yike!  don't we all wish our first time could be like that!  great stuff!  thanks muchly

'This black haired, black-eyed, seriously well hung (I especially liked that description!) and as hard as a f***ing rock man was what she had been waitilng for' ... Haven't we all?!  But I guess we're not all as lucky as Hermione!Seriously, this was a good chapter.  I love the way that Severus is realising that Hermione is 'chasing away his demons'.  At last they can begin to accept how good they can be together ... Here's hoping that there's no going back now! :-)

Great work!

WOW!!!  AT LAST..Well done!  I LOVE IT!!  I'm so glad that he too had tears in his eyes...How wonderful..They truly are bonded now...Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!More, soon, please!!!

Her vagina was on fire?!?!?!?!  Severus will have to watch that, it'll singe his pubes if he's not careful.  He has a very lax attitude to safety given the fuss he made about Nevilles cauldrons.  Ahhhh lovely smutterific smuttery smut!!  Well worth waiting for, although I'm sure 'Mione wonders why she left it so long ;-)  I imagine the after photo would be be along the lines of 'hair matted like felt, but with a smug expression'. I'm sure Crookshanks was extremely flattered that Severus thought Hermione had a beautiful pussy.  Cats are so vain, its always about them.   Actually at my knitting group (much more fun that you'd think) one of the girls was telling us her overweight cat broke the catflap when leaving the house (he got stuck and ended up taking it with him). Which of course set up the line, 'Oh dear, your flaps are too small for your pussy'. 

Damn, that was hot! Worthy of serious  post-sex emotion on her part.

Hot stuff - it was a long time in coming, pardon the pun. But what made me giggle was the "bugle" in paragraph 5!!

I'd cry with happiness too if I got to be Hermione in that chapter!

Author's Response: We'll just have to dream on alliean!!!

alliean's response: Sigh. This 'reality' thing sucks. *Sulks*

I'd have been mortified as well.  How embarrassing!

Aw, I didn't think he'd say it, but he did!  Yay!

Oh how mortifying!!  I'm glad Hermione could laugh the incident off - I'd be the Hufflepuff crying in the bathroom if that happened to me!

I don't know what to mention specifically because I loved every bit of this chapter.  It was so sweet, and sexy and funny as hell!  Thanks for the enjoyable read.

Wow he finally said 'IT'..and all it took was for Hermione to flash her bare arse..lol..

oh my heaven!  that was soo funny.  thank goodness my sweetie isn't a wizard, atho my undies would make a giant peony!!  thanks muchly

That "rose" is going to hold a special place in their lives now isn't it?  Well done!

oh so fun!  great chapter!!!

I'd have killed him.  But that was too funny.

Good job she was wearing her 'company' knickers - she might have ended up with a slightly wilting dandylion.  And it's lucky Sev's a good catch - you could have someones eye out with a pair of carelessly accioed pants.  Magical propulsion combined with strong elastic - its a health and safety officers worst nightmare! Poor Hermione - remember dear, when going commando, bend at the knee and keep your back straight.  Am muchly looking forward to the lemons!!

Yay - my clever son has fixed my keyboard & I can now say what I wanted to in my previous attempt to review!  This is quite probably the most romantic and amusing chapter I've ever read!  Really love the bit about transfiguring her knickers into a rose - and, more importantly - he's said those three little words at last (and I don't mean "where's the bill!")  He said them spontaneously - on the spur of the moment & without knowing he was going to - and that, in my opinion, is the real sign of love ... Can't wait for more now.  Thanks for this! :-)

Naughty Naughty Severus, bit I like it! And YAY!!!!!!!!!! HE SAID IT!!!!!!!! WOOOO!!! So looking forward to the lemons!!!

Marvellous chapter, just marvellous!

Sometimes I'm really glad I only go out with Muggles ;-DGreat chapter!

Very creative! I loved the idea of the rose... naughty Severus! Can't wait for the next chapter!Livvy

Yeah! Looking forward to the next chapter.

that was quite probably the most romantic< amusing chapters i ve ever read!  (and i just wish i could write more but my bloody keyboard is on the blink and i can t type anything in upper case _ i>e> capital letters< full stops< commas< apostrophes etc! (as you can see!!) that s what you get for spending £$>(( (that s supposed to say four pounds ninety nine!!) on a replacement keyboard i guess!! (will review properly later!) >>> !