Chapter One
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CordyAngelSeerShe was light tainted by darkness. She was innocence. She was his melancholy whore.
A/N: I don't own anything, that right belongs to JKR. I'm just a fan who likes to take her characters out once in a while to play. Like to give a huge thanks to my rockstar beta, SeverusLovesUs.
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Chapter One
“That was not a request, Miss Granger. Get. Up.” The Potions master’s harsh, velvet growl brooked no room for argument. Hermione unclenched her hands, wiping the excess blood on the front of her school robe, and on unsteady legs, she pushed herself up from the hard stone floor. Her balance faltered slightly from the loss of blood as her knees threatened to buckle from underneath. Blindly, Hermione grasped at the tabletop of the closest workstation to keep steady, her hold weak as the flow of her crimson life force made the polished desk too slick to get a firm handle on.
The taciturn man scrutinized his pupil’s progress to remain upright and on her feet. Her robe, smeared with blood, hung heavy on her fragile frame. Severus took in her bushy haired locks matted to her scalp as the ends hung limply past her shoulders.
“Tell me,” he hissed.
Caramel colored eyes snapped to his then back down to the floor as Hermione shook her head in the negative.
“Tell me,” Severus repeated, stalking closer to the trembling sixth-year prefect. She could feel his warm breath ghosting past her slightly bent head, smelling of lemon and Earl Grey. Hermione knew that if she opened her mouth to inhale, she would be able to taste him. Taste the acid that was threatening to erupt from his lips marred by his perpetual sneer.
Taking in a deep breath, a whimper escaped her as Hermione was assailed by the heady odor of ink, parchment, burnt myrrh, lemon, stale Earl Grey tea, and an aroma that was warm and spicy, inviting, tickling her nose. She leaned in as rough, calloused, spidery fingers seized her chin in a firm grip, forcing her face to look up to his.
“Tell me,” he ordered, patience on the brink of snapping as he wrenched her closer to him, causing Hermione to bodily crash into him, her arms flailing, palms pushing against his chest, soiling the crisp white linen of his dress shirt red with small handprints. His arms wrapped around her trying to regain their equilibrium.
A mournful cry ripped from her throat, “N—no,” she sobbed and flinched in Severus’ vice-like clutch. His hooked nose nuzzled Hermione’s sweat-soaked locks, tongue flicking out to trace the shell of her ear.
“Tell me… Hermione,” the Potions master purred, causing the student in his arms to shiver.
“I—I can’t… please don’t…” she pleaded, sagging against his lean form. Frustrated by her impudence, Severus disentangled himself from the wayward girl, paying no heed to the sticky smudges of coagulated blood that caked his fingers.
“Strip.” The order falling from his lips in a guttural snarl, Severus studied her hands partially cloaked by her robe. It appeared as if the blood flow had stemmed and begun the process of clotting. Wand in hand, he muttered, “Tergeo.”
A shriek of agony was ripped from Hermione as she doubled over, landing on all fours, her face briefly making contact with the blood-splattered grey stone. Her soul-wrenching wail of pain echoing off the walls of the deserted Potions classroom as the smell of singed flesh wafted through the room.
“En—” Hermione convulsed. “N—n—no mag… magic,” she ground out before falling under the sweet enchantment of unconsciousness.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Melancholy Whore
250 Reviews | 7.66/10 Average
Here I am again, 4 years later, still hoping for the story to be finished...
Can't wait for this marvellous story to be updated. I do hope that you will deal efficiently with all the drawbacks of RL. I know it can get pretty awful out there, but there are always us, devoted fans, waiting patiently for your inspiration to kick in. I'm sure you'll deal w/ everything you face.
So very sad, Umbridge needs to suffer, a lot, NOW.
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you for your reviews, I've been off the grid due to RL issues, and will hopefully be getting back into finishing this little tale. I have the next chapters half way completed, and will be working to finish them, hopefully in the near future.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
Sorry to hear RL is biting so hard, I hope things are getting better for you, and your family.
Response from CordyAngelSeer (Author of Melancholy Whore)
Thank you for your reviews, I've been off the grid due to RL issues, and will hopefully be getting back into finishing this little tale. I have the next chapters half way completed, and will be working to finish them, hopefully in the near future.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
Sorry to hear RL is biting so hard, I hope things are getting better for you, and your family.
She doesn't want to die, she wants the pain to stop
Would the curse stop if Umbridge died? Severus found a way to dissipate excess magic
I hope Hermione gets the help she needs.
Does Bumbeldore want Severus, to take Yaxlys place with Umbridge? I'm betting he'd rather face Voldemort in a snitt.
One down, a lot more to go, but one is a start. I trust that when it is Umbridge's turn, it isn't so quick. When push comes to shove, Severus is the one you want guarding your back.
So Hermiones reaction had something to do with the curse that Umbridge cast on her;and Severus is gaining Lucius aid, in exchange for helping save Draco. I hope I have that right.
None the wiser, but will read on.
WHAT IS WRONG WITH THAT GIRL? how could she be so cruel, he gave her his heart, and she stamped on it.
I did not see that coming, Ok on to the next chapter, and hopefully some answers.
Flirting? at a time like this, I guess you can't keep a good man down.
Thats torn it, Dumdeldore must know that this puts Severus , between a rock and a hard place. If he protects Hermione, Yaxly will report straight back to voldemort, he is a DEATH EATER!,for the love of pity!So what is he supposed to do, hand Hermione over?
Yaxly and Umbridge lovers? Ewww,Ewww,Ewww, someone pass the brain bleach!
For Severus,the thought of being loved,is the hardest thing to face.
I'm glad he let his heart speak, at last.
It has been proven ,that one of the things that triggers a serial killer, is child abuse, which is what Severus suffered, at school{ by the staff as well as other students, it seems} as well as at home. Not that I think he is a serial killer ,but that the damage done to the mind by abuse is profound.
Very powerful,and uncomfortable to read, but a wonderful insight,into the mind of Severus Snape. thank you.
This is heartbreaking, death is to good for that umbridge bitch. Time for Severus to let lose the Death Eater .
I think this must be,the most foul curse,I have ever seen. Still not sure whats going on, but I'm hooked, so must keep reading.
That Fairy Floss TOAD!!! I hope everus turns his dark side to full on , when he gets her. Poor Hermione, your poem is beautiful.
I get the picture, Severus, not a fluffy bunny, Ok. I am a little curious,as to why he would chose such ,hands on methods, he is a Potions Master, and has a wand.
Moving very quickly on, to the next chapter. I hope things are not as dark as they seem. Great start.
*shudder* What the HELL is going on?