New Chapter for The Self-Writing Parchment
The Self-Writing Parchment
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Hermione finds a mysterious piece of self-writing parchment in Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes that writes: Tell me your deepest desire. Thinking it’s a trick, she says, “I wish to see my soul mate?” and she suddenly finds herself at Severus’ feet.
This is my response to the Potter_Place Summer 2007 Prompt – #23
The warnings I have listed for this chapter are implied. I chose the rating of MA (NC-17) due to the story’s overall content.
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
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Reviews for The Self-Writing Parchment
just as well she didn't know about the mirror until afterwards, that would be a real passion killer!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Having the entire wedding party (spouces and a few othes) march the couple up to the wedding suite for thier coupling, should have been a clue for Hermione, however, thankfully, she didn't catch on. But He knew - performing for the Dark Lord, Belinda, Malfoys and others... that had to be tough on Severus. He knew!
Poor Severus really does'nt understand women at all. If he had just tried a little harder, pulled her a little closer, she probably would have told him everything. Now, he is going to be all miserable and proboble be a git to her again because he jumps to conclusions!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
You are so right on the first part. If he'd simply held her and let her cry on his shoulder, she would have told him everything. So instead, he'll bury himself into being Headmaster and let her wallow. *sigh* Poor guy - just doesn't know. Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate it.
Severus misinterprets things quite a bit, I believe. Anyway, poor Hermione. And I can see how she doesn't believe she can tell him. I hope they work it out.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
With everything going on, he just didn't realize all he had to do was hold her and let her cry on his shoulder and she'd have started confessing. Guys! Some just can't handle a distraught female! Let things settle into a routine, and Occlumency lessons, Cillian, who's far better at dealing with females, catch on and nudge Severus a bit... see where I'm going? If you're really curious I babbled a bit too much on a previous review... Anyway, thank you for the reveiw. Don't worry, relationships that grow through tough times become strong.
I've seen this story before on the recently updated but haven't had the time to begin reading it. I'm so very glad I did. I've enjoyed the first chapter and am looking forward to the next chapters.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. I'm so glad you like this chapter and consdier giving me a read. I really appreciate it. I hope it stays to your likeing.
I was happy to see an update. Hope there is another soon -- and please don't torment them and us with misunderstandings! It's hard on the happy ending junkies here. ;) Thanks for your!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Cerydden,
I don’t mean to torment you or any one with misunderstandings. Severus, as I have him in my head while writing this story, has had one girlfriend (Lily - and that relationship went sour), Belinda, who aggressively pursuits him – aggressively, and possibly other sexual partners but most that are willing/experienced partners and not relationships. So, Severus doesn’t exactly know how to be a loving and supportive ‘boyfriend,’ or how to be emotionally supportive to a emotionally distraught female. Hermione, who is used to dealing with guys and relationships problems has been through a lot since June (when this story starts.) She still sees herself as a prisoner, at the mercy of the Dark Lord and having no control regarding her fate. Severus was cool and aloof during her summons (after she splinched), standing back and away from her, except when he held her to make her watch Wormtail being punished by the Dark Lord. She doesn’t realize that she can turn to Severus, andtell him what’s wrong, because she doesn’t think he can or will do anything about it, other than to tell her to ‘obey.’
Not only that, but keep in mind Severus is being pulled in several directions at once: getting married, school starts in two days, Carrows causing trouble/making demands, the other teachers upset/uncomfortable/unhappy, new school policies/rules to implement, approve lseeon plans, make the existing staff conform to what the Dark Lord wants. And he doesn’t realize that all he had to do was enter the shower and hold her, let her cry on his shoulder and Hermione would’ve open up to him. Give him (and me a bit of time.) Cillian is a bit of a lad/ladies man. Occlumency lessons – he will see it! Things have to settle into a routine and these two will have time to work things out. Okay? At least this is the plan… I hope you aren’t put off with what I’ve said here and I didn’t mean to babble. But in the end – I wouldn’t keep insisting this is a Romance if I wasn’t getting them there. Draco and Cillian will end up her friends… Someone(s) will change sides. The D.A. of course comes back – but slightly different from how JK had it. Belinda wants Severus back in her bed. The Order of the Phoenix, while disorganized somewhat is gaining support and members. It has a three person head right now - and Severus still sends notes/warnings/information to (cant' tell you right now). Harry, Ron and Percy will do something not in the books. Someone(s) who died in book seven, doesn’t – but is hurt really bad… Someone(s, 2) I really dislike will die. (You won't mind - they are peripheral characters.) I’ll be following the timeline on Lexicon, but Harry gains a group of help and Ron doesn't run off, and familiar events happen. I’m following canon, trying to keep the characters canon, but I’ve planned changes in what happens and who does what. Sorry – I’ll stop babbling now.
I was happy to see an update. Hope there is another soon -- and please don't torment them and us with misunderstandings! It's hard on the happy ending junkies here. ;) Thanks for your work!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Don't worry hun, relationships that grow through tough beginnings grow into something strong.
Well, it's very nice to see Ron using his brain and becoming organized; his theories seem reasonable. Very characteristic of Harry to be hot-headed. I wonder if Hermione could sneak off with Ron's Deluminator to find Severus....Thank you for the new chapter!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I'm glad that you like how I deplited the boys in this. I wanted Ron to grow up and mature a bit more than he did in the books. Harry is more affected by locket/visions/dreams than he was in the books. You'll see... Interesting, she use his Deluminator? You'll have to wait to see what I did. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I hope Hermione takes the risk of letting Severus know what the Dark Lord told her. It must have been incredibly difficult for her to handle herself so well, but she should turn to her husband for assistance.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
She hasn't yet begun to turn to him like she would have Harry or Ron. Her relationshiip with Severus isn't as comfortable to her where she feels able to confide in him. Besides, she's convinced he can't or wouldn't do anything about it because of the way he acted at her summoning. Unfortunately, they are still having communication difficulties. As for Severus, he's been rather busy - school starts in two days, wedding, new teachers, new rules to impliment... he's been pulled in several directions and didn't take the time to try and comfrot her either. He knows she's upset - but didn't try holding her or anything... that would have given her the oppurtunity to open up to him.Thank you for the reveiw. Have patience, things are improving - slowly.
You really conveyed the great creepiness of the Dark Lord well. *shivers* I mean that in the best, good-descriptive-writing kind of way. Good job!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. I really want to show as many sides to his personality as I can so he isn't so one-dimensioal as in the books. I really appreciate the compliment as I have tried so hard in deplicting him as both able to be kind, manipulative, cunning - yet evil. I'm glad you got that.
Wonderful chapter!! I cant wait to read more!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much.
Great chapter, I love how this story meanders with such grace and fluidity.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you so very much.
Hmmm... so I wonder how Sev will treat her now that he thinks she is sobbing for having married him? And I wonder how Draco will treat her now, knowing beyond any doubt that she has slept with Severus.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
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The next two chapters are only a day each and things are going to be busy for Severus, the new Headmaster, new teachers, new rules, new guidelines, on top of all his duties… he’ll be distracted somewhat… Draco, to clear things up, has been ‘given a task’ so to speak by the Dark Lord, (yes another,) to befriend her and turn her loyalties (“You have not come around as much as I had hoped.”) This will be made a bit more clearer in the next two chapters—although, Draco isn’t sure how to sway her and doesn’t really thinks he can. Befriend—that’s easy (or so he thinks!) You’ll see. Besides, since I’m trying to keep to canon regarding everyone who do you think will sway whom? Thank you for the reveiw. I hope I didn't punch down any hopes by typing this.
I think that this chapter is magnificent , the prelude ,the hand fastening ceremony and the wedding 'night'. Hermione filling and responsess is strong and so is Snapes.
But I can but wonder that Snape will at last perform legiments for discover the reason for Hermaine discomfort and thears.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
*Blushes* Geeze thanks! Wow. Hermione's and Snape's feelings are taken by both canon and personal reaction (mine) and my boyfriend's suggestion when reading over my shoulder as I type for Severus. Neither is really opening up totally, both are holding themselves in check and feeling the strain... Legilimens will come later I'm afraid...Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, I'm touched.
An update, finally! I really like this story and I'm glad that ther is a relationship in the first place, even though they haven't really worked everything out.I'm looking forward to more.gab
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Gab,
Thank you. There has always been a ‘relationship’ between Severus and Hermione, but thanks to her use of the parchment, things definitely shifted quickly and were ‘redefined’ and then escalated. Yes, they haven’t worked much out, but he’s a secretive sort and not too suave when it comes to women. (at least in this one) But Hermione is the kind to try and ‘resolve’ things… maybe when she’s feeling a bit more in her element…
I’ve the next chapter written—but I have to get it all cleaned up with my betas. It is forthcoming, I promise.
So gald to see the site back and to read the update! There's been progression in the physical department, but you're right, Hermione still needs to learn to share her concerns with her husband. Well, she needs to realise first that he's her best ally in her situation. Perhaps she could simple have told him that the Dark Lord had paid her a visit while he was making arrangments for their leaving. Now, their relationship will be set back several paces. Hopefully, it won't take them ages to progress again.Next chapter at Hogwarts, I guess? Is it ready?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. Yep, she should have, and he could have tried simply holding her and let her cry on his shoulder too. They both have difficulties in the communication dept. Yep, they’re off to Hogwarts! But alas… I’ve got to have it cleaned up by my betas first. But it’s written at least!!
Oh my! Well, I remember my honeymoon and I was an emotional wreck and I wanted and chose to be married! Still, my husband, being a man, thought I didn't want to be married to him, that I regreted it. The first year was rough, but this year will be seven years and each year it gets better to understand one another. My husband is older than I am and he forgets sometimes I don't have the life experience he does. So I can get this "thing" going on with Hermione and Severus. And their marriage was NOT the ideal circumstance! Well, hopefully all will work itself out.Good Job!Livvy
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. Beautifully put. I don’t think I could say it better! Keep the faith, I like romance even rocky-in-the-beginning ones!
how did Sev not know that the dark lord visited her??? Her needs to tell him! How could she not???? After his confession to her???? - very nice hand fastening!!! love sev's thoughts at the end of the evening!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Sneaky git just slipped in right after Severus walked out and then left before Severus got back. Yes, she should have told Severus, but she feels trapped still and after the way he behaved at her summons, she didn’t think he could do anything about it. And Severus didn’t pry either. She was fine after the coupling and not when he came back. He could have tried to comfort her and didn’t try hard enough.
I’m glad you liked the hand-fasting. I used several from the net and blended what I liked best.
Thank you for the review. I appreciate it.
that was a fantastic story!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much.
I'm always so excited to see this story updated, and this chapter lived up to my expectations, as usual!
Wonderful ceremony, and oh, poor Hermione! To have to provide "entertainment" for the Death Eaters on her wedding night! I'm surprised Severus couldn't figure that much out on his own--that it would upset her!
Great job.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. I’m so glad. Severus knew about the mirror and kept it from her the best he could, but yes, wizard version of sitting behind the bed hangings! Yuck. Bet Belinda liked the show? There was quite a bit to upset her and the Calming Draught wore off… Yep, poor girl.
Ron has some good points there.:)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. (shhh, but in reality it's a bit of a Mister-sue. It's my opinions, Sunny, the way I see the events that Ron is spouting. But don't tell anyone, okay?) Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs, and happy reading.
Hallo!I must say that Ron realy pleasntly surprased my whith his common sense and wisdom , but Hary is throuly dissapointing regardles of his conection whith Voldermortin his mind. Draco is betther and betther , Cillian realy is good gay , and Snape is ???. I like him no mather his past whith Hermione. I have difficult time whit their start because I can t anderstand Hermione s obligations toward him.Best regards from Lora
Response from lora (Reviewer)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Hello, Lora, nice to hear form you. I'm really glad that you liked Ron in this - I wanted to show that he grew up (finally) a little bit and matured, taking on some responsibility. It was fun showing him this way. Harry, he's been getting a few visions and he's really hurt and angry at Hermione right now nad he hates Ron's ideas. Yes, he's being a prat, but guess who is wearing the Horcrux. In this story, the Locket effects both Ron and Harry the same, (the way it effected Ron in the books/movies, made him think all sorts of bad/jealous/angry things.) You'll see in the next chapter, I hope, that it's the connection/visions/emotions that's tearing on him. He doesn't have Hermione with him to sooth things over, her understanding and gentle support and so he's affected more. Does that help? Draco is coming around, but then he isn't his father, he isn't a killer and he is not liking life under the Dark Lord. Cillian is a okay bloke. Hermione's position is a hard one to explain - she is a POW. She's told to behave, do what is expected of her, keep your head down or be tormented/tortured/killed. It's a tough place to be. Plus she is coming to love Severus.Severus is still trapped under a madman, doing his bidding but at the same time, ... next chapter you'll see more and there is a hint (loud hint) that things with him are still not as they appear. He's not bad, but he's having to show the Dark Lord images, when asked, so the Dark Lord can taunt Harry with them... You'll see Severus' stand in the next chapter... or two. He may surprise you. Thank you for reading and for the review. I appreciate you sticking with me and sharing your opinions. Hugs, and have a great Easter, sweetie.
That was fantastic!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you.
What an amazingly detailed chapter you've given us. And I love it! You write some of the best, most detailed, and yet easily followed action sequences I've ever read. I was blown away by how close they were to being in the same place at the same time and yet didn't meet each other. I just wanted to nail one of their shoes to the floor long enough for the other to find them. Thank goodness Hermione found her wayto Harry and Ron, but I'm sick for Severus... he's got to be sick at heart not knowing what's happened to her. I'm glad we were privy to when Severus was searching through her trunk and found the parchment that started all this. I was hoping his attempt to find his hand fasted wife would lead to a clue, but what happened was very interesting: It’s not your turn to know or see. You must wait two more times until she writes three, and only if I pass myself to thee. It brought me back to the beginning of the story and got me thinking again about how that parchment had come to be in the Weasley's shoppe and who might have created it to start with.~ meanwhile ~I will be looking forward to the next chapter and hoping that Severus will find out that Hermione is all right. AND, I hope the Dark Lord punishes the hell out of Belinda and Bellatrix. Thanks for this great chapter!!!!!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you, Beth. I'm so glad you enjoy the details. LOL yep, a pasing int the night, missed it by that much, game. Nail down her shoes - that's funny. I intended to have her hook up with the boys because I wanted you to see what they were up to and that they were all right even though Hermione wasn't with them, but also to get a glimpse that the war is being fought on the outside of school.I've had Hermione in a bubble and this was one way for her ( and you ) to see outside her bubble.Yep, the parchment is still around. Hermione knows it's in her trunk, now he does too. However, she isn't using it because she's a bit afraid of it - considering she doesn't know how it works or who made it. But yes, it's still there. I think CoMWT updates next, then P-TB, they are both in queue. So As soon as one of those validates, I'll submit a cahpter of this one in. Thankyou for sticking with me and for the review. It's always good to hear from you and what you think.
Your updates are amazing. I love this story -- I thought I had missed the conclusion because I had not seen it in a while and am so glad that I got to catch up. Just one little concrit -- I think you used the word "memorandums" when it should be "memoranda." It's like datum and data. Anyway, I am really enjoying your story and think you are doing a wonderful job. I hope another rainy day comes along soon so we can read more.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Oh, I had a small accident in my car and two weeks off work. I'm broke! So I'll be spending loads - all of my evenings at home. typing most likely. Thank you for the tip. My beta's and the admins don't catch everything, but then I'm not doing this for money - only cuz I'm having fun and am enjoying sharing my imagination with all of you! Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, and sweet review. Hugs!~
wonderful update. loved the image of luna doing yoga...i can just see it! thanks so much
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. Yeah, I got a giggle writing that part. Her 'bending'! Thank you so much for the review.