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Redivivus
ayerf269 Reviews | 7.2/10 (269 Ratings, 0 Likes, 156 Favorites )
Hermione Granger starts her sixth year at Hogwarts with a crash.
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Jumped on the Harry Potter bandwagon in 2000 (when Goblet of Fire was out in hardback). Prisoner of Azkaban is my favourite in the series, followed by Order of the Phoenix. I read and write in the SS/HG corner of the Potterverse.
Reviews for Redivivus
The romance was great, not horrendous at all! Wonderful story. Keep up the good work.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
I'm glad you thought so! I'll do my best with the rest of it.
I think you're doing a great job at writing romance. I believe in a sense it wasn't supposed to be a romantic scene at all, them attending her parents funeral and all. That and with all the lovely dark undertones, I think you're doing fantastic. Truly original!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you. It's good to hear that! Originality is something every author must strive for, so if even one person thinks I'm managing it, I'm happy.
Oops I'm sorry. I didn't realise how far behind I was. I'm glad I was though. It gave me quite a bit to read. Will have to refer husband-person to this story.
excellent reading. waiting for more. p
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Glad you like it! Chapter 9 will be in the queue by tomorrow.
I hope that, 'That girl will be the death of me.' thought of Severus' doesn't mean anything. Like, she causes his death or something. I'm worried here! <-----Hence that smiley. On a more positive note, I'm glad there was more of our dear Professor in this chapter! I look forward to the next chapter with great anticipation! You're the greatest! Cheers,
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
No, she doesn't kill him as such; at most a little death. Not that I can guarantee that he will survive the end of the story, but odds are that he might.Chapter 9 should be in queue soon, I just want to finish chapter 15 first.Glad you like this so much, it means a lot to me as it is my first story online, and the first Harry Potter one I've done.
Response from DeathSong (Reviewer)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
I think Hermione's and Severus's interaction was very sweet. I'm not sure I understand what she heard though. Was Hermione hearing the sound of someone dying at that time, or the sound of a past death at that location?
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Sweet is a lot better than horrendous, thank you!Hermione heard a past death. Although she can also hear someone dying in the present too.
This was an excellent chapter. Keep up the good work
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Good! Glad you thought so.
Ah, the Slytherin in me really loved this chapter. LOL I love how Dumbledore and Snape manipulated the boys. That was beautiful, though I am interested in seeing if the boys start to wonder why Snape is so interested? I know they are thick and it will take a while. LOLIt's really nice to see that she has more allies on her side. Hopefully this will be the difference that is needed. Of course, now they just need to avoid the angry mob. Why do I have visions of the castle being stormed from Disney's Beauty and the Beast? ROTFL
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
The boys are pretty thick, yes. It will be pretty clear even to them on Hermione's birthday.Hmm, angry mob. It's a possibility. I haven't included it in my admittedly skeletal plot. I'll think about it.Glad that you are enjoying it.
Really enjoying this...I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this! Am waiting with great expectations for your next chapter's submission........
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
I'm glad to hear it. I can only hope that I live up yo your expectations with future chapters.
I just started reading this story and I really love it; the Necromancy, Severus being ordered to seduce Hermione, Hermione decking Scrimgeour, and lots more of course... All very, very nice I wonder how Minerva will react to Hermione's new powers, not too badly I hope. And what will happen if the news reaches the rest of the students and teachers?Looking forward to more!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Glad you do!Funnily enough, Scrimgeour got decked by a chance plot baby bunny. It wasn't in the plot, just sorta sprung on me.As for McGonagall, well, she is old enough to have possibly encountered Grindelwald. So she'll be scared silly, but concerned for her precious star student all the same.Well, if the rest of the wizarding world find out, after running around like headless chickens, it'd be something like this:"Get out your torches and pitchforks, there's a evil witch to tear to shreds!"I myself don't know if it will be revealed. It'd certainly make Dumbledore's job harder.Anyhow, I'm supposed to be finishing writing Chapter 14 so I can add Chapter 8 to the validation queue without being in danger of catching up with my writing and a longer delay between updates.
Response from Miepje (Reviewer)
An angry mob. *lol* ahem, not funny, of course... Poor Hermione.Well, then I hope people won't become suspicious after seeing that wanted-poster of Hermione.And *yea* keep on writing!
Voldemort being vexed by thinking of himself as Tom *grin* I loved this chapter!Now I'm off to read the rest...
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Well, with old Voldy I thought there must be an underlying reason why he hates being called by his old name. It was also fun to write from his perspective...Hope you enjoy the rest of it too.
I do hope there will be more of our dear Potions Master in the next chapter! I confess myself a little disappointed. But your quick update more than makes up for it! Cheers,Deathsong
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
There will be more of him then and in chapters to come.Sorry to say that I won't be posting chapter 8 until I've finished chapter 14. Don't worry; I'm half way through it and chapter 8 should be in the queue by midweek.
some things never change *grin* where would the boys be w/out Hermione bullying them about studying?
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Retaking first year, yet again, is my bet. Either that or working as conductors on the Knight Bus.
I hope Harry gets the idea of Hermione returning his parents out of his mind. That would be yuck.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Aye, it is a little gruesome. While he said it concerning Hermione's parents, you're quite correct that he also has his own in mind.He will demand that she bring back his loved ones later, but there is a snag.
wow, that was BUFFY-cool. Please update soonest!!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Chapter 7 is in the queue, currently sitting at second place.Amazing what upbringing does to your responses to attack, eh.
Really good chapter! I like that Hermione defended herself against the Minister using Muggle means--If anyone thinks about it, they will see that her new powers are not (yet) a threat to them.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Glad you liked it. But since when did the Ministry think? That encounter wasn't the last between Hermione and the Minister + goons.
Response from orm irian (Reviewer)
Too right about the Ministry (bunch of bone heads!).
Whoa! That was a shocker! Cannot wait for the next chapter! Severus will be in the next, right? Cheers,
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Yup, Snape'll be up, but from Harry's POV. Chapter 8 is the next one with just Severus and Hermione.
what is with the 4 and a half star's for this chapter ?Clearly this is five star i love the story it's exeptional and i got a kick out of the muggle self defence at the end. Wizards are helpless when faced with brut force heeheehee.I also love the way your making her a bad a** very cool i check for up date's on this one several time's a day just hoping. I work with my husband we sit in a truck together for hour's so i tell him about what i read OR i can listen to him talk about vehical matinace FOR HOUR'S THANK YOU for your mercifuly quick update's .
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you, I'll try my best to keep em coming. But at the same time I'm trying not to catch up with my writing, as that'll mean a longer gap after several short ones.As for the 4 1/2 stars, I myself am a reviewer who doesn't always hand out 5 stars. So I can hardly complain.Now, who for Hermione to deck next... Voldemort? Of course, she might have an unpleasant surprise if she tried, he did grow up being bullied in a Muggle orphanage afterall.
what's pleasant with this story is it's updated quite often. I thank you for that.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
That's the joy of summer: no Uni to go to. In term time it'll be a different matter entirely, sadly.
Excellent idea the fidelius charm on Ollivanders! Go Hermione! Beat the MoM to a pulp. I can't wait to see how this pans out now. This is the only fic I've ever read with Necromancy involed as fanfic. The only other stories I've read have been published works. I'm salivating now at the prospect of more and of our Hermione's destruction of old Mouldy Wart.I humbly bow to your talents and offer a pound of Honeydukes Best and a dozen Sugar Quills to your muse as incentive!Blessings x
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! I've only read one fanfic involving Hermione as a Necromancer, and she was unquestionably evil.As for Voldydork, I haven't forgotten about the prophecy involving Harry, but the ending of this is still up in the air. I've got several scenarios, but no decision as to which to use.Mmm, chocolate and Sugar Quills... Right, 19th of September and Chapter 13, here I come!
Another wonderful chapter. The mystery of Ollivander was handled marvelously. That's very much like Dumbledore to hide something in plain sight. :) And you know what, I'm not surprised about the Ministry being stupid and going against Dumbledore. They just don't seem to learn. Heck, Scrimgeour was really going after Harry, time after time. Oh, yeah, I love the idea that she now has an unregistered wand.
Keep up the good work.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Glad you liked it! I'll do my best to keep the rest up to the same sort of standard.The thing with Hermione and rules is that while she tends to follow them, when she does go against them, she doesn't so much as break them as shatter them.
I have been thoroughly enjoying this story and look forward to each new chapter being submitted. I think you do a wonderful job showing how wizarding prejudice would apply to this very dark form of magic. I look forwad to seeing how Ron and Harry react when they learn the truth. :D
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! As one of the admins, you also get a preview of the majority of my chapters, so thanks again for your corrections.As for the prejudice, if Hermione survives the end of the story, she'll be an outcast. Especially if Dumbledore snuffs it.I can't imagine that the boys will be best pleased, especially Ron as his Dad will no doubt have told him something about Necromancers. Their reaction is coming up in Chapter 7.
Hmmm, well atleast she doesnt really care then. Hmmm so many possibilities... haha cant wait for updates!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
It could be said she cares a great deal when it comes to being seduced by the Great Bat of the dungeons: in that she might seduce him...Update coming soon, currently waiting for an admin to validate.
Still enjoying it. Keep the chapters coming
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Glad you are! I should be able to get at least one chapter up a week until I'm off on holiday for a week at the end of August. Then the limiting factor is returning to Uni... I'll try to finish the story before then, as it'll probably mean I'll all but vanish for long periods of time.
Thank goodness, she's back at Hogwarts!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
She'll soon be in Diagon Alley too, on a wand hunt.