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Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything
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All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17: Epilogue

All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

debjunk

479 Reviews   |   479 Ratings, 0 Likes, 132 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 45,150 Words 17 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione Granger had a job that gave her everything she wanted. However, money can't buy the one thing she desires most, the love of the reclusive Severus Snape.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Epilogue


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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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0/10

chloeshellie

it just keeps getting better

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Doesn't it though?  They're so fun together.  Of course, Severus will be a hard nut to crack, and it will take Hermione a lot of work to get him.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Doesn't it though?  They're so fun together.  Of course, Severus will be a hard nut to crack, and it will take Hermione a lot of work to get him.

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chloeshellie

Again let me say YAAAAAAY! love this story

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks so much!  I am honored that you like it so much.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks so much!  I am honored that you like it so much.

0/10

chloeshellie

YAAAAAAAY!!!!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I take it you liked it?  Lol

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I take it you liked it?  Lol

0/10

chloeshellie

i love the way you've written hermione in this story.  I'm sure the best is yet to come.  very enjoyable

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  I'm glad you like this Hermione.  She is quite fun to write.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  I'm glad you like this Hermione.  She is quite fun to write.

0/10

chloeshellie

poor hermione  i 'm sure things will be looking up for her soon.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Hermione really needs someone who can understand her.  Hmm, who could that be?

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Hermione really needs someone who can understand her.  Hmm, who could that be?

0/10

chloeshellie

excellent beginning!  i'm on to the next chapter:)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you.  I'm glad you like it so far.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you.  I'm glad you like it so far.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Another great chapter. I liked their interaction!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  I appreciate your support. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  I appreciate your support. 

9/10

helshez

Cool. I think Sev isstarting to warm to her abit,. At least he seems to be relaxing a bit around her. Maybe his hermitage is drawing to a close?

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He is starting to get a bit close, but I don't think he's willing to lose his hermit-like existence yet!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He is starting to get a bit close, but I don't think he's willing to lose his hermit-like existence yet!

10/10

trekchick

Love how this is coming along. Looking forward to more soon.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  They do seem to be getting along well.  As well as can be expected with Snark-man as your companion.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  They do seem to be getting along well.  As well as can be expected with Snark-man as your companion.

0/10

sunny33

Perhaps she could dress him up for the trip ;)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Hmm, that would be interesting.  But I think he'd take offense.  After all, he can dress himself.  (And quite well, when he puts his mind to it.)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Hmm, that would be interesting.  But I think he'd take offense.  After all, he can dress himself.  (And quite well, when he puts his mind to it.)

0/10

soccermom

I really love this story so far.  Looking forward to reading more soon.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, thanks so much!  We can only hope for the best between these two.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, thanks so much!  We can only hope for the best between these two.

10/10

beaweasley2

Yes, they are getting sidetracked. Severus incognito as Bruce Wayne... Polyjuice Potion! Just snag a random blokes hair and gulp it down - better than a bat mask and cape!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yes, you would think that sidetracked would be good.  But you never know in the Wizarding world, now do you?  As for our Dark Knight, Hermione can make random comments like, when they find the book she can yell, "Holy ancient tomes, Batman!"When they Apparate, there can be little words left behind like, Boff, Bam, Pow.Or in a more modern version, Severus can jump around corners and yell in people's faces, "I'm Batman!"

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yes, you would think that sidetracked would be good.  But you never know in the Wizarding world, now do you?  As for our Dark Knight, Hermione can make random comments like, when they find the book she can yell, "Holy ancient tomes, Batman!"When they Apparate, there can be little words left behind like, Boff, Bam, Pow.Or in a more modern version, Severus can jump around corners and yell in people's faces, "I'm Batman!"

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

10/10

blue artemis

That was cute.  I like how easily his feathers are ruffled. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, he's very insecure and oversensitive.  If I hadn't spoken to anyone in five years, I might be too.  The man truly needs help to lighten up.  Hopefully, Hermione can give that to him.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, he's very insecure and oversensitive.  If I hadn't spoken to anyone in five years, I might be too.  The man truly needs help to lighten up.  Hopefully, Hermione can give that to him.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Another brilliant chapter.  This has a great flow.  Until next time.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, thank you, that's really sweet of you to say.  I'm honored you feel that way, really.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, thank you, that's really sweet of you to say.  I'm honored you feel that way, really.

9/10

sinbad

Hermione's teasing Severus about clothes was kind of funny, but so unlike her.  Where is her sense of humor coming from?  Has the war changed her this much?

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks for reviewing all six chapters.  I really appreciate it!  I guess it is unlike her.  I kind of want this story to be a bit more lighthearted, considering the prompt.  (Not that it won't have its bit of adventure and, I want to say angst, but I'm not quite sure it's quite that serious.)  So, again, I think that it goes back to her thinking she deserves to be pampered.  She's seen it all and lived the worst of it all.  She deserves a good life.  She's not that teenager who had her nose in a book constantly anymore.  She realizes life is too short to not enjoy it.  (Thus the millions of boyfriends.)  She's matured into a woman who isn't that insecure young lady who couldn't even flirt with Ron.  She likes herself, so she can now laugh at herself, and thus can joke around, even with Snape.  I hope that makes sense.  It does in my scatterbrained mind, but who knows what the translation into real thought is. 

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

Seeing where you are coming from certainly helped me sort the story out better.  Now it makes more sense. Thanks.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks for reviewing all six chapters.  I really appreciate it!  I guess it is unlike her.  I kind of want this story to be a bit more lighthearted, considering the prompt.  (Not that it won't have its bit of adventure and, I want to say angst, but I'm not quite sure it's quite that serious.)  So, again, I think that it goes back to her thinking she deserves to be pampered.  She's seen it all and lived the worst of it all.  She deserves a good life.  She's not that teenager who had her nose in a book constantly anymore.  She realizes life is too short to not enjoy it.  (Thus the millions of boyfriends.)  She's matured into a woman who isn't that insecure young lady who couldn't even flirt with Ron.  She likes herself, so she can now laugh at herself, and thus can joke around, even with Snape.  I hope that makes sense.  It does in my scatterbrained mind, but who knows what the translation into real thought is. 

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

Seeing where you are coming from certainly helped me sort the story out better.  Now it makes more sense. Thanks.

9/10

sinbad

The almost 1000 yr old diary was interesting.  Why is Severus willing to share it though?

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He's willing to share it because Hermione has peaked his interest.  If he can help with the diary, then he can actually see and touch what will certainly become the most sought after tome in history. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He's willing to share it because Hermione has peaked his interest.  If he can help with the diary, then he can actually see and touch what will certainly become the most sought after tome in history. 

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kimjo2

oh yes.  the more time the better!  lovely update.  thanks so much

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks so much!  We're all happy with a little Sev/Herm time now, aren't we?

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks so much!  We're all happy with a little Sev/Herm time now, aren't we?

9/10

sinbad

nice chapter, Severus was as bitter and nasty as ever.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He's not really good with people.  Lol Thank you!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He's not really good with people.  Lol Thank you!

9/10

sinbad

I do believe Severus will have bug bears.  I like the logical flow in this chapter.  If any one can help Hermione find this book (if it really exists) it would be Severus or one of his contacts.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He's really a logical choice, even if she didn't have the hots for him.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He's really a logical choice, even if she didn't have the hots for him.

9/10

sinbad

I find it hard to believe that Hermione has become such a clothes horse.  I know you cited it as an indulgence but it seems a bit strange.  I do love the fact that she is still smart as a whip.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

That was the most challenging thing for me with this prompt.  I've never written an Hermione who is so grounded in the materialistic things of this world.  That said, it has been a blast.  My take is that Hermione went through horrible things during the war and she feels that she deserves to pamper herself a bit because of all that she's been through.  She is often in the public eye and wants her best foot forward, so to speak. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

That was the most challenging thing for me with this prompt.  I've never written an Hermione who is so grounded in the materialistic things of this world.  That said, it has been a blast.  My take is that Hermione went through horrible things during the war and she feels that she deserves to pamper herself a bit because of all that she's been through.  She is often in the public eye and wants her best foot forward, so to speak. 

10/10

sinbad

Hmm I can totally see Hermione owning and operating a book store and comparing her to Indiana Jones is funny.  Even though she didn't have adventures looking for her books, she certainly had them in Hogwarts.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

She did, and the papers continue to give her many, even though her 'adventures' now really aren't all that exciting.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

She did, and the papers continue to give her many, even though her 'adventures' now really aren't all that exciting.

10/10

braye27

Umm umm umm umm umm.... Severus Snape in dark gray slacks and a navy shirt, with sunglasses and his hair tied back.....  What I wouldn't give to see that!!!This chapter is so much fun!   Not only are they working on the Potions of our Time project, now they are working on locating Incantations for Potions for Severus!!!  AND Snape is going to accompany Hermione to Leeds!  Woot!  I wonder if someone will recognize him going into or leaving the university library?  There have to be a few complications, right?I laughed when Hermione "pulled his leg" about her tastes in clothes shopping.  (I wonder what Severus would have done if she had literally pulled his leg?  I'm have bad thoughts now, aren't I?  *Sigh*)Great chapter!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

You made me blush!  Lol.  Hermione knows that now's not quite the time to pull his leg.  ROFL.  Between Hermione's lavish wardrobe and Severus' outings incognito, this fic will be redubbed the 'fashion plate' fic soon.  There's more non black attire for him to come.  I think his best outfit will be... well, I can't say, because that's a few chapters ahead.  (And no, it's not his birthday suit!  Shame on you for thinking that!)As for complications, there will be some in the next chapter, but it won't involve being recognized.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

You made me blush!  Lol.  Hermione knows that now's not quite the time to pull his leg.  ROFL.  Between Hermione's lavish wardrobe and Severus' outings incognito, this fic will be redubbed the 'fashion plate' fic soon.  There's more non black attire for him to come.  I think his best outfit will be... well, I can't say, because that's a few chapters ahead.  (And no, it's not his birthday suit!  Shame on you for thinking that!)As for complications, there will be some in the next chapter, but it won't involve being recognized.

10/10

snitchette

*mega squee* You're absolutely right they're spending time with one another and it's all that mattered. And Severus is so cute when he  believes her little prank on clothes. So very disapointed he was. Poor thing.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yes, now he will fume for the rest of the evening, because he's just that snarky. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yes, now he will fume for the rest of the evening, because he's just that snarky. 

10/10

BrenaMarie

This story is so cute & fun!  I love it!  Thanks for the update.  Hope to see the next chappie soon!  Cheers!  ~Brena

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks.  It is a rather lighthearted romp.  The book search in the next chappie will bring them a bit of adventure and some more serious stuff.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks.  It is a rather lighthearted romp.  The book search in the next chappie will bring them a bit of adventure and some more serious stuff.

10/10

snapeygirl

Update soon!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Okay!  I plan on it.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Okay!  I plan on it.

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