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All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything
debjunk479 Reviews | 6.69/10 (479 Ratings, 0 Likes, 132 Favorites )
Hermione Granger had a job that gave her everything she wanted. However, money can't buy the one thing she desires most, the love of the reclusive Severus Snape.
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
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And now they're off on an adventure ... together! Things are looking up.Loved the Batman reference.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you! I can just see him skulking around corners with a batman mask on. Same cape, of course, billowing behind him. Mwahahaha.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you! I can just see him skulking around corners with a batman mask on. Same cape, of course, billowing behind him. Mwahahaha.
I'm looking forward to seeing their relationship develop as they search for the missing text.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Me too! That's really the best part of this fic, isn't it?
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Me too! That's really the best part of this fic, isn't it?
His curiosity has gotten the better of him.I'm enjoying your tale.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
How could it not? Hermione has the perfect bait.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
How could it not? Hermione has the perfect bait.
'...she had thought that deep down, Severus Snape was a person that no one really knew."Truer words were never spoken!Lovely tale.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Indeed. He's one of those who keeps to himself. You only see the surface and miss all of the subtle nuances because he keeps them so well hidden.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Indeed. He's one of those who keeps to himself. You only see the surface and miss all of the subtle nuances because he keeps them so well hidden.
I've dated guys like that ... sigh. (Not in a long time, of course, being happily married for nearly thirty years!)Looking forward to more.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Cnogratulations! I've been married for sixteen. But, yes, guys like that are everywhere. They're especially good looking, like Pierre, too.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Cnogratulations! I've been married for sixteen. But, yes, guys like that are everywhere. They're especially good looking, like Pierre, too.
I love the name of Hermione's shop! It's perfect for her.You've made a wonderful start to your story. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you! I thought it was perfect for her too. It's a great job as well.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you! I thought it was perfect for her too. It's a great job as well.
Lovely, well written chapter. I'm enjoying this fic immensely.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you! It has been immensely fun to write.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you! It has been immensely fun to write.
The way he examined the bookmark, the reverance he had was so touching. I can't wait until she breaks into his shell and he relaizes she'd wiggled in. Nice chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
I can't either. It's hard to wait with everyone. Of course, I know what's going to happen, so I'm one up on you.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
I can't either. It's hard to wait with everyone. Of course, I know what's going to happen, so I'm one up on you.
I hope it doesn't take 50 years, although that would be a nice long story, wouldn't it? The bit with the gift was really sweet.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
It would definitely be a nice long BORING story! We'd all be dead before the dang thing ended, leaving no one to laugh or cry when Severus and Hermione dropped dead themselves.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
It would definitely be a nice long BORING story! We'd all be dead before the dang thing ended, leaving no one to laugh or cry when Severus and Hermione dropped dead themselves.
LOL Good imagery. I've been snickering of the Snape/Dumbledrore kiss. Haha
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thanks. It really does make you shudder just thinking about it, doesn't it? Lol.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thanks. It really does make you shudder just thinking about it, doesn't it? Lol.
We can only hope it doesn’t take the full fifty years to get him swayed.I would say a bit of jealousy will surely help him to get around the notion more quickly. So maybe Pierre's return won't be so unbearable...
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
It'll be unbearable for Hermione, no doubt. Jealousy sometimes works to make a person see what he doesn't want to.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
It'll be unbearable for Hermione, no doubt. Jealousy sometimes works to make a person see what he doesn't want to.
still love it
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
So very glad!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
So very glad!
Oh bugger. If if weren't for an interesting story's sake, one should grab her by the shoulders and shake her out of her reverie... But as it is, I am very much looking forward to them beating about the bush
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
I think that if she chose to attack him, he might not be so negative to her advances, but he hasn't shown any of that to her. He's so internal, it's hard to know what he's thinking. Or, with his sarcasm and cutting comments, it's easy for Hermione to think that she's arch enemy number one. She'd rather take a long time and secure his love, than rush in and bungle the whole affair, having him shun her forever. So, as you said, they'll beat about the bush a bit longer.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
I think that if she chose to attack him, he might not be so negative to her advances, but he hasn't shown any of that to her. He's so internal, it's hard to know what he's thinking. Or, with his sarcasm and cutting comments, it's easy for Hermione to think that she's arch enemy number one. She'd rather take a long time and secure his love, than rush in and bungle the whole affair, having him shun her forever. So, as you said, they'll beat about the bush a bit longer.
Brilliant chapter and look forward to more.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you! Glad you had fun with it.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you! Glad you had fun with it.
Oh wow, I have the first few chapters of a fic written with the same idea (taking a Portkey to a fancy restaurant in Paris)! Mine was going to be for the Anything Goes challenge also, but I didn't have enough of it done by the deadline. I'm now wondering if I should change that part... Or maybe I'll just chalk it up to the idea of great minds thinking alike (even though I have no idea who you are, Anonymous Author)!Anyway, good writing so far!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Oh, don't worry about it! Portkeys are very common and if you're going to Paris, you had better eat at a fancy restaurant. What would be the point of the visit otherwise? It's not like they have great museums and architecture there. Lol. Great minds do think alike! Thanks for your review.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Oh, don't worry about it! Portkeys are very common and if you're going to Paris, you had better eat at a fancy restaurant. What would be the point of the visit otherwise? It's not like they have great museums and architecture there. Lol. Great minds do think alike! Thanks for your review.
Severus and Hermione are making progress... on deciphering the diary and on their relationship.And what can Pierre be up to? He is so enamored of himself that he must have convinced himself that Hermione would have, by now, come to her senses and fallen head over heels for him. Hummmmmm... maybe this is just the "push" that Severus needs to get him to give voice to his feelings for Hermione. Now that would be a splendid thing, wouldn't it?I love this story!Beth
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
You've got Pierre pegged. I'm sure the encounter will give Severus a push, but he doesn't move very quickly. It would be very splendid if he just said something to Hermione. She would be thrilled at least. He will come to some realizations, but sit on them for a while in typically Snape/recluse fashion.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
You've got Pierre pegged. I'm sure the encounter will give Severus a push, but he doesn't move very quickly. It would be very splendid if he just said something to Hermione. She would be thrilled at least. He will come to some realizations, but sit on them for a while in typically Snape/recluse fashion.
oh- hopefully it wouldn't take 50 years....I want to see them together soon and maybe Severus is making the first step,....maybe he could be such an uncredible romantic person...
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He will turn out to be quite romantic when the time comes. However, he is slow to warm up. The man has a lot of baggage when it comes to lady-folk. Don't worry, it won't take fifty years. Arithmancy is a touchy subject, and variables have a way of changing.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He will turn out to be quite romantic when the time comes. However, he is slow to warm up. The man has a lot of baggage when it comes to lady-folk. Don't worry, it won't take fifty years. Arithmancy is a touchy subject, and variables have a way of changing.
Wonder how long until he realizes she is after him? Another great chapter!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He's a bit obtuse in that area. It will finally hit him over the head, but not quite yet. Thank you
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
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Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He's a bit obtuse in that area. It will finally hit him over the head, but not quite yet. Thank you
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
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Glad to see this update. You do a nice job with Snape's thoughts. it is natural for him to be ambivalent. Thanks for writing this and sharing.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you. I'm always trying to make Snape realistic. Sometimes I do a better job than at other times. Lol. I'm hoping that this little adventure of mine has him pretty closely in character. I appreciate the feedback that it went over well in this chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you. I'm always trying to make Snape realistic. Sometimes I do a better job than at other times. Lol. I'm hoping that this little adventure of mine has him pretty closely in character. I appreciate the feedback that it went over well in this chapter.
Yay, what a sweet chapter!! More, please!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you! I just sent the next chappie to SW.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you! I just sent the next chappie to SW.
Hy normally I am a lurker, but this story is again one that I want to read daily...so please update soon the next chapthis story is beautyful
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you, Severina! I'm glad I brought you out of your hiding place. The next chapter is in the queue. Yay.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you, Severina! I'm glad I brought you out of your hiding place. The next chapter is in the queue. Yay.
I really like how you hae written Severus in this chapter. Not perfect, and deeply caring, but still unwilling to admit it. Nice job.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Oh, good. I'm glad you liked him. I was a bit nervous about how he would appear. I didn't want him to come across as too different or changed. I'm glad it read well.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Oh, good. I'm glad you liked him. I was a bit nervous about how he would appear. I didn't want him to come across as too different or changed. I'm glad it read well.
Excellent story so far. Can't wait to read more.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you very much. I'm working on getting up as much as I can before the deadline for voting.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thank you very much. I'm working on getting up as much as I can before the deadline for voting.
more, more, more...........
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Updating, updating, updating. Thanks, thanks, thanks.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Updating, updating, updating. Thanks, thanks, thanks.
nice cliffie:) on to the next chapter!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
You're just saying that because the next chapter is up and you don't have to wait! But thank you anyway, I appreciate it.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
You're just saying that because the next chapter is up and you don't have to wait! But thank you anyway, I appreciate it.