Chapter 10
Chapter 10 of 16
StormySkizeBook 7 -- The Way it Should Have Been. In Chapter Ten: Remus has been badly injured, but has found his way back to Grimmauld Place. After nearly dying, he is ready to tell his story.
Disclaimer: All characters and settings of Potterverse are the property of J.K. Rowling and other sundry entities. Only the plot belongs to me. I am making no money. I play in this universe for the sheer joy of it. My only payment is the kind reviews and comments of those who read and enjoy my tale. This story is canon-compliant through HBP. DH has, for the most part, been happily disregarded, especially that sappy epilogue!
Special thanks go to my beta reader, JuJuJenn. She makes sure I stay focused.
Ten
"Is it beginning to storm out?" Molly asked a few minutes later as she ladled out soup. "I thought I heard thunder."
"That was Snape," Ron said around a mouthful of cheese sandwich.
"Are you sure?" Molly asked. "I've never heard Severus make so much noise when he Apparates."
"We saw him when he came down the stairs," Harry said. "He looked piss ... er ... hacked off about something."
"'Course, he's always pissed off about something," Ron added.
Hermione opened her mouth as though to speak, but Molly spoke before she could.
"Maybe if you studied and practiced like he told you to, he wouldn't be angry with you all the time," Molly admonished.
"I wasn't the one who pissed him off this time," Ron countered. "Hermione was with him."
Three pairs of eyes turned toward Hermione.
Hermione was spared having to come up with a plausible explanation for Snape's rotten mood by the sound of a small bell tinkling upstairs.
"That's the warning charm I put over Remus," she said as she jumped to her feet. "I'd better go check on him."
Molly put her spoon down. "I'll help you, dear."
"Finish your lunch," Hermione said. "I'll call you if I need you."
"Well, if you're sure ..."
"I'm sure. Likely he'll just fall back asleep."
Molly nodded, and Hermione left the kitchen to run up the stairs.
When Hermione entered Remus's bedroom, he was sitting on the edge of the bed, grasping the bedpost, and trying to pull himself to his feet.
"What are you doing?" Hermione exclaimed as she rushed to his side. "Are you trying to reopen that wound so you can bleed to death?"
"I need to talk to Severus and Harry right away," Remus said. His face had the white, pinched look of a man in tremendous pain and trying to ignore it.
"Lie back down this instant," Hermione said as she pushed at his shoulders to force him back against the pillow not a particularly difficult task considering how weak he was.
"They have to get to it before he moves it! Get Severus and Harry," he insisted.
"Harry and Ron are downstairs."
"Where's Severus?"
"He left the house about fifteen minutes ago. He didn't say where he was going, but I've an idea where he might be. I'll go get him."
"Quickly, Hermione."
"I have to go downstairs and get my cloak before I can leave. I'll have Harry and Ron come up and sit with you until we get back.
"Please, Remus, rest until then. You're still weak."
Remus nodded and then let his head drop back down onto the pillow.
Harry and Ron hovered near the foot of Remus's bed.
"We thought you were a goner, for sure," Ron said.
"So did I," Remus replied.
"What happened, Remus?" Harry asked.
"Can we wait until Severus and Hermione get here?" Remus asked. "I don't think I have the strength to go through this more than once."
Harry and Ron exchanged glances.
"Don't worry," Remus assured them. "I won't die before they arrive."
"We didn't mean ..."
"Yes, you did; and if I look only half as bad as I feel, I understand. But, really, I'm going to be fine. Werewolves heal quickly, you know. I'm over the worst of it already."
"Do you want some soup, then, while we wait?" Ron asked. "My mum made it, so you know it's good."
"I'd love some soup," Remus replied.
Although Hermione knew how important it was for her and Severus to return to Grimmauld Place as quickly as possible, she couldn't resist Hereward's request for a tickle. She stroked and lightly scratched his long scaly neck for a few moments.
"I'm sorry, Hereward," Hermione said as she patted him one last time. "I really need to speak to Severus. Is he here?"
"He wouldn't give me a tickle at all," Hereward said in a rather petulant tone. "He yelled at me."
"He has a lot on his mind. I'm sure he didn't mean to yell at you."
The door jerked open before Hereward could reply.
"I most certainly did mean to yell at him," Snape snarled at Hermione. He then turned his attention to Hereward.
"Didn't I tell you I wasn't to be disturbed? Why haven't you done your duty and cremated this ... this interloper?"
"Hermione has the password," Hereward said.
"I specifically told you not to let her in!"
"She has the password and may enter any time she pleases. You did not withdraw your protection."
"That is an oversight I will remedy as soon as I have a spare moment," Snape said as he glared at Hereward.
Then his glare shifted from Hereward back to Hermione.
"Well, since you're here, there must be news. Is Lupin dead?"
"Remus is awake and aware. And he's asking for you."
"Did he say what he overheard?" Snape asked.
Hermione shook her head. "No, only that something has to be moved quickly."
"The Dark Lord has requested my assistance with something later tonight. I'll wager it's one of the Horcruxes, and Lupin knows where it is.
"We need to get back immediately."
Hermione nodded.
"I have to get my cloak," Snape said. "Go back through the passage and wait for me at the entrance."
It was while they were walking back to the Apparition point that Hermione brought up Snape's threat to remove her from his protection, thus denying her access to the hidden laboratory.
"You're not really going to lock me out of here, are you? That's a bit extreme, even for you."
"I'm seriously considering it," he replied. "I don't appreciate your following me around like a ..."
Hermione stopped walking.
When Snape realised that Hermione was no longer walking beside him, he stopped and turned back to find her glaring at him.
"I didn't follow you!"
"You're here, aren't you? I certainly didn't send for you."
"I came because Remus said it was important that he speak to you."
"How did you know I was here? I didn't say where I was going. Did you go to Spinner's End as well?
"Oh, wait thanks to the bloody Ministry I no longer have a home at Spinner's End, which is why I'm forced to live at Grimmauld Place where I'm surrounded by bothersome children, and I have no privacy and no peace."
Hermione scowled at him.
"How about Knockturn Alley, then? Did you ask around like a shrieking fishwife trying to track down her errant husband?"
"Don't be insulting. And make up your mind am I a bothersome child or a shrieking fishwife?"
Snape opened his mouth, but Hermione cut him off.
"It wasn't that difficult to figure out. I know how much you enjoy brewing. It soothes you. And this place soothes you, as well."
"You know nothing of the kind," Snape retorted.
"I've been here with you many times in the past few weeks. I've seen how this place grounds you. It strengthens you, fortifies you ..."
"We don't have time for your epideictic ramblings, Miss Granger," Snape said as he resumed walking.
When they reached the Apparition area, Hermione turned to him.
"You're right," she said. "We've no time for drama mine or yours. This discussion, however, is far from over."
She took a deep breath and Disapparated without a sound.
"What a surprise," Snape mumbled to himself. And then he was gone as well.
Only moments after they returned to Grimmauld Place, Snape and Hermione were standing next to Harry and Ron at the foot of Remus's bed listening to him relate what had happened to him.
"As you know, Voldemort has been easing up on his attacks against Muggles," Remus began. "That didn't keep Greyback from staging the occasional raid, however. He usually kept them relatively tame. He liked to frighten and intimidate people, but he didn't kill. As long as the raids were in isolated areas and didn't attract the attention of the Muggle authorities, no one cared.
"A couple of weeks ago during one of those raids, Greyback took a fancy to a Muggle woman. She didn't run screaming when he showed up, but stood on the front porch of her home with a knife in her hand prepared to defend herself.
"Whether it was her looks or her defiance, I don't know, but he seemed to become obsessed with her after that night. He would return, night after night, to the woods around her house and watch for hours. He talked about her incessantly and was determined to turn her during the next full moon."
"Is there a point to this story?" Snape asked impatiently.
"Yes, and I'm getting to it."
"Soon, I hope."
Remus ignored him and continued speaking.
"The full moon was on Sunday. As soon as we all transformed, Greyback led us back to the woman's home. He'd arranged with several of his followers to gain entry to the house. Two of them leapt through a window, shattering it. He followed them into the house, only to find it empty. The woman was apparently a lot smarter than Greyback had thought. She was gone.
"Greyback was incensed. He believed that someone had warned her away.
"On Monday night, Greyback sent for me. As soon as I entered his tent, he put a Body-Bind Curse on me. I didn't even have time to raise my wand. I couldn't move, but he made sure I could see.
"He had the woman. He'd already raped her. He'd already questioned her, as well. By the time I got there, she was dead."
"He then told me that the woman had named me as the person who had warned her away."
"You didn't, did you?" Snape asked.
"I'd wanted to, but I knew I couldn't compromise my position to save just one person."
Remus closed his eyes as though to block out the painful memory.
"Someone pretended to be you. Someone set you up," Harry surmised.
Remus nodded. "Probably Peter," he said. "He's hated me since the incident at the end of your third year. He visits the pack frequently to relay orders from Voldemort to Greyback."
"He would have used Polyjuice Potion," Snape said. "It's one of the potions I brew on a regular basis, so it would be readily available."
"Anyway, once the woman named me, Greyback was convinced. He called in a few members of the pack and invited them to teach me a lesson.
"When he got tired of watching them beat me, he sent them away telling them he would finish the job himself. He'd taken my wand, of course, and I was still under the Body-Bind Curse. There was no way for me to reach my Portkey.
"The entire time he was kicking me around the tent, he was boasting about how crucial he was to Voldemort. He kept talking about how his master had given him an important task. He said he was safeguarding something vital to the Dark Lord."
"Then he decided to finish me off, but he told me he was going to castrate me first, make me suffer."
"He didn't, you know ... you're fine," Ron said.
"Believe me, that's one of the first things I checked when I woke up and realised I had made it out of there."
"Can't say that I blame you, mate," Ron said with a slight shudder.
"How did you get out?" Hermione asked.
"Thankfully, he released the Body-Bind Curse before he sent the Slicing Hex my way. I guess he thought I wouldn't be much of a threat with no wand and nearly unconscious from the beatings. He was right, but at the moment, I wasn't concerned with fighting back. I just wanted to get away. Luckily, I'd activated my Portkey before I entered his tent. As soon as I touched my button, I was on my way. The Slicing Hex caught me anyway, but on the leg instead of ... well ..."
"It still nearly killed you," Hermione said.
"I'm tougher than I look," Remus said with a smile.
"Did he say what it was he was protecting?" Hermione asked.
"I thought you were the smart one, Hermione," Ron said. "It's got to be one of the Horcruxes, doesn't it? He didn't need to say it."
Hermione turned to Ron.
"And just what object is the Horcrux in, Ron? How will we recognise it?"
"It's something that belonged to Godric Gryffindor," Remus said. "He made a point of telling me that, since I was in Gryffindor."
"It can't be his sword," Hermione said. "We know that's still in Dumbledore's office."
Harry's eyes lit up. "Yes, but the scabbard has been missing for decades!"
"It has?" Ron asked.
"Your research has borne fruit, Potter," Snape said. Then he turned to Remus.
"Did he say that's what it is?"
"I'm not sure he knows exactly what it is, but he did say where it is the Potter house at Godric's Hollow."
"That makes sense, of course," Snape said. "That house is where he suffered his greatest his only defeat. It would have great personal significance to him.
"We have to go there immediately."
"If we just take the scabbard, he'll know when he returns there tonight that you lied to him," Hermione said.
"We'll duplicate it, just like we did the cup," Harry said.
"That means we'll have to destroy another artefact to get rid of the Horcrux," Hermione said.
"It can't be helped," Snape said.
"Well, we'd best work out some sort of plan, then," Harry said. He'd long dreamed of returning to the house in which he'd been born, the house his parents had died in, but he'd never dreamt it would be under such circumstances.
Remus tossed back the covers and attempted to swing his legs over the side of the bed.
"Where do you think you're going?" Hermione asked. She moved to the side of the bed and put a hand on his shoulder to keep him from getting up.
"I might be able to help," Remus said.
"You're determined to see me dead, aren't you, Lupin?" Snape bit out.
"What? Of course I don't want you dead," Remus protested.
"I told the Dark Lord you were dead. I convinced him you were dead. If you are seen to be alive, he would know I lied to him. He would be ... displeased."
"He thinks I'm dead?" Remus said. "How? Greyback knows I'm alive."
"Greyback really is dead," Snape replied. "Once you escaped with such sensitive information, he had no choice but to go to the Dark Lord and try to explain what had happened. He tried to shift all the blame to you, of course, but Riddle managed to extract the truth from him. He paid for his mistake with his life."
"Can't say that I'll miss him," Remus said as he shifted back under the covers.
Hermione adjusted the covers a bit and placed her hand on his forehead, checking for fever.
"I'm fine, Hermione, but if I'm 'dead' then I guess I'm confined to this house for the duration."
"We'll get you out of the country perhaps Australia or even America," Harry said.
"I could still be of use here, couldn't I? I could work with all of you on your defence lessons. That would free up a lot of your time, Severus."
"I'm not banishing you, Lupin," Snape said with a scowl. "You'll probably go stir crazy within a month, however, and be begging to be sent to America."
"I'd rather stay and do what I can here," Remus insisted.
"It would be Minerva's decision in any case, not mine."
"I'll convince her to allow me to stay."
"That's between the two of you," Snape said. "And it will be a moot point if we don't win the war."
"We'll win," Harry said with quiet determination. "There's too much at stake for us to lose, isn't there?"
"If that's the case then we'd better take care of old Godric's scabbard, hadn't we?" Hermione said.
"Indeed," Snape replied.
The five of them then spent an hour working out a plan to find and destroy another of Voldemort's Horcruxes.
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I really like this story, in fact I might say I love it :P
Am interested in how the Hermione/Snape/Remus love triangle is going to pan out lol. I love that Serverus stood up for her so immediately, god love him. why couldn't Hermione have slipped some tongue into that kiss on the cheek :P hehehe
Loved it
I am also really sorry about your Dad, I hope things are a lot better for you now. I also hope that you don't break your promise of updating within 8 months:P, unless I read that wrong and you were promising that you wouldn't be updating until 8 months from when you added the chapter, and if that's the case, I greatly look forward to May/June :D
Lots of love and thoughts for you
Bree
my condolences on the death of your father. it's never easy, no matter how old we are. great update and welcome back! thanks muchly.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much for your kind words.
I am so glad you updated! I am so sorry about your Dad. I know what it's like to lose a parent. I hope things get easier for you. My thoughts are with you.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I appreciate your kind thoughts. Things have gotten a bit easier, and I'm trying to concentrate on this story only and get it finished. I have quite a bit written, but still quite a bit to go as well. I'll keep at it. This fic will not be abandoned.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave a comment.
glad you are back. Nice chapter
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
Hooray! An update! I'm sorry to hear about your dad, and I'm glad you've started to dig yourself out the plot holes you were having trouble with. So happy to see this continued :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. I'm still struggling with a few plot holes, but I'm trying to patch them over.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave such kind words.
very nice so far. :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I appreciate your interest.
Wonderful chapter, the reader really feels the mood in this chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks. I thought they all deserved a night of frivolity.
Amazing!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I"m glad you're enjoying.
Very interesting... Lupin checking out Hermione, and Snape having conflicted feelings about her himself. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. At this point, I"m not sure that Lupin realises what's going on ... but Snape is very perceptive, isn't he?Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment ... and some stars!
Now I have another story to add to my Favorites! This really is how things should have gone after Dumbledore's death. So Remus seems to be taking a more personal interest in Hermione, and Severus has noticed. Fortunately, Ron's too oblivious to notice, especially given that he's often dangerously ignorant... add jealous vindictiveness to the mix and heaven help the Order. Great story!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.Yes, lots of emotions bubbling close to the surface. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Cute New Year scene. I'm glad you are back.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
I am really looking forward to the completion of this. Have you any idea how long it shall take? I love everything you have written but cannot abide an unfinished story (once I've started it) because I devour books! Excellent work!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I have not abandoned this story. There have been RL issues that have made writing very difficult for me, but I'm hoping to get back to this tale soon. Thank you for reading and for leaving a wonderful review in spite of how long it's been since I updated.
Just read through your story and so far I have really enjoyed it. I was very impressed by how smoothly everything seemed to go - that is, the course of the story all seemed very believable and natural. This is in part because you've done a great job of gradually allowing the relationships between the characters in the story to develop naturally and on their own, rather than rushing any of the interactions between various people. All in all I've found this an awesome story - the only blemish on my satisfaction is that I noticed how long it has been since you last updated, and this made me very sad. I desperately hope that this story is not abandoned, because I really want to read more (especially the Muggle party - I can't wait to read that chapter and see what you do with that scene). So pretty pretty please keep updating?
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
This story has NOT been abandoned. I lost my dad a few months ago, and the emotional drain has been so much that I've found it very difficult to connect with my fictional characters. I'm desperately trying to get back 'into' this story. I appreciate everyone's patience as I struggle with RL issues.
LOL It's like a costume party for this lot! Really funny.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
ees time to paaaaaaartay! ~sits in the dark strobey colored ravey club and plays E Nomine techno club mixes and rocks out to crazy german music~we all know snape likes some good german techno
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, my ... I may have given you a wrong impression ...I'm nearly 59 years old ... I remember the Beatles when they DID play at the Cavern.German techno? I'm not even sure what that is ...I'm thinking you like the story ... you did give me some lovely stars ... but German techno? Not is this, or any other lifetime, for me ... or for Snape ... at least not in one of my stories!Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review!(Poor, old, decrepit author walks away, shaking her head. German techno??)
Response from keske (Reviewer)
Yeah, I had too much sugar and got a little carried away. But yes, I do love your story. I suppose I was just in the mood to ramble on about the kind of music i was listening to. But don't worry, I love the Beatles! Here Comes the Sun is my longtime favorite...and Octopus' Garden ^.^I suppose what I was really trying to say was that I hope the group enjoys their time in muggle London and experiences some wonderful new things!But...um, yes. The band is called E Nomine...eh, if you want to look it up like on youtube or something XD (I...am one crazy kid, yes)
That breakfast after Ron and Hermione broke up was classic! Nicely done.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
It was brilliant to choose Liverpool for their party. In my humble opinion, it's one of the best cities for a good pub-crawl!! Makes me wish I could go out with them.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've never been to Liverpool, never been to Europe at all, though I would love to go some day. I do a lot of on-line research when I choose settings for my stories. I always try to get the geography right. I really chose Liverpool because I wanted to use the "Spiders, Insects, Beetles (Beatles), Bugs" reference. Little things like that just tickle me, and I love including them in my stories. Lots of times the subtle references don't even get noticed (or if they are noticed, they aren't commented upon), but I love putting them in there. And I wish I could go out with them, too ... sigh ...Thanks for reading and reviewing.
One thing I always figured was wrong with DH - thatDumbledore wouldn't have had some way of verifyingSnape's loyalty to at least one senior Order memberin an emergency. I understand why it couldn't becommon knowledge, but Dumbledore would have hada Plan B for Severus. I'm so glad to see him take hisrightful place. Yeeaay!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
That was one of my major complaints, as well. Dumbledore basically hung Snape out to dry. I understand the need for secrecy and all that, but come on -- couldn't just ONE other person have known Snape's true loyalties? Dumbledore expected Snape to be killed -- hell, even SNAPE didn't expect to survive. But shouldn't there have been some sort of contingency plan in place just in case, by some miracle, he did make it through? The only information left behind that proves Snape's 'innocence' are the memories that he passes on to Harry, and that scene in the Shrieking Shack when he does so is lame, lame, lame. How did Snape or Dumbledore know that Harry would be 'available' to receive those memories? I also feel that the 'promise' made in the very first book ("I can show you how to brew fame, bottle glory, and even put a stopper in death!") was horribly broken by JKR. In my personal opinion, I think she got pissed off by how popular Snape became in fandom, and she compromised her own story line in order to sabotage that popularity. (What? They love SNAPE? Snape is horrible! I'll show them!)That's just my opinion, of course, but I feel she truly wasted a valuable opportunity to prove the very values she purported to uphold -- that love and redemption are important and can make a difference.Oh, how I rattle on ... sorry!Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from AmyLouise (Reviewer)
I do agree absolutely that JKR didn't know what to do withSnape and his increasing fascination for readers - especially those who are old enough to appreciatesomething of his complexity. The one with the realtalent, and the true hero, was obviously Snape. Andhow does JKR reward him? By having a Potter namedafter him. That would have thrilled him no end, I'msure!
Hmmm.... I'm not seeing this party as a good idea. Let's see:- 8 free tickets from a mystery supplier- given to the brothers of the Weasley known to be Harry's best friend- and for a "private" party - packed with helpless mugglesI smell a trap! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wish I'd been clever enough to write a trap into the party, but honestly, it's just a party -- a chance for the folks who've been cooped up in Grimmauld Place to get out and 'frivol' a bit. I hope you won't be too disappointed.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I just found this story, and since I think DH wasn't as well-contructed as the earlier books, and the Epiloguesucked, I think it's worth reading. I like your start, andI'll be trying to catch up now.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I'll have to agree with you about DH and that awful epilogue. I hope you'll enjoy the way I tell my version of Book 7.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Cool! Can't wait to read what sort of mischief this lot can get themselves into!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I wasn't sure what kind of reception this idea would get. I'm glad you like it.Thanks for reading and reviewing and for leaving all the pretty stars!
Congratulations on becoming a validated author!Nice chapter, I chuckled over Hermione's warning the boys, I liked how Remus and Severus reacted to going to the Beatles and I'm left wondering if Severus would want to hold Hermione's hand. I know...terrible pun
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
It is a terrible pun ... I wish I'd thought of it!I'm glad you're enjoying.Thanks for reading and reviewing.Love the stars!
severus in liverpool! i can hardly wait! what a first rate idea! thanks so much
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wasn't sure what kind of a reception that idea would get. I'm glad you approve!Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Glad to see this again.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I've made a New Year's resolution to get this story finished. Nothing annoys me more than a story that is left to languish, and I'm ashamed to find myself the author of such a piece. It is a situation I vow to rectify!Thanks for all the shiny, pretty New Year's stars!
oh my gosh, are you and i kindred sprits or what. i began a story over a year ago, had most of it plotted out in my head and in notes (but didn't have chapters outlined or anything.... i'm obviously a novice!). after writing about 20 chapters, i was jonesing to post it, even though i had only about 20% of the story written at best. now, a year later, i'm at chapter 30, and it's about 3 months or so between posts because i'm having a hard time writing the 'filler' chapters inbetween all the planned out action. arrgghhh. so, i learned my lesson. anyway. i'm quite interested in this story and can't wait to see where it's going to go. i have a feeling that it may be a long one!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've actually written quite a lot of it. The problem is that it's all in pieces and I have to find a way to tie everything together. Also, one of my major plotlines had to be scrapped after I started posting. Now, the story is heading in a direction that is no longer viable and I have to try to re-route it in a way that still makes sense. Had I not posted the beginning chapters, I could have re-written and no one would have even noticed the detour!I still see the destination in my head ... now I have to use my GPS (Gimpy Plotting Skills) to get there without falling into a p(l)ot hole!Sometimes I wonder why I torture myself this way ... sigh ...Thanks for the encouragement!And happy New Year!