19. Sharing.
Chapter 15 of 19
neelixTwo lonely hearts. One talented witch.
Reviewed19. Sharing
They were lying together, naked in the candlelight, their bodies half in shadow and their highlighted skin luminous and glowing.
Severus had his head propped up on two pillows and was looking at Hermione, who was splayed across his chest, her hair like a chestnut waterfall running down her back. They were smiling at each other the way new lovers do, shy but amazed at how wonderful the other person makes them feel.
Hermione stroked Severus’s cheek with a slim finger and felt a thin line of stubble. He smiled at her, and she traced his smile, then moved her hand to his chest, pulling at the smattering of hair around his nipples softly.
‘Your eyes are amazing,’ Hermione murmured as she stared at him and his eyes twinkled back at her.
‘Are they?’ he chuckled softly, stroking her hair with his smooth, pale fingers.
‘Sometimes, I can’t tell what you’re thinking at all, then other times… it’s obvious… like when you’re angry. Or when you’re turned on…’ Hermione giggled a little.
‘And of course, you have to know what I’m thinking.’ Severus smirked a little.
‘Not all the time… Just, well… sometimes… like when I’m worried about you….’ Hermione smiled softly at him.
‘Why would you worry about me?’ Severus frowned at her.
‘You’re my friend, and you’ve been through a lot. Of course I would worry… I always did. Why do you think I came into the shop that day?’ Hermione pursed her lips a little.
‘I thought you wanted a job,’ he muttered. ‘I didn’t know you were there out of pity.’
‘It wasn’t pity, Severus. I came into the shop because I hadn’t seen you in such a long time, and I wanted to know if you were well. I cared about you.’ Hermione frowned back at him. He was so incredibly touchy.
Severus relaxed as he saw the truth in her eyes. It would be so like her to visit someone out of concern, the way she does with the Longbottoms, he mused.
‘What do want from your life, Hermione?’ he murmured, softly pulling her up his body until her legs were either side of his hips, his erection resting along the inside of her thigh. He started to stroke her buttocks gently as she kissed him and then thought about his question.
‘The war changed things for me, I think. Before, I wanted to study, University… travel a little… perhaps write, do some Potions research. All of that. There was so much. But then afterwards, I think my priorities changed. After my parents were killed, I realised how important family is… and friends, being with the people you care about, having conversations… being able to stay still, not having to keep moving to avoid being attacked or captured.’ Hermione stared into his eyes and saw a look that said he knew exactly what she was talking about.
‘Surely you didn’t plan on staying in the shop for the rest of your life?’ He looked at her and raised an eyebrow.
‘Well… I might have moved on if I had been matched with someone else, but I didn’t ever think about leaving, really. I love it. I can do all the things I wanted to do, and now,’ she bit her lip as she looked at his mouth, ‘there’s an added bonus.’ She raised her eyes to his and smiled a sexy smile before crushing his mouth with hers.
Severus moaned as Hermione shifted herself so his cock was resting at the entrance of her pussy, her tongue plundering his mouth as she rubbed her wet lips over him.
She pulled away a little and stared him in the eye.
‘I love you,’ she rasped, kissing him even harder and hissing as she started to push her hips down and slid his length into her slowly. Severus moaned into her mouth and put his hands onto her buttocks as she started to move her pelvis around on top of him in small circles, pushing her clit against his firm flesh. Hermione loved the thought of being in control and wondered where this wanton side had been hiding. She had no intention of going back, and part of her was intrigued to see what else Severus could show her.
‘Sit up and fuck me, witch,’ Severus hissed in her ear as she suckled his throat, marking him for the first time. She sat up and admired her handiwork, resolving to put one somewhere less noticeable next time. Severus tipped his pelvis upwards, and Hermione jumped as she felt him nudging her cervix.
‘Gods, Severus… you are huge!’ she gasped. ‘It can’t be normal.’
Severus grinned at her and moved his thumb to her clit.
‘You are ruined for other men, Miss Granger,’ he intoned throatily, gasping as she started to bounce up and down on top of his cock.
‘I will never know, Severus. I will never want another man as long as I live,’ Hermione gasped as she started to move faster, Severus’s thumb now moving in circles as she neared her orgasm already.
‘You should be careful what you say, Hermione,’ Severus whispered as he looked at her face, her head tipped back, her eyes closed and her mouth twisted in a grimace of ecstasy. ‘I may think you mean it…. Oh, shit… oh… oh, gods… don’t stop.’ He felt his balls tightening and closed his eyes slightly, his tongue sticking out from between his teeth a little as he watched Hermione’s breasts bouncing up and down.
‘Oh, fuck… oh, shit… I do fucking mean it, you idiot… Oh, shit, gods… MERLIN!!!’
Hermione sat down hard, and her orgasm exploded as Severus went stiff inside her, come shooting upwards and pulsing within her with such force, the sensations sent Hermione over the edge, and she came again as Severus kept his thumb working. Hermione moved her hips in small circles as Severus started to go flaccid inside her, enjoying the sensation of him. Severus pulled her close to his chest and kissed her face over and over, slipping his tongue into her mouth as he groaned her name.
‘I love you, witch…. I love you,’ he whispered softly.
‘Mmmm... I know you do….’ Hermione snuggled against his shoulder for a moment until his cock slipped out of her and she slid to his side. Severus turned towards her, stroking her hair from her face and pulling the bedclothes over them both. Severus let his arm slide around her waist, and they looked at each other for a long time without speaking.
‘What do you want from your life, Severus?’ Hermione asked him softly, tentatively, knowing how he hated sharing his thoughts and feelings.
‘Interesting question,’ he murmured as he watched her soft mouth, her full lips curving into a warm smile. ‘I didn’t know I wanted anything until recently. And that was when I went to visit Ms Passiflora.’ He smiled at her. ‘I suppose if her magic is to be trusted, it would seem that what I wanted,’ he paused as he searched her beautiful face, ‘what I wanted was you.’
‘It feels so right… doesn’t it?’ Hermione’s eyes widened in a question.
‘It certainly does.’ Severus smiled and moved himself forward until their bodies were touching.
Hermione gasped and giggled. ‘Already?’ she asked him as she felt his erection probing her pubic hair.
‘Already…. Always, I think.’ Severus chuckled softly. ‘Let me make love to you one more time before we go to sleep?’
Hermione smiled. Severus took that as a yes.
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371 Reviews | 7.91/10 Average
Another awesome fic - can't believe it was one of your first. I loved it! I've enjoyed reading all of your stories. Thank you again for writing!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Lol... Thank you s much. I know you're reading everything so I hope it doesn't disappoint x
Fun ending! :D
Thannk you for sharing!
Very entertaining not sure why I haven't seen this before.
I really liked this!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Katie, thank you so much! I love it when I get little reviews out of the blue like this!
That's very sweet.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks - I wrote it early in my writing, so it's a bit twee!
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
apparently, I don't mind twee. :) I'm not entirely sure what that is. You'd think I'd know all these things after reading so VERY many Fanfics, but I'm clueless.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
twee [twiː]adj Brit excessively sentimental, sweet, or pretty[from tweet, mincing or affected pronunciation of sweet]tweely advtweeness nhc_dict()
Collins English Dictionary – Complete and Unabridged 6th Edition 2003. © William Collins Sons & Co. Ltd 1979, 1986 © HarperCollins Publishers 1991, 1994, 1998, 2000, 2003
Sentimental slush... that's Twee! lol! Glad you like it though, it's what I write most of the time!
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
I LOVE sentimental slush. Fan fiction is relaxation and de-stress time and sentimental slush often seems to be what I need. LOL.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
tee hee... me too! If you love that, then my stuff is probably right up your alley!! Thanks for reading, and keep letting me know your thoughts xx
Wonderful story. I loved the scene where Severus proposed!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Ahh, thank you so much. I loved writing this!
Great job, especially for an early fic!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
! I am really surprised how well it's been recieved to be truthful - I cringe when I read it! lol
Great chapter. Hermione seems a bit insecure but Severus is learning how to make her feel better.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Yes. Relationships are a learning curve... even after 20 yrs, according to mr neelix!
Nice ending. I like the fact that it's not over so to speak, the kids are in the other room and still have some growing to do, the parents are very happy though which gives us the feeling that things will be just fine.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Totally - they will be fine, even if the journey to fine is a bit bumpy.
Lovely story. Loved Snape with a 14 yo daughter---although I wouldn't let my 14 yo date! ;) LOL
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Harsh! I had my first serious romance at 13. And I'm very glad I have a son and no daughters! lmao!
Brilliant story, really enjoyed it. Who is the third child??? :)
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
They had Zachary, Lizzie, then they lost a child, then they had Marcus :)Three children...
Anonymous
Well done finishing, neelix - a squee-worthy ending. I like that there was still a hint of sadness included to counter the happy ending just a little. Makes it more believable which is always good where Hermione and Severus are involved :)
Author's Response: I thought so too. I wanted it to be real - well, in as much as real gets where two ficticious magical characters in a ficticious world can get, anyway!
Thanks for reviewing regularly. Very much appreciated.
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story, I am so glad you wrote it and shared it with us!!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks, honey - and thank you for the review you left for my new story :) It's in the queue here now. I hope you enjoy it!
I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!! It's perfect!!! Well done, indeed!!! thank you for a wonderful story....What a great ride it's been!!! Looking forward to another story soon I hope!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Ahh,
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
. You've been such an enthusiastic reviewer, it makes me sad to say goodbye to this story! But rest assured. The first chapter of my new story is in the queue already....
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Whoohoo....OH I CAN'T WAIT....SEVERUS/HERMIONE?? YES PLEASE??......LOL THEY are MY OTP......I hope they sent it thru today! Whoohoohoooooo
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Was your new story on another site?? Can I go read it before it gets approved here???
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
lmao... the first 3 chapters are already up on Ash. And that answers your other question, I think!
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Whoohoo,,,yes, yes it does...........Heading to ASH now! Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A well chosen title: this was certainly what I wished for... errm, rather what Hermione ... or actually Severus...
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
I wish for Severus often. He never does what he does to Hermione though. I live in hope!
Missed this chapter somehow. Love spat. Poor Severus. Hermione should know better.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
They're naughty the two of them! All will be well though.
Lovely, Babes, just lovely. And what a glorious way to start one's birthday! I'm dusting off my pink, feathery fascinator as we speak ready to go to the wedding. I am getting an invite aren't I? Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Of course! Everyone is welcome...lol! Glad you enjoyed it!
Makeup sex and a public kiss to make every other woman envious, I want to live in one of your stories.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Me too! I want to be Hermione, to be truthful!
Wow, another great chapter! Loved the wakeup and the proposal. I just couldn't see him down on one knee begging!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
No, me either - although he would, if she asked him to!
All I can say is AWWWW!!! That was so romantic!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
lol.. glad you liked it!
How romantic! Bless Severus.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks for reading!
AHHHHHH...that was awesome!!! Breathtaking really. You are such a romantic Severus
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
aw, thanks! I am glad you liked it. Hang on...*shh...They're not supposed to know you're here! No, it's not slushy. Romantic is good. Yes, really.*Tsk. Insecure Wizard!
Response from sregner (Reviewer)
Yes Severus it is good......
I think I need to go wake up my husband and kiss him. . . darn, I need more stars to give!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
ahhh bless! I know what you mean, it does make you feel grateful!
okay, I know this will be TMI, but its not THAT cliche' to cry after truly great sex. Especially since, lets face reality, not every passion filled stroke is the one that makes you 'really' go AHHHHHH!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
TMI? I have no clue what that means! But someone gave me a nasty review saying it was cliche! I thought, how sad for you!