait to see what comes next.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He owes her his life, so I doubt he'll be a creep to her. :) Thankfully

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He owes her his life, so I doubt he'll be a creep to her. :) Thankfully

10/10

CordyAngelSeer

Lucuis is a jerk, I was all thinking he changed his spots and then wham!!! But YAY Severus is back!!! please post more soon.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL Yep, he's so sneaky

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL Yep, he's so sneaky

10/10

mia madwyn

Why do I think Lucius had something to do with Ron's situation?


And I honestly didn't see that coming--Lucius, you bad man.  Sigh.


But the rest?  Wow!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

It would be Lucius' speed to do something with Ron, especially since he wanted something. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

It would be Lucius' speed to do something with Ron, especially since he wanted something. :)

0/10

nightshift

I'm wondering what they'll do to Lucius--I can't see Hermione letting him get by with it, and I can't see Severus letting a mere Gryffindor plot revenge.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Lucius will eventually be found out :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Lucius will eventually be found out :)

10/10

Hellebore

Ohh, love the dark twists into the unkown. Another great chapter :D

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much

10/10

Hellebore

Very intriguing story. Wonder what Snape will be like back from the dead, its dark magic after all. Looking forward too reading more.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Glad you like it so far and hope you enjoy the next

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Glad you like it so far and hope you enjoy the next

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