good start

Erg, Ron is just incerdibly stupid! If it weren't for Hermione and Seveus... erg!

Cool, trust Hermione to get it right. Ron is such a sod, and Severus is down right cool.

Poor Remus!  I hope he comes out of it okay.  And jeez, what is Ron going to do next?!?

Wonderful!  Wish it really had happened this way.

Nice chap!  Poor Remus - lately, all of the stories that I am reading has him with the short end of the stick.  I eagerly look forward to an update.

action packed chapter and well written , but I hope readers realise that to do CPR effectively is actually a lot harder than it looks and has to be taught properly (  sorry health professional side taking over ) :)  Technicalities aside,  a brilliant story!

Good chapter, let's hope Remus makes it.

Oh, my.  That was an amazingly powerful chapter.  And Ron is being such an idiot.  

oh heavens!  will he survive?  will snape be punished?  will they in fact "talk about it?"  i can hardly wait to tune into the next installment!  thanks so much                                          

Thank you so much for the update! It was a dramatic chapter, and a very well written one! I just love this story:-) Please keep Remus alive. Not only does he, just as Severus, deserve to see the end of the war, but way to many of the ones about their age figthing for the ligth side has already been killed. That was one of the things that angered me most about DH, the deaths of Severus, Remus and Fred, JKR killed so many of the good guys and let way to many of the bad guys live. I think Harry deserves, considering that his faith is having to go up against Voldemort, to at least get to keep Remus as a father-figure and "grown-up friend". Not at least, keep Severus safe, he is the main figure after all together with Hermione:-))Update again soon!

Wow, everybody's hatin' on Ron. I mean, he's certainly not one of my favs but it seems that all parties are against him. I feel a little bad for him. Everything he does is scrutinized even by his best mates - bummer. I'm wondering if this is to set us up for Ron to take a very big tumble - something drastic like narking out Snape or joiing Voldy or both. Hope not :) Looking forward to continuing this new version of book seven :)

oh ho!  i see foreshadowing...ron the prat rides again!  loving this story and one of the things i especially love is THERE'S NO CAMPING!!!  love hereward, too!  thanks so much

That's so cool that he knew she'd be able to brew the potion.  I like how they wroked together.  I'm still sad about his abuse, though.

This story has so much potential; I really hope that it can be completed in time. Thank you very much.

I am loving this story, keep up the great work!

This was a great chapter and I was so glad to see an update!  I really liked the part at the end with Hermione realizing she and Ron were not meant to be.  I eagerly look forward to more!

Great story. Some very good plot twists and devices. I like the secret hideaway in the Himalayas and the fact that the Golden Trio is mostly treated like adults by the other Order members. In a war, I would think you would have to mature more quickly. I hope you update soon!

Great chapter!  Glad you are back.  Can't wait to see how it develops with Hermione, Remus and Snape.

Don't feel bad, I enjoyed the chapter and was able to pick up where you left off.  I just love stories that are like a warm pair of fuzzy slippers.

That was an interesting chapter.  I skimmed the last few chapters before this one to refresh my memory, but I think I need to go back and reread more carefully.  I'm glad you posted, I really like this story.

What a miserable existence Severus must live through. Now that he has pushed Hermione away it seems he is regretting doing so. Ron is definitely not my favorite character in JKR's books and I think you have him depicted perfectly. I believe he is whiny and selfish and he speaks without thinking many times.

I've really been enjoying this story so far but I must admit I'm not up for a Ron/Remus/Severus/Hermione quadrangle.  Surely Hermione has enough male admirers without adding Remus?  If not, this is a man too many for me.

As long as you don't abandon it, I'll stay with it–for it's a quite intriguing story line and the characters are real human beings. Really like it very much.

I am really enjoying this story so far.  Glad to see Hermione finally making a decision about Ron but please God not Lupin too?  Poor girl - she'll be confused as hell by the time this is all over...and Lupin, Snape, and Ron may all kill each other yet.  Of course, Harry will have to get involved and he'll probably just kill'em All off - along with Voldy himself.  Grimauld Place will never be the same again - LOL.