Here I am again, 4 years later, still hoping for the story to be finished...

Can't wait for this marvellous story to be updated. I do hope that you will deal efficiently with all the drawbacks of RL. I know it can get pretty awful out there, but there are always us, devoted fans, waiting patiently for your inspiration to kick in. I'm sure you'll deal w/ everything you face.

So very sad, Umbridge needs to suffer, a lot, NOW.

She doesn't want to die, she wants the pain to stop

Would the curse stop if Umbridge died? Severus found a way to dissipate excess magic

I hope Hermione gets the help she needs.

Does Bumbeldore want Severus, to take Yaxlys place with Umbridge? I'm betting he'd rather face Voldemort in a snitt.

One down, a lot more to go, but one is a start. I trust that when it is Umbridge's turn, it isn't so quick. When push comes to shove, Severus is the one you want guarding your back.

So Hermiones reaction had something to do with the curse that Umbridge  cast on her;and Severus is gaining Lucius aid, in exchange for helping save Draco. I hope I have that right.

None the wiser, but will read on.

WHAT IS WRONG WITH THAT GIRL? how could she be so cruel, he gave her his heart, and she stamped on it.

I did not see that coming,  Ok on to the next chapter, and hopefully some answers.

Flirting? at a time like this, I guess you can't keep a good man down.

Thats torn it, Dumdeldore must know that this puts Severus , between a rock and a hard place.  If he protects Hermione, Yaxly will report straight back to voldemort, he is a DEATH EATER!,for the love of pity!So what is he supposed to do, hand Hermione over?

Yaxly and Umbridge lovers? Ewww,Ewww,Ewww, someone pass the brain bleach!

For Severus,the thought of being loved,is the hardest thing to face.

I'm glad he let his heart speak, at last.

It has been proven ,that one of the things that triggers a serial killer, is child abuse, which is what Severus suffered, at school{ by the staff as well as other students, it seems} as well as at home. Not that I think he is a serial killer ,but that the damage done to the mind by abuse is profound.

Very powerful,and uncomfortable to read, but a wonderful insight,into the mind of Severus Snape. thank you.

This is heartbreaking, death is to good for that umbridge bitch. Time for Severus to let lose the Death Eater  . 

I think this must be,the most foul curse,I have ever seen. Still not sure whats going on, but I'm hooked, so must keep reading. 

That Fairy Floss TOAD!!! I hope everus turns his dark side to full on   , when he gets her. Poor Hermione,  your poem is beautiful.

I get the picture, Severus, not a fluffy bunny, Ok. I am a little curious,as to why he would chose such ,hands on methods, he is a Potions Master, and has a wand.

Moving very quickly on, to the next chapter. I hope things are not as dark as they seem. Great start.

*shudder* What the HELL is going on?