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Potions Under Duress Melancholy Whore
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Melancholy Whore

1: Prologue

2: Chapter One

3: Chapter One, Part II

4: Chapter Two

5: Chapter Three

6: Chapter Four

7: Chapter Five

8: Chapter Six

9: Chapter Seven

10: Chapter Eight

11: Chapter Nine

12: Chapter Ten

13: Chapter Eleven

14: Chapter Twelve

15: Chapter Thirteen

16: Chapter Fourteen

17: Chapter Fifteen

18: Chapter Sixteen

19: Chapter Seventeen

20: Chapter Eighteen

21: Chapter Nineteen

22: Chapter Twenty

23: Chapter Twenty-One

24: Chapter Twenty-Two

25: Chapter Twenty-Three

Melancholy Whore

CordyAngelSeer

250 Reviews   |   250 Ratings, 0 Likes, 131 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Smut Alternate Universe Horror Psychological Potions Under Duress 44,627 Words 25 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Ronald Weasley Albus Dumbledore Antonin Dolohov Bellatrix Lestrange Fenrir Greyback Lucius Malfoy Nagini Original Character Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Yaxley (Death Eater) James Potter Lily (Evans) Potter Minerva McGonagall Peter Pettigrew Remus Lupin Sirius Black Colin Creevey Dolores Jane Umbridge Neville Longbottom Filius Flitwick Pomona Sprout Poppy Pomfrey Justin Finch-Fletchley Rubeus Hagrid Walden Macnair Avery (Death Eater)

She was light branded by darkness. She was innocence. She was his melancholy whore.

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Chapters (25)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Chapter One

Chapter 3: Chapter One, Part II

Chapter 4: Chapter Two

Chapter 5: Chapter Three

Chapter 6: Chapter Four

Chapter 7: Chapter Five

Chapter 8: Chapter Six

Chapter 9: Chapter Seven

Chapter 10: Chapter Eight

Chapter 11: Chapter Nine

Chapter 12: Chapter Ten

Chapter 13: Chapter Eleven

Chapter 14: Chapter Twelve

Chapter 15: Chapter Thirteen

Chapter 16: Chapter Fourteen

Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen

Chapter 18: Chapter Sixteen

Chapter 19: Chapter Seventeen

Chapter 20: Chapter Eighteen

Chapter 21: Chapter Nineteen

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty

Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-One

Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Two

Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Three


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CordyAngelSeer

Member Since 2006  |  1 Story  |  Favorited by 21  |  86 Reviews Written  |  402 Review Responses

As of 1/16/2016

To all my devoted readers and reviewers just wanted to let you know that I haven't forgotten about my little tale that has been neglected over the past few years.  As stated in my previous update, real life got in the way, but I feel ready to write again.  

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10/10

I_Am

Here I am again, 4 years later, still hoping for the story to be finished...

10/10

I_Am

Can't wait for this marvellous story to be updated. I do hope that you will deal efficiently with all the drawbacks of RL. I know it can get pretty awful out there, but there are always us, devoted fans, waiting patiently for your inspiration to kick in. I'm sure you'll deal w/ everything you face.

10/10

mick42

So very sad, Umbridge needs to suffer, a lot, NOW.

Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)

Thank you for your reviews,  I've been off the grid due to RL issues, and will hopefully be getting back into finishing this little tale.  I have the next chapters half way completed, and will be working to finish them, hopefully in the near future.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Sorry to hear RL is biting so hard, I hope things are getting better for you, and your family.

Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)

Thank you for your reviews,  I've been off the grid due to RL issues, and will hopefully be getting back into finishing this little tale.  I have the next chapters half way completed, and will be working to finish them, hopefully in the near future.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Sorry to hear RL is biting so hard, I hope things are getting better for you, and your family.

10/10

mick42

She doesn't want to die, she wants the pain to stop

10/10

mick42

Would the curse stop if Umbridge died? Severus found a way to dissipate excess magic

10/10

mick42

I hope Hermione gets the help she needs.

10/10

mick42

Does Bumbeldore want Severus, to take Yaxlys place with Umbridge? I'm betting he'd rather face Voldemort in a snitt.

10/10

mick42

One down, a lot more to go, but one is a start. I trust that when it is Umbridge's turn, it isn't so quick. When push comes to shove, Severus is the one you want guarding your back.

10/10

mick42

So Hermiones reaction had something to do with the curse that Umbridge  cast on her;and Severus is gaining Lucius aid, in exchange for helping save Draco. I hope I have that right.

10/10

mick42

None the wiser, but will read on.

10/10

mick42

WHAT IS WRONG WITH THAT GIRL? how could she be so cruel, he gave her his heart, and she stamped on it.

10/10

mick42

I did not see that coming,  Ok on to the next chapter, and hopefully some answers.

10/10

mick42

Flirting? at a time like this, I guess you can't keep a good man down.

10/10

mick42

Thats torn it, Dumdeldore must know that this puts Severus , between a rock and a hard place.  If he protects Hermione, Yaxly will report straight back to voldemort, he is a DEATH EATER!,for the love of pity!So what is he supposed to do, hand Hermione over?

10/10

mick42

Yaxly and Umbridge lovers? Ewww,Ewww,Ewww, someone pass the brain bleach!

10/10

mick42

For Severus,the thought of being loved,is the hardest thing to face.

10/10

mick42

I'm glad he let his heart speak, at last.

10/10

mick42

It has been proven ,that one of the things that triggers a serial killer, is child abuse, which is what Severus suffered, at school{ by the staff as well as other students, it seems} as well as at home. Not that I think he is a serial killer ,but that the damage done to the mind by abuse is profound.

10/10

mick42

Very powerful,and uncomfortable to read, but a wonderful insight,into the mind of Severus Snape. thank you.

10/10

mick42

This is heartbreaking, death is to good for that umbridge bitch. Time for Severus to let lose the Death Eater  . 

10/10

mick42

I think this must be,the most foul curse,I have ever seen. Still not sure whats going on, but I'm hooked, so must keep reading. 

10/10

mick42

That Fairy Floss TOAD!!! I hope everus turns his dark side to full on   , when he gets her. Poor Hermione,  your poem is beautiful.

10/10

mick42

I get the picture, Severus, not a fluffy bunny, Ok. I am a little curious,as to why he would chose such ,hands on methods, he is a Potions Master, and has a wand.

10/10

mick42

Moving very quickly on, to the next chapter. I hope things are not as dark as they seem. Great start.

10/10

mick42

*shudder* What the HELL is going on?

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