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Redivivus
ayerf269 Reviews | 7.2/10 (269 Ratings, 0 Likes, 156 Favorites )
Hermione Granger starts her sixth year at Hogwarts with a crash.
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ayerf
Member Since 2006 | 30 Stories | Favorited by 277 | 151 Reviews Written | 1,977 Review Responses
Jumped on the Harry Potter bandwagon in 2000 (when Goblet of Fire was out in hardback). Prisoner of Azkaban is my favourite in the series, followed by Order of the Phoenix. I read and write in the SS/HG corner of the Potterverse.
Reviews for Redivivus
ACK Cliffie :(Update soon please, I am really enjoying your story. As always thank you for writing
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
More soon! The last chapter can't be in admin hold for much longer... I uploaded it before this was posted, so give it a couple more days.
excellent cliffie.. waiting for more.
will consider telling husband you have updated but.... you need to tell us when the next chapter will be up first.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
I hope the last chapter will be up by Friday, but I can make no promises.
whoa, that's a hugely mean place to stop! I'm on tenterhooks here :)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Me mean? No, but I am fully aware that I am/can be evil. More by the end of the week if you're lucky.
NOOOO!!! Snape!!! thats ok, hermione can bring him back, cant she? i mean, not like he was very emotional in the first place...*hopeful smile*
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Well, that's one solution... a rather squicky one if you think about it. Can you imagine Snape without anger? It wouldn't necessarily be an improvement. There must be a better way to solve this, ah, problem. Maybe Voldy missed?Too bad, 'cos I'm not telling! Next chappie should be up soon. By the end of the week, I hope.
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
Ah yes... that would be a problem. I forgot that anger is an emotion. duh!Cant wait!
Yes! Excellent Story. I look forward to reading more.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Glad you think so, thanks! There's only two chapters left, so I'm afraid there isn't all that much more to look forward to.
Whoa. That was unexpected! Geez. I cannot wait for the next chapter, it'll be a good one! Update soon!
Cheers,
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
(Chokes) next chapter 'good'? You may eat your words in due time.
(Again, I'm sorry I've taken so long!) Brilliant!!! Harry's tongue stuck to ice...hilarious!!! Ha ha hahahaha!!
Cheers,
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
It seemed the sort of thing that'd happen to Ron, but all the funnier as it happened to the Boy-Who-Couldn't-Keep-His-Mouth-Shut.
(I am so bloody sorry for taking so bloody long! Gah, school can be so frustrating sometimes!) Brilliant, brilliant chapter!! I love it! I'm glad Severus finally admitted his feelings.
Cheers,
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
That's okay, I can very easily forgive you as you've reviewed every single chapter that you've missed!Took Severus long enough, though!
Wow, this is ultimate coolness. HBP from Hermione's pov. Rock on, m'dear!!! And yipes!!! a breakout from Az?!?
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
We-ell, I wouldn't call it HBP exactly. More like the merest skeletal framework of the book, used for the simple reason that I am lazy! At least when it comes to setting up this story. And the next two chapters make that very clear, as the ending to this is nothing like HBP. Plus 'Vanity' by Wartcap deserves the title of 'HBP from Hermione's pov', but thanks anyway.Yep, a breakout of Az. Trouble with a capital 't'. (although it's when you have Hermione in the company of said escapees and the Dark Lord that it really is trouble)
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! loving this too much... need more....
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Chapter 23 is no. 3 in the queue, so I hope it will be up soon, and once it is up I'll stick chapter 24 (which also happens to be the final one) in the queue.Too much, eh? I'm glad to hear that!
I have enjoyed the last 2 chapters :) One comment I will make is that it is sometimes confusing where you are ending one scene and beginning another... perhaps a ~ on a line by itself or a few more line feeds would clarify. As always thankyou for writing and I look forward to more!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
It could be a little confusing when my scene changes don't involve a change of perspective, so perhaps I should investigate a line break or something! But in the next two chapters the changes of scene are fairly obvious, and there's not much switching around between perspectives.More soon!
excellent update.
thank you.
will inform husband-person. he will be quite pleased.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
You're welcome! I hope the penultimate chapter will be up at the weekend.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
good idea.
I still love this story and can't wait for an update.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
More soon, I think: chapter 23 is at no. 4 in the validation queue.I'm glad you're still enjoying this! I only hope my chosen ending doesn't put you off...
ooohhhh.
Prison Break!!!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
That can only mean trouble... and it must, if there's only two chapters left now!
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
Only two? please tell me that either ur kidding or theres a sequel coming!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Nope, I'm not kidding, and yes, there will be a sequel. Eventually. I estimate within a year or two, but I can't promise exactly when as real life has a nasty habit of encroaching on my time. I hope to have a few shorter unrelated fics posted in the interval.
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
Yay!!!
I finally got caught up again . The real world is a real drag and I am glat to be out of it in this story. I cant wait to read more soon. If only to find out how long Harry's toung is stuck. Well maybe he will wisen up. Ok it's off to bed or Pickles will try draging me out of bed early and say you should have come up sooner. So bye for now. Thanks . Bill.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Yeah, real life can be a drag. (especially when failing driving tests, but never mind that...)As for how long Harry's tongue is stuck, there's a two week interval between chapters 21 and 22, and he's unstuck in 22. So, use your imagination for exactly how much of that his tongue was stuck!
Good story! I like the premise of a Necromancer Hermione and Snape being able to seduce her in public. At Hogwarts no less with permission from all those annoying masters..... Can't wait to read more
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you, glad you think so. The public seduction and permission thing certainly made the romance a little easier to write.More soon, probably within an hour or two.
with "friends" like ickle ronniekins, who needs enemies?!? Hermione should've hexed him into the next galaxy, let alone next week. I soooo HATE and DETEST this canon ship', most of all, that JKR seems to be not so subtly leading to.
There's always a slight awkwardness to first times (regardless of the skill levels of the partners), so I think you've erred on the proper side of passion vs. finesse in attempting your citrus. Long live Severus & Hermione!!!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Quite. I find Ron annoying too, and can only accept an R/Hr fic when it's either really well written or when he's more or less had a personality transplant. So, not how JKR writes their interactions!Thanks! I'm glad you think my ickle love scene was acceptable.If JKR kills either Severus or Hermione off in book 7, I'll happily keep myself in denial.More coming soon. Honest.
that was HOT! and I love his slip at "making love".. giggles.. waiting for more.
what is the tempting book?
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you. More in a week unless chapter 18 has under 3 errors... I won't forget about this story, I promise.As for what the tempting book is, use your imagination. With Hermione, it could be anything from 'Advanced principles of Arithmancy' to the 'Kama Sutra'.
It wasn't clumsy! It was very, very good! Bloody brilliant and fantastic!! I look forward to the next chapter! I'm glad Ron got hexed damn well. I shall endeavor to wait patiently for the next chapter!
Cheers,
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! I'm glad you think so. Ron deserved what he got, especially the off scene Howler.I'll do my best to get as many chapters up as possible before my university term starts( in the last week of September)... but I'm limited by the 3 day rule if I post two at once and by the length of the queue and speed of the admins if I only post one at a time.
I think the love scene was very nice. I especially like the strategic use of Severus's nose and the shout of "Mine." This story is so different, I am really enjoying it.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
I'm glad you are enjoying it, and that the love scene was up to par. Well, if you have a nose the size of Severus's, ain't it best to use it?
The scene was not clumsy, at least, in my opinion. Greatly enjoying the story.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Phew. Well, it was the best I could do, and it seems that it was good enough for you! More coming within a week or so.
Excellent chapter, as always.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! If Chapter 18 needs correcting, it won't be up until around September 2nd as I'm away for the last week in August, so just bear with me.
BLOODY HELL!! I'd bet that's Ron using Polyjuice, the dirty louse!
I take the REAL Severus was not in this chapter?
I wish Ron would just grow up! Gad, sometimes boys are more trouble than they're worth.
So Hermione's in love with Severus, I knew she would be! I mean, who wouldn't love Severus? He's brilliant!
You've done it again! Bloody, abso-bloomin'-lutely fanastic chapter!! I am looking forward to the next chapter! Update soon!
Cheers,
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
You'd bet right. Who else would it be, Voldemort?Severus was eavesdropping (invisible in the shadows) and it was him in the DADA lesson. As if Ron could teach that!Next chapter is in the queue, but as I'm heading off on holiday on Friday for a week, it might not be uploaded until I get back if it needs correcting. Sorry! Real life is starting to catch up with me...
Poor Ron trying to take her virgin virtue...
hopefully he will get over it. or she will be the death of him. waiting for more. thank you for the update.
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Although exactly how virtuous Hermione really is, I don't know...Somehow I don't think there will be a virginity to tempt him for that much longer!17 is in the queue, as I'm away from a week you'd better hope there isn't a lot that needs correcting; that's the only way it'll be up before I get back.
Excellent Story!!
Response from ayerf (Author of Redivivus)
Thank you! I hope you'll still hold that opinion by the end.