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Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything
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All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17: Epilogue

All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

debjunk

479 Reviews   |   479 Ratings, 0 Likes, 132 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 45,150 Words 17 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione Granger had a job that gave her everything she wanted. However, money can't buy the one thing she desires most, the love of the reclusive Severus Snape.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Epilogue


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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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Reviews for All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything

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10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so  much for adding this wonderful epilogue to your wonderful story!!!I love to know  a little about what happens with our favourite couple, and I just adored the way Hermione told Severus she was pregnant:-)) A brilliant piece of work, you should be very proud of this story (and then you can start to plot and write a new one...:-))

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

!  I always like to take a peek at the future.  As for a new story, oh, I'm plotting.  Lots of plots, so little time! 

10/10

gabi1791

Yay, that was such a great story! I really, really liked it!!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  I'm glad you did!

10/10

luvsev

I loved following your tale, and I am so very happy that they both got the ending they deserved, not that I had any doubt. :)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

After all that Severus has been through, and Hermione too, they definitely deserve their happy ending.

9/10

ladyljd

This story has been a delight to read from start to finish.  If you ever choose to revisit this wonderfuly world you've created, the foundation here would make a great launch point for a series of stories.  I'm picturing our couple as a sort of magical Mr & Mrs Smith.   Whatever you decide, congratulations and thank you for this amazing story. 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I don't plan on a sequel, but as you can tell, I left it a bit open.  It would be fun to follow Severus and Hermione to Egypt.  Maybe someday!  Thanks so much!

10/10

luvinthunder

Great Story!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you!

10/10

joyfulheart

Yay! the perfect ending I loved it! Fun story from start to finish.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you!  It was incredibly fun to write.

0/10

kimjo2

oh yessss...the most satisfactory happy ending.  delightful, my deb.  thanks so much!                                         (me blowing kisses)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks hon.  I appreciate your sweet reviews.

10/10

beaweasley2

Okay, this was good enugh to forget that you used the dreaded word epi lo gue. LOL, are you nuts! I have enjoyed every chapter and couldn't wait til I got home when you updated. There are a few stories that do... this is one. Hugs. Thank you for this and I look forward to your next one!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I can't tell you how wonderful your high praise made me feel.  Maybe next time I have an epi lo gue in a story, I'll title it After word or something.  I wouldn't want to conjure up pictures of a train station and the entirely wrong couple sending their kids off. Thanks

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

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Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Train satation?  Wrong couple sending the kids..?  Oh! You're refering to the last few pages of misprint in DH! That was for another book. The printing house got it mixed up.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yeah, they also messed up when they left out the chapter where Severus is found alive... barely... and makes a complete recovery!  I'll never forgive them for that one!

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Sweetie! Harry Potter and the ______ (each of them) - they are from Harry's POV. Harry didn't know he survived, so the chapter wasn't put in DH. (Remember the editor had JKR trim a lot a stuff - that was one of it. ) Harry didn't know he survived because Snape slipped out of the Shack and used a Portkey to go to Italy.  He's doing fine! Has his own business and making a mint! I saw him at Portus though, dancing with all the ladies.

10/10

makaem

What a perfect ending!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks!  I'm into the happy endings.

0/10

rhiannon113

Right so, because of all the fuss aoubt Egypt and the Book of the Death, I absolutely did not see the baby coming, no pun intended. Nice diversion. Really excellent story.  I've enjoyed it very much. *standing ovation*

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

*bows*  Thank you very much!  I don't think Severus saw it coming either.  Lol.

0/10

sunny33

“Never mention Longbottom’s name in association with my child again."  LOL:)

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Yup, Mr. Snarky pants just couldn't help himself.

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Awww, perfect ending. New artifact, pregnant Hermione....yay!!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

They do enjoy their adventures when they have a new book to find.  Thanks!

10/10

hgelman

Great job!  This was a very sweet story.  I completely enjoyed it!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you!  I'm so glad you did.

10/10

braye27

Wonderful!  Wonderful!  Wonderful!    Baths and babies... the perfect reasons to celebrate!    Thank you for a fabulously entertaining tale!  Well done!    Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks Beth!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

EleanorRigby

I just have to do it....*SQUEEEEE*  I love happy endings!  LOL, seriously though, excellent writing and I am looking forward to reading more of your work :) 

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you!  I do enjoy a good squee.  I too am a sucker for happy endings.  There's enough tragedy in real life, who needs it in fantasy land?  That being said, there's something to say for a good tear-jerker, but I don't think I'd ever be happy with one if I wrote it. 

10/10

sinbad

I very much enjoyed the ending.  Wonderful story.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Glad you did!  Thanks for following it.

10/10

snitchette

AWWWWWWWWWW This is so lovely. I enjoyed the whole story very much and I will checked closely for your next writing.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

!  Glad you enjoyed it.  It was fun to write.

0/10

rhiannon113

Amazing, lovely fluff! But I reserve the right to pout when this wonderful little tale ends!! LOL cheers!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

I'm flattered that you'll pout.  Thanks for sticking with me 'til the end. 

0/10

kimbee73

Great chapter.....I am going to be sad to see it end.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you!  I'll be sad too.  I always am. 

0/10

kimjo2

delicious and lovely fluff!  poor severus!  he probably never saw a woman cry for joy!  wonderful story, my deb.  thanks so much

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

*Grins*  Severus was really taken aback.  But now he understands the craziness of women!

10/10

sinbad

I can easily picture Severus misreading the tears.  Great job!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks, Sinbad!  Glad you enjoyed it.  It's always nice to see Hermione and Severus together, even if there are a couple of misunderstandings.  Lol.

10/10

Nessa

Well done Hermione, mission complete!! Aww and Severus bless him. I wish we saw this side to him in JK's writting. Look forward to the end of this tale.

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

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Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

It would have been nice to see a hint of it with JK, but he needed to be seen as evil for her plot to work.  In any case, it's hard to know what a person is really like unless you get to know them well.  Thanks!

10/10

Muggline

*sniff* I love a little bit of nice fluff every now and then...

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

It keeps us smiling, doesn't it?  Thanks

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

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10/10

braye27

I adore Severus' disguise – midnight blue robes, no cape, eyes covered with dark sunglasses, and his hair tied back.  "No one is giving me a second glance, he thought. The perfect disguise… "And this exchange is perfectly written.  Pure Snape:“You’re a closet romantic, aren’t you?” she said in awe.“Romantic? This has nothing to do with romance. I just like the boat ride.”The necklace he gave her was unbelievably beautiful.  I'd love to have something so dear as that, too.  And the fact that all Hermione had to do was think what color she wanted it to become, and voilà, it changes to that color!!!I had to laugh when he gave her the engagement ring and she burst into tears.  Yeah.  Us gals are like that.  The ring he gave her was so gorgeous, I would have liked to have had one like it, as well.Great chapter!  I'm sad that this story will be coming to an end after the next chapter, but I want you to know how much I have enjoyed it.  It is unique, and so well written that I think you should give yourself a pat on the back!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thanks, Beth.  I appreciate it.  Mr. Snarky-pants can't really admit that he's a romantic.  That would spoil his ultra-spy-hardened shell.As for Hermione, she worked hard for those tears. 

10/10

joyfulheart

I was crying right along with her! Great proposal!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of All She Ever Wanted: Money Can't Buy Everything)

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Sorry for bringing on the waterworks.

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