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Melancholy Whore Chapter 9: Chapter Seven
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Melancholy Whore

1: Prologue

2: Chapter One

3: Chapter One, Part II

4: Chapter Two

5: Chapter Three

6: Chapter Four

7: Chapter Five

8: Chapter Six

9: Chapter Seven

10: Chapter Eight

11: Chapter Nine

12: Chapter Ten

13: Chapter Eleven

14: Chapter Twelve

15: Chapter Thirteen

16: Chapter Fourteen

17: Chapter Fifteen

18: Chapter Sixteen

19: Chapter Seventeen

20: Chapter Eighteen

21: Chapter Nineteen

22: Chapter Twenty

23: Chapter Twenty-One

24: Chapter Twenty-Two

25: Chapter Twenty-Three

Chapter Seven

Melancholy Whore

Chapter 9 of 25

CordyAngelSeer

He was darkness clinging to light. He was tainted. He was a broken man

Drama Angst Romance Smut Alternate Universe Horror Psychological Potions Under Duress 44,627 Words 25 Chapters WIP
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A/N: Dear readers the opening scene is a bit graphic but it is not what it seems.

Chapter Seven

The dark welcomed him, lulled him into a quiet ease, like a mother crooning a lullaby to a disquieted toddler. Cloaked in shadows, steam hissed from sewer grates...thick and heavy, clinging to him like a second skin.

He stalked his prey, unbeknownst to his victim; he relished his one-sided game of cat and mouse.

He brushed past her, long fingers caressing hers as he walked ahead, steps measured.

The fly was caught in the spider's web.

The alcove was dark and secluded, affording him discretion and privacy.

The blade of the knife caressed the meaty flesh of her throat.

Swiftly, he dragged the blade across; blood rained from her severed jugular.

Wet, wheezing, gurgling...he dropped her...fresh from the kiss of death, she flopped onto her stomach, body twitching to a halt, brain activity ceasing.

He woke with a start. Perspiration drenched the bedclothes. Heart hammering, he gasped for air. The acidic burn of bile scratched the back of his throat as he choked, swallowing down the mucous. He winced as his esophagus constricted.

"A dream," he panted, trembling with anxiety.

Blood rushed in his ears; his vision blurred; Severus flung the bedding off of him. Swiping a hand across his brow, he eased himself out of the bed. Legs uncertain, he clutched the nightstand for leverage.

"A dream," he repeated with forced conviction. On shaky legs, Severus apprehensively ventured to his bureau. Sliding back the false panel, he removed his blade, tugging at the silk in a frantic attempt to verify the truth of his words.

Holding the hilt close to his face, he inspected the rust-tinted blade. Splatters of dry crimson kissed the silver, his own blood.

"A dream," he breathed, relieved that he had not spilt innocent blood, that he was able to hamper his bloodlust.

The clock above his mantle read quarter to five; in a few hours the dunderheaded-masses masquerading feebly as students would be waking. Eager greediness alighting their eyes, wasting Knuts and Sickles not earned on frivolous, trivial trinkets. Snape's lip curled in disgust.

He had hated Hogsmeade weekends when he was a student, but he despised them even more so as a chaperone. What was there to enjoy when one was destitute? His grandmother would offer him a spare shilling or two so he could have some pocket money, but he had always refused her. She had been a widow on a government pension without a pound to spare and a stone's throw from public assistance.

"Hey, Snivellus."

Severus looked up, his lank, greasy locks, falling forward, obscuring his acne-pocked cheeks.

"What do you want, Black?" he hissed, hand on his wand. Ready.

His stomach growled loudly.

"Missed breakfast, Snivellus?" Black taunted, breaking into a raucous laughter with Potter

Embarrassed, he flushed pink.

"You know very well I did, Black." Severus, through clenched teeth, spat the name...a bitter profanity on his tongue.

The Mauraders had ambushed him coming out of the third floor lavatory. A deft Impedimenta issued by Potter had knocked him back, and tripping over his feet, he landed with a hard thud on the ground. The Gryffindors chuckled in amusement at having bested him, save for Lupin who stood on the sidelines. Glee colored Black's eyes as he, Potter, and Pettigrew warded the door to the loo, effectively locking Snape inside.

It had taken forty-five minutes to dismantle the wards they had erected and to do so while avoiding the jinxes and hexes Black, no doubt, had thrown in to torment him further. By the time Severus had made it to the Great Hall, breakfast was over, and the students were filing out, preparing to leave for Hogsmeade.

Lupin placed a hand on Black's shoulder, "C'mon, Sirius."

"Having an attack of conscience, Lupin?" Snape sneered, eyes narrowed. "Silence makes cowards out of men." Snape looked down his nose at him. "But, you wouldn't know anything about that, now would you, wolf?" The dig was below the belt, but he didn't care.

Resignation flashed in Lupins' eyes, his shoulders slumped, and he pulled Black back, trying to defuse a situation that was swiftly becoming volatile.

"James..." Lily grasped his hand in hers, tugging him away from the fray, not once sparing a glance in Severus' direction. Pettigrew, beady-eyed little rodent that he was, was still egging Sirius on, eyes showing a lust for malice.

"Boys." There was an underlying tone of warning in the Scottish brogue.

"We were just leaving, Professor McGonagall," Remus offered as explanation.

"See that you do. I would hate to deduct points when Gryffindor is close to attaining the House Cup."

"Off with you, Snape." She dismissed the dark-haired boy.

"Yes, ma'am." He nodded, eyes trained on the gang of Gryffindors until they were out of sight, dipping into Honeydukes.

His stomach growled again.

Dejected, he trudged to the Three Broomsticks, the freshly fallen snow crunching under his boots. He slipped into a chair at a vacant table against the farthest wall, his back pressed against the varnished wood paneling. From this vantage point he was able to observe the entrance and those coming to and from the loo. Book opened on his lap, quill in hand, Snape continued his amendments to his Potions book.

A half hour into his revisions, the hunger pains began, cramping his abdomen. His concentration disturbed, he covertly surveyed the students. A group of Ravenclaws, three tables down, threw a Galleon and a few Sickles on their table in payment. Patiently, he waited for them to gather their winter coats and down their last few sips of butterbeer. Anticipation buzzed in his system.

Scanning the room, the patrons all appeared to be in their own worlds, conversations abounding, gossiping about Yule Ball dates. Inhaling deeply, Snape pushed himself away from the wall and made his way to the empty table.

Bunched up paper napkins, empty mugs, a half-eaten basket of fried cod, and soggy, vinegar-drenched crisps littered the table.

Perspiration dampened his palms; tentatively, he reached for his prize.

A hand locked on his wrist. "Stealing, Mr. Snape? One hundred points from Slytherin. We will see what the headmaster has to say about this." Professor McGonagall tutted.

"Professor, please... I wasn't..." Snape silenced his protests as he noticed the onlookers starting to huddle, taking in the scene.

"Come now, it is back to the castle for you."

Head lowered, he trailed behind McGonagall back to Hogwarts.

The headmaster was looking at him over his half-moon spectacles, the infamous twinkle in his azure eyes gone.

"Mr. Snape, this is the fourth time you've been sent to my office, and the school term is only two months in. Three times for fighting and now stealing. What do you have you have to say for yourself?" Fingers steepled, he waited for his charge's response.

"I did not steal, Headmaster," he whispered, eyes and head downcast.

"Please pick your head up, Mr. Snape. I cannot hear you."

"I did not steal, Headmaster." He spoke firmly, black eyes meeting blue.

Dumbledore sighed heavily. "Please do not lie to me. Professor McGonagall caught you. Now, how about we try the truth this time, hmm...?"

Severus did not answer. He had only meant to take the discarded food. He'd had no money with which to purchase lunch and since he was forced to miss breakfast, had been unable to eat. He would let the headmaster believe what he wanted; his precious Gryffindors could do no wrong. Potter was his Golden Boy, and Black merely 'horsed-around.' Apparently, attempted murder didn't amount to anything, and why should it? He was, after all, a dark, mistrusted, and unpopular bastard of the House of Slytherin.

"Very well then." Dumbledore stood up, pushing his chair away from his desk. "In addition to the loss of house points, you will write a letter of apology to the Three Broomsticks in regards to your thievery, and you shall abstain from the evening meal. To steal money from the pocket of a man takes food from his mouth. You are dismissed, Mr. Snape. Please return to your common room."

"Yes, Headmaster." Tears pricked the corners of his eyes.

Snape moved to his living quarters and gracelessly plunked himself down into his reading chair. A well-worn paperback of Crime and Punishment sat on the end table, leather bookmark holding his place.

With a wave of his hand, he conjured a glass of warm milk to ease the burn of the bile that was surely eating away at his esophagus.

"Miss Granger, my Sonia."

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A/N: To SLU, my beta, thank you for your tireless work and effort. I would also like to express my gratitude to all those who have read my story and have taken the time to review. Thank you.

A/N: The reference to Sonia comes from Dostoevsky's Crime and Punishment. She is the the moral compass and love interest for the main character Roskolnikov, the dark and troubled main character.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Melancholy Whore

250 Reviews  |  7.66/10 Average

10/10

I_Am

Here I am again, 4 years later, still hoping for the story to be finished...

10/10

I_Am

Can't wait for this marvellous story to be updated. I do hope that you will deal efficiently with all the drawbacks of RL. I know it can get pretty awful out there, but there are always us, devoted fans, waiting patiently for your inspiration to kick in. I'm sure you'll deal w/ everything you face.

10/10

mick42

So very sad, Umbridge needs to suffer, a lot, NOW.

Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)

Thank you for your reviews,  I've been off the grid due to RL issues, and will hopefully be getting back into finishing this little tale.  I have the next chapters half way completed, and will be working to finish them, hopefully in the near future.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Sorry to hear RL is biting so hard, I hope things are getting better for you, and your family.

Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)

Thank you for your reviews,  I've been off the grid due to RL issues, and will hopefully be getting back into finishing this little tale.  I have the next chapters half way completed, and will be working to finish them, hopefully in the near future.

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Sorry to hear RL is biting so hard, I hope things are getting better for you, and your family.

10/10

mick42

She doesn't want to die, she wants the pain to stop

10/10

mick42

Would the curse stop if Umbridge died? Severus found a way to dissipate excess magic

10/10

mick42

I hope Hermione gets the help she needs.

10/10

mick42

Does Bumbeldore want Severus, to take Yaxlys place with Umbridge? I'm betting he'd rather face Voldemort in a snitt.

10/10

mick42

One down, a lot more to go, but one is a start. I trust that when it is Umbridge's turn, it isn't so quick. When push comes to shove, Severus is the one you want guarding your back.

10/10

mick42

So Hermiones reaction had something to do with the curse that Umbridge  cast on her;and Severus is gaining Lucius aid, in exchange for helping save Draco. I hope I have that right.

10/10

mick42

None the wiser, but will read on.

10/10

mick42

WHAT IS WRONG WITH THAT GIRL? how could she be so cruel, he gave her his heart, and she stamped on it.

10/10

mick42

I did not see that coming,  Ok on to the next chapter, and hopefully some answers.

10/10

mick42

Flirting? at a time like this, I guess you can't keep a good man down.

10/10

mick42

Thats torn it, Dumdeldore must know that this puts Severus , between a rock and a hard place.  If he protects Hermione, Yaxly will report straight back to voldemort, he is a DEATH EATER!,for the love of pity!So what is he supposed to do, hand Hermione over?

10/10

mick42

Yaxly and Umbridge lovers? Ewww,Ewww,Ewww, someone pass the brain bleach!

10/10

mick42

For Severus,the thought of being loved,is the hardest thing to face.

10/10

mick42

I'm glad he let his heart speak, at last.

10/10

mick42

It has been proven ,that one of the things that triggers a serial killer, is child abuse, which is what Severus suffered, at school{ by the staff as well as other students, it seems} as well as at home. Not that I think he is a serial killer ,but that the damage done to the mind by abuse is profound.

10/10

mick42

Very powerful,and uncomfortable to read, but a wonderful insight,into the mind of Severus Snape. thank you.

10/10

mick42

This is heartbreaking, death is to good for that umbridge bitch. Time for Severus to let lose the Death Eater  . 

10/10

mick42

I think this must be,the most foul curse,I have ever seen. Still not sure whats going on, but I'm hooked, so must keep reading. 

10/10

mick42

That Fairy Floss TOAD!!! I hope everus turns his dark side to full on   , when he gets her. Poor Hermione,  your poem is beautiful.

10/10

mick42

I get the picture, Severus, not a fluffy bunny, Ok. I am a little curious,as to why he would chose such ,hands on methods, he is a Potions Master, and has a wand.

10/10

mick42

Moving very quickly on, to the next chapter. I hope things are not as dark as they seem. Great start.

10/10

mick42

*shudder* What the HELL is going on?

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