9. This Thinking Woman's Crumpet.
Chapter 5 of 19
neelixTwo lonely hearts. One talented witch.
Reviewed9. This Thinking Woman's Crumpet
One Hour Earlier...
Hermione was little shocked when the Floo activated and Valentine Passiflora appeared in her bedroom. For a brief moment, Hermione thought perhaps her date was travelling directly to her.
She had just stepped out of the bath and was wrapped in the complimentary fluffy bathrobe, a large white towel around her wet hair and a pair of over-large towelling slippers on her feet. As Valentine stepped out of the flames, Hermione had panicked. Had her date cancelled? Was there something wrong with him?
'Ms Passiflora? Why are you here? What's going on? I don't understand.' Hermione stood gaping at her before Valentine had a chance to open her mouth.
'Everything is fine, Miss Granger. Please, do not distress yourself.' Valentine walked over to the large bed and sat down on the edge of it slowly. She looked exhausted. 'Please take a seat; this won't take long as long as you're sensible. You're a clever witch, Miss Granger, but I hope you are also a logical one. There is the potential for disaster before the night is through, which is why I had to come.' Valentine shook her head solemnly. 'Your soul mate has the lowest self-esteem I have ever experienced, Miss Granger, and his thought processes are even at this moment undermining the work I have done.'
'Thought processes?' Hermione was puzzled, and her brow furrowed as she sat on the edge of the bed.
'Did you do well at school, Miss Granger? And afterwards?' Valentine looked at her kindly, a small smile on her face.
'I did,' Hermione acknowledged, smiling. 'I got great O.W.L.s, and when I finally sat my N.E.W.T.s, I got the grades I needed to undertake my apprenticeship, and now I have my Potion master's.'
'Now think, Miss Granger. When you were studying, did you feel in your stomach that you would pass or fail? Be honest... I already know the answer.' Valentine's eyes were boring into her.
'I knew I would pass,' Hermione said in a small voice. 'I was always confident of my abilities.'
'Exactly...' Valentine spoke softly. 'Now, what are your thoughts on the power of the mind?'
Hermione snorted, 'Divination, you mean? I don't hold by it.'
Val shook her head, 'No. Not divination. I mean the thoughts that shape reality... Just as what you eat shapes your body, what you THINK shapes your world and either repels or attracts, depending on your thoughts. This is the basis, the fundamental foundation for my magic. Without positive thought, it won't work. You have been looking forward to your date, haven't you? Imagining how wonderful it will be? How exciting to meet someone who is destined just for you?' Val smiled warmly at her.
Hermione blushed, her mind racing. How did she know? 'Yes, of course... Doesn't everyone?'
'Not your man, apparently. He almost loathes himself and cannot believe that anyone would want to love him or be with him or bear his children. Rarely have I seen such a fractured spirit, Miss Granger, and rarely do I take this course of action.' Val's face was serious as she looked at her.
'What can I do? I don't understand...' Hermione was confused.
'I need to tell you who your soul mate is, Miss Granger. You are strong enough for the both of you, and you will help him to fulfil his potential. You will complete him. But it is even more complicated. Your soul mate is someone known to you.' Valentine watched Hermione's face intently.
'Someone known to me who doesn't think he deserves love?' Hermione mused, biting her lip as she ran through her friends and acquaintances in her head.
Not Ron, that's for sure. His over-confidence had ended any chance of a lasting relationship, and he was now living with a French witch he had met at Bill and Fleur's wedding. Neville was married to Luna, and she knew they were very happy together. Dean Thomas or Seamus? No, not likely.
Valentine watched and smiled as Hermione's face dropped slightly, and she turned to look at her.
'Are you sure?' Hermione asked her, and then interrupted before she had a chance to respond. 'Don't answer that.'
She closed her eyes. In her own heart, she knew it was Severus as soon as his name popped into her head, like a piece of a jigsaw clicking into place. A faint, blue glow appeared over her heart as she acknowledged the truth and then disappeared.
'You know him,' Valentine stated. 'You feel him, don't you? You always have, actually. Sometimes, people just need a little nudge.' She smiled at her warmly.
'Does he know?' Hermione asked her, her voice a whisper, her mouth dry.
'Not yet, but he will. And that's when you will have your work cut out. Just be yourself. He will get there in the end.' Valentine stood and walked to the Floo. 'Good luck. But you know you don't need it, don't you?'
Valentine grinned at Hermione, who laughed softly.
'I'll let you know how I get on,' Hermione said softly, her eyes bright. She turned and fingered the silk of her dress after Valentine Floo'd away and smiled to herself.
****
Severus had stood staring at Hermione for almost a full minute, his face pale as he took in her appearance. Face on, she was even more beautiful, and she stunned him. The front of her dress had a plunging neckline, but his eyes were drawn from her cleavage by the black crystal choker around her throat. The red satin was gathered to the side and fastened with a matching crystal brooch, both gifts from her parents. He knew about them. She had mentioned them to him before and had said she would only wear them on a very special occasion. Suddenly, she was walking towards him, and he couldn't move as he watched her hips swing from one side to the other gracefully, her breasts moving softly beneath the satin fabric.
'Here. You look like you need this.' Hermione handed him a glass of Firewhisky, and he downed it in one, the burning liquid bringing colour to his cheeks and ire to his tongue.
'Is this some sort of joke, Hermione?' he whispered quietly. 'Did you think it would be amusing to enlist Ms Passiflora in a little amusement at my expense?'
Hermione looked at him impassively. He truly hates himself, she thought. She stepped close to him; she raised her face a little, a soft smile on her lips. Resting her hand on his arm, she registered the involuntary twitch of his eyes as they looked at each other, a flash of hurt and embarrassment.
'Severus, I would never do anything to hurt or embarrass you. You know that. This is no joke. You are my soul mate.'
Her eyes widened in a small challenge, and she smiled warmly at him, showing her teeth a little before stepping back and taking his empty glass from his hand. She refilled it with Firewhisky from a small drinks cabinet at the side of the room, topped up her champagne, and turned back to face him.
Severus couldn't speak. Surely there was some mistake? She was so much younger than him; he was her former tutor, her current employer. How could this be right? But he knew she would not purposely embarrass him. That was not her way.
His mind raced back in time as his memories of her flashed in front of him. Hermione, all bushy hair at the back of his classroom, her work finished, their eyes meeting. He would politely nod his head in acknowledgement; she would smile a little shyly. Then later, she was older and dancing with Viktor Krum. She was laughing, and he smiled as he watched her blossoming. And then her request to become his apprentice. He turned her down twice until he realised he really did need help and no other student could come close to her skills. Her face, beaming as she showed him her degree results. He was the first person she had contacted as soon as they had arrived by owl, and she had been excited, flinging her arms around him, hugging him and then apologising as he chuckled at her. Then, Hermione arriving unannounced in his shop and offering to work with him, to help him build his business. He hated to admit it, but he had spent a significant part of the last fifteen years with Hermione in his life. And with a sudden realisation, he knew.
Hermione watched him and smiled as the blue light around his heart faded. She walked over to him and handed him his drink.
Severus looked at her, a small smile playing around his lips.
'Who would have guessed?' he said softly, gazing on her face as if seeing her for the first time.
'I know... It's a little overwhelming, isn't it?' she whispered, her heart beating loudly as she saw his newfound appreciation of her. Her eyes were on his mouth, and with a start, she realised he was moving closer to her.
Severus lifted his hand and stroked the side of her face, his fingertips softly brushing her full lips.
'You look beautiful...' he murmured.
Hermione could feel her stomach dancing. She was hit with a sudden urge to kiss him and was surprised by it. She had never felt it before. She didn't know what to do, but it didn't matter. Severus did.
He closed his eyes and leant forward, brushing her lips with his softly in a chaste kiss, taking her free hand in his as he pulled away.
Hermione sighed softly and heard him chuckle. She opened her eyes to see him smiling at her, his eyes glittering a little.
'Are you laughing at me, Professor?' Hermione winked at him.
'Oh, gods...' Severus closed his eyes. 'Promise me you will never call me that again. It makes all of this seem so seedy.'
'You didn't answer my question, Severus,' Hermione spoke his name softly, and he felt a tingle run through his body gently.
'I'm not laughing at you, Hermione. But I am suddenly starving. Shall we?' He grinned at her.
As he walked her to the table, his hand softly brushed the small of her back, and a pulse of electricity shot between them. They paused and looked at each other shyly.
'Wow...' Hermione whispered.
'Indeed,' he replied.
A/N: Just want to say a huge thank you to everyone for the really nice reviews I have been getting for this bit of fluff! They have made me laugh and grin like an idiot!
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Latest 25 Reviews for Would Like To Meet
371 Reviews | 7.91/10 Average
Another awesome fic - can't believe it was one of your first. I loved it! I've enjoyed reading all of your stories. Thank you again for writing!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Lol... Thank you s much. I know you're reading everything so I hope it doesn't disappoint x
Fun ending! :D
Thannk you for sharing!
Very entertaining not sure why I haven't seen this before.
I really liked this!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Katie, thank you so much! I love it when I get little reviews out of the blue like this!
That's very sweet.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks - I wrote it early in my writing, so it's a bit twee!
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
apparently, I don't mind twee. :) I'm not entirely sure what that is. You'd think I'd know all these things after reading so VERY many Fanfics, but I'm clueless.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
twee [twiː]adj Brit excessively sentimental, sweet, or pretty[from tweet, mincing or affected pronunciation of sweet]tweely advtweeness nhc_dict()
Collins English Dictionary – Complete and Unabridged 6th Edition 2003. © William Collins Sons & Co. Ltd 1979, 1986 © HarperCollins Publishers 1991, 1994, 1998, 2000, 2003
Sentimental slush... that's Twee! lol! Glad you like it though, it's what I write most of the time!
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
I LOVE sentimental slush. Fan fiction is relaxation and de-stress time and sentimental slush often seems to be what I need. LOL.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
tee hee... me too! If you love that, then my stuff is probably right up your alley!! Thanks for reading, and keep letting me know your thoughts xx
Wonderful story. I loved the scene where Severus proposed!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Ahh, thank you so much. I loved writing this!
Great job, especially for an early fic!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
! I am really surprised how well it's been recieved to be truthful - I cringe when I read it! lol
Great chapter. Hermione seems a bit insecure but Severus is learning how to make her feel better.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Yes. Relationships are a learning curve... even after 20 yrs, according to mr neelix!
Nice ending. I like the fact that it's not over so to speak, the kids are in the other room and still have some growing to do, the parents are very happy though which gives us the feeling that things will be just fine.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Totally - they will be fine, even if the journey to fine is a bit bumpy.
Lovely story. Loved Snape with a 14 yo daughter---although I wouldn't let my 14 yo date! ;) LOL
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Harsh! I had my first serious romance at 13. And I'm very glad I have a son and no daughters! lmao!
Brilliant story, really enjoyed it. Who is the third child??? :)
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
They had Zachary, Lizzie, then they lost a child, then they had Marcus :)Three children...
Anonymous
Well done finishing, neelix - a squee-worthy ending. I like that there was still a hint of sadness included to counter the happy ending just a little. Makes it more believable which is always good where Hermione and Severus are involved :)
Author's Response: I thought so too. I wanted it to be real - well, in as much as real gets where two ficticious magical characters in a ficticious world can get, anyway!
Thanks for reviewing regularly. Very much appreciated.
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story, I am so glad you wrote it and shared it with us!!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks, honey - and thank you for the review you left for my new story :) It's in the queue here now. I hope you enjoy it!
I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!! It's perfect!!! Well done, indeed!!! thank you for a wonderful story....What a great ride it's been!!! Looking forward to another story soon I hope!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Ahh,
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
. You've been such an enthusiastic reviewer, it makes me sad to say goodbye to this story! But rest assured. The first chapter of my new story is in the queue already....
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Whoohoo....OH I CAN'T WAIT....SEVERUS/HERMIONE?? YES PLEASE??......LOL THEY are MY OTP......I hope they sent it thru today! Whoohoohoooooo
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Was your new story on another site?? Can I go read it before it gets approved here???
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
lmao... the first 3 chapters are already up on Ash. And that answers your other question, I think!
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Whoohoo,,,yes, yes it does...........Heading to ASH now! Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A well chosen title: this was certainly what I wished for... errm, rather what Hermione ... or actually Severus...
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
I wish for Severus often. He never does what he does to Hermione though. I live in hope!
Missed this chapter somehow. Love spat. Poor Severus. Hermione should know better.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
They're naughty the two of them! All will be well though.
Lovely, Babes, just lovely. And what a glorious way to start one's birthday! I'm dusting off my pink, feathery fascinator as we speak ready to go to the wedding. I am getting an invite aren't I? Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Of course! Everyone is welcome...lol! Glad you enjoyed it!
Makeup sex and a public kiss to make every other woman envious, I want to live in one of your stories.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Me too! I want to be Hermione, to be truthful!
Wow, another great chapter! Loved the wakeup and the proposal. I just couldn't see him down on one knee begging!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
No, me either - although he would, if she asked him to!
All I can say is AWWWW!!! That was so romantic!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
lol.. glad you liked it!
How romantic! Bless Severus.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks for reading!
AHHHHHH...that was awesome!!! Breathtaking really. You are such a romantic Severus
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
aw, thanks! I am glad you liked it. Hang on...*shh...They're not supposed to know you're here! No, it's not slushy. Romantic is good. Yes, really.*Tsk. Insecure Wizard!
Response from sregner (Reviewer)
Yes Severus it is good......
I think I need to go wake up my husband and kiss him. . . darn, I need more stars to give!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
ahhh bless! I know what you mean, it does make you feel grateful!
okay, I know this will be TMI, but its not THAT cliche' to cry after truly great sex. Especially since, lets face reality, not every passion filled stroke is the one that makes you 'really' go AHHHHHH!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
TMI? I have no clue what that means! But someone gave me a nasty review saying it was cliche! I thought, how sad for you!