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Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything
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All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17: Epilogue

All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

debjunk

479 Reviews   |   479 Ratings, 0 Likes, 132 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 45,150 Words 17 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione Granger had a job that gave her everything she wanted. However, money can't buy the one thing she desires most, the love of the reclusive Severus Snape.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Epilogue


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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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10/10

beaweasley2

Oh gads, Severus used the Unforgivable? Hope Hermione is all right.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He did.  He really didn't have much of a choice.  St. Mungo's will hopefully patch Hermoine up to be as good as new.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He did.  He really didn't have much of a choice.  St. Mungo's will hopefully patch Hermoine up to be as good as new.

8/10

MlleGigi

I just had to write a comment...because the funny thing is that a couple of days ago, I myself was listening to Mozart's Requiem on my CD player and singing along with the parts that I knew well (and privately wondered if perhaps I wasn't a bit bonkers for doing so -- let's face it, it's not exactly the Top 40 and hardly the sort of thing to which most people could imagine singing along)!  I should confess, however, that I'm actually not a huge Mozart fan and the Requiem is one of the few pieces for which I have a strong liking.  Dies irae, dies illa...

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Lol.  You quoted my favorite part.  I guess I'm not most people, because I love to sing along with it.  I suppose having performed it before has nothing to do with it at all.  Singing along to classical choral pieces just seems normal to me!  (Maybe we're both bonkers?)  Beethoven's 9th is another good one.  Thanks for the review.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Lol.  You quoted my favorite part.  I guess I'm not most people, because I love to sing along with it.  I suppose having performed it before has nothing to do with it at all.  Singing along to classical choral pieces just seems normal to me!  (Maybe we're both bonkers?)  Beethoven's 9th is another good one.  Thanks for the review.

10/10

Marble Meadow

NOooooo! I clicked on the little arrow on the side.. the one that makes me so happy... but there is not another chapter there!The fate of the world may very well rest on your finishing this fic... immediately. Lol. It's wonderful. I love it.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Well, I would love to do as you wish and finish this fic immediately, but I don't think that the admins would appreciate all of those chapters uploaded at once.  However. I hope I can brighten your day a tiny bit by informing you that the next chapter is waiting to be validated.  I certainly hope that the world can wait a little longer until this fic is completely finished!  Thank you for your review.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Well, I would love to do as you wish and finish this fic immediately, but I don't think that the admins would appreciate all of those chapters uploaded at once.  However. I hope I can brighten your day a tiny bit by informing you that the next chapter is waiting to be validated.  I certainly hope that the world can wait a little longer until this fic is completely finished!  Thank you for your review.

10/10

braye27

Their encounter with Rodolphus Lestrange was a frantic one!  I hope Hermione will be all right.Severus didn't hesitate to Apparate her to St. Mungo's even though it would mean that he would be seen!  Hooray for Severus!Please update soon.  This is so good!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Believe it or not, Severus' reclusive behaviors are the last thing on his mind right now.  He'll deal with that after this major emergency.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Believe it or not, Severus' reclusive behaviors are the last thing on his mind right now.  He'll deal with that after this major emergency.

10/10

BrenaMarie

Oh No!  I hate cliffies!  That was a great update and I can't wait to see how Severus deals with being in St. Mungos when hes trying to be a recluse!  Anyways, I'll be patiently waiting for Chapter 8!  Cheers ~

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I'll admit that I too hate cliffies.  But we authors live to befuddle our reader's minds, I think.  I have sent the next chapter to SW, so, it won't be an incredibly long time in between updates.  Recluse and St. Mungo's don't really jive, do they?

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I'll admit that I too hate cliffies.  But we authors live to befuddle our reader's minds, I think.  I have sent the next chapter to SW, so, it won't be an incredibly long time in between updates.  Recluse and St. Mungo's don't really jive, do they?

0/10

kimjo2

whoa!  that was an exciting scene!  great update.  thanks so much

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you so much.  You never know what's behind that closed door!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you so much.  You never know what's behind that closed door!

9/10

helshez

Nice bit of drama there. Pride comes before a fall as they say, and I guess Hermione's had a bit of a fall. Lucky Severus was there to catch her. Now she'll owe him her life and get all emotional. Good things could come from this, as long as she doesn't die or anything.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Good and bad things could come from all of this. But everything will probably work out in the end.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Good and bad things could come from all of this. But everything will probably work out in the end.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

It'll be coming along soon.  Thanks.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

It'll be coming along soon.  Thanks.

10/10

sinbad

Great chapter, I loved Severus's protective side.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  He's protective, definitely.  It comes out a bit rough from him, though.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  He's protective, definitely.  It comes out a bit rough from him, though.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Brilliant chapter.  I love all the drama.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks so much.  I always love a little excitement in a story.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks so much.  I always love a little excitement in a story.

10/10

MsPrinceMalfoy

Aww, poor Hermione! This was an amazing chapter, I didn't expect Lestrange to be hiding in his house.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you so much!  I'm not sure that Severus and Hermione fully expected to see him there either, but there he was.  At least Severus did the bugger in.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you so much!  I'm not sure that Severus and Hermione fully expected to see him there either, but there he was.  At least Severus did the bugger in.

0/10

sunny33

So, a curse that does the work of a lifetime of cigarettes! ewwk!  :)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Lol.  Yup.  Maybe it could be used to prevent teens from starting to smoke in High school.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Lol.  Yup.  Maybe it could be used to prevent teens from starting to smoke in High school.

0/10

snitchette

"Suffice it to say that the prompt certainly wouldn’t be fulfilled if this ended tragically. ;)"

Thanks for the tidbit of information: I won't need to pray all Gods tonight in bed for her life. ;o)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank heavens for that! 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank heavens for that! 

10/10

Muggline

OMG... what a great opportunity for Snape to show some compassion, isn't it? ;-)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yes, it is.  But will he let himself do so?

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yes, it is.  But will he let himself do so?

0/10

AmyLouise

An interesting take on Hermione, but would she really bein the multi-millionaire class on a bookseller's profits,however successful?  That's what it would take to own aMonet.  And a niggle - it's "maitre d'" (short for maitre d'hotel).

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Okay, so I went a bit overboard with the Monet.  But her real money comes from her quests.  Some of the books she has uncovered are worth a Monet in themselves, so you can imagine that her reward for finding one would be quite large.I'll fix that maitre d' thing.  I could have sworn I looked it up, but I find no evidence of my spelling anywhere.  Lol.  Must have been dreaming. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Okay, so I went a bit overboard with the Monet.  But her real money comes from her quests.  Some of the books she has uncovered are worth a Monet in themselves, so you can imagine that her reward for finding one would be quite large.I'll fix that maitre d' thing.  I could have sworn I looked it up, but I find no evidence of my spelling anywhere.  Lol.  Must have been dreaming. 

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for the update! Yes, it was an evil cliffhanger so I hope you will update real soon:-)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I'm-a workin' on it.  Thanks for the review.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I'm-a workin' on it.  Thanks for the review.

10/10

pookah

Glad to see an update!  I know you have  more on the way soon,  right?  Thanks for sharing this tale with us!  I like your wizarding library.  (Wish I haad one in my town.)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Of course more is on the way.  As for the library, it certainly would be nice to have one around.  It would be nice to have magic too!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Of course more is on the way.  As for the library, it certainly would be nice to have one around.  It would be nice to have magic too!

10/10

blue artemis

Poor Hermione.  

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

She's in a bit of a mess, isn't she?

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

She's in a bit of a mess, isn't she?

10/10

gabi1791

GAH!!!! More! Now!! Great chapter, I surely did not expect that!gab

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Some of the best things in life are unexpected.  I'm not sure if this qualifies, though.  Lol.  I'm rushing to get the next chapter up.  Thanks!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Some of the best things in life are unexpected.  I'm not sure if this qualifies, though.  Lol.  I'm rushing to get the next chapter up.  Thanks!

10/10

beaweasley2

It is so good that they opened up like this to each other. His purging of his old hates and self-incrimination, and her being honest enough to admit that she saw the bigger picture of what was going on around her.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I think her admissions helped him a great deal.  Thanks!

10/10

kizzy7

*sigh happily* So romantic. When Cecil said, "She truly sees you as you are, and not how you picture yourself to be." I said YES. That is why this couple makes so much sense. And now they are off on another adventure. I'm very envious of your Hermione! A truly wonderful end to a very satisfying tale!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I think we all want to find someone who sees us as we truly are.  Someone who looks beyond our human frailties to see the true person underneath.  If anyone deserves that, it's Severus Snape.  Thanks, hon.  Glad you liked it.

10/10

kizzy7

Oh, such a romantic proposal! I love reading proposal scenes, and this one was perfect. I cried as well when my husband proposed (but then again, that's just me. I'm an unashamed crier). And I thought it was cute when Severus thought he was making her miserable. Oh, Severus!!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Join the club... I too am an unashamed crier.  I bawl at movies constantly.  My husband just shakes his head.  At least I have an emotional 15 year old to share my crying jags with.  We just look at each other and give one another watery smiles.  Lol.

10/10

kizzy7

So many lines I loved in this chapter. The "you can't start a relationship based on a love of books." ~snort~ I found that almost satirical, because so often in our fandom they are attracted to each other because of their love of books. Just made me chuckle!! And all of her friends are there for her, that's wonderful!! And then the emotional aspect for Severus as well, with Cecil. A very excellent chapter.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Well, I guess bookworms attract.  Probably because they're the only ones in the library all day.  Ron, Harry, and Ginny are adults now.  Hopefully grown-up too.  So, I wanted them to be supportive of Hermione.  Thanks, kizzy!

10/10

Muggline

What a wonderful ending for an enchanting story. Thank You!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

Nessa

Finished! No!This was brilliant, I'm so glad it finished this way. I may just even read it all again in one, I could easily go through it all again. Please to don't hesitate to write another like this *grins* lol.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

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Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Finished... yes.  It's a bit sad to leave two people you've gotten really close to, but, life goes on.  I'm not out of story ideas yet, so you'll be seeing me again.

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