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At the Beach
chivalric530 Reviews | 530 Ratings, 0 Likes, 378 Favorites )
Ten years after the war, a man takes a stroll along the beach and meets someone from his past.
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for At the Beach
I'm slowly catching up with this story again, and I love theslow pace of it. Small wonder Hermione isn't really happy, as she's unable to really use her brain. She's ahead of Sev/Carlos though in recognising who he reminds her of, but I'm sure, with his skills, he won't befar behind. I love the way he's prepared to take his timewith her, but if he leaves it too long, it will be time for herto go. Can't have that!
Response from chivalric (Author of At the Beach)
I can tell you that she'll have to leave soon ;-)Thanks for catching up, and thanks for leaving a review.
Loved the writing in this chapter - the characters are sowell drawn, it's easy to feel we know them. Poor HermioneTessa seems to be more damaged than Severus/Carlos (I'm confused) was - at least he knewenough to make a definite plan and carry it out. I likehis directness, although it would be more confronting than Tessa seemed to find it. Is there a sense underneath it all that perhaps they've known each other before? It would explain both her fear and her wish to trust him.
Response from chivalric (Author of At the Beach)
I don't know if you've read the next chapter(s), because then, you'll learn that they both have the feeling to know each other without being able to put the finger on a name or a face. After all, it's ten years after the war, he's supposed dead, and she's married to someone she doesn't love anymore. Life has changed them, but eventually, they will recognise each other.Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Fantastic story with just the right amount of angst and wonderful romance. A bonus that most of my least favourite people get kicked too!
Response from chivalric (Author of At the Beach)
And your least favourite people would be... hmmm, Molly and Ron? I'll update - hopefully - in about a week. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Wow **Gulps** I hope they can figure out a way to get around the wizarding laws and be together. They both deserve happiness.
Response from chivalric (Author of At the Beach)
I promise to find a way. It just might take a while... another four chapters, to be precise ;-)Tahnks for reading and reviewing!
well, this was lovely. it was painful to endure snape's ruminations about everything, but it felt very believable. and you brought tears to my eyes with their poignant reunion. well done! :D
Response from chivalric (Author of At the Beach)
Just as a warning, dear, trouble is to come. Just a few more chapters, but there will be a bit more action in it than in this chapter.Hope you have a great new year, hugs from Germany, and thanks for reviewing!