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Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything
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All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17: Epilogue

All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

debjunk

479 Reviews   |   479 Ratings, 0 Likes, 132 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 45,150 Words 17 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione Granger had a job that gave her everything she wanted. However, money can't buy the one thing she desires most, the love of the reclusive Severus Snape.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Epilogue


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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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Reviews for All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

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10/10

braye27

An interesting beginning for an interesting idea.  I love it already!Cecil sounds like someone whose life would be larger-than-life.And, of course, Severus is my main man — can't wait to find out how our Hermione lures him out of his self-imposed semi-monastic existence and to take an interest in her?Oh yeah, who is the handsome man with Ron?   Hummmmm.....Good start!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  That makes me very happy.  Cecil does have it larger than life.  But he doesn't seem to be affected too much by it.  Severus is my main man too.  He'll be around in a couple of chapters.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  That makes me very happy.  Cecil does have it larger than life.  But he doesn't seem to be affected too much by it.  Severus is my main man too.  He'll be around in a couple of chapters.

10/10

decmeadow

Yay Hermione!  She finally uses her intelligence to make a plan to get the reclusive Sevvie!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yep, she did.  Hopefully it will work!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yep, she did.  Hopefully it will work!

0/10

kimjo2

he will snark and bluster but ultimately he will help...or you wouldn't have written the story!  what a great plan...part slytherin but griffendor on the surface.  thanks for the delightful update and i look forward to more.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Well, I really can't argue with your logic there!  You'll know by the end of the next chapter whether you're right or not.  You're right, it is quite Slytherin of her, isn't it?  Perhaps they DO sort too soon!    

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Well, I really can't argue with your logic there!  You'll know by the end of the next chapter whether you're right or not.  You're right, it is quite Slytherin of her, isn't it?  Perhaps they DO sort too soon!    

10/10

blue artemis

This is really very enjoyable.  I'm surprised I hadn't found it before.  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Well, I'm glad you found it.  And I'm even more glad you're enjoying it. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Well, I'm glad you found it.  And I'm even more glad you're enjoying it. 

9/10

helshez

Awesome. Now the fun begins. He'll agree to help, eventually. He'll huff and snark, but in the end, he won't be able to resist. Looking forward to the next update!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Can you read my mind???  Dang, you're good!

Response from helshez (Reviewer)

No mind reading involved, just an unhealthy obsession with a certain tall, dark and snarky potions master. ;)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Heh, heh.  You and I both!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Can you read my mind???  Dang, you're good!

Response from helshez (Reviewer)

No mind reading involved, just an unhealthy obsession with a certain tall, dark and snarky potions master. ;)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Heh, heh.  You and I both!

10/10

Muggline

Hermione is plotting... oh dear, this is going to be interesting!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Of course it is.  She needs to really be on top of her game to convince Severus to help her!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Of course it is.  She needs to really be on top of her game to convince Severus to help her!

10/10

jade2099

Hmmm...is Mr. Nottingham really Severus in disguise?  Because of all the nasties he did...would be best to get out some as someone else.  :)  Of course, maybe Hermione could intrigue Sev with this book hunt (assuming he's not Nottingham).  Am really enjoying this story. :)  Look forward to the next update.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, that would have been a great plot twist, but unfortunately, Cecil isn't Severus.  Lol.  Oh, the possibilities!  We can only hope that Hermione is convincing.  She needs the help as well as the companionship.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, that would have been a great plot twist, but unfortunately, Cecil isn't Severus.  Lol.  Oh, the possibilities!  We can only hope that Hermione is convincing.  She needs the help as well as the companionship.

10/10

livvy6

Now we're getting somewhere! I liked how you recalled the past where they would sit in the study together and read. That was neat.Update soon! Pleeeease!Livvy

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yes, it took a little setup to finally get to the good part, right?  We'll have lots of Severus from now on. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yes, it took a little setup to finally get to the good part, right?  We'll have lots of Severus from now on. 

10/10

gabi1791

Great chapter!!! More!!gab

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  I'm glad you're liking this one.  I will update soon.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  I'm glad you're liking this one.  I will update soon.

10/10

Sampdoria

Lovely update! I am glad the gears in Hermiones brain finally clicked, getting Severus to help her is the most brilliant idea:-)) I just hope he feels the same....

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

We can only hope that Hermione will be able to convince him to help her. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

We can only hope that Hermione will be able to convince him to help her. 

0/10

kimbee73

This is going to be interesting....I look forward to upadates.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  Hopefully it will be very interesting!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  Hopefully it will be very interesting!

0/10

kimbee73

I want her closet...especially the shoes. I'm glad to see that even though she is well off, she isn't settling. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I don't think Hermione would ever settle for anything.  She knows what she wants and will go ahead and do what she needs to to get it.  Wait until you see her tub!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I don't think Hermione would ever settle for anything.  She knows what she wants and will go ahead and do what she needs to to get it.  Wait until you see her tub!

0/10

kimbee73

Great start...I will read on now.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!

10/10

soccermom

I love this story so far.  It'll be interesting to see what happens when she contacts Snape.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you!  I'm glad it's a hit so far.  I believe that interesting definitely sums it up, especially since we're talking about Snape here.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you!  I'm glad it's a hit so far.  I believe that interesting definitely sums it up, especially since we're talking about Snape here.

9/10

gabi1791

Lovely chapter, I'm still very intrigued with the plot, though there is a little to much "gushing" going on for my taste.Looking forward to the next one!!gab

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks.  Are you referring to her date's gushing?

Response from gabi1791 (Reviewer)

No, I'm actually referring to her gushing, because I just hate the verb and I think it is used twice for her in a very short time. Maybe it's just me, but with gushing I think of a teenage girl and not of a grown woman.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks.  Are you referring to her date's gushing?

Response from gabi1791 (Reviewer)

No, I'm actually referring to her gushing, because I just hate the verb and I think it is used twice for her in a very short time. Maybe it's just me, but with gushing I think of a teenage girl and not of a grown woman.

0/10

kimjo2

oooohhhh...i just want to see her closet!  great update!  i thot with the name of the restaurant we might see our beloved potions master.   but i will compose myself in patience.  thanks so much

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, now that would have been fun.  He could have been the hand behind the cauldron.  Lol.She should just sleep in that closet.  It's so grand.  Oh, and the clothes!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, now that would have been fun.  He could have been the hand behind the cauldron.  Lol.She should just sleep in that closet.  It's so grand.  Oh, and the clothes!

10/10

beaweasley2

Teehehe flashy, selfconsieted and arrogrant. Yuck. I suppose he'll be expecting a second date?

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He will!  But not for a couple of chapters. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He will!  But not for a couple of chapters. 

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Another good chapter. That guy... yikes. :) I'm sure there's a much better fish in the sea waiting for her. Bwahahaha

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Bwa ha ha is right.  Hermione knows the type of person she wants, and will come to a decision about what to do about it soon.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Bwa ha ha is right.  Hermione knows the type of person she wants, and will come to a decision about what to do about it soon.

9/10

helshez

She's young, soon she'll learn and then she'll be well on her way to being jaded. Of course, it takes a few years practise to properly master cynicism, but provided she doesn't get swept off her feet by by a dark, mysterious stranger, she'll get there.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, cynicism is so overrated!  She'd much rather be happy.  We'll have to see what she decides to do about her busy, but depressing love life.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Oh, cynicism is so overrated!  She'd much rather be happy.  We'll have to see what she decides to do about her busy, but depressing love life.

0/10

elsolel

He seemed so promising, too.  Why wouldn't an Auror want to take suggestions from one of the Trio?  Especially the brains of the Trio!  That's just dumb.  Oh well, Pierre's loss is Severus' gain, hmmm?

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He did seem promising.  Good looks, not entirely stupid.  Some guys just can't take advice from women, I guess, no matter how amazingly famous and smart said woman is!  It's definitely Severus' gain!  He'll just need to realize that.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He did seem promising.  Good looks, not entirely stupid.  Some guys just can't take advice from women, I guess, no matter how amazingly famous and smart said woman is!  It's definitely Severus' gain!  He'll just need to realize that.

10/10

rlc

I like the concept of her being the Indiana Jones of the rare book world.  Pierre is definately a prig.  Nice start.  Thank you!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

It's kind of funny having her traipse the planet looking for rare books, fighting tarantulas all the way.  Thanks for your review.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

It's kind of funny having her traipse the planet looking for rare books, fighting tarantulas all the way.  Thanks for your review.

0/10

elsolel

Lovely, lovely, lovely!  I really like how Cecil summed up everything that every Severus fan everywhere would like to tell him.  LOVED IT

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Don't you just want to shout it at him, sometimes!  That's why we have these stories, so we can see him happy!  Thank you for reading!  Glad you loved it. 

0/10

elsolel

This is so sweet.  And I really like the way Severus was almost babbling to himself in the beginning.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

He was, wasn't he?  I like to talk to myself a lot.  It's a sign of a deranged mind, I think.  Not that Severus is deranged.  He's a lot of things, but deranged isn't one of them!  Thanks!

0/10

pookah

Thanks for the happy ending.  Sometimes real life can be difficult.  It was good timing to see your update for this.  I appreciate that you finished it, too.  Yay for you.  Thanks for this tale wih a Hermione who goes after what she wants.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Real life can definitely be difficult, that's why I write fanfiction.  I sometimes enjoy the fics with sad endings, but my motto is life's tough enough.  I want some happiness in my fantasy-land.

0/10

pookah

Awwww.  how sweet!  He deserves some happiness after all the crap he's gone through.  he's got his mentor back as a friend again, and Hermione.  Good for Hermione, going after what she wanted.  I figured SHE'd be the one who had to propose.

thanks for this update.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Severus definitely deserves some happiness!  Heh, heh, Hermione might have had to propose, but thankfully, Severus knows a good thing when he's got one. 

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