Fifteen
Chapter 15 of 16
StormySkizeThe holidays continue at Grimmauld Place. Hermione and Ron have a serious discussion. Fred and George are going to a New Year's Eve party in Muggle London, and they have extra tickets!
Disclaimer: All characters and settings of Potterverse are the property of J.K. Rowling and other sundry entities. Only the plot belongs to me. I am making no money. I play in this universe for the sheer joy of it. My only payment is the kind reviews and comments of those who read and enjoy my tale. This story is canon-compliant through HBP. DH has, for the most part, been happily disregarded, especially that sappy epilogue!
Special thanks go to my beta reader, JuJuJenn. She makes sure I stay focused.
Fifteen
At about seven o'clock on Christmas morning, Hermione knocked loudly on Ron and Harry's door and then slipped into their room carrying two vials.
"Wake up, you two," Hermione chirped in a cheery voice. She shook Harry's shoulder and gave Ron's arse a not-so-gentle kick with her slipper-clad foot.
"Great Merlin's balls my head aches," Ron moaned as he sat up in his bed.
"Drink this, you'll feel better," she said as she handed Ron one of the vials. She turned toward Harry's bed and handed him the other one.
"Thanks, Hermione," Harry said as he gratefully swallowed the potion that she provided.
"Does this come with a lecture?" Ron asked as he squinted against the glare coming in from the window. "Not that we don't deserve one."
"It's Christmas. No lectures today. Just the fact that you realise you deserve one is a step in the right direction."
"Are my parents here yet?" Ron shuddered as he swallowed the potion and then clamped a hand over his mouth, afraid he might be sick.
"She Flooed a couple of minutes ago, which is why I came to wake you up."
"Thanks for that," Harry said.
"Oi, she wouldn't care that it's Christmas; she'd just lecture us anyway ... or me, at least. She thinks Harry's a saint."
Harry flushed. "Nah, she doesn't."
"Of course she does," Ron insisted. "That's why I like having you next to me when I face her."
"Just hurry and get up," Hermione said. "Go brush your teeth and shower; get the smell off you or else she'll know what you've been up to anyway."
"Hey, we're both adults," Ron said.
"Then go down the way you are," Hermione said in a reasonable tone. "See if I care."
"I've got the shower first," Ron said as he threw back the covers and jumped out of bed. His head was already pounding a lot less, and the cobwebs were breaking up.
"Go on, then," Harry said. "You need it more than I do."
"You drank just as much as I did."
"Yeah, but I've got more tolerance for alcohol than you do."
"Right."
"You two are gormless," Hermione said with a grin. "I'll see you both at breakfast."
"Thanks again," Harry said.
"Consider it your Christmas present."
Harry and Ron both laughed, and Hermione left them to their morning routine.
Hermione's quick-thinking intervention had saved Ron and Harry from one of Molly's lectures, and the rest of the morning passed uneventfully.
Minerva Flooed into Grimmauld Place before dinner, and she and Snape locked themselves in the library for nearly an hour. When Minerva came out, she was alone.
"Where's Severus?" Molly asked. "Dinner is nearly ready."
"He asked me to make his apologies," Minerva said. "He's ... not feeling well."
Molly shook her head. "I'll bring him a tray."
"I'm sure he'll appreciate that, Molly. Thank you."
Dinner was a subdued affair, everyone acutely aware of Snape's absence and the reason for it.
Several hours later, Arthur was able to persuade Snape to come down to the kitchen and share a pot of tea and a plate of ginger biscuits with them all.
Snape even managed a small smile as Fred and George teased Molly about her candy-cane-striped hair.
By the time the last biscuit was gone, the mood in the room was more relaxed, and they could almost forget that there was a war on.
On Boxing Day, Hermione pulled Ron aside and told him she needed to speak with him.
"I'll come to your room tonight," Ron said as he grinned at her.
"No. Let's meet in the library," she replied. "Nine o'clock?"
"Sure," Ron said, but he was no longer smiling.
"I'm sorry, Ron."
They were sitting side-by-side on a battered old settee in the Black library.
"I thought you were in love with me!"
"I thought I was, too," she replied in a small, sad voice. "I was wrong."
"You're not in love with Harry, are you?"
"I love Harry like a brother."
"Who else is there, then? Who are you in love with?"
"Sometimes it isn't about being in love with someone else. Sometimes it's about not being in love at all."
"I don't understand."
"I can't make it any plainer. I love you, but I love you the same way I love Harry like a brother."
Ron's eyes narrowed dangerously.
"You've gone and fallen in love with the greasy git, haven't you? Things were all right between us until you started working with him at that 'private lab' of his! What's he done to you?"
"He hasn't done anything to me."
"He's probably got you under the Imperius," Ron declared.
"Don't be ridiculous."
"So you're not in love with him?"
Knowing Ron as well as she did, Hermione had anticipated that he would ask that question. She had searched her own heart to find the answer.
Was she in love with Severus Snape?
She certainly respected him. His intelligence was appealing. His voice had a low, seductive timbre, which she was sure he was aware of and used to his advantage when he needed to. He could be sarcastic, abrasive, and petty, but he had a deep core of honour and morality, as well.
There was no denying she was attracted to him. Given the opportunity to nurture that attraction, she was sure she would have no difficulty falling in love with him.
But as things stood, with all the uncertainties of the war, she could answer Ron honestly.
"No, I'm not in love with him."
"Don't lie to me!" Ron shouted as he jumped to his feet.
"I'm not lying to you."
"I won't let him take you away from me."
Hermione had sworn to herself that she wouldn't lose her temper, but she couldn't help but react to Ron's shouted words.
"He didn't take me away from you I took me away from you! It was my decision, Ron mine!"
"And what'll I tell everyone when they ask why we're not together any more?"
"Tell them you broke up with me, if that'll make you feel better. I don't care."
Ron looked at her as if seeing her for the first time. Then he turned and stomped out of the room, slamming the door loudly as he left.
The next few days were tense.
Ron and Hermione avoided each other as much as they could in the confined space of Grimmauld Place. Hermione spent a lot of time at the lab in the Himalayas. There were always potions to be brewed, and even if there weren't, the library there was far superior to the one in the Black house.
When they couldn't avoid each other, Hermione tried to carry on as though nothing was wrong between them.
Ron ignored her, directing his comments to Harry, who was placed in the unenviable position of having to act as an intermediary between his two best friends.
Because Ron had taken Hermione at her word and had told his parents that the break-up was his idea, Molly was actually cooler toward Ron than she was towards Hermione.
Remus remained neutral. He didn't campaign to get them back together (unlike Ginny and Molly), and he offered no advice (unlike Fred and George, who had plenty to say).
Snape, of course, ignored the situation entirely.
By the morning of New Year's Eve, Ron's ire had begun to dissipate a bit. The three of them had just finished breakfast the first time in nearly a week that Ron had actually sat down at the same time as Hermione for a meal.
"It's about time you two came to your senses and stopped acting so stupid," Harry said.
Hermione resisted the urge to point out that she wasn't the one who'd been acting stupidly.
"Yeah, well, it's going to take some getting used to," Ron grumbled.
"I know I've said it before," Hermione said, "but I really am sorry, Ron."
He looked at her and smiled slightly.
"I'm sorry, too, Hermione. I've been acting like a git."
"You'll find someone else someone you're better suited to."
"Of course I will. With my boyish charm and rakish good looks, that's a given."
Hermione rolled her eyes. "You're such a wanker," she said.
"Well, I have to be now, don't I? My girlfriend's gone and thrown me over."
Harry choked on his pumpkin juice, and Ron and Hermione both pounded him on the back.
"Now I know you two are all right," Harry said when he finally got his coughing under control.
"We're fine, aren't we?" Hermione said to Ron.
"Yeah, we're fine."
"In that case, did you finish the chapter that Snape told you to read?"
"Are you going to start nagging me again?" Ron asked with a scowl.
"Of course I am. But as your friend, instead of your girlfriend, it won't annoy you nearly as much."
"Don't bet on it," Ron mumbled. But he pulled out Dark, Darker, Darkest and opened it on the table in front of him.
Early that evening, Hermione, Harry, Ron, and Remus were sitting in the parlour talking when Fred and George arrived.
"What are you two doing here?" Ron asked. "I thought you were going to some party tonight."
"We are," Fred said. "But it won't really get started until at least eight o'clock."
"We've come to invite the lot of you to come with us," George added.
"We can't go to a party!" Hermione exclaimed.
"Why not?" Ron asked. "This is the first year we're old enough to celebrate New Year's Eve, and we're stuck here."
"There's a war on, or have you forgotten?" Hermione scolded.
"Not to worry, Hermione," George said. "The party's in Muggle London. There won't be any Death Eaters invited."
"There may be spies about ..." Hermione began.
"Have you been to the chemist lately, Miss Granger?" said Snape from the doorway.
"What?" Hermione turned to look at Snape. And then her eyes widened as she realised what he'd said.
"Well, that would certainly be a solution. I find it difficult to believe, however, that you would approve of our going to a party," she said with a smile.
Snape shrugged. "It might actually be a good idea. Being cooped up here can certainly put a strain on one's nerves. After an evening of frivolity, you may come back more prepared to concentrate on your lessons."
"Yeah," Ron said. "Snape's right."
Snape gave a soft snort.
"You're a self-serving little tosser, aren't you?" Snape said.
"If that means I'll say anything to get out of this house for a few hours, then, yeah, I'm a self-serving tosser," Ron agreed without a trace of rancour. "Now, what's this solution you're talking about?"
Hermione turned back and stared intently at Harry. Then she raised her wand and aimed it at him.
Before their eyes, he began to change.
His hair lightened and began to wave slightly, and then it lengthened, spilling over his forehead and covering any trace of his scar. His skin darkened a bit, giving it a sun-kissed look as though he had just stepped off a beach on the Riviera, or some place equally warm. His nose broadened, his lips thinned, and his eyes changed from bright green to hazel.
"Well done, Miss Granger," Snape said as he peered at her handiwork.
"Thank you."
"Blimey," Ron said to Harry, "you don't look anything like yourself."
"Your turn, Ron," Hermione said.
"Hey, there's no improving on perfection, but you can try."
Hermione sighed, and Fred and George both snickered.
With a wicked gleam in her eye, Hermione raised her wand.
Ron seemed to shrink as his lanky frame filled out, becoming thicker and more muscular. His nose shortened, his lips became fuller, and his eyes turned from bright blue to muddy brown. Hermione hesitated over his hair. There were still streaks of emerald green visible in between the red locks; the effects of the Christmas cracker hadn't entirely faded yet. His hair looked like the leaves of a deciduous tree one that had not quite completed its Autumnal change.
"Sorry, Ron," Hermione muttered as she waved her wand again.
And then Ron's hair disappeared, leaving him completely bald. As if to compensate, she added a scraggly brown moustache and a wispy beard.
"You look like a boxer," George said.
"Oi, what'd you do to my hair?" Ron said as he fingered the top of his bald head.
"There was no way to get the green out."
"I'd rather have green hair than no hair."
"Green hair would draw attention," Hermione explained.
"And a bald head won't?" Ron whinged.
"Lots of Muggle men shave their heads," George said. "And with all those muscles, the girls will be falling over you."
"You think so?"
Fred and George both nodded solemnly.
Ron didn't seem convinced.
"You can go out bald," Snape interjected, "or you can have your green hair back and remain here this evening. The choice is yours."
"Well, if you're going to put it that way ..."
"I am."
Everyone laughed.
Hermione turned toward Remus and tilted her head thoughtfully.
"I'm not sure I should go," Remus said before Hermione could start forming his glamour.
"Why shouldn't you?" Harry asked.
"Well ... I'm supposed to be dead. What if I'm seen?"
"Believe me, when I get done with you, no one will recognise you," Hermione said.
"No one would recognise any of us," Harry said.
Remus turned to Snape.
"What do you think, Severus?"
"I think in the weeks to come, you'll be heartily sick of this place. Right now, the Dark Lord isn't paying much attention to the Muggle world. Take advantage while you can because you may not have another opportunity.
"Besides, this bunch of reprobates needs someone to keep an eye on them."
Remus grinned.
"All right then, Hermione work your magic on me," he said, and Hermione raised her wand.
Remus's hair turned from sandy-brown to a deep auburn shade. His eyes changed from amber-gold to a bright sapphire blue. His moustache disappeared, but a small, neat goatee graced his chin. His skin paled, and freckles appeared across his nose and cheeks. He looked at least ten years younger.
"You look like one of us now," Fred said.
"Yeah, you could pass for one of our brothers tonight," George added.
"All right, let's party!" Ron said enthusiastically.
"Do your glamour now, Hermione," Harry said.
"Oh, I don't feel like going to a party."
"You have to come; it won't be any fun without you."
"Sure it will. You can have a boys' night out. I'd just be in the way."
"Nonsense, Miss Granger," Snape said. "You need a respite just as much as the others do."
"In that case, are you coming with us?" Hermione said.
"Don't be absurd."
"I'm not being absurd. You're under as much strain as we are more, even. If anyone deserves a night of 'frivolity', it's you."
"I don't frivol, Miss Granger," Snape said. He somehow managed to look disdainful and dignified at the same time.
"Maybe you should," Hermione shot back. "At least once in a while."
"Hermione's right, Severus," Remus said. "You should come with us."
Snape threw Remus a withering glare.
"I have things to see to, duties to perform for Minerva."
"I was with you and Minerva this morning," Remus said. "I don't recall her giving you any additional duties."
"Your recollection is faulty."
"No, it isn't."
"Come on, Snape," Harry said. "You're holding up the party. Let Hermione give you a glamour and let's go."
"I'm quite capable of performing a glamour," Snape replied, apparently affronted.
"Prove it," Hermione challenged.
"Oh, very well," Snape said. "But when I sit in a corner and fail to participate in your foolishness, don't say I didn't warn you."
He closed his eyes and his appearance began to alter.
His hair shortened, became thicker, and developed a wave, although it remained black as sin. His skin, usually pale and sallow, warmed and brightened. His lips filled out, and his nose, while still a bit large, lost its hook. The frown lines between his eyes and around his mouth smoothed out.
He opened his eyes and Hermione noticed that while they were still dark, they no longer seemed cold and unreadable.
"Satisfied?" he said through gritted teeth teeth that were less crooked and less yellowed.
Hermione looked him up and down. He was still formidable looking, but less intimidating. He looked younger and less stressed.
"Holy shite!" Ron said. "Look at that hair it's curly, like a girl's."
"Ron!"
Snape held a hand up, keeping her from further comment.
"I beg your pardon, Weasley it's wavy not curly, and at least I have hair."
Ron's hand flew to his bald pate.
"Yeah, I guess you're right."
Hermione relaxed a bit as a confrontation was avoided.
"Do your glamour, Hermione," Ron urged. "I can't wait to leave."
Hermione nodded and closed her eyes in concentration.
Her hair smoothed out, becoming long and straight. It's colour didn't change, but there were streaks of gold and honey running through it now. Her facial features shifted slightly; her cheekbones became more prominent, her chin developed a dimple, and her nose turned up very slightly. Her eyes changed from brown to violet, and her lashes lengthened, framing her eyes in dark spikes. A small beauty mark appeared at the corner of her mouth.
"Great Merlin's Y-fronts, you're beautiful! Now I wish I hadn't let you break up with me."
"As if you could have stopped her," George said. "And I thought you told us you broke up with her?"
Ron flushed slightly.
"It was a mutual decision, wasn't it, Ron?" Hermione said before Ron could speak.
Ron sent her a grateful look.
"Yeah ... it was mutual."
"Are we going to stand around all night talking, or are we going to party?" Fred asked.
"I'm ready," Hermione said.
"Where are we going?" Remus asked.
"Liverpool," George said. "Some Muggle singing group used to play there before they became famous. The Insects, the Spiders ... something like that."
"The Beatles?" Remus and Snape spoke almost in unison.
"Yeah, that's it ... the Beetles. I knew it was some kind of bug."
Snape shook his head, and Remus grinned.
"Do you know where it is, Severus?" Remus asked.
"Of course."
"Fred or George can take Ron. One of us can take Harry, and the other Hermione."
"I'll take Potter."
"Then I guess you're riding with me, Hermione," Remus said as he held out his arm.
"If I recall correctly, the club's on Mathew Street," Snape said. "We can Apparate to the Victoria Street station. It's only a short walk from there."
"We should all cast Disillusioning Charms on ourselves," Remus said. "The station will be crowded, but I think if the seven of us suddenly appeared, we'd be noticed."
"Did you make reservations?" Snape asked George. "I imagine the place will be packed."
"We've got tickets," Fred said. "One of our Muggle suppliers actually rented the club out for the night. He was giving tickets to all his customers. We got eight of them."
"Good. I'd hate to have to Imperius the bouncer."
They all cast the Disillusioning Charms. Fred took Ron's arm and Disapparated, followed by George, Harry and Snape, and Remus and Hermione.
Only moments later, the seven of them were pushed together in the middle of the crowded station. They made their way to the exit, dropping their Disillusionment Charms one at a time, to avoid being noticed.
"Which way?" Harry asked.
"I'd say we should just follow the crowd," Snape replied. He indicated the stream of people walking down Victoria Street.
"Our supplier did say it was going to be a big party," George said.
Author's note 1: This story was written in response to the Post DH Challenge on The Petulant Poetess.
I chose prompt #5: Harry touches his scar; it hasn't pained him in 19 years. He
hears hooting, rolls over in bed to see Hedwig sweeping in the open
window at Privet Drive, and realizes that his 17th birthday isn't far
off. Go for it... a new seventh year for the lot.
I've basically begun my story where Half Blood Prince ends. This is the way seventh year and beyond might have gone; even, dare I say it should have gone!
Author's note 2: The administrators here at TPP have graciously granted me Validated Author status. While I appreciate the honour, it does come with the added responsibility that my posts be as near to perfect as I can make them. With this in mind, I would ask my readers to bring any errors that I and my beta may have missed to my attention. Thank you so much!
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179 Reviews | 6.67/10 Average
I really like this story, in fact I might say I love it :P
Am interested in how the Hermione/Snape/Remus love triangle is going to pan out lol. I love that Serverus stood up for her so immediately, god love him. why couldn't Hermione have slipped some tongue into that kiss on the cheek :P hehehe
Loved it
I am also really sorry about your Dad, I hope things are a lot better for you now. I also hope that you don't break your promise of updating within 8 months:P, unless I read that wrong and you were promising that you wouldn't be updating until 8 months from when you added the chapter, and if that's the case, I greatly look forward to May/June :D
Lots of love and thoughts for you
Bree
my condolences on the death of your father. it's never easy, no matter how old we are. great update and welcome back! thanks muchly.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much for your kind words.
I am so glad you updated! I am so sorry about your Dad. I know what it's like to lose a parent. I hope things get easier for you. My thoughts are with you.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I appreciate your kind thoughts. Things have gotten a bit easier, and I'm trying to concentrate on this story only and get it finished. I have quite a bit written, but still quite a bit to go as well. I'll keep at it. This fic will not be abandoned.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave a comment.
glad you are back. Nice chapter
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
Hooray! An update! I'm sorry to hear about your dad, and I'm glad you've started to dig yourself out the plot holes you were having trouble with. So happy to see this continued :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. I'm still struggling with a few plot holes, but I'm trying to patch them over.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave such kind words.
very nice so far. :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I appreciate your interest.
Wonderful chapter, the reader really feels the mood in this chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks. I thought they all deserved a night of frivolity.
Amazing!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I"m glad you're enjoying.
Very interesting... Lupin checking out Hermione, and Snape having conflicted feelings about her himself. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. At this point, I"m not sure that Lupin realises what's going on ... but Snape is very perceptive, isn't he?Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment ... and some stars!
Now I have another story to add to my Favorites! This really is how things should have gone after Dumbledore's death. So Remus seems to be taking a more personal interest in Hermione, and Severus has noticed. Fortunately, Ron's too oblivious to notice, especially given that he's often dangerously ignorant... add jealous vindictiveness to the mix and heaven help the Order. Great story!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.Yes, lots of emotions bubbling close to the surface. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Cute New Year scene. I'm glad you are back.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
I am really looking forward to the completion of this. Have you any idea how long it shall take? I love everything you have written but cannot abide an unfinished story (once I've started it) because I devour books! Excellent work!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I have not abandoned this story. There have been RL issues that have made writing very difficult for me, but I'm hoping to get back to this tale soon. Thank you for reading and for leaving a wonderful review in spite of how long it's been since I updated.
Just read through your story and so far I have really enjoyed it. I was very impressed by how smoothly everything seemed to go - that is, the course of the story all seemed very believable and natural. This is in part because you've done a great job of gradually allowing the relationships between the characters in the story to develop naturally and on their own, rather than rushing any of the interactions between various people. All in all I've found this an awesome story - the only blemish on my satisfaction is that I noticed how long it has been since you last updated, and this made me very sad. I desperately hope that this story is not abandoned, because I really want to read more (especially the Muggle party - I can't wait to read that chapter and see what you do with that scene). So pretty pretty please keep updating?
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
This story has NOT been abandoned. I lost my dad a few months ago, and the emotional drain has been so much that I've found it very difficult to connect with my fictional characters. I'm desperately trying to get back 'into' this story. I appreciate everyone's patience as I struggle with RL issues.
LOL It's like a costume party for this lot! Really funny.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
ees time to paaaaaaartay! ~sits in the dark strobey colored ravey club and plays E Nomine techno club mixes and rocks out to crazy german music~we all know snape likes some good german techno
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, my ... I may have given you a wrong impression ...I'm nearly 59 years old ... I remember the Beatles when they DID play at the Cavern.German techno? I'm not even sure what that is ...I'm thinking you like the story ... you did give me some lovely stars ... but German techno? Not is this, or any other lifetime, for me ... or for Snape ... at least not in one of my stories!Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review!(Poor, old, decrepit author walks away, shaking her head. German techno??)
Response from keske (Reviewer)
Yeah, I had too much sugar and got a little carried away. But yes, I do love your story. I suppose I was just in the mood to ramble on about the kind of music i was listening to. But don't worry, I love the Beatles! Here Comes the Sun is my longtime favorite...and Octopus' Garden ^.^I suppose what I was really trying to say was that I hope the group enjoys their time in muggle London and experiences some wonderful new things!But...um, yes. The band is called E Nomine...eh, if you want to look it up like on youtube or something XD (I...am one crazy kid, yes)
That breakfast after Ron and Hermione broke up was classic! Nicely done.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
It was brilliant to choose Liverpool for their party. In my humble opinion, it's one of the best cities for a good pub-crawl!! Makes me wish I could go out with them.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've never been to Liverpool, never been to Europe at all, though I would love to go some day. I do a lot of on-line research when I choose settings for my stories. I always try to get the geography right. I really chose Liverpool because I wanted to use the "Spiders, Insects, Beetles (Beatles), Bugs" reference. Little things like that just tickle me, and I love including them in my stories. Lots of times the subtle references don't even get noticed (or if they are noticed, they aren't commented upon), but I love putting them in there. And I wish I could go out with them, too ... sigh ...Thanks for reading and reviewing.
One thing I always figured was wrong with DH - thatDumbledore wouldn't have had some way of verifyingSnape's loyalty to at least one senior Order memberin an emergency. I understand why it couldn't becommon knowledge, but Dumbledore would have hada Plan B for Severus. I'm so glad to see him take hisrightful place. Yeeaay!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
That was one of my major complaints, as well. Dumbledore basically hung Snape out to dry. I understand the need for secrecy and all that, but come on -- couldn't just ONE other person have known Snape's true loyalties? Dumbledore expected Snape to be killed -- hell, even SNAPE didn't expect to survive. But shouldn't there have been some sort of contingency plan in place just in case, by some miracle, he did make it through? The only information left behind that proves Snape's 'innocence' are the memories that he passes on to Harry, and that scene in the Shrieking Shack when he does so is lame, lame, lame. How did Snape or Dumbledore know that Harry would be 'available' to receive those memories? I also feel that the 'promise' made in the very first book ("I can show you how to brew fame, bottle glory, and even put a stopper in death!") was horribly broken by JKR. In my personal opinion, I think she got pissed off by how popular Snape became in fandom, and she compromised her own story line in order to sabotage that popularity. (What? They love SNAPE? Snape is horrible! I'll show them!)That's just my opinion, of course, but I feel she truly wasted a valuable opportunity to prove the very values she purported to uphold -- that love and redemption are important and can make a difference.Oh, how I rattle on ... sorry!Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from AmyLouise (Reviewer)
I do agree absolutely that JKR didn't know what to do withSnape and his increasing fascination for readers - especially those who are old enough to appreciatesomething of his complexity. The one with the realtalent, and the true hero, was obviously Snape. Andhow does JKR reward him? By having a Potter namedafter him. That would have thrilled him no end, I'msure!
Hmmm.... I'm not seeing this party as a good idea. Let's see:- 8 free tickets from a mystery supplier- given to the brothers of the Weasley known to be Harry's best friend- and for a "private" party - packed with helpless mugglesI smell a trap! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wish I'd been clever enough to write a trap into the party, but honestly, it's just a party -- a chance for the folks who've been cooped up in Grimmauld Place to get out and 'frivol' a bit. I hope you won't be too disappointed.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I just found this story, and since I think DH wasn't as well-contructed as the earlier books, and the Epiloguesucked, I think it's worth reading. I like your start, andI'll be trying to catch up now.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I'll have to agree with you about DH and that awful epilogue. I hope you'll enjoy the way I tell my version of Book 7.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Cool! Can't wait to read what sort of mischief this lot can get themselves into!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I wasn't sure what kind of reception this idea would get. I'm glad you like it.Thanks for reading and reviewing and for leaving all the pretty stars!
Congratulations on becoming a validated author!Nice chapter, I chuckled over Hermione's warning the boys, I liked how Remus and Severus reacted to going to the Beatles and I'm left wondering if Severus would want to hold Hermione's hand. I know...terrible pun
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
It is a terrible pun ... I wish I'd thought of it!I'm glad you're enjoying.Thanks for reading and reviewing.Love the stars!
severus in liverpool! i can hardly wait! what a first rate idea! thanks so much
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wasn't sure what kind of a reception that idea would get. I'm glad you approve!Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Glad to see this again.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I've made a New Year's resolution to get this story finished. Nothing annoys me more than a story that is left to languish, and I'm ashamed to find myself the author of such a piece. It is a situation I vow to rectify!Thanks for all the shiny, pretty New Year's stars!
oh my gosh, are you and i kindred sprits or what. i began a story over a year ago, had most of it plotted out in my head and in notes (but didn't have chapters outlined or anything.... i'm obviously a novice!). after writing about 20 chapters, i was jonesing to post it, even though i had only about 20% of the story written at best. now, a year later, i'm at chapter 30, and it's about 3 months or so between posts because i'm having a hard time writing the 'filler' chapters inbetween all the planned out action. arrgghhh. so, i learned my lesson. anyway. i'm quite interested in this story and can't wait to see where it's going to go. i have a feeling that it may be a long one!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've actually written quite a lot of it. The problem is that it's all in pieces and I have to find a way to tie everything together. Also, one of my major plotlines had to be scrapped after I started posting. Now, the story is heading in a direction that is no longer viable and I have to try to re-route it in a way that still makes sense. Had I not posted the beginning chapters, I could have re-written and no one would have even noticed the detour!I still see the destination in my head ... now I have to use my GPS (Gimpy Plotting Skills) to get there without falling into a p(l)ot hole!Sometimes I wonder why I torture myself this way ... sigh ...Thanks for the encouragement!And happy New Year!