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Redivivus
ayerf269 Reviews | 7.2/10 (269 Ratings, 0 Likes, 156 Favorites )
Hermione Granger starts her sixth year at Hogwarts with a crash.
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ayerf
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Jumped on the Harry Potter bandwagon in 2000 (when Goblet of Fire was out in hardback). Prisoner of Azkaban is my favourite in the series, followed by Order of the Phoenix. I read and write in the SS/HG corner of the Potterverse.
Reviews for Redivivus
*HEE!* The ending of this chappie left me !!! the boys will do well to remember that Snape's classes teach them the most useful information. So it seems that Hermione's fellow classmates outside of her immediate circle have NO IDEA of the extent of her powers. . . . and that Ring Voldynuts sent her is, what, a classier alternative to the Dark Mark? Oh no.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
There'll be no raging mobs after Hermione if no one knows!Dark Marks are basically glorified Portkeys, while the ring is a Portkey. Yup, that does mean trouble.
love the ending. serves him right too. he's lucky she didn't freeze his tongue off. lol
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
That it does... shooting his mouth off like that doesn't get him into trouble enough.
poor harry... I love your story!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
What can I say? Harry deserved it. Ah, it's nice to know that this is appreciated. Three more chapters to go!
Yay! Go Hermione. I love how she's showing everyone up. Good for her!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Can a know it all like her do anything else?With any luck chapter 22 will be up by friday.
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
yay!
is this some sort of happiness spell you're casting?
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Happiness spell? Knowing the ending, I can't say that... or maybe regular updates will be sufficient to make you happy, even if my ending doesn't.
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
ohhhh...happiness spell went bye bye. ending not happy? oh dear... am i going o go into depression on their behalf when i read it? jk.
and yes, the happiness i was referring to was about your updates and your mah-velous story line. excellent work darling.
woo hoo
excellent. thank you.
will tell husband you updated.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Oh, good. It meets with your approval then!More by the end of the day, methinks.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
That would be nice
Yeah, a potion to help her soul. Too bad Bella is not gone for good. Maybe another Death Eater can be turned to ash.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
I'm surprised you're not hoping Ol Voldy can be turned to ash! Well, it's unlikely that another DE will be atomised, as the process is tiring to say the least. Especially if a certain Dark Lord holds the life of your one true love over your head to resurrect said atomised DE.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! No Cliffy!!!!! Now I'm DYING to know more... Please???
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Cliffy? What cliffy? Oh, that cliffy. To torment you more, Hermione doesn't answer on scene. But I'm not completely evil. It's fairly obvious what the answer is at the start of chapter 21, which will be posted soon. I hope.
Just got caught up on the last 6 chapters or so and I am really enjoying the story. Would that the darkness within were so easily extracted for all. As always, thank you for writing and I look forward to more :)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Not sure that throwing your guts out in the process of extracting said darkness is easy, but then again I'm a virtual teetotaller.Thank you for reviewing! Glad you're enjoying this. More soon, and we're nearing the end.
I am so happy you continued it. But there must be more!!! i love this story! please write more for us...
*PUPPY EYES!*
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
There is more... four chapters more. So technically it's post more, not write! (well, unless you want more of my writing and not necessarily more of Redivivus).While your puppy eyes may move me, it's out of my hands how quickly the rest can be added. Sorry!
Wonderful story! I just sat and read it through. I hope we see more soon.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! Chapter 21 is currently fifth in the validation queue, so it should be up in a couple of days.
LOVE will allow her to control her powers. . . . It was starting to look as if all was lost. . . . your story continues to amaze and delight. Fraught, but definitely romantic.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Romantic eh? And here I thought I couldn't write romance to save my life. Thank you!Fraught may well be upgraded to tragic by the end, so consider yourself forewarned!
(Sorry for taking so long to review! My studies got in the way.) Well, well. I enjoy it so much to see Potter and Weasley knocked down several pegs! Ha! Idiots, both of them! Ouch, I feel sorry for Severus. I bet that hurt. Really good chapter and I cannot wait for the next one! Update soon!
Cheers,
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
You have my sympathies- studies will be getting in my way all too soon.I think that there won't be much more trouble from the gruesome twosome.Next chapter has been corrected, so will be posted pretty pronto. Hope you enjoy it as much as this one!
oh wow. that was amazing.PLEASE i beg of you--post more!i am addicted to this story. please please please!you are so talented and i must have more for my selfish fan fic cravings which you have re-ignited.oh please post more!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! Glad you think so. So when I've posted the last chapter, will you have withdrawal symptoms?I'll post the last few chapters as soon as I can. Thing is, there seems to be a lot of submissions to the site at the moment, so chapter 20 has been put in administrative hold (no reason for alarm, it's just like the 3 day delay rule when you post two chapters of the same story at once). So please be patient. I haven't changed my mind about posting the rest of the story (it is complete! Has been for a while at that). I also intend to write a sequel at some point, although that may be in a year or two what with the encroaching real life of a student. Thanks for rewiewing!
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
yes. i fall into withdrawl and need our heroine to save me! if she learns to control herself, that is!patience...patience...patience... a year or two...wow... better be good! then again, knowing your writing, it promises to be amazing!thank you so much!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Well, a year or two for the sequel. Looks like I'll get a few other (probably shorter) unrelated (but still hg/ss) stories out before then. I'm doing something for the Severus/Hermione gift exchange, which I'll no doubt stick on here after all's been revealed there.Amazing, huh? I hope I can live up to that!
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
Yay!!!
Hubby was right. You did update. excellent chapter. Glad she cast the last spell.
waiting for more. Please would you ask Dobby to bring more tea and crumpets? Winky was a little tipsy and brought brie and trumpets..
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Ron needed a good 'Obliviate'!Dobby, bring the nice reviewer(s?) some tea and crumpets while they wait for the next chapter to be validated.
Great story. Very involving.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! I hope I keep you interested for the remainding 5 chapters.
This is developing into one of the better stories. Please keep the updates coming
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! I'm honoured that you think so. I'll do my best to get the remaining five chapters up before I go back to university. If I can't, I'll get them up as soon as I can, although they may be delayed by circumstances beyond my control (like no internet!)
Bravo. Great chapter. I told hubby you've updated. He's finishing a very late dinner. Then he's off to read. I even brought it up on the net for him. I think he might review under my name. that's okay no biggie.
waiting for more. thank you so much.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Wow. It feels quite strange (good, but strange) that so many people that I don't even know like my story.More soon. With any luck you won't have to wait a whole 3 days before chapter 19, as I popped it in the queue after 18 had been cleared.
Well done! I think this is one of the best chapters so far!! Update again soon!! I look forward to the moment when Severus tells Hermione he loves her. It'll be good, I know it!
Cheers,
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thanks, 19 is in the queue. As for the "I love you, Hermione," moment, Severus'll delay it by as much as possible. Idiot that he is when it comes to emotional exposure.
I love your story, I'm still here reading it. That turn with the Dark Arts lessons was particularly interesting.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! I hope I can keep you ensnared with my yarn until the end of it. Just a handful more chapters now.Interesting or disturbing that she'd already read far too much?
Too bad Hermione CAN'T just off old DArk-a$$h@t with her new powers. Oh well. Where's the fun in that? Keeps me hooked on the story!! /amor vincit omnia/love conquers all/ I believe.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Who says she won't? You didn't hear that from me... and no, she won't. At least, not for another six chapters. Will she or won't she? Wait and see.I only hope my chosen ending doesn't cause me to be placed on anyones hit list... but bear in mind that I am planning a sequel, although I'm not writing it anytime soon.
woo what a chapter.
especially that kiss. mmm wonder if i could talk hubby into a smacker like that..
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Glad you enjoyed it!Although Hermione would've preferred it to be private. The 'poor thing' is hardly an exhibitionist... much.The rest of the tale is rather light on romance. Oh, apart from a bit in almost every chapter... with rather more in one of them.
Stupid, stupid, stupid Potter. I've never liked Potter, canon or otherwise. That kiss Severus gave Hemione was quite the surprise! Well done! Loved it! The next chapter will be up soon right? I am looking forward to finding out what spell Hermione cast on Potter! Let me venture a guess and say it's the Forbidden Curse?
I am wondering if maybe Hermione will go to Severus for comfort possibly?
Update again soon! Brilliant chapter!
Cheers,
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
It is Potter the prat in this story... but he's not irredemable.As for the kiss, originally I had it planned as the first kiss between them, but that was before I realised that there would have to be a funeral... that and if it was the first kiss, Hermione might've followed Ron's example!As for that spell... No, it's not the Forbidden Quidditch Allergy curse. I'll give you a hint: it's a canon from HBP, but wasn't cast on Harry.As for Comforting!Severus, it's more than a possibility. Except as Hermione is too ticked off to look for comfort, said comfort will have to come to her. Remember the scrying ball?The next chapter is in the queue. If you're lucky it'll be up by Monday, but I'm in no position to make promises. It's outta my hands!
Finally took the time to read this {whole} story {so far} today. Most excellent! Well written and original material stuffed inside the canon timeframe. Brilliant! [You've got yourself a new fan.]
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! I can't say that it really follows HBP, just uses it as a skeletal framework. Mind you, someone does die in the end...Originality is what I'm aiming for!
excellent chapter. i see there is another chapter in queue can hardly wait.. p
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
After that chapter is posted, I'll stick another in the queue. Maybe then it'll update before another 3 days...
The RoR scene is ROTFLMAO!! it's dark slapstick *smirk* Albus is truly showing his Slytherin side with HErmione in the last bit. . . . Hermione, is more than ever, 'one scary witch' or however the quote goes. EAgerly looking forward to more!! Thanks for updating.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Yes, it was a little rough on the noses of the lovebirds.I bet Dumbledore was just waiting for someone to use that curse on, and laughed his beard off when she left the room. Serve him right if he choked to death on a lemon drop!Just two or three days more to the next update... if you're lucky.