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Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything
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All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17: Epilogue

All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

debjunk

479 Reviews   |   479 Ratings, 0 Likes, 132 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 45,150 Words 17 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione Granger had a job that gave her everything she wanted. However, money can't buy the one thing she desires most, the love of the reclusive Severus Snape.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Epilogue


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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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sylvanawood

Oh, way to go, Hermione. Now she's back on track. Watch it, Severus, you're lost already, LOL.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

And he doesn't even know it yet!

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sylvanawood

That fifty year prediction was too funny. And now idiot Pierre is back.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Ah, the idiot indeed.  But maybe it will all work out for the best.

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sylvanawood

Oooh, good for him to apologize! He was way out of line here. Hermione shouldn't have to apologize for who she is and for following her own judgement. She's not telling him what to do and not to do either, after all. :D

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

So true, but sometimes Severus' mouth just runs away from him. 

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sylvanawood

Oh, that was a narrow escape for Hermione. She's very lucky that Severus was there.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

She's definitely was. 

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sylvanawood

Hehe, nice banter.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you!

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sylvanawood

What a good idea with the line of potions makers. I'd like to read that diary, too.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I'm sure they'll find it fascinating!

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sylvanawood

Well done, Hermione! He couldn't resist.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

She's definitely a clever witch. 

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sylvanawood

That Cecil is a great character. And now Hermione will meet Snape. Yay!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yup.  Things are looking up!

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sylvanawood

LOL. Don't we love Pierre. Good riddance. It's sweet from Ron to be concerned about her though.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I wanted a nice Ron here.  I enjoy bashing him usually.  He cares for Hermione here and wants what's best for her.

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sylvanawood

That's a great beginning. (I've read ahead, so the reviews will come quickly. :) )

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you so much!

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kimbee73

I loved this story and am sad to see it end. I liked the way she told him she was pregnant.BTW I'm pregnant... brilliant!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  It was a bit of an abrupt reveal, wasn't it?  I think she likes to shock Severus at times because he's so unflappable!  I'm sad it's over too, but it was really fun to write... even more so than I originally thought it would be.

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livvy6

Liked the "I'm pregnant, btw." I love happy endings!Very sweet story.Thanks,Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I'm a sucker for happy endings.  I hate seeing people miserable in fiction.  RL is hard enough.  You've been quite the busy reader.  Thanks for whipping through this.  I appreciate you doing so.  I'm glad you enjoyed it too. 

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livvy6

Nice little romantic scene there. Very sweet.Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you.  Can't live without these little scenes!

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livvy6

I can see now how you had him as a Dumbledore stand-in. Dumbledore never gave Severus the love and respect that he had EARNED after years of faithful service. I know after I read DH, I was completely off Dumbledore. Still am.Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I really don't like Dumbledore.  You get to the point that you don't even know if the caring he showed was real or not.  Even if it was, he was willing to forget it all to achieve his goal.  Not a nice person.

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livvy6

Yeah! That was lovely. I'm glad they did a do-over gondola ride :)Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

She had the right idea. 

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livvy6

Oh, that was fabulous! Severus to the rescue. I liked that he hexed the bastard's bits. I also liked how he was able to think through all she was saying and not get stuck in one part of it and get angry.Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I think the shock of what she was saying helped him to stay calm.  Heh, heh, never mess with Severus' woman!  Even if he's not claiming her yet.

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livvy6

Oh, crap! Hermione needs to watch it! Where is Severus? I hope he finds her!Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Unfortunately, she can't think straight right now.  At least Severus will wake up in time!

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livvy6

Whoa! Didn't see the ghost coming! Wonder if it is the ghost of Holt himself?Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

You got that one right!

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livvy6

That was the best therepy for Snape: a person who believed in him. This was a lovely chapter. Nice little part in there about Pierre:)Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Pierre did something good unintentionally, opening the door for this conversation to ensue.

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livvy6

It is funny to read how Severus' will keeps on breaking down. She'll get through his defenses soon!Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He can't help himself, but he really doesn't want to go down that road, nor does he think anything would work with it.

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livvy6

That seemed to be a major step in their relationhip. It could ahve gone either way, but it came out all right in the end. Well Done!Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

It really was, and Severus was really angry.  He almost didn't come back, but something pushed him to do it.  (I think it was my beta... she didn't like him leaving her high and dry.)  A much more satisfying outcome in any case.

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livvy6

Oh, crap! Well, we'll have to take a detour into our adveture. Going to the next chapter!Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

It's an interesting detour, at least.

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livvy6

Nice little detour into flirting, getting to know each other. Very nice.Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks, hon.

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livvy6

The minx! She's going for a two-for-one! Very interesting about diary. I hope they find something good in it to help the search.Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Hermione knows that a little business and pleasure can mix if the situation is right.

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livvy6

Hah! She wore him down. Good for her, she didn't try to pester him into it. Hermione has grown-up indeed.Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

She has, and it's nice to see.  She knew the carrot she dangled in front of him would finally convince him.  At least, she hoped!

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