wow!  that was wonderful.  thanks muchly

Wow, at least they're headed further in the right direction now.  Hermione gasped and giggled. ‘Already?’ she asked him as she felt his erection probing her pubic hair.‘Already…. Always, I think.’ Severus chuckled softly. ‘Let me make love to you one more time before we go to sleep?’*snigger*  And how many "one more times" were there before sleep?  Love it, the next chapter's in a queue, so waiting for that to materialise!

Severus...the sex-god!  Yummy good

Neelix, that was not cheesy at all...I loved the emotional release of both after having wonderful sex with someone you love.  I still tear up with my husband of 10 years...so there you go.  Wonderful chapter.  I also read that you did ask Severus if he used a condom and he said no.  Well, baby makes three......

Wonderful chapter, absolutely wonderful!!!

Love that they were so very frank with each other. And that they feel so deeply about one another too!

Very Sweet! Of course she is ruined for other men LOL.

Very good! Thanks for "sharing"! ;)Livvy

Very nice!

Well darn me, that man is a MACHINE!!  Wth a quite magnificent tool (snerk!)  Love Hermione's "It can't be normal!"  Hell love, don't question it, you'll make it self-concious!

His cock was resting at the entrance of her pussy. "Don't even think about it," snarled Crookshanks.  Severus' pet chicken backed away nervously.

That Severus is always up for it! Hehe Hermione is one Lucky witch.

Lovely chapter!  Just the right amount of tenderness and passion in my opinion. I think Hermione is right about her never needing another man and I'm guessing Severus realises he's found all he wants in her too :-)

Gosh, the man's inexhaustible! ;)

Now they've gone and done it! :)

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!   OMGosh I LOVE IT!!!  Such an erotic and tender moment.. WOW!!  CAN'T WAIT for more....Whoohoo!!!   My favorite Line......it would seem that what I wanted,’ he paused as he searched her beautiful face, ‘what I wanted was you.’I love it!!!!  Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!! You made my day..BTW!!!   THANK YOU!!!!

Well, someone's going to be sore tomorrow... Great chapter!

That was brillantly funny, charming and sweet.  So very cute!!!!

I like all the emotion.  Severus has been pushing all his emotions down for years, it makes sense that allowing some through would be rather dramatic.  :)Excellent.

Very steamy.  :D

Not bad at all.

‘I ticked the ‘lifetime commitment’ box, Hermione,’ Severus murmured in her ear. ‘I thought you might want to know that.’I think that was probably exactly the right thing to say at the moment.  Not that she seemed to need a whole lot of encouragement. "Now he was going replace the bad memories with some new and definitely more enticing ones."Mission accomplished, I'd say.  Hopefully it is only the beginning of such memories.  I didn't think it was cheesy at all.I also loved the before and after photo thought.  Funny the things that go through your mind at such times.  At least there is no 'during photo'.  It think it would look something like the awful things they take at amusement parks while crashing down the hill of a roller coaster.Another fantastic chapter!  Keep 'em coming

Well... I bloody loved it!!!

I loved it!!! Wonderful lemons!!!

Lovely.  They deserve some emotion.

Finally!  Loved it, well done!  Now to see what happens next as I'm assuming no contraceptive was used?  ;)