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Potions Under Duress She Married Her Choice
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She Married Her Choice

1: I

2: II

3: III

4: IV

5: V

6: VI

7: VII

8: VIII

9: IX

10: X

11: XI

12: XII

13: XIII

14: XIV

15: XV

16: XVI

17: XVII

18: XVIII

19: XIX

20: XX

21: XXI

22: XXII

23: XXIII

24: XXIV

25: XXV

26: XXVI

27: XXVII

28: Epilogue

She Married Her Choice

averygoodun

418 Reviews   |   418 Ratings, 0 Likes, 306 Favorites )

Humor Angst Romance Smut Potions Under Duress 184,315 Words 28 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Draco Malfoy Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Minerva McGonagall Remus Lupin Seamus Finnegan Severus Snape Dobby Pansy Parkinson Poppy Pomfrey Lavender Brown Parvati Patil Original Character Arthur Weasley Mr. Ollivander

Sequel and continuation of "Marry A Choice." Now complete.

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: I

Chapter 2: II

Chapter 3: III

Chapter 4: IV

Chapter 5: V

Chapter 6: VI

Chapter 7: VII

Chapter 8: VIII

Chapter 9: IX

Chapter 10: X

Chapter 11: XI

Chapter 12: XII

Chapter 13: XIII

Chapter 14: XIV

Chapter 15: XV

Chapter 16: XVI

Chapter 17: XVII

Chapter 18: XVIII

Chapter 19: XIX

Chapter 20: XX

Chapter 21: XXI

Chapter 22: XXII

Chapter 23: XXIII

Chapter 24: XXIV

Chapter 25: XXV

Chapter 26: XXVI

Chapter 27: XXVII

Chapter 28: Epilogue


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averygoodun

Member Since 2005  |  19 Stories  |  Favorited by 316  |  122 Reviews Written  |  1,064 Review Responses

Right.  I would like to state, for the record, that I WILL finish "She Married Her Choice".  I will.  Assuming I am in control of my own destiny and accomplishments, that is. ;-)

Unfortunately, real life (mainly an attention craving three-year-old) and inspiration have been keeping me from creative endeavors for a while now.  I do foresee a time when that shall pass, but until then, I ask for your patience.

Thank you!

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Reviews for She Married Her Choice

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10/10

soccermom

I read this some time ago, and then went back and reread both stories again.  I really love your writing.  Your characters seem so real.  They all have strengths and flaws, which make them believable.  I'm anxiously awaiting your next update.

Response from averygoodun (Author of She Married Her Choice)

Thank you so much!  That's the best praise any writer could ask for!The story is now all written, and should be finished posting within the next month!

Response from averygoodun (Author of She Married Her Choice)

Thank you so much!  That's the best praise any writer could ask for!The story is now all written, and should be finished posting within the next month!

0/10

Miss Princess

awww i love this fic!! i really hope she finds it in her heart to love him xx

Response from averygoodun (Author of She Married Her Choice)

Thank you!  And she will.  :-)

Response from averygoodun (Author of She Married Her Choice)

Thank you!  And she will.  :-)

10/10

hopefulcynic

I'm fairly sure I'm falling in love with you, what with all the Hamlet referencesI am but mad north-northwest. When the wind is southerly I know a hawk from a handsawHamlet's pretty much my favorite play so I'm enjoying all the references. But please don't tell me that everyone is going to die in the end, because I can see the cast of characters already...

Response from averygoodun (Author of She Married Her Choice)

I'm so glad you like the references!  And no, this isn't a tragedy.  Not really, anyway.  ;-j

10/10

hopefulcynic

-It might be a dream, but she didn't want to suffer any more slings and arrows. She'd had enough outrageous fortune to last a lifetime-To be or not to be, that is the question. Whether tis nobler in the mind to bear the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune or to take arms against a sea of troubles, and by opposing, end them. To die, to sleep....Gotta love the reference to Hamlet. I'm not sure if you've been making literary references all along and I've just been missing them, but I'm really loving it

Response from averygoodun (Author of She Married Her Choice)

I've been making them as they've occurred to me, so you might not have missed any, but I can't really remember at this point. *bites lip*:-)

10/10

hopefulcynic

I absolutely loved that reference to Oedipus Rex. Our school's drama department is performing it right now and that just made me laugh so hard. I'm really loving this story so far. I just hope that at some point Severus will soften up a little, though I would never want to see his snarkiness and sarcasm go anywhere!

Response from averygoodun (Author of She Married Her Choice)

Yay!  I'm glad you're loving it, and rest assured that Severus will never lose his sarcasm or snark.  He will keep his edge for a long time after the story is finished. :-)

10/10

irishredlass

Ahh now that I have caught up to your story all I can say is that I am sorry I waited and please post more soon.  Very well done! Irish

Response from averygoodun (Author of She Married Her Choice)

Thank you so much!  I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond to you, but I have appreciated your comment all this time.*hugs*

10/10

irishredlass

Oh now what charming "love notes" dare I say.  I think that Teddy may have a slight crush on our dear Madame Snape. I really do think that she should take his name.  To not do so is almost immasculating to some men and I am sure that it has pricked his pride.  Well done Irish

Response from averygoodun (Author of She Married Her Choice)

Thank you!  Yes, Teddy may have a crush, I think.  I don't see why she would take his name at this point in her life, as it would be stripping her of a large part of her identity.  He just has to suck it up and, well, be a man about it. ;-)

10/10

Darque Hart

Ach, this hit me at a sappy, sorry
moment. Tears running down my face as I read that Severus was dressing to leave
her when she re-woke.  "Thank you, my dear," he said, stroking
her cheek tenderly before straightening up and resuming the buttoning process.


Men are such idiots. You do not share something like that with a woman and
then leave her, whatever the reasoning. Sure, she offered her body for his use,
to sooth his pained soul. However, it was a special moment between them and he
just doesn't leave and with a 'thank you' no less!


I know he stayed, but she had to ask, beg, tmultiple times, and he lay
down, but with his clothes on.


Didn't mean to rant! It's nothing against your writing, I love this story ... it's just men. (Grumble,
grumble, grumble…)

0/10

tambrathegreat

Good chapter.  I thought everything was going to go down hill from them after the letter, but you made it work out well.

9/10

helshez

It's one set back after another for this pair, isn't it? Still, they say suffering is good for the soul. And what about Draco's soul? He's very bad boy. Understandable, but still bad.

10/10

snitchette

Wow. It's ... There is no word to describe how the hole chapter is brilliant. First there is some light feelings and the tension increases brutally to finally recess to a soft murmur of passion. Too good.

10/10

irishredlass

MInerva as ADs daughter now that is a twist.  I like it I like it

10/10

Maddie

I feel so badly for Severus. He is an emotional wreck. The guy just wants his love to be returned. It made my heart hurt when Hermione's dream sequence turned out to be with Ron. Now his Godson has turned out to be a bad egg and Severus is so devastated. Hermione wants to be needed doesn't she? Well, Severus loves her, wants her, and needs her. Can't she see that?

10/10

irishredlass

I think that Lucius had better find a deep dark hole to hide in.  Severus it seems has gone to a lot of trouble to ensure that Hermione married him.  I do not think he is going to take kindly to Lucius messing with what he considers his.

10/10

irishredlass

I am really glad I held off now I get to see what happens right away!

10/10

GinnyW

Oh, such an amazingly wonderful and emotionally charged chapter. They truly seem to run the gamut don't they? I did love the end of the chapter. She's truly coming to care for him so much... it's beautiful to see.

10/10

irishredlass

Okay now I am lost or Hermione is.  The tunnel and cliff could be completely metaphorical of her life and the choices she has made.  Did she literally step off a cliff when she married Severus?  You have me confused well done!

10/10

irishredlass

Boy are there some really crossed wires here.  I think they both need some lessons in trust.  It seems as if neither trusts the other.  Well done!

10/10

irishredlass

Oh My God.  Severus and I definately shared similiar experiences with those nasty pox.  He is getting off easy though with the potion boy I wish I had had that!  I think Severus heard the fight between Madam Pomfery and Hermione so I am sure there is more angst to come.  Well done again.  Irish

10/10

irishredlass

I admit that I have waited for a substantial number of chapters to begin this tale.  Very well done!  I have enjoyed the interactions.  I do feel much empathy for Severus though, I had the chicken pox at the age of 31.  I wonder if they are as dangerous for wizards at an advanced age as they were for me?  I guess it is on to the next chapter to find out!

0/10

Mint Stick

I'm so glad he didn't leave. After everything they'd been through that day, having him walk out, no matter his reasoning, would have been such a blow for her!

0/10

septentrion

The Malfoys have the most horrible timing! But it lead to some progress between our couple nonetheless.

0/10

DanaPAH

I just read this story all in one sitting and it's wonderful.  I look forward to more.

10/10

Gardengrrl13

These scenes between them are  so achingly tender and beutiful.  I was severely misty-eyed by the end of this chapter.  Well done, Avery, and thank you so much for this lovely chapter. 


GG


ps... I especially like the way Hermione set the boundaries IRT his temper.  Very well done.

10/10

June W

grrrrr.... isn't there a silenching charm they could use so she won't hear him snore?  will he EVER spend the night in his wife's bed?  hmph.  well, I'm very glad they made up and communicated, and while I'm sad Draco has possibly killed, Lucius deserved it.  sigh.  so why was Dumbledore grieved - was it over Lucius' death, over Albus' expectation that Severus would be grieved, or over Draco's deed? S&H need a weekend away from the castle and no interruptions!  THANK YOU for the new chapter.ByeBye

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