Chapter 2
Chapter 3 of 25
ayerfDisclaimer: Nope. Still not mine. The only thing I'm getting from this is the pleasure of writing it.
Thanks to my beta LadySunflower and any reviewers out there.
Chapter 2
Harry Potter could not sleep. He sat in the Gryffindor common room in front of the dying fire, Ron Weasley snoring in the seat beside him, his stomach too full to stay awake. The Marauder’s Map lay open on his lap, his unblinking eyes peering through the glasses almost slipping off his nose.
Harry had been in the same position ever since the feast had finished, having washed the blood off his face from Malfoy breaking his nose after he had spied on the junior Death Eater. A simple Notice-Me-Not spell had kept anyone from discovering what the map was. Harry didn’t want to give up, but he was beginning to admit that this was hopeless. Hermione had vanished.
The only things the map had revealed was Dumbledore was conspicuously absent, McGonagall was twitching in her rooms (probably sleeping restlessly) and Snape was pacing in his new office. Now, that last one was a surprise. Although now Harry thought back on it, Snape had seemed almost concerned when Harry had asked the greasy git where Hermione was after the great bat had been summoned by Tonks’s Patronus to escort him to the school. Why would the Head of Slytherin show concern for a Gryffindor, especially one he frequently called an ‘insufferable know-it-all’? Did Snape have any idea where she was now? Where Dumbledore had gone?
Harry prodded the map with his wand as he contemplated what to do. He got to his feet, grabbed the map and pulled his Invisibility Cloak on. After pushing the Fat Lady’s portrait open, he made his way through the moonlit corridors, down the main staircase (which was unusually quiescent) to the third floor. The Defence Against the Dark Arts classroom was open, but the door to the office was locked.
Harry knocked on the door, which opened after a few seconds. He was greeted by the sight of Snape scowling in his direction. The scowl faded into a puzzled frown, as Harry was still wearing his cloak. The scowl returned as Harry pulled the cloak off.
“Potter! It is well past curfew. Twenty points from—”
Harry hurriedly interrupted Snape, not wishing Gryffindor to be any further in the negative in terms of house points before lessons even began. “Professor, I’ve been watching my map, and I know Hermione is still not here. Professor Dumbledore’s not here either. Do you know why?”
Snape waved Harry into the office, motioning him to sit. “The Headmaster set out after the feast this evening. He had received word from the Ministry that Miss Granger is currently in St. Mungo’s.”
“Is she alright? What happened?” Harry asked. The way Snape had said it, Hermione was alive.
“Apparently she was involved in a car crash on her way to King's Cross. As for her condition, I do not know. Rest assured that the Healers will do their best, Potter.”
Harry was glad that he was sitting down. It seemed surreal that in a time like this, with Voldemort on the loose, that a common Muggle accident like a car crash was still a threat. He was vaguely aware of saying, “My aunt lied to me about what happened to my parents. She said that they’d died in a car crash.”
“As fascinating as that non sequitur is, Potter, you are still out of bounds. I hope your questions have been answered, because Gryffindor is highly unlikely to win the House Cup this year.”
“No, I want to know why you’re so concerned about Hermione. I mean, you hate her. Sir.” Harry belatedly remembered to attach the honorific, not wanting to lose any more points.
“I do not hate any of my students, save you, Potter. Quite frankly, Miss Granger is the top student in this school and as such one of the few worth teaching.” Snape leaned forwards, looming over Harry menacingly.
“Now, as to your punishment…” Snape murmured, a cruel smirk twisting his thin lips.
“Sir, please, I just needed to know about Hermione. No more points lost, even detention would be better.”
Snape’s black eyes glittered. “Very well. Detention, Potter. Report to me tomorrow,” he twisted his head around to look at the clock set on the wall, which currently read ‘so late it’s early’ and amended his previous statement. “No, later on today, after dinner. I’ll have arranged something suitable for you. Now, return to your dormitory.”
Harry scurried off before Snape could change his mind. At least the git hadn’t confiscated either the cloak or the map, even if Harry had to put up with whatever punishment Snape managed to dream up. Knowing Snape, it would involve considerable pain and humiliation on Harry’s part.
Severus shut the door, relieved to have rid himself of Potter’s presence. When he’d opened the door to find the brat there, he’d almost cursed Potter’s big head off. While the boy’s concern for Hermi—‘Miss Granger, dammit!’ was touching, it had alarmed him to realise that even a thick headed idiot like Potter had noticed his concern for a Muggleborn. If the Dark Lord caught wind of that, Severus would be in some very hot water.
What Severus had told Potter to explain his concern was true; Miss Granger was in possession of a remarkable mind. But her compassionate nature was also a key part of why Severus cared for the girl.
It had been a week or so after the tragic end of the Triwizard Tournament, over a year before, that she’d expressed concern for him to his face when he’d returned from reinstating in the Dark Lord’s service. She’d overheard Albus mention to Minerva what Harry had reported: that none of the free Death Eaters who failed to turn up for the summons in the graveyard could expect a warm welcome. Severus had still been under the influence of the aftermath of repeated casts of the Cruciatus Curse and had welcomed Miss Granger’s concern like a man in the desert accepts water. In a moment of weakness, Severus had accepted her as a confidant and exchanged letters ever since in the guise of letters from Viktor Krum to prevent anyone, friendly or otherwise, from discovering the truth.
Severus returned to pacing, knowing that he would be unable to sleep in his current frame of mind. As the resident insomniac of the castle, the lost sleep would just have him in top form for terrorizing the students later on that day.
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269 Reviews | 7.2/10 Average
Love how you didn't give in for a typical 'happy ending', but instead are making us readers work for it. ;)
Ack! Gasp! You killed her off! Well, due to the author's notes, I gather that she'll be back, but still. *grumble, gripe, growl* Poor Severus. Didn't even get the opportunity to wed before she was gone. :(Very nice story that draws the reader in.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
I did! If temporarily, as you have gathered.Thank you! I hope you enjoy the sequels too if you read them!
Posting this after having read the whole thing: You never resolved who attempted to kill Millicent Bullstrode. *pout* I really was curious as to the motivation, if it had anything to do with testing HG's mecromantic power development.Nice twist to the tale.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
D'oh! I dropped the ball there. It's quite a long time since I wrote it, but I think I intended it to be Draco's handiwork. Scary thought if it was anything else, as that would mean there was more than one murderous person in the castle!Thank you!
Interesting tactic you included having a duplicate medical registry in Moldy Butt's possession. That would definitely give him the inside scoop on the effects of his DE's raids. Nice touch.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thanks! I do get the impression that Voldy has eyes and ears everywhere.
Should have posted this on the prologue. You had me gasping when the car flipped. I had a sinking suspicion, since you took so much time in the car, that there would be something bad happen. That definitely qualifies as something bad.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thanks, that sort of reaction was what I was hoping for!
The boys both need their butts kicked, and I love the way Snape made them feel an inch high. :)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Glad you thought the boys got at least part of what they deserved!
Scrimgeor(sp) should be run through. Someone get me a sword. Another nice chapter.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Heh! Poor Scrimgeour!Thank you!
Love that declaration! “It’s just an acceleration of my original personal plans for after Hogwarts.” Nothing like throwing the man a curve ball.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! Stumping Severus was fun.
So she's only mostly dead? This was a great fic.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
That's certainly the implication! There's a couple of sequels, Tabula Rasa and Resurgam, which detail the answer to that question.Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing.
The boy-who-lived-to-be-bait. AHAHA! Love it!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! Delighted to hear it.
Tht was what Sandra Bullock did in "Miss Congeniality" for her talent act. S.I.N.G: Solar plexus Instep Nose Groin. Very effective and totally funny in this scene!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! It struck me as what Scrimgeour deserved.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! It struck me as what Scrimgeour deserved.
That is interesting that the boggart could hurt Hermione - and quite scary.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thanks! Glad you found it interesting. Definitely scary, possibly most of all for Severus.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thanks! Glad you found it interesting. Definitely scary, possibly most of all for Severus.
Poor Ron, just as well Hermione Oblivated him at the end there - I think the poor boy would have had nightmares for weeks (I'd say years, but does Ron's memory work that well? LOL)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Those were certainly memories he could do without. As to how good his memory is, it probably depends on what that memory is...
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Those were certainly memories he could do without. As to how good his memory is, it probably depends on what that memory is...
Good on Hermione for killing Bella, pity she couldn't leave her that way. Ooh, Severus has asked Hermione to marry him...say yes, Hermione!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Bella certainly deserved it! Yes, too bad she couldn't leave her dead.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Bella certainly deserved it! Yes, too bad she couldn't leave her dead.
What a powerful chapter. Amazing. And the perfect last line.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! I hoped it would be.
why do these young fools view love, our greatest strength, as a weakness?Brilliantly put.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thanks! I think this Dumbledore almost said it all by himself, with no conscious input from me.
Not clumsy at all. (ahem)Very nice. And thank you for the link!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thanks! I really do have no confidence with writing sex scenes. Which does beg the question of why I'm writing a threesome fic...No problem, glad to help!
Oh my. I'm breathless and aching.
Well done.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! That's the sort of reaction I hoped this would garner.If you read the sequels, I hope you enjoy them!
ok,ok, I will care ... and leave a review.
This is a great study of these four characters and their interaction. This necromancy is .. brrrr.
A great scene there when A.D. uses sectumsempra, but ... wasn't he described as whiter than white?? Would he be able to cast the curse? I think he might have studied it for such a purpose with Hermione, so that is OK -- Is his soul now at least a little off-white?
We missed the Christmas-slug-party, didn't we? I understand that you must alter the story, but I'd have liked to see how this point came out.
Good stuff anyway, and I need to read on.
Merry Christmas,
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thanks for reviewing!
Necromancy is a little dark, I suppose.
I suspect Dumbledore would know how to cast Dark Magic even if he didn't intend to practise it. Also, just because Severus perceives him as whiter than white does not mean that he really is...
The Christmas Slugclub party might have been interesting, but by this point in the tale, I'd moved too far from the plot of HBP to consider including it. Sorry!
Hope you enjoy the rest of it, and Happy Christmas.
OH MY GOODNESS! BLOODY BRILLIANT!
I started your story yesterday afternoon and had to keep reading until I had finished, so sorry for not reviewing each chapter. By the time I had finished reading it was quite late and I was very distraught! I had to go to bed to recover.
Very emotive story, especially the last chapter. I Loved it and am now off to find the sequel.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! That means a lot to me, particularly that you came back to leave a review.
Hope you enjoy the sequels just as much!
Bah. They're so cowardly! I'm seething at thier fickleness. A pox on you both you imbeciles!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
True. But they just needed a little gentle manipulation encouragement...
Kicking butt and taking names ftw!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
That's our Hermione!
Funny to hear Hermione echo my thoughts from a pervious chapter. What an incredibally. dull muggle way to die. >.<
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Great minds think alike? That's the phrase that springs to mind.