Melancholy Whore
CordyAngelSeer250 Reviews | 7.66/10 (250 Ratings, 0 Likes, 131 Favorites )
She was light branded by darkness. She was innocence. She was his melancholy whore.
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Member Since 2006 | 1 Story | Favorited by 21 | 86 Reviews Written | 402 Review Responses
As of 1/16/2016
To all my devoted readers and reviewers just wanted to let you know that I haven't forgotten about my little tale that has been neglected over the past few years. As stated in my previous update, real life got in the way, but I feel ready to write again.
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I was just thinking of this story yesterday and here's an update - what a surprise, thank you!Brilliant chapter. Interesting way to twist canon but still maintain Severus undertaking an abhorrent task. I can't wait to see Hermione's reaction to what Dumbledore's demanded of him!
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much for the R&R
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
. Hermione is going to have quite a few more issues to work through. I will spoil a bit of Chapter 19 and say that tensions with Severus and Dumbledore come to a head. Thanks again for taking the time to read and review.
YEAH!@!! You returned for an update!
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much for the R&R
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
. Chapter 19 is with my beta, and Chapter 20 is WIP.
You are a gem! Thank you very much for this brilliant chapter! I don't lose hope that you will continue posting this story.
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much,
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
. Chapter 19 is in the hends of my wondeful beta, SLU, and Chaper 20 is a WIP. So updates should be fairly frequent.
I guess that Severus knows so much about Yaxley'sdeath because he planned it. Or there was a mistake and Umbridge was the intended target? Anyway, I hope the consequences won't be too much for him to bear with the insane man he called Master.
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much for the R&R
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
; Yaxley was the intended target; Chapter 18 in the hands of my wonderful beta, and chapter 19 is being mapped out.
condone or not, it was certainly serendipitous for hermione and justin. hmmmm...perhaps too serendipitous! great update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much for the R&R
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If I were ever being targeted like Hermione and Justin are, I'd want Severus to be planning my defense! Very clever of him to get Draco an apprenticeship with his old master, and in return for the favor have Lucius assassinate Yaxley. I can't wait to see what happens when Severus arrives in answer to Voldemort's summons. I hope Voldy isn't too crazy over Yaxley being killed. Will he set Severus the task of punishing (or eliminating) Covington?Was Hermione afraid to let Madam Pomfrey help her change into a hospital gown because she was afraid she would discover the curse that Umbridge placed on her?Boy Howdy, there was a lot happening in this chapter. Well done, Cordy!Beth
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much Beth. Severus is without a doubt the guy you want as your wingman. You won't have to wait long as Chapter 18 is dedicated to Voldy's summons. And you are correct in Hermione's reaction to Madam Pomfrey.
Man, I don't what to expect now from Snape. He's determined to stop Hermione from going to the Ministry. He really does love her, doesn't he?Thanks!Livvy
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much for the R&R Livvy. Severus is nothing if not devious in his mechanisms to protect Hermione. Chapter 18 will be up next,
Oh, you gave us a cliff hanger! Great chapter, can't wait to see what the summons was about.
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much for the R&R
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
. Chapter 18 will deal with Severus' summons.
Hmm, love how Severus gives Dumbledore the answer without giving it at all. Glad to see no harm came to Hermione & Justin. Now, does Poppy know / suspect about the curse?
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much for the R&R
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
. What Poppy knows or suspects will be revealed in Chapter 18.
Snape's machinations leave me in awe. I loved the chapter.
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
, Chapter 17 should be posted within the next day or so, and Snape's plans are put into motion. Thanks for the R&R
It's great to see you back!!!I was glad to see that Hermione knows that Severus loves her and understands just what his oath of fealty means. He will protect her come what may.What a fascinating chapter! It seems there are dire and dark times times ahead for all. I think that Severus' meeting with Lucius nad the Polyjuice Potion he gave him means that the older wizard is going to do harm to Crabbe and Goyle before they can do harm to Hermione and Justin. Or maybe I mistunderstood. Either way, Lucius will need to protect Draco from whatever the Dark Lord has in store him.Can't wait to read the update!Beth
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much for the R&R Beth. Not to spoil chapter 17, but I will say there is a irony to Severus' puppet mastery, but exactly who is tugging at the strings.
I can do with dark and violence only if you promise there will be a happy ending with lots of babies. Also I'm glad to know he loves her but I fear what he is ready to do to protect her.
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
While I don't know about babies there could be a happy ending in store. He does love her and will go to great lengths to protect Hermione as you will find out in Chapter 17. Thanks so much for the R&R.
such an intense and facinating story. thanks so much
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thannk you for your kind words
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
; Chapter 17 in #2 in queue so another update is on the horizon.
First of all I'm sorry because I seem to have forgotten to read and review this chapter. And it's all the more unforgivable because of the genius of it. Finally does the final nod from Severus mean what I think it does? *hopes*
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
That nod could mean what you hope it to mean; chapter 16 which is up will answer that question. Thank you so much for your kind words and the R&R
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
, and be on the lookout for Chapter 17 as it's #2 in queue.
I liked it. I look forward to seeing more.
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Well chapter 17 should be posted within the next few days, Thank you so much for your R&R,
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YOU'RE BACK!!! I have yeaarned for another chapter. This story is so dark and has just the right aspect of creepiness to it. But I am happy things are getting better between Severus and Hermione. Keep up the great work!Thanks!Livvy
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thabj you for your warm welcome and enthusiasm. Things are looking up for our pair, and chapter 17 is #2 in queue so another update is a few days away.
What an interesting turn... worth the wait.
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
, for the R&R, Chapter 17 is #2 in queue so you won't have to wait too long for another update.
OMG what has Severus done??? Im on pins and needles here!
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Chapter 16 is ten and a half pages in, work has been hectic so the only time when I have time to write is the weekend. I will say that Umbridge will play a significant role in the chapters upcoming as will Severus' darker nature. So please stay tuned, and as always thank you,
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
for the R&R.
so sad but hopefully not too late. terrific update. thanks so much
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much, chapter 16 is a WIP.
Please, CordyAngelSeer, it has been too long not to hear updates for you! Why does it take so long? If it is because of your beta, then go get another more diligent!
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
I just sent off Chapter 14 to be beta'd so I soon as I get it back along with Chapter 13, I be posting.
Response from I_Am (Reviewer)
I have an idea! Can you please upload your story to another FF archive, please???
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
I just uploaded chapter 13 yesterday, and should be getting back chapter 14 within the next couple of days. Also Chapter 15 is in the works, so be on the lookout for new chapters. I promise they will be worth the wait. :) But Ido thankl you for being eager to read my story, it let me know I'm doing something rightl LOL.
Response from I_Am (Reviewer)
Thank you so much!!!
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen next.
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much Sinbad for the R&R, I've completed chapter 13 and sent it off to my beta for review. As soon as I get it back I'll post it. So be on the lookout.
Glad your back.
I look forward to this ride!
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
, I've just finished Chapter 13 and sent it off to my beta, SeverusLoveUs, so look for the next installment to be up soon.
oooh this is good! I really hope you get past your writer's block, I so want to know what happens next!
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much for the R&R
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
, I'm about 2/3 of the way through written chapter 13. I hiot to have it out to my beta, SeverusLovesUs, by the end of the week.
Yippie! You're back, and I have really missed you! And you are so right WB and RL can and do play hell with our plans.This chapter is golden! I love the way Hermione stood her ground with the Potions master. He is so taken with her, but he knows how much danger there is if the Dark Lord finds out. The lives of both of them would be forfeit. I can't wait to see where you take us on this most amazing "helluva ride." Lead on!
Beth
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you so much Beth! Be on the lookout for chapter 13 which is in the process of being written.
whoohoo! welcome back! great update. thanks so much
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thanks! Be on the lookout for Chapter 13.