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All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything
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Hermione Granger had a job that gave her everything she wanted. However, money can't buy the one thing she desires most, the love of the reclusive Severus Snape.
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
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Uh oh, bad guy alert! And Sev is busy sulking...
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He is. That could prove to be very unfortunate. Poor Hermione.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He is. That could prove to be very unfortunate. Poor Hermione.
wow! that was an evil cliffie! i hope steve the swine gets his just desserts and i don't mean chocolate! thanks so much
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Yeah, chocolate would be too good for such a jerk. He'll get what's coming to him.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Yeah, chocolate would be too good for such a jerk. He'll get what's coming to him.
oh dear Severus!! Silly Man!!Now go and save her haha!!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He really is silly. The man wouldn't recognize affection if it tweaked his nose. But he'll soon come to a startling revelation.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He really is silly. The man wouldn't recognize affection if it tweaked his nose. But he'll soon come to a startling revelation.
WHAT! WHAT!!!!! Oh no madam this will not do, not at all! Please, please next chapter! And I hope that Severus kicks "steve" in the balls when he comes to rescue our Hermione
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
I've sent the next chapter to be beta'd, so it should be up relatively soon. Then all of your hopes and dreams will hopefully come true.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
I've sent the next chapter to be beta'd, so it should be up relatively soon. Then all of your hopes and dreams will hopefully come true.
Oh no! Crazy date rapist! Get him away! Get him away! Severus, where are you???
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Severus comes bounding around the corner in a batman suit and saves the day. At least, you can hope...
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Severus comes bounding around the corner in a batman suit and saves the day. At least, you can hope...
AAAAUUURRRGGGHHHHH! *tears at hair, grits teeth* Have you no mercy?? Poor Hermione...never speak to 'friendly Americans' that might happen upon you while in Europe. I'm curious about the list of potions that were contained in the book. Perhaps someone we know could use a couple of them to take the edge off his snark or make the outside match the heart deep within??? Also, I think it's interesting that you used the idea of a tatoo being the mark of "mastry of trade". Did you take the idea from medievil guilds? Very clever! Please update soon. Cheers!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Sorry, it must be obvious to you by now that I have no mercy whatsoever! Actually, I see myself as a very kindhearted person. Lol.As for the potion you request, I'm sure there's something in there, but do we really want to take away his snark? And I'm sure a transformation that's genuine and not drug related would be much preferred by Hermione. Oh, if it were only that easy!I've read a couple of other stories where there have been some kind of tattoo or mark given for accomplishment in potions or some other study. That's where I got the idea. I'm sure Severus is proud of this tattoo, as opposed to the one that graces his arm.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Sorry, it must be obvious to you by now that I have no mercy whatsoever! Actually, I see myself as a very kindhearted person. Lol.As for the potion you request, I'm sure there's something in there, but do we really want to take away his snark? And I'm sure a transformation that's genuine and not drug related would be much preferred by Hermione. Oh, if it were only that easy!I've read a couple of other stories where there have been some kind of tattoo or mark given for accomplishment in potions or some other study. That's where I got the idea. I'm sure Severus is proud of this tattoo, as opposed to the one that graces his arm.
Uh oh, this can't be good! Hopefully Severus will come to her rescue! Or she'll use her magic skills to hex the guy!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
It's definitely not good. She needs someone to intervene, and quickly!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
It's definitely not good. She needs someone to intervene, and quickly!
Hmmm, I definitely do not trust this guy. I hope Hermione will be okay... perhaps with the help of Severus? Those two can be sooo frustrating! They both want the same thing, and yet neither will admit it, so they are stuck at an impasse of sorts, grrrr! Well, any relationship involving Severus Snape would definitely be complicated. Wonderful chapter! Glad they found the book, and the conversation between Horatio and Severus was endearing. Look forward to more!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
They're really frustrating, aren't they? They're both scared to death, but for different reasons. Hermione doesn't want to push too hard, and Severus, well, he's just an insecure puddle right now.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
They're really frustrating, aren't they? They're both scared to death, but for different reasons. Hermione doesn't want to push too hard, and Severus, well, he's just an insecure puddle right now.
"Sex god in loafers!" So true! I especially loved how you described what he was wearing *swoon* Now, off to find out about the ghost!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Oh, yeah, swoon-o-rama. Too bad we can't just conjure up our own Snapes and dress them up sexy.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Oh, yeah, swoon-o-rama. Too bad we can't just conjure up our own Snapes and dress them up sexy.
Awww, this was so sweet... both of them realizing and confronting their character flaws for the sake of the other person! And Severus giving her the flower melted my heart a bit! He's an ol' softie beneath the bitter exterior, especially when it comes to Hermione
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He definitely is, but even he won't admit that to himself.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He definitely is, but even he won't admit that to himself.
Uh-oh, I hope that Severus has decided to go after her...
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
You'll see... the two most dreaded words in fan fiction.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
You'll see... the two most dreaded words in fan fiction.
Gah!! Okay, I must go on to the next chapter
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thanks for stopping to even write that!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Thanks for stopping to even write that!
Good, they are having a bit of fun. And Snape incognito! Loved the imagery. And the Batman dialogue! *snerk* Those two are such a perfect match!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Ahh, yes they are!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Ahh, yes they are!
Severus singing *sigh* "Pretty Women" from Sweeney Todd. The man has a wonderful voice all around. And he's Sutton's descendent... the plot thickens
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Mmm, he and Depp sure make a nice duet. Until he got his throat gashed out, that is. I have to admit I like his speaking voice quite a bit better. I'm biased and incredibly picky, of course. However, the lower his voice goes as he sings, the better it gets. He's a little pitchy when he's in his upper range. (Yes, I should be a judge for American Idol, I agree with everything Simon says.)"Mr. Rickman, stick with acting."--Simon Cowell
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Mmm, he and Depp sure make a nice duet. Until he got his throat gashed out, that is. I have to admit I like his speaking voice quite a bit better. I'm biased and incredibly picky, of course. However, the lower his voice goes as he sings, the better it gets. He's a little pitchy when he's in his upper range. (Yes, I should be a judge for American Idol, I agree with everything Simon says.)"Mr. Rickman, stick with acting."--Simon Cowell
I am loving this so much the cleaning had to go on hold until I caught up to the last chapter!I seriously hope something wonderful happens and they kissin the next chapter - the suspense is killing me!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
I'm glad you're enjoying it. We need to put the housework on hold now and then to give ourselves a little treat, right?
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
I'm glad you're enjoying it. We need to put the housework on hold now and then to give ourselves a little treat, right?
Oh my gosh, I'm sensing an adventure with Hermione and Severus?! Romance and intrigue! So, so exciting. I loved how he put the note in the drawer, intending to never look at it again. So Severus! And of course he cannot resist the lure of Hermione!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He did put that note in the drawer, intending to never glance at it. But he subconsciously knew he wanted to. If not, he would have burned it in the fireplace or tossed it in the trash. He just needed to catch up with his psyche.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
He did put that note in the drawer, intending to never glance at it. But he subconsciously knew he wanted to. If not, he would have burned it in the fireplace or tossed it in the trash. He just needed to catch up with his psyche.
Oh yeah, she knows! Severus is the one for her! Now all she had to do is convince him of that! Poor Hermione, has everything except the one thing she really wants.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
And thus we have the title of this fic. Mwahahaha! Yes, she knows. And Hermione Granger is not one to let that which she wants slip through her hands.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
And thus we have the title of this fic. Mwahahaha! Yes, she knows. And Hermione Granger is not one to let that which she wants slip through her hands.
Haha, it's because she is *obviously* destined to be with Severus! I often wonder why not everyone sees this!! Okay, Hermione, time to ditch the fabulously handsome men and set your sights on the harsh, stern, unforgiving, and yet darkly sexy and intelligent Potions master!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Kizzy, Lol, of course she's destined to be with Severus! It's as plain as the nose on his face! Not everyone sees this because Hermione is very much a youngster in the books. My 15 year-old thinks I'm utterly disgusting for writing this ship. I think it takes a little maturity to see the prospects these two have together. Really, the possibilities are quite alluring.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Kizzy, Lol, of course she's destined to be with Severus! It's as plain as the nose on his face! Not everyone sees this because Hermione is very much a youngster in the books. My 15 year-old thinks I'm utterly disgusting for writing this ship. I think it takes a little maturity to see the prospects these two have together. Really, the possibilities are quite alluring.
Oh, you will let Severus find her in time, won't you? And here I was wondering who would work up the nerve to make the first move, i feel really stupid. Thanks for the update, this is really good.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
I don't understand why you're feeling stupid. It's natural to wonder that, isn't it? I'm glad you like it, even though our poor Hermione is in a bit of peril at this time. I can't answer whether Severus will find her in time or not. But, as you know already, this is somewhat lighthearted and it's not going to get overly angsty any time soon. As for who makes the first move... that's still up for debate!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
I don't understand why you're feeling stupid. It's natural to wonder that, isn't it? I'm glad you like it, even though our poor Hermione is in a bit of peril at this time. I can't answer whether Severus will find her in time or not. But, as you know already, this is somewhat lighthearted and it's not going to get overly angsty any time soon. As for who makes the first move... that's still up for debate!
I AHVE JUST FINISHED READING THIS FOR THE THIRD TIME. STILL A FANTASTIC STORY FOR ME. LOVED IT...HOPE YOU HAVE A SEQUEL FOR THIS. WOULD LOVE TO READ OF THE FURTHER ADVENTURES IN EGYPT AND ELSE WHERE...
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
That would be quite fun! As for now, though, we can only imagine where they might be. Thanks so much! Glad you enjoy it enough to read it again and again.
Okay, now I'm bummed out. I've caught up with my reading and there's no more of this story to read!No fair!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Sorry. But the good news is that voting is almost over and updates will be allowed in a week or so. Thanks for reading all of it and leaving such lovely notes.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Sorry. But the good news is that voting is almost over and updates will be allowed in a week or so. Thanks for reading all of it and leaving such lovely notes.
It's sad, but not surprising, that Severus has such a low opinion of himself. I'm glad there's been a bit of break through, however.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
There is a bit of one, but he's still insecure as all get out. The man needs to be slapped upside the head with the truth to finally realize it. That will come soon.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
There is a bit of one, but he's still insecure as all get out. The man needs to be slapped upside the head with the truth to finally realize it. That will come soon.
I wish I had a bookmark like the one Hermione gave to Severus. What a clever idea.I'm sure that Hermione will finally drag Severus completely out of his self-induced isolation. He'll dig in his heels and fight her all the way, I'm sure, but she'll win out in the end.At least I hope so.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Yeah, if I could invent and patent that puppy, I'd be a rich woman! Of course, you're right about Hermione. She's not one to give up, ever.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Yeah, if I could invent and patent that puppy, I'd be a rich woman! Of course, you're right about Hermione. She's not one to give up, ever.
Their first fight! And he gave her a flower -- the old softy.What a lovely story you're weaving.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Old softy, huh? Not the first words that come to mind when thinking of Severus Snape, but certainly apt in this circumstance!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
Old softy, huh? Not the first words that come to mind when thinking of Severus Snape, but certainly apt in this circumstance!
Evil cliffie!The good news is that I'm w-a-a-a-y behind in my reading so there are four more chapters for me to enjoy. This might be the shortest cliffie ever!
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
The only good cliffies are the ones that have the next chapter already uploaded. But they're much easier on the author than on the readers, even in that case.
Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)
The only good cliffies are the ones that have the next chapter already uploaded. But they're much easier on the author than on the readers, even in that case.