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Would Like To Meet
neelix371 Reviews | 7.91/10 (371 Ratings, 0 Likes, 182 Favorites )
Two lonely hearts. One talented witch.
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Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.
Work with teenagers.
Obsessed with Alan Rickman and SS/HG fiction.
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Reviews for Would Like To Meet
Loved the character of Val--"her voice the result of a seventy a day habit"! That was priceless! And poor Severus, being caught in the waiting room by Hermione. Some days it just doesn't pay to get out of bed. Still, he shouldn't feel terribly embarrassed--obviously she was there for the very same thing, so neither one has anything to hold over the other. Even steven. They should instead take the opportunity to bitch together about how they can't find anybody halfway decent, and what's wrong with everybody else anyway? Somehow I don't think it will be quite that simple, though... Sev has an uncanny ability to complicate matters.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Yes, yes he does! He's so inward-looking, it takes external events beyond his control to make him see the light I think!
Great wsay to get past all the awkwardness. Loved Hermoine's speech and eager to read the next update.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thank you so much for reviewing. I wanted to make their argument feel real. I mean, we've all been there, right?
This is a great story. And that was a real apology, not a "I'm sorry you got mad " apology,
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Yes it was. He genuinely cares for her as a person, I think. He realised he'd been an arse.
i love the interaction between them. this is delightful! thank muchly
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm pleased you're enjoying it.
oh very good. I love it. Please continue!!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thank you! I can't believe how well this has been recieved, 'tis only a bit o fluff after all!
After all those good intentions, injuries, and misunderstandings, it was nice to see them speaking to each other civilly again. Lovely chapter! :D
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks so much :)
This is a lovely fic. I look forward to how they progress... was you old enough to know about 'lemons' when you wrote this LOL! I do hope so hehe. Look forward to the next update.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Darling, I'm 41! The lemonade may be a bit long out of the bottle this end but it still has some fizz, so yes, I think there may be lemons... not that far away too if I remember rightly!Thanks for reviewing!
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Goody!I was only teasing haha.
Wow! A man actually apologising - that's a new one on me!This really is a quite delightful fic - as usual you really have these two so 'in character'. Look forward to the next update now! :-)
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Ahhh thank you honey, you always say such nice things. As for them being in character, it's bloody hard to do, isn't it? Never sure if I get it quite right to be honest but thank you for saying so!
Anonymous
I like how you made her act the next day. I can't stand when he treats her badly in stories and she doesn't make him pay for it, and sometimes even ends up apologising herself when it's all his fault! I think this was much more believable, especially on Hermione's part.
Author's Response: lol.. Taken from real life, that one - I know how horrible I feel after an argument with mr neelix, but it doesn't mean I aoplogise if I'm not at fault! It does make me feel rubbish though, so ergo = Hermione!
Thanks for reviewing!
If they hook up without the matchmaker I'd protest paying! lol
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
LOL! This is Severus we're talking about - it's so NOT gonna happen! Thanks for reviewing.
If Severus is embarrassed now wait until they are matched. I wonder who will protest the loudest and who will capitulate first?
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
lmao.. the fall out is...different, thats for sure. Hope you like lemons...:)
Interesting that Hermione has resorted to using a dating service. No wonder she is disappointed it is difficult to judge whom you would find interesting from those short blurbs.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
I know, but have you seen how much those ads charge per word?? lol... thanks for reading and taking the time to review.
How embarrassing! Caught with his guard down by Hermione. He will be a bear in the morning. LOLNow that they've gotten around to filling out the forms, I hope that Val will have no trouble finding a match for them very soon. :D
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Mmm... he will be horrible won't he? If it were me I'd throw a sickie!
Aww, how sweet!! I liked it a lot!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Thanks!
I suspect this sort of thing happening is not as far-fetched as it might seem. I'm sure there are many people out there who just haven't worked out the obvious. And, for two intelligent people, these two are being particularly dense!However, I have every faith in you that you'll end up pointing them in the right direction - eventually! Look forward to more! :-)
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Awww, thanks!I just think they need a shove sometimes. Good job I am here to help!
Dumb dumbs. LOL. I wasn't expecting Hermione to actually SEE Severus at the Val lady's place. Poor, embarrassed Severus. He just needs a huggy-wuggy. I liked Val's confidence in her abilities, and the fact that she was a soul-mate finder. I think if someone could do that in real life, they'd be a billionaire!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Yes, if there really was such a thing, the person would be rich, and I'd be married to Alan Rickman.Meh!
Awww, bless their hearts..I hope Severus ins't too upset with Hermione after she saw him there...I hope she will stand up to him and give him what for is he does..LOL!!Well done, I love it!! Hope another update is coming soon!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Upset is an understatement I think... fall out coming up!
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Oh dear, well I hope in the midst of a heated argument, Severus will silence her, or vice versa with a "heated kiss"...Whoohoo!!!
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
well... silence happens but perhaps not in the way we want... yet!!
Poor Severus he can't see what is right under his nose.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
That's not his fault though, I don't think - he just has never considered Hermione in that light! Have faith..!!
Oh for heaven sake...both of you! Come on Neelix do your magic
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
*swishes wand.... nothing happens*I'll just have to WRITE a happy ending.... damn me if I wasn't born a Squib!
Response from sregner (Reviewer)
Even a Squib can do magic if they go by the name of Neelix.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
ahhh... bless you! I have a stinking cold on the way and that's made me feel loads better!
Anonymous
Poor Severus - his ultimate nightmare!
Author's Response: I know. I can totally feel his mortification. And like the man he is, he will blame Hermione of course!
Oh dear! The chance meeting in the hallway, I do hope that Severus will be open to the possibilty of Hermoine being his true soul mate. lovely update. Eager to read more.
Response from neelix (Author of Would Like To Meet)
Sort of get the feeling it wont be so simple, don't you? Please keep reading!