23. Epilogue
Chapter 19 of 19
neelixTwo lonely hearts. One talented witch.
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The sound of clinking bottles could be heard from inside the potions store. Severus walked into the lab and over to his workbench, peered into the cauldron and looked down at the hastily scribbled note on the pad beside it.
'Shit,' a mumbled voice came from the store.
Severus folded his arms and waited. After a short moment, a tall, slim girl of fourteen walked from the potions store and stopped in her tracks as she looked at him.
'Dad.' She gave him a lopsided smile and tucked her long black hair behind her ears.
'Elizabeth,' he said flatly, and the girl groaned. She knew she was in trouble if he called her by her full name.
'Well, I was almost finished; I did exactly what you said. Then I realised I had forgotten the wormwood, and I went to get some,' Lizzie's voice got quieter, 'and we haven't got any.'
'Lizzie, remind me why I gave you this Saturday job?' Severus said softly.
Lizzie closed her eyes. Here we go, she thought to herself.
'So Mum can have the day with Marco, and I can do the stock take and make the healing potion for St Mungo's.' She repeated the terms of her employment.
'And have you fulfilled the terms of your job description recently?' Severus murmured and walked towards where Lizzie was standing.
'No.' She looked down at her feet and knew she had been rumbled.
'You didn't finish your work last week, did you, Lizzie?' Severus murmured, looking down at the top of his daughter's bowed head. 'Was there something more important, perhaps, that caused you to leave without finishing the stock take?'
Lizzie felt sick. Her father was intimidating at times, definitely frustrating and had a temper that could raise the roof, but this was the worst. His disappointment. And the fact he could see right through her.
'I was meeting someone,' she mumbled, not raising her eyes.
'Speak up, Lizzie, I cannot hear you when you mumble.' Severus smirked a little.
He knew exactly what she had done last week, but he loved to watch her try and squirm her way out of things. She may be Slytherin, but she wasn't a well-practiced one. In fact, Severus wondered if she would have been better placed in Ravenclaw.
Lizzie raised her eyes defiantly to her father, and he raised his eyebrow at her.
'I was meeting someone last week, okay?' she shouted, 'and don't ask me who, because I won't tell you. It's none of your business!'
Lizzie crossed her arms and glared at him, and Severus fought hard to force down the laughter bubbling in his throat. She really could be as stubborn as her mother.
Severus sighed deeply and shook his head.
'Ah, Lizzie. You've grown up so much, you really have, and that was why I gave you this job. I thought you were ready, but perhaps your mother was right.' He turned to walk out of the lab.
'What? What do you mean? Dad...?' Lizzie had to stride after Severus as he walked into the front of the shop and started to lock up.
'Okay, tell me. What did Mum say?' Lizzie glared at him again.
Severus felt a little spark of glee. Lizzie had an inner need to prove Hermione wrong and had done, ever since she was a little girl. He cast his mind back to a sunny day in the back garden, when at the age of five Lizzie had started to climb the apple tree. Hermione had admonished her and told her that she would fall and break her leg and that taking Skele-gro was disgusting. Lizzie had pouted at her, and as soon as her back was turned, she had shimmied to the top branches and been unable to climb down.
Hermione had ranted at her for ages afterwards, but Lizzie hadn't cared. She hadn't fallen out of the tree, and she hadn't broken her leg.
'Your mother felt that you would be too interested in meeting with your friends to be committed to this job each Saturday,' Severus replied smoothly and saw the light in Lizzie's eyes fade a little.
'That's not true. I love working here with you, Dad.' Lizzie's eyes pricked with tears.
Hermione had been right, at least about last Saturday, but that was different. She had been waiting for ages for Damien Longbottom to ask her out, and when he finally had, she hadn't been able to think of anything else. And when he had suggested meeting for an ice cream on Saturday, Lizzie had forgotten about her job and rushed through it so she could dash out and meet with him. But she hadn't finished the stock take, and now, she couldn't finish the healing potion for St Mungo's. The guilt crashed over her, and her pale cheeks flushed pink as she looked up into her father's eyes.
'I'm sorry, Dad. I promise it won't happen again.' Lizzie looked at him, her dark brown eyes watering and her pale pink lips being chewed to bits as she waited for him to respond.
Severus smiled and walked over to her, leant against the counter, and held his arms open.
Smiling softly, she snuggled against his robes as he wrapped his arms around her in a hug. He knew there would be a time very soon when his hugs would be unwanted, and he rested his chin on her head gently, musing at how fast his children had grown.
They were interrupted by a knock on the door, and Severus began to laugh at the screwed up face puckered up against the glass of the front door.
'We'd better let them in.' He laughed again, and Lizzie's face split into a grin at the sight of her little brother making faces at her through the glass.
Severus flicked his wand, and the door opened so fast that Marco tumbled into the shop and landed on the floor. He looked up and caught Severus's eye and laughed loudly before jumping to his feet.
'Where's your mother?' Severus asked, puzzled not to see Hermione following Marco into the shop.
'Just coming. Can I stir something, Dad?' he said to him quickly, his dark eyes bright and his sandy hair falling into his eyes lightly.
'Lizzie has a potion she is making; I'm sure it needs stirring. What do you think, Lizzie?' Severus winked at her, knowing that her ruined potion would be the ideal distraction for an inquisitive five year old.
'Definitely. I was looking for someone to help me. Come on, Marco.' She grinned at him, and he took her hand as they walked towards the lab.
Severus watched them with a lump in his throat and wondered if they would have been as close if Hermione hadn't lost her third pregnancy. The age gap between them meant that Lizzie had taken on a lot of responsibility as Marco's big sister, especially since Zach had gone on to University last month. Severus smiled as he heard Lizzie giving Marco careful instructions.
Hermione pushed the shop door open with her bottom, her hands full of shopping bags that she dumped with a sigh.
'Thank goodness that's over with. You wouldn't believe how busy it is out there today.' Hermione put her hands on her hips and tipped her head to Severus for a kiss.
He was happy to oblige and ran his hands along her body as he kissed her sensuously.
It wasn't what Hermione had been expecting, and she lost her balance a little. He caught her, and they laughed together, their eyes meeting and the familiar spark between them ignited something between her thighs. Severus raised his eyes at her and smirked slightly.
'Wait here,' he murmured to her.
Hermione smiled to herself and waited impatiently for him to come back.
'Lizzie is keeping Marco occupied. I warded the lab so they can't come out yet, and there is a double Silencing Spell over the whole shop.' He smiled at her sexily and took his wand out of his robes. With a flick, black blinds covered the doorway and the windows, leaving the front of the shop in a dim light but ensuring no one would be able to see in.
'You have the best ideas, Severus. Now hurry up before the kids get suspicious and try and get your wards down like the last time.' Hermione walked towards him and pulled her blouse over her head, unfastened her bra, and moved her hands to the top of her jeans quickly.
Severus watched her intently. He knew she only undressed this way to tease him, and with a flick of his wand, they were both naked.
Hermione walked up to him and ran a finger down his chest until she reached his erect cock, licking her lips a little. In moments, their lips were locked, and Severus lifted Hermione onto the shop counter. They knew from previous experience it was at the perfect height, and after a little caressing, stroking, licking and sucking, Hermione lay herself back as Severus pulled her hips forward and entered her firmly.
'Gods,' he hissed. 'After three children, you are still so tight, witch'
'Mmm, and you still know how to fuck me, Severus, now shut up and get on with it.'
Hermione squirmed as he started to thrust, and in a matter of minutes, they were both crying out their orgasms and holding on to each other, trembling and kissing each other softly.
'I love you,' Hermione murmured into his neck as he caught his breath.
'I love you too.' Severus kissed her cheek and climbed off her quickly, aware that the children were effectively locked in his lab.
They dressed, and Severus flicked his wand, removing all of the charms and wards and letting light back into the shop. He turned to Hermione and winked at her, and she brushed her hair back from her flushed face.
Hermione grinned at him and smiled as he went to fetch the children.
The End
A/N: Hi everyone. Just wanted to say a huge thanks to Kizzy, who has worked so hard on this and been a wonderful friend into the bargain. Also, thank you to you, readers. Your reviews have made me giggle and smile, and that's always a good thing. And to RobisonRocket here at The Petulant Poetess, for doing such a sterling job sifting out the errors Kizzy and I both missed!
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Latest 25 Reviews for Would Like To Meet
371 Reviews | 7.91/10 Average
Another awesome fic - can't believe it was one of your first. I loved it! I've enjoyed reading all of your stories. Thank you again for writing!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Lol... Thank you s much. I know you're reading everything so I hope it doesn't disappoint x
Fun ending! :D
Thannk you for sharing!
Very entertaining not sure why I haven't seen this before.
I really liked this!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Katie, thank you so much! I love it when I get little reviews out of the blue like this!
That's very sweet.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks - I wrote it early in my writing, so it's a bit twee!
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
apparently, I don't mind twee. :) I'm not entirely sure what that is. You'd think I'd know all these things after reading so VERY many Fanfics, but I'm clueless.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
twee [twiː]adj Brit excessively sentimental, sweet, or pretty[from tweet, mincing or affected pronunciation of sweet]tweely advtweeness nhc_dict()
Collins English Dictionary – Complete and Unabridged 6th Edition 2003. © William Collins Sons & Co. Ltd 1979, 1986 © HarperCollins Publishers 1991, 1994, 1998, 2000, 2003
Sentimental slush... that's Twee! lol! Glad you like it though, it's what I write most of the time!
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
I LOVE sentimental slush. Fan fiction is relaxation and de-stress time and sentimental slush often seems to be what I need. LOL.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
tee hee... me too! If you love that, then my stuff is probably right up your alley!! Thanks for reading, and keep letting me know your thoughts xx
Wonderful story. I loved the scene where Severus proposed!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Ahh, thank you so much. I loved writing this!
Great job, especially for an early fic!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
! I am really surprised how well it's been recieved to be truthful - I cringe when I read it! lol
Great chapter. Hermione seems a bit insecure but Severus is learning how to make her feel better.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Yes. Relationships are a learning curve... even after 20 yrs, according to mr neelix!
Nice ending. I like the fact that it's not over so to speak, the kids are in the other room and still have some growing to do, the parents are very happy though which gives us the feeling that things will be just fine.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Totally - they will be fine, even if the journey to fine is a bit bumpy.
Lovely story. Loved Snape with a 14 yo daughter---although I wouldn't let my 14 yo date! ;) LOL
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Harsh! I had my first serious romance at 13. And I'm very glad I have a son and no daughters! lmao!
Brilliant story, really enjoyed it. Who is the third child??? :)
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
They had Zachary, Lizzie, then they lost a child, then they had Marcus :)Three children...
Anonymous
Well done finishing, neelix - a squee-worthy ending. I like that there was still a hint of sadness included to counter the happy ending just a little. Makes it more believable which is always good where Hermione and Severus are involved :)
Author's Response: I thought so too. I wanted it to be real - well, in as much as real gets where two ficticious magical characters in a ficticious world can get, anyway!
Thanks for reviewing regularly. Very much appreciated.
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story, I am so glad you wrote it and shared it with us!!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks, honey - and thank you for the review you left for my new story :) It's in the queue here now. I hope you enjoy it!
I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!! It's perfect!!! Well done, indeed!!! thank you for a wonderful story....What a great ride it's been!!! Looking forward to another story soon I hope!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Ahh,
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
. You've been such an enthusiastic reviewer, it makes me sad to say goodbye to this story! But rest assured. The first chapter of my new story is in the queue already....
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Whoohoo....OH I CAN'T WAIT....SEVERUS/HERMIONE?? YES PLEASE??......LOL THEY are MY OTP......I hope they sent it thru today! Whoohoohoooooo
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Was your new story on another site?? Can I go read it before it gets approved here???
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
lmao... the first 3 chapters are already up on Ash. And that answers your other question, I think!
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Whoohoo,,,yes, yes it does...........Heading to ASH now! Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A well chosen title: this was certainly what I wished for... errm, rather what Hermione ... or actually Severus...
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
I wish for Severus often. He never does what he does to Hermione though. I live in hope!
Missed this chapter somehow. Love spat. Poor Severus. Hermione should know better.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
They're naughty the two of them! All will be well though.
Lovely, Babes, just lovely. And what a glorious way to start one's birthday! I'm dusting off my pink, feathery fascinator as we speak ready to go to the wedding. I am getting an invite aren't I? Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Of course! Everyone is welcome...lol! Glad you enjoyed it!
Makeup sex and a public kiss to make every other woman envious, I want to live in one of your stories.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Me too! I want to be Hermione, to be truthful!
Wow, another great chapter! Loved the wakeup and the proposal. I just couldn't see him down on one knee begging!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
No, me either - although he would, if she asked him to!
All I can say is AWWWW!!! That was so romantic!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
lol.. glad you liked it!
How romantic! Bless Severus.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks for reading!
AHHHHHH...that was awesome!!! Breathtaking really. You are such a romantic Severus
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
aw, thanks! I am glad you liked it. Hang on...*shh...They're not supposed to know you're here! No, it's not slushy. Romantic is good. Yes, really.*Tsk. Insecure Wizard!
Response from sregner (Reviewer)
Yes Severus it is good......
I think I need to go wake up my husband and kiss him. . . darn, I need more stars to give!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
ahhh bless! I know what you mean, it does make you feel grateful!
okay, I know this will be TMI, but its not THAT cliche' to cry after truly great sex. Especially since, lets face reality, not every passion filled stroke is the one that makes you 'really' go AHHHHHH!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
TMI? I have no clue what that means! But someone gave me a nasty review saying it was cliche! I thought, how sad for you!