12. Shocking The Locals
Chapter 8 of 19
neelixTwo lonely hearts. One talented witch.
Reviewed12. Shocking the Locals.
Hermione had removed her jeans from around her ankles and was now fully naked. Severus lay on his back and watched her as she walked back to the bed slowly, pushing her hair from her face and hooking it over her ears, her tongue licking her lips softly, her brow furrowed.
'What are you thinking about?' he asked, smiling softly.
'How did you know I was thinking?' She grinned at him suddenly.
'You always push your hair behind your ears and stick your tongue out a little... It's quite endearing,' he replied, laughing, 'but don't avoid the question, Hermione.'
Hermione blushed and climbed up on the bed. His head was resting on his arm, his white shirt open at the collar, the top two buttons open and revealing a little tuft of dark chest hair. Her gaze went slowly down his body and rested on his crotch, where his erection was still evident. Severus smirked and twitched his cock. Hermione jumped. She caught his eye and giggled, covering her mouth with her hand.
'Come here...' Severus laughed and opened his arms. Hermione climbed onto him and snuggled against his chest, her fingers playing with his shirt buttons gently and flicking them open one by one, her hand stroking his chest softly. She could feel his muscles beneath his skin and raised her eyes to his.
'You're very strong, aren't you? It hadn't occurred to me,' she murmured.
'It was a necessity to maintain my physical strength. I would not have survived otherwise,' he replied quietly.
'Was he very cruel to you, Severus?' Hermione's eyes were a little wet with tears.
'Not as cruel as he was to some others, but enough. It was his way of controlling us. He certainly didn't have our admiration. Fear was his only way. But enough talk, witch... I seem to remember something about it being my turn?' His eyes flashed at her, and her face flushed prettily.
'I'm not an expert, Severus,' she said quietly.
'You are, however, a quick study,' he said, smiling encouragingly, 'and I know how you love to learn. Now, kiss me...' His eyes were heavy as he stared at her, and she sighed as she moved up his body, covering his lips with her mouth and rubbing her still damp crotch across his hard erection.
Severus groaned and pushed her hips until she lay by his side. He unfastened his fly, and with her help, he pushed his trousers down over his hips, revealing silky and very roomy boxers. Hermione looked at his crotch and gasped at the sight of his erection through the smooth fabric. He was a lot bigger than Ron, and she wondered just how that would be expected to fit inside a woman. As if knowing her thoughts, Severus chuckled.
'If a woman is ready... really ready, she can accommodate the largest of men. There are some larger than me... apparently...' He smirked, and Hermione hit him playfully on his arm.
'Size doesn't matter, or so they say.' Hermione licked her lips, unable to keep her eyes from his hard cock.
'We'll see if you still believe that one day,' Severus murmured as he watched her, and his hand went to cup her breasts, his fingers pulling and tweaking at her nipples firmly until she gasped. He was determined to have her fully now. Tasting her wasn't enough. Hermione kissed him and let her fingers stroke his hard length through his shorts.
'Harder,' Severus whispered beneath her lips, and she pushed her palm flat and ran it firmly up his length until she reached the waistband of his underwear. Slowly, she slipped her hand down and ran her fingers over his testicles, feeling them tighten under her touch. She pushed the fabric down and allowed the air to hit him.
Taking her mouth away from his, Hermione moved down the bed and lay with her breasts cushioning his balls as she looked intently at his cock for the first time. The shaft was pale and thick, the head darker and quite wide, and Hermione noticed droplets glistening on the tip. Out of curiosity, she flicked her tongue out and licked them off to taste them. They were a little salty, and it wasn't unpleasant. Severus hissed as he saw her tongue on his cock. Her eyes were wide as she looked at him, and he sighed. She was going to be amazing; he could just tell. Her nostrils flared as she inhaled his scent, musky and manly and she felt a gush of moisture between her legs. Taking her hand, she wrapped her fingers around him and started to thrust up and down slowly and then stopped. She removed her hand and grabbed Severus's, putting it on his cock.
'Show me... so I get it right,' she said softly, smiling at him shyly.
Severus raised an eyebrow and nodded slightly. He was feeling so turned on, he was scared he would come without her hands on him, and he didn't want that at all. He wrapped his slim, pale fingers around his length, and gasped a little as he began to move the skin over the purpling head of his cock. He increased the pace, and Hermione noticed that as his hand reached his head, he gave a slight squeeze and a small twist. A little pre-cum escaped the hole at the top of his cock, and Hermione covered it with her mouth, running her tongue over his head as he continued to move his hand quickly.
'Oh, gods... Hermione... move...' he gasped.
He couldn't allow himself to come in her mouth, not yet. He let go of his cock briefly and grabbed her hand, covering it with his own and holding tightly, and he began to move again. Hermione watched as the vein in his neck protruded and his hips started to buck upwards a little. Severus removed his hand and opened his eyes to watch as she continued to masturbate him. Hermione squeezed him suddenly, and he cried out as an arc of creamy sperm shot upwards from him and landed on her breasts dangling over him. Without knowing why, Hermione continued to move her hand and ran the head of his cock between her breasts gently as more come shot from him in pulsing spurts.
Severus collapsed and lay still for a long time, his eyes closed and his mouth open slightly, his breath coming in short bursts.
'Gods...' he moaned. 'So good.'
Hermione smiled. He was so gorgeous, and she couldn't understand why she hadn't seen it before. It was only a short leap in her thought process for her to realise that she could easily fall in love with him, and she grinned to herself. Sitting up, she glanced down as long lengths of sperm joined them from his cock to her breasts.
'Eugh...' Hermione giggled a little. Severus opened his eyes and looked at her. He started to laugh, his body shaking until small tears were running down his face. Hermione laughed with him, and as they stopped, their eyes met, and he sat up to kiss her softly.
'You are wonderful, Hermione,' he whispered.
'So are you.' She smiled at him widely.
Severus reached for his wand and cleaned them up, still chuckling to himself as they dressed again.
'What time is it, do you think?' Hermione asked him, running her hand across his back as she watched him put his shoes back on.
'Still early, I think. Do you fancy going somewhere special for breakfast?' He looked at her, and his lips twitched up at the corners.
'That would be great! Do you know where we are, then?' Hermione bounced off the bed and put her trainers on her feet quickly.
'I do indeed. We are in Scotland.' He smiled at her and held out his hand, 'Come. I have a surprise.'
Hermione took his hand and grinned at him. She was suddenly very happy that he had turned out to be her soul mate.
****
They stood on the neat lawn, watching as the sun's rays dappled the pond.
'Ready?' he murmured, pulling her close.
'You don't need to hold me for Side-Along Apparition, do you?' Hermione looked puzzled.
'No. But I do need to hold you...' he drifted off as he looked into her eyes, and he felt the weight of his words as they settled squarely somewhere near his heart. He had spoken the truth, and he felt that if he left her side for a mere moment, the pain would be unbearable.
'That's lovely,' Hermione whispered.
'Hmmm.' Severus smiled. 'Hold on.'
With a small twist, they Apparated, and Hermione still had her eyes closed when they arrived at their destination.
'You can look now.' He laughed and stepped away, keeping tight hold of her hand.
'Oh!' Hermione grinned at him. 'Perfect!'
'I feel the need to scare some children... It's been so long.' He smiled slyly at her.
'Don't be mean!' Hermione laughed and looked at him. 'Severus...' She pulled him to her and he wrapped his arms around her tightly.
'What is it?' he asked her.
'What do we tell people? Minerva and the others?' Hermione looked at him closely.
'Tell them the truth. We are on our first date and so far... So good...' He lost himself in her eyes, and she gasped as he covered her mouth with his. They kissed for what seemed a very long time until the need to breathe interrupted them.
Hagrid was stood outside his hut, his eyes focussed on them and squinting.
'Goodness me, Fang... That looks like... an' 'Ermione... and they're... good gods... they are... they're kissin'!' He rubbed his eyes and blinked, staring again.
'Yep... still kissin.' He shook his head in disbelief.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Would Like To Meet
371 Reviews | 7.91/10 Average
Another awesome fic - can't believe it was one of your first. I loved it! I've enjoyed reading all of your stories. Thank you again for writing!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Lol... Thank you s much. I know you're reading everything so I hope it doesn't disappoint x
Fun ending! :D
Thannk you for sharing!
Very entertaining not sure why I haven't seen this before.
I really liked this!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Katie, thank you so much! I love it when I get little reviews out of the blue like this!
That's very sweet.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks - I wrote it early in my writing, so it's a bit twee!
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
apparently, I don't mind twee. :) I'm not entirely sure what that is. You'd think I'd know all these things after reading so VERY many Fanfics, but I'm clueless.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
twee [twiː]adj Brit excessively sentimental, sweet, or pretty[from tweet, mincing or affected pronunciation of sweet]tweely advtweeness nhc_dict()
Collins English Dictionary – Complete and Unabridged 6th Edition 2003. © William Collins Sons & Co. Ltd 1979, 1986 © HarperCollins Publishers 1991, 1994, 1998, 2000, 2003
Sentimental slush... that's Twee! lol! Glad you like it though, it's what I write most of the time!
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
I LOVE sentimental slush. Fan fiction is relaxation and de-stress time and sentimental slush often seems to be what I need. LOL.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
tee hee... me too! If you love that, then my stuff is probably right up your alley!! Thanks for reading, and keep letting me know your thoughts xx
Wonderful story. I loved the scene where Severus proposed!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Ahh, thank you so much. I loved writing this!
Great job, especially for an early fic!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
! I am really surprised how well it's been recieved to be truthful - I cringe when I read it! lol
Great chapter. Hermione seems a bit insecure but Severus is learning how to make her feel better.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Yes. Relationships are a learning curve... even after 20 yrs, according to mr neelix!
Nice ending. I like the fact that it's not over so to speak, the kids are in the other room and still have some growing to do, the parents are very happy though which gives us the feeling that things will be just fine.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Totally - they will be fine, even if the journey to fine is a bit bumpy.
Lovely story. Loved Snape with a 14 yo daughter---although I wouldn't let my 14 yo date! ;) LOL
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Harsh! I had my first serious romance at 13. And I'm very glad I have a son and no daughters! lmao!
Brilliant story, really enjoyed it. Who is the third child??? :)
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
They had Zachary, Lizzie, then they lost a child, then they had Marcus :)Three children...
Anonymous
Well done finishing, neelix - a squee-worthy ending. I like that there was still a hint of sadness included to counter the happy ending just a little. Makes it more believable which is always good where Hermione and Severus are involved :)
Author's Response: I thought so too. I wanted it to be real - well, in as much as real gets where two ficticious magical characters in a ficticious world can get, anyway!
Thanks for reviewing regularly. Very much appreciated.
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story, I am so glad you wrote it and shared it with us!!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks, honey - and thank you for the review you left for my new story :) It's in the queue here now. I hope you enjoy it!
I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!! It's perfect!!! Well done, indeed!!! thank you for a wonderful story....What a great ride it's been!!! Looking forward to another story soon I hope!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Ahh,
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
. You've been such an enthusiastic reviewer, it makes me sad to say goodbye to this story! But rest assured. The first chapter of my new story is in the queue already....
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Whoohoo....OH I CAN'T WAIT....SEVERUS/HERMIONE?? YES PLEASE??......LOL THEY are MY OTP......I hope they sent it thru today! Whoohoohoooooo
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Was your new story on another site?? Can I go read it before it gets approved here???
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
lmao... the first 3 chapters are already up on Ash. And that answers your other question, I think!
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Whoohoo,,,yes, yes it does...........Heading to ASH now! Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A well chosen title: this was certainly what I wished for... errm, rather what Hermione ... or actually Severus...
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
I wish for Severus often. He never does what he does to Hermione though. I live in hope!
Missed this chapter somehow. Love spat. Poor Severus. Hermione should know better.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
They're naughty the two of them! All will be well though.
Lovely, Babes, just lovely. And what a glorious way to start one's birthday! I'm dusting off my pink, feathery fascinator as we speak ready to go to the wedding. I am getting an invite aren't I? Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Of course! Everyone is welcome...lol! Glad you enjoyed it!
Makeup sex and a public kiss to make every other woman envious, I want to live in one of your stories.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Me too! I want to be Hermione, to be truthful!
Wow, another great chapter! Loved the wakeup and the proposal. I just couldn't see him down on one knee begging!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
No, me either - although he would, if she asked him to!
All I can say is AWWWW!!! That was so romantic!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
lol.. glad you liked it!
How romantic! Bless Severus.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks for reading!
AHHHHHH...that was awesome!!! Breathtaking really. You are such a romantic Severus
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
aw, thanks! I am glad you liked it. Hang on...*shh...They're not supposed to know you're here! No, it's not slushy. Romantic is good. Yes, really.*Tsk. Insecure Wizard!
Response from sregner (Reviewer)
Yes Severus it is good......
I think I need to go wake up my husband and kiss him. . . darn, I need more stars to give!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
ahhh bless! I know what you mean, it does make you feel grateful!
okay, I know this will be TMI, but its not THAT cliche' to cry after truly great sex. Especially since, lets face reality, not every passion filled stroke is the one that makes you 'really' go AHHHHHH!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
TMI? I have no clue what that means! But someone gave me a nasty review saying it was cliche! I thought, how sad for you!