New Chapter for The Self-Writing Parchment
The Self-Writing Parchment
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Hermione finds a mysterious piece of self-writing parchment in Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes that writes: Tell me your deepest desire. Thinking it’s a trick, she says, “I wish to see my soul mate?” and she suddenly finds herself at Severus’ feet.
This is my response to the Potter_Place Summer 2007 Prompt – #23
The warnings I have listed for this chapter are implied. I chose the rating of MA (NC-17) due to the story’s overall content.
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein
“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan
Reviews for The Self-Writing Parchment
Ooh, the Widower's Robes—creepy! Your own invention? Very interesting little details you add to your story make it so fun to read. Nice work!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. Yes, the Widower's Robes was my own tought. The idea of wedding robes that started to shrink as soon as a bride said 'I do,' and that couldn't be removed once you put them on...
I'm very happy you like the little details. It's part of the fun typing Potterverse Wizarding world stories - the creativity I can play with and just let my imagination run wild!!
Thank you very much for the compliment. It's sweet of you to say that and I really appreciate the support.
Response from emmeline33 (Reviewer)
I thought that was just a brilliant idea! Kudos! Wonderful creativity. Waiting for more!
"Widower's Robes" is an absolutely brilliant idea! Positively wonderful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you.
I was so thrilled to see this chapter. You did an amazing job with the Dark Lord, and I love that Draco and Cillian were along on the shopping trip. I can't wait for the handfasting!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. I'm very pleased you liked it! Thank you for the compliments - wow. The hand-fasting is in the next chapter, so is the wedding night. I just have to do a read though, comb it over and send it to my betas. But it's coming...
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
You mean it's already written? I am thrilled!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yep! It's written... rough around the edges, but right here on my monitor.
I like the way that he was comforting her.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you.
GAH! >.< Sooooooo good so far! But dammit, where's the rest!? :(
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
It's coming I"m just going through the clean up phase and then will submit ... but it's coming... I'm delighted that you like it so far. Thank you for the review.
Worntail is snake food......well done ...bravo....very nice indeed!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you.
I think the splinching scene was perfect. Yes it was bloody, but it should be. Yes it was terrifying, but splinching is terrifying, and there is a real downside to Apparating. There is a reason why the Floo is used and why everyone doesn't just apparate every where. There is a major risk.
Great update, and I hope to see the next one soon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you, I appreciate how you put that.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you, I appreciate how you put that.
at the end of the last chapter, i thought maybe she had made it back to the order by disapperating, but *sighs* no such luck. wow, she's having a pretty tough time isn't she. poor sev, he has to deal with it all. i rele want to kill wormtail and get it over with. damnable vermin! *shakes head* but man, you have some kind of amazing imagination..can i borrow some for my fanfic? eh? lol
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I had clues in at the end as to what happened to Hermione, but yes, both she and he have had a rough beginning. Things will get better. As for the Rat – he gets his. I’d be happy to share my imagination with you anytime… just owl me! LOL
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I had clues in at the end as to what happened to Hermione, but yes, both she and he have had a rough beginning. Things will get better. As for the Rat – he gets his. I’d be happy to share my imagination with you anytime… just owl me! LOL
Again, I really like Cillian, and his interactions with Severus. Glad he'll be the one playing the part of Hermione's bodyguard rather then Draco, even if Draco and she are playing nice at the moment.
Hermione's going to love the fact that now she's actually going to be marrying Severus instead of the hand-fasting that she was already objecting to (all because Narcissa can't stand the fact that her 'little boy' is growing up, and prefers to stay with Severus and Hermione then be smothered by her).
Poor Hermione! Glad that Severus got her other half back so fast, and had surprisingly little difficulty getting to her body (still was allowed to enter Headquarters) and convincing them to let him take her. Really liked how quickly she calmed down when she recognized his voice.
Me thinks the rat is toast.
Loved the chapter! Can't wait for the next one, maybe Cillian will finally get to meet her properly!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I am very flattered that you like my story. Thank you. I’m glad you like Cillian, but keep in mind – he has his dark side too. Don’t discount Draco, yet. The Dark Lord wants him to befriend her and he is trying to. Whom do you think will influence the other more? Huh?
Ah, yeah, well she hasn’t been told that little secret yet – and ii is still going to be a magically bonded hand-fasting. It will only become permanent if Hermione becomes pregnant. But yes, Narcissa is being a bit determined on this union being permanent…
As for things between Hermione and Snape, their true feelings are showing through in this chapter, on the subconscious level. He knows her well and she deeply respects him. isn’t that the foundation of true love? A step in the right direction at least.
And Yes, Wormtail is about to find himself in a heap of hurt and no place to live soon….
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I am very flattered that you like my story. Thank you. I’m glad you like Cillian, but keep in mind – he has his dark side too. Don’t discount Draco, yet. The Dark Lord wants him to befriend her and he is trying to. Whom do you think will influence the other more? Huh?
Ah, yeah, well she hasn’t been told that little secret yet – and ii is still going to be a magically bonded hand-fasting. It will only become permanent if Hermione becomes pregnant. But yes, Narcissa is being a bit determined on this union being permanent…
As for things between Hermione and Snape, their true feelings are showing through in this chapter, on the subconscious level. He knows her well and she deeply respects him. isn’t that the foundation of true love? A step in the right direction at least.
And Yes, Wormtail is about to find himself in a heap of hurt and no place to live soon….
OMG THIS CHAPTER IS AWESOME!!!!! That was so cool. I have never sat up so straight waiting to see what happened next. And I can't wait to see what you have coming either.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I’m very glad I didn’t disappoint. I am nearly ready to give Southern_Witch_69 and Cocoachristy my next chapter for cleaning up. I hope to have it posted soon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I’m very glad I didn’t disappoint. I am nearly ready to give Southern_Witch_69 and Cocoachristy my next chapter for cleaning up. I hope to have it posted soon.
Is it bad taste to say that it was a 'wonderful' splinching? Because it was wonderfully described! Oh, will poor Hermione have an ugly scar? I so hate Wormtail right now. And I can hardly wait for next chapter! Well done!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you for the nice review. I don’t think that it’s in bad taste at all. I appreciate the kind words of support. I tried to make such a terrible Splinching both believable and canon. I owe a great deal of thanks to Southern_Witch_69 for all her pointed comments and suggestions regarding the splinching. I wasn’t going to make is as bloody as it was, but she pointed out that it would have to be, and that Snape would have to really act fast. She helped me trough two rough descriptions and gave me canon tips – I love her for it. She is the perfect devil’s advocate and really helped me through this.
In regards to Wormtail – don’t worry. He gets his.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you for the nice review. I don’t think that it’s in bad taste at all. I appreciate the kind words of support. I tried to make such a terrible Splinching both believable and canon. I owe a great deal of thanks to Southern_Witch_69 for all her pointed comments and suggestions regarding the splinching. I wasn’t going to make is as bloody as it was, but she pointed out that it would have to be, and that Snape would have to really act fast. She helped me trough two rough descriptions and gave me canon tips – I love her for it. She is the perfect devil’s advocate and really helped me through this.
In regards to Wormtail – don’t worry. He gets his.
WoW! You and SW69 deserve accolades for this chapter!! Though, frankly, I have a hard time believing anyone, ripped diagonally in half through the backbone like that would actually live, especially with the time frame/bickering... but damn, it read swell!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. I’ll have to pass on your kind words to her. I appreciate the kind words of support.
I intended Hermione’s splinching to be rather drastic and wanted to literally cut her in half, yet keep the splinching both believable and canon. I owe a great deal of thanks to Southern_Witch_69 for all her pointed comments and suggestions about how Ron’s splinching was so bloody, and that if I was going to cut her in half, Snape would have to really act fast. Moreover, there would have to be someone on the other end doing the same thing if I was going to have Hermione live through this. But I ran on the premises that if the Accidental Magical Reversal squad could repair someone who apparently ‘splinched themselves in half’ so could I (well Snape and Healers that is) But I did want this chapter to read fast and feel like it does when treating someone in the ER. Time ticking away, act fast and blood everywhere.
Thank you again for the nice comments.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. I’ll have to pass on your kind words to her. I appreciate the kind words of support.
I intended Hermione’s splinching to be rather drastic and wanted to literally cut her in half, yet keep the splinching both believable and canon. I owe a great deal of thanks to Southern_Witch_69 for all her pointed comments and suggestions about how Ron’s splinching was so bloody, and that if I was going to cut her in half, Snape would have to really act fast. Moreover, there would have to be someone on the other end doing the same thing if I was going to have Hermione live through this. But I ran on the premises that if the Accidental Magical Reversal squad could repair someone who apparently ‘splinched themselves in half’ so could I (well Snape and Healers that is) But I did want this chapter to read fast and feel like it does when treating someone in the ER. Time ticking away, act fast and blood everywhere.
Thank you again for the nice comments.
Whew! What a roller-coaster. I do hope, though, that this scare of nearly losing her will make Snape's attitude toward her change, and that he'll allow her to dress in normal robes rather than have to run around in her nightgown and be humiliated all day long. What a way for a man to treat his future wife! Also can't wait to see what V. will do to Wormtail for almost destroying his plans for Hermione and Severus. THAT will be enjoyable.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. after both being scolded by Dumbledore’s portrait and then this … you’ll see. It’s not so much as a change, but he almost lost her – again. He is starting to feel for her, there are hints of it in this chapter. So yes, changes, little ones.
In regards to Wormtail – don’t worry. He gets his.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. after both being scolded by Dumbledore’s portrait and then this … you’ll see. It’s not so much as a change, but he almost lost her – again. He is starting to feel for her, there are hints of it in this chapter. So yes, changes, little ones.
In regards to Wormtail – don’t worry. He gets his.
Ewww- the splinching made me ill but this was a fantastic chapter and I think the trauma of almost lossing her woke a up a feeling in Severus even if it is still a small one - it is there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I’m sorry if I made you ill. But I had to incorporate some of the gore. Yes, you are right, it is there. Thank you for the nice review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I’m sorry if I made you ill. But I had to incorporate some of the gore. Yes, you are right, it is there. Thank you for the nice review.
Please tell me they finally punish Peter for this? That was amazing in the horror.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. Yes, Wormtail get his due - in the next chapter... and later on. Do you really think Snape is going to let this slide?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. Yes, Wormtail get his due - in the next chapter... and later on. Do you really think Snape is going to let this slide?
when i saw you had updated, i was thinking "okay, where were we in this story?" - and then i remembered and couldn't get the darn computer to move fast enough! i thought you handled the whole splinching and healing very well, and i admire your ability to come up with all these spells and things. very exciting stuff. my heart is just now calming down from the mad dash through this chapter.it was interesting to see severus's day - it hadn't occurred to me that they'd have to go back to hogwarts at some point. that should be interesting. i'm glad cillian will be her "protector" there, because he seems rather nice - you know, for a death eater and all!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Wow, thank you. I’m very glad that you liked this chapter. I hope it wasn’t too rough to read. I didn’t know how squeamish everyone would be. I actually take care when inventing spells that there is some credibility to them, not just some Latin words strung together, in hopes that the words mean what the spell does. That’s why I added the translations in my notes.
Yes, they are going to Hogwarts, Hermione is going to attend classes and finish her seventh year – and Ron and Harry are on their own hunting Horcruxes. There will be a few wrinkles. She is the brightest of her age and Harry and Ron are her best friends and she is in Hogwarts. Guess who has the beaded purse? And who has success to the Hogwarts library?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Wow, thank you. I’m very glad that you liked this chapter. I hope it wasn’t too rough to read. I didn’t know how squeamish everyone would be. I actually take care when inventing spells that there is some credibility to them, not just some Latin words strung together, in hopes that the words mean what the spell does. That’s why I added the translations in my notes.
Yes, they are going to Hogwarts, Hermione is going to attend classes and finish her seventh year – and Ron and Harry are on their own hunting Horcruxes. There will be a few wrinkles. She is the brightest of her age and Harry and Ron are her best friends and she is in Hogwarts. Guess who has the beaded purse? And who has success to the Hogwarts library?
Glad Hermione's ok, and Sev seemed genuinely concerned :) as did Draco surprisingly. Wondering what' going to happen to wromtail - since he won't be needing his room anymore
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, Hermione is going to be okay. Yes, Severus does genuinely care for her, even though he is still resisting it a bit. Yes, Draco is concerned. Surprised? Well he has been spending a considerable amount of time with her and has been getting to know her a little. Who did you think was going to rub off on whom here? Huh?
Wormtail – well, let’s speculate… Cruciatus comes to mind, time in a cage possibly, thrown out of Snape’s house – definitely, pissing off the Dark Lord and Snape isn’t such a good idea, nor endangering Draco to the Dark Lord’s wrath. Draco and Snape are supposed to watch over her aren’t they? I’d say he’s a world of trouble. Do you really think Narcissa and Snape are going to let this slide? Oh, he will get his.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, Hermione is going to be okay. Yes, Severus does genuinely care for her, even though he is still resisting it a bit. Yes, Draco is concerned. Surprised? Well he has been spending a considerable amount of time with her and has been getting to know her a little. Who did you think was going to rub off on whom here? Huh?
Wormtail – well, let’s speculate… Cruciatus comes to mind, time in a cage possibly, thrown out of Snape’s house – definitely, pissing off the Dark Lord and Snape isn’t such a good idea, nor endangering Draco to the Dark Lord’s wrath. Draco and Snape are supposed to watch over her aren’t they? I’d say he’s a world of trouble. Do you really think Narcissa and Snape are going to let this slide? Oh, he will get his.
OMG, you're on fire! That was like expecting chocolate cake and getting German Chocolate fudge a la mode. Did you consider having her take Wormtail with her on the apparation and then decide it would be easier to splinch instead? And I also appreciate how it was Tonks holding her together on the other end and not someone like Harry or Ron, either of which wouldn't have had a clue. Bravo to you, and Southern.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Well, thank you. I’ll have to share this compliment with SW69. She’ll appreciate it as much as I do.
Truth: No. I never intended Wormtail to Side-Along-Apparation with Hermione, but rather that with him holding onto her hand when she attempted to do so she lost some of her concentration in the process of her Apparation and splinched. Hermione wanted to get away from Wormtail, not bring him along. This is what made her splinch, her determination to leave him behind. It was a near fatal error.
In regards to Tonks being the one to keep her together on the other end – who else? Having both Tonks and Lupin there worked out really well for my overall plot and using Tonks made a whole lot of sense. She’s an Auror and may have been trained in basic splinching healing spells. At least enough to keep the victim alive until the Accidental Magic Reversal Squad could arrive. Right? Another point SW69 and I discussed at length. (Thanks SW)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Well, thank you. I’ll have to share this compliment with SW69. She’ll appreciate it as much as I do.
Truth: No. I never intended Wormtail to Side-Along-Apparation with Hermione, but rather that with him holding onto her hand when she attempted to do so she lost some of her concentration in the process of her Apparation and splinched. Hermione wanted to get away from Wormtail, not bring him along. This is what made her splinch, her determination to leave him behind. It was a near fatal error.
In regards to Tonks being the one to keep her together on the other end – who else? Having both Tonks and Lupin there worked out really well for my overall plot and using Tonks made a whole lot of sense. She’s an Auror and may have been trained in basic splinching healing spells. At least enough to keep the victim alive until the Accidental Magic Reversal Squad could arrive. Right? Another point SW69 and I discussed at length. (Thanks SW)
That was quite dramatic. What a horrible accident! Just after Severus has learned that he was to be fully married to Hermione. I suppose we'll see the Dark Lord's wrath upon this events soon. I begin to wonder what will Hermione's relationship with the other Gryffindors be, but there's still the wedding before.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Well thank you very much. I intended it to be really dramatic and to show a softer side of Snape peeking through. WE all know Snape is really capable – here’s proof.
Yes, the Dark Lord is going to be angry – is angry over this.
Yes, poor Wormtail is in for a really bad time.
Yep, she’s going to Hogwarts, and yes, there may be some Gryffindor tension she’ll have to face. As well as deal with the Slytherins.
And yes, chapter 13 is looming ahead. The Hand-Fasted Bonding
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Well thank you very much. I intended it to be really dramatic and to show a softer side of Snape peeking through. WE all know Snape is really capable – here’s proof.
Yes, the Dark Lord is going to be angry – is angry over this.
Yes, poor Wormtail is in for a really bad time.
Yep, she’s going to Hogwarts, and yes, there may be some Gryffindor tension she’ll have to face. As well as deal with the Slytherins.
And yes, chapter 13 is looming ahead. The Hand-Fasted Bonding
Wow. This was an amazing chapter. I hope that amonst the healing that needs to happen, things start warming between Hermione and Severus.
And Pettigrew needs to be turned into a turnip and fed to a hog.
As always, I can't wait until the next chapter.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. There is a little hint of it already in this chapter and more in the next.
Wormtail into a turnip? Interesting. I don’t think that either Snape or Narcissa would have thought of that one… pissing off the Dark Lord and Snape isn’t such a good idea, nor endangering Draco to the Dark Lord’s wrath. Draco and Snape are supposed to watch over her aren’t they? Well, let’s speculate… Cruciatus comes to mind, time in a cage on the stoop again, thrown out of Snape’s house – definitely. I’d say he’s a world of trouble. Do you really think Narcissa and Snape are going to let this slide? Oh, he will get his.
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
He will get his as far as the Dark Lord allows. That is always the rub!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. There is a little hint of it already in this chapter and more in the next.
Wormtail into a turnip? Interesting. I don’t think that either Snape or Narcissa would have thought of that one… pissing off the Dark Lord and Snape isn’t such a good idea, nor endangering Draco to the Dark Lord’s wrath. Draco and Snape are supposed to watch over her aren’t they? Well, let’s speculate… Cruciatus comes to mind, time in a cage on the stoop again, thrown out of Snape’s house – definitely. I’d say he’s a world of trouble. Do you really think Narcissa and Snape are going to let this slide? Oh, he will get his.
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
He will get his as far as the Dark Lord allows. That is always the rub!
I'm really dying for an update here (and so, I imagine, is Hermione---ok, corny, I know--but that's what happens when I'm in HG/SS withdrawal)---Is there any hope of an update, umm, SOON? Maybe if I send a gift of chocolate to provide an energy boost for the (I'm sure VERY busy and overwhelmed) mods?(grin)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, there is an update! It's in queue....
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, there is an update! It's in queue....
Wonderful update. Boyhowdee someone's gonna be inferit when the Dark Lord finds out his Death Eaters have been disobeying his *explicit* instructions only hours after they've been given.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. Yep, he's not going to be happy. There will be some punnishments. Thank you very much for reading and for the review.
wow, that plot-line and everything is amazing. most SS/HG ones I've read, snape is seriously OOC, but I'm rele glad you kept true to his character, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. That is one of my goals – to stay as true to character as possible. I’ve sent my next chapter to my beta – but if you need a peek, check out my reviews. There are two teasers in there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. That is one of my goals – to stay as true to character as possible. I’ve sent my next chapter to my beta – but if you need a peek, check out my reviews. There are two teasers in there.
How can Hermione completlely ignore the fact that she was gang-raped? I will keep reading on to chap 3 in the hope that she is in shock and might cry soon, but so far, Hermione's character is totally unbelievable... The fact that she was obliviated should, in fact, make her more distressed, as someone who was drugged and don't remember the abuse would be.On the other hand, I think that the ever rude, sarcastic and socially inept Snape is spot on. Being a Snape fan, I must say I will be reading this story for him. If at all.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I think you are the first person to ask me this – and I’m gobsmacked that the fact that I didn’t dwell on Hermione having a breakdown about this. Actually, the poor girl is going through quite a lot more than just this… You’ll see if you follow along. Having been a rape victim and being involved in a rape hotline/support group for two years after I can tell you that each woman handles the rape differently and there is more happening to her and continuing to happen to her as the story progresses.
In regards to Snape – I type him as I see him. But I do appreciate your candid remarks very much. I hope that as you read more you will not be so disappointed with me.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I think you are the first person to ask me this – and I’m gobsmacked that the fact that I didn’t dwell on Hermione having a breakdown about this. Actually, the poor girl is going through quite a lot more than just this… You’ll see if you follow along. Having been a rape victim and being involved in a rape hotline/support group for two years after I can tell you that each woman handles the rape differently and there is more happening to her and continuing to happen to her as the story progresses.
In regards to Snape – I type him as I see him. But I do appreciate your candid remarks very much. I hope that as you read more you will not be so disappointed with me.
Great story so far, I hope you don't have a cannon ending though.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
You mean where Harry tells Dumbledore's protrait that he isn't going to use the elder wand and that he plans to slip it back into Dumbledore's grave - right after going up to his old dormitory (That's IF Gryffindor tower is still attached to the castle) and have a lie down? (I think Harry considered asking Kreacher to serve him sandwiches in bed... hmmm) Yes, I believe that's on page 600, in the UK version of DH. Lovely ending that is... puts a smile to my face. Course - I think there are a few occurances JK forgot about - don't you? Like, er - Snape? Hello - Master of Potions extrodinare? Like - Hello, what ever happened to the 'I can teach you to bottle fame, brew glory and even put a stopper in death' part. Sorry ranting when I should be typing.....
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Rant away! J.K.R. didn't follow her own cannon, within her books there were some contradictions. For a spy who could put a stopper in death she really gave him a sucky ending. I think us fan fict writers are doing better by him!As a matter of fact, it seems to me she took some great fanfiction ideas and added an overly long camping trip for her last book.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
You mean where Harry tells Dumbledore's protrait that he isn't going to use the elder wand and that he plans to slip it back into Dumbledore's grave - right after going up to his old dormitory (That's IF Gryffindor tower is still attached to the castle) and have a lie down? (I think Harry considered asking Kreacher to serve him sandwiches in bed... hmmm) Yes, I believe that's on page 600, in the UK version of DH. Lovely ending that is... puts a smile to my face. Course - I think there are a few occurances JK forgot about - don't you? Like, er - Snape? Hello - Master of Potions extrodinare? Like - Hello, what ever happened to the 'I can teach you to bottle fame, brew glory and even put a stopper in death' part. Sorry ranting when I should be typing.....
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Rant away! J.K.R. didn't follow her own cannon, within her books there were some contradictions. For a spy who could put a stopper in death she really gave him a sucky ending. I think us fan fict writers are doing better by him!As a matter of fact, it seems to me she took some great fanfiction ideas and added an overly long camping trip for her last book.