Chapter 11
Chapter 11 of 16
StormySkizeBook 7 -- The Way It Should Have Been. In this chapter, Harry and the others prepare to find and destroy another of Voldemort's Horcruxes. And Snape overhears something he wasn't supposed to -- again!
Disclaimer: All characters and settings of Potterverse are the property of J.K. Rowling and other sundry entities. Only the plot belongs to me. I am making no money. I play in this universe for the sheer joy of it. My only payment is the kind reviews and comments of those who read and enjoy my tale. This story is canon-compliant through HBP. DH has, for the most part, been happily disregarded, especially that sappy epilogue!
Special thanks go to my beta reader, JuJuJenn. She makes sure I stay focused.
Eleven
It was decided that Harry and Ron would ride their brooms to a small wooded area about half a kilometre from Godric's Hollow. They would walk into the small village from there. Since Ron had never been there, and Harry had no memory of the place, Apparating blindly could be dangerous.
Ron had offered to bring Hermione on his broom, but just the thought of it was enough to send her into a minor panic. She hated flying.
She'd turned to Snape and asked him if he would bring her with him, via Side-Along-Apparition. He had been to Godric's Hollow, and it wouldn't be necessary for him to ride a broom to get there.
Snape's first instinct had been to refuse. The further away from Granger he stayed, the better off they'd both be; but he couldn't help but be swayed by the look of abject terror that crossed her face at the mere thought of a broom.
"Oh, very well, if your Gryffindor courage won't stand up to a mere broom flight," he'd sneered.
Hermione had been too grateful to even be offended by the implied insult.
"Thank you, sir," she'd said.
He'd simply nodded and they'd continued making their plans.
Because travelling by broom took longer than Apparating, Ron and Harry left Grimmauld Place immediately. Snape and Hermione would rendezvous with them, and then Snape, wearing Harry's invisibility cloak, would go ahead of them into the village itself to reconnoitre.
The three of them talked quietly while they waited for Snape to return. After a few minutes, however, Harry was no longer actively participating in the conversation. He wandered away from Ron and Hermione a bit and sat on a fallen log.
Harry's thoughts turned to how he would feel when he entered the house in which he'd been born the house in which his parents had died. He'd been just fifteen months old when Voldemort killed his parents. He had no memory of that night, or of them. He wondered if he would feel any sort of connection to the place. He hoped he would. It would make him feel closer to the parents he'd never known. He'd certainly never felt any connection to the house on Privet Drive, or even to his aunt and cousin.
While Harry sat deep in thought, Ron and Hermione continued to talk in near-whispers. They had moved out of the small clearing to stand behind a large tree that sheltered them from the cold wind.
"How much time do you reckon we'll have to find that scabbard?" Ron asked.
"I guess it depends on how big the house is," Hermione replied.
"Maybe Harry knows," Ron said.
Hermione shook her head. "He was just a baby; he wouldn't remember."
"Well, I hope we finish up early. My mum's got some Christmas shopping to do in Diagon Alley; she's not going to be at Grimmauld Place tonight. And Snape's already said he's got a meeting with You-Know-Who."
"Remus is at the house."
"Yeah, but he's still recuperating. He'll be asleep early."
Ron leaned down and placed a sloppy kiss on the side of Hermione's neck.
"Stop that, Ron!" Hermione said. She reached up and wiped a bit of drool off her neck.
"You should be glad we'll have the chance to be together," he said. "I'll sneak down to your room after Harry goes to sleep."
"There's so much going on now, what with learning everything and finding the Horcruxes, I'm not sure that's a good idea."
"Come on, Hermione, It's been nearly two months since ..."
"What do you do, mark it on the calendar?"
"Well ... not exactly, but I sort of keep track in my mind."
"That's vulgar."
Ron grinned. "What can I say? I'm a man; I've got needs, you know."
"What about my needs?" Hermione shot back.
"It's not my fault you can't ... you don't ..."
"I've news for you, Ron I can; and maybe if you weren't always in such a hurry, I would!"
Ron face darkened in anger.
"I never got any complaints from Lavender," he said in a sharp tone.
"Then maybe when this is all over, you should go back to her."
"Is that what you really want, Hermione?" he asked, his mood changing abruptly. "I thought you loved me!"
"I do love you. I'm just not sure that we're suited to be a couple rather than just friends."
"I'll try harder to satisfy you, I promise," he coaxed.
Hermione bit her bottom lip nervously.
She knew she should refuse. She knew that if she were completely honest with herself, her feelings for Ron had changed. She knew that if she encouraged him now, it would be that much harder to end their romantic relationship later. But she also knew that if she refused, Ron would sulk and be angry. She was afraid that his anger would distract him from the work they had to do to defeat Voldemort, and that wouldn't be fair to Harry.
"I don't know ..."
Her thoughts flitted back to the incident with Severus outside of Remus's door. He'd later denied that anything would have come of it. He'd made it clear that he didn't reciprocate any 'foolish, romantic notions' she might have. She thought that he might be trying to convince himself more than her, but still, his words had stung.
"Please?" Ron grinned at her in the charming way that had first attracted her back in their third year.
Still not sure she was making the right decision, Hermione succumbed to Ron's entreaty.
"Oh, all right," she finally murmured.
"Brilliant! I'll slip Harry some Dreamless Sleep Potion."
"Ron!"
"Don't get your knickers in a knot; I was just joking. Besides, I think Harry knows what's going on. He won't say anything to my mum."
Hermione just shook her head. For someone who'd just proclaimed himself a man, with a man's needs, he was awfully concerned about what his mother might say.
"We'd better get back to Harry," Hermione said. "Professor Snape should be back any minute."
Ron made a face, but he followed as Hermione stepped out from the behind the tree and started walking towards Harry.
Snape hadn't meant to eavesdrop at least not at first.
After his reconnoitre of the old Potter house, he'd Apparated back to the same spot he'd left twenty minutes earlier only to find the small clearing empty.
He had immediately suspected that the three of them had fallen into a trap. He was grateful for the invisibility cloak as he began his search for the missing trio.
He spotted Potter sitting on a log just a few feet outside the clearing. His elbows rested on his knees, and he was turning his wand over and over in his hands.
A moment later he saw Weasley and Granger standing a little deeper in the woods, partially hidden behind a large oak tree.
Although Potter hadn't been very vigilant, he'd at least had his wand out. The other two were deep in conversation, completely oblivious to their surroundings, and completely vulnerable as neither one of them had a wand in hand.
He approached them silently, hoping to catch them unawares, thus proving how ill-prepared they were to face down their enemies. He intended to hit them both with a Babbling Curse. They would learn a valuable lesson about never letting down their guard.
As he neared them, what had been indistinct murmurs became clearer.
"... was just a baby; he wouldn't remember."
"Well, I hope we finish up early. My mum's got some Christmas shopping to do in Diagon Alley; she's not going to be at Grimmauld Place tonight. And Snape's already said he's got a meeting with You-Know-Who."
"Remus is at the house."
"Yeah, but he's still recuperating. He'll be asleep early."
Snape had been just a second away from throwing the hex at them when he saw Weasley lean down and kiss the side of Granger's neck. His breath caught, and all thoughts of lessons and Babbling Curses fled.
He stood, not moving, barely breathing, and listened as Weasley tried to cajole Granger into a tryst for later that evening.
If asked, he wouldn't have been able to explain why he had found it impossible to walk away from them.
He smiled wryly at Granger's naïveté and her outrage when she discovered that Weasley kept track of their sexual encounters. He was a teenaged boy of course he kept track!
And he'd had to hold back a snicker of amusement as she brought Weasley to task for his lack of sexual prowess the oaf.
Based on the way the conversation was going, Snape was sure she would refuse.
Although he would have denied it, he felt a sharp stab of disappointment when she finally agreed to the meeting.
And then he shook his head, disgusted with himself. Since when did he concern himself with the sexual antics of two Gryffindors with raging hormones?
He watched them walk back toward where Potter was still sitting on the fallen log, and then he Apparated once again.
A minute later, still under the invisibility cloak, he approached the trio from the opposite side of the clearing.
Snape shuffled his feet a little as he walked toward them, making the dead leaves rustle.
"Snape?" Harry called out, his wand raised.
Hermione had her wand out in a second and moved to stand shoulder to shoulder with Harry.
Ron was still trying to fumble his wand out of his back pocket when Snape threw off the invisibility cloak, his own wand ready.
"Expelliarmus," Snape said, and Ron's wand flew into his waiting hand.
"So much for your vaunted skills," Snape said with a sneer.
"I wasn't expecting you to attack me!" Ron said angrily.
"Do you think the Death Eaters will send you a memorandum outlining their plans?" Snape countered.
"Although I am loath to agree with Moody about anything, he has the right of it when he warns about constant vigilance."
"You're right," Harry said. "We should have been more alert."
"Had my intentions been malevolent, I could have killed the three of you before you even knew I was here."
"Yeah, well you were hiding under the invisibility cloak, weren't you? Do all the Death Eaters have one of those?" Ron asked scornfully.
"Invisibility cloaks aren't the only way to get around without being seen," Hermione said.
"Which you would know if you'd ever read any of the books I told you to read," Snape added.
"Why do you always take his side?" Ron asked as he turned an angry look on Hermione.
"Perhaps because I'm always right?" Snape said.
Ron turned back to Snape, his hand automatically reaching back for his wand.
He flushed when he remembered that his wand was gone.
"Lose something, Weasley?" Snape taunted.
"Bastard."
A moment later, Ron's wand flew from Snape's hand to Harry's.
"We all get distracted once in a while, don't we, sir?" Harry asked calmly as he handed Ron his wand.
It was Snape's turn to flush. He drew a breath as though to speak and then realised that Potter was right. He had been distracted and careless.
"Touché, Potter," he said with a sardonic little quirk of his lips. "You've just proven that one is never too old to learn an important lesson."
"Can we get on with why we're here, then?"
Ron shrugged, and Snape nodded curtly. For his part, he was quite happy to move on.
"What did you find out?" Harry asked Snape.
"There are no guards posted on the one road that leads into the village. There are also none posted on the perimeter of the property or at the either of the doors to the house itself at least not outside the doors.
"The house is warded, of course, and I didn't want to take the time to break through the wards to go inside. I thought it best to come back here and have you enter the house to determine if there are guards posted inside."
Snape picked up the invisibility cloak and held it out to Harry.
"What makes you think I'll be able to get through the wards in anything less than a week?" Harry asked as he took the cloak from Snape.
"You don't need to break through the wards, Harry," Hermione said.
"I don't?" Harry seemed genuinely puzzled.
"It's your house," Ron put in.
"You were not aware of this?" Snape asked.
Harry shook his head. "No."
"When you were born, your parents would've adjusted the wards to recognise you," Ron explained. "Since you were inside the house when Volde ... when they died, they couldn't have changed the wards. The house will still recognise you and let you in."
"Couldn't Voldemort have changed the wards? He got inside."
"He gained entry only because Pettigrew gave him the password," Snape said. "He still wouldn't have been able to change the wards. Only your parents could do that."
"And now you can," Ron said. "You could change the password and keep You-Know-Who out!"
Hermione shook her head, and Snape sighed.
"What? If he can't get in, he can't retrieve the Horcrux."
"You will insist on seeing me dead, won't you?" Snape said.
"This situation is the same as with the Hufflepuff cup, Ron," Harry said. "If I change the password, Voldemort will know that Snape is the only one who could have warned me."
"Oh. Well, it was just an idea."
"A very bad idea," Snape grumbled.
"What are we going to do, then?" Ron asked, ignoring Snape's comment.
"Another duplicate?" Hermione suggested.
"Indeed. It seems to be a solution that works.
"Go to the house, Potter. There's an outbuilding behind the main house. If I'm not mistaken, you'll find there's an underground tunnel connecting the two structures. Based on similarly built houses I've seen, the tunnel should lead to the cellar of the main house. There will likely be a staircase that opens into the kitchen. Once inside you can ascertain if there are any guards posted within. If the house is clear, return here and we'll all go and search for the scabbard."
"How far is it?" Harry asked as he wrapped the cloak around himself, leaving only his head visible.
"Less than half a kilometre that way," Snape said as he pointed to the east. "You can't miss it; there are no near neighbours, and the yard is badly overgrown."
Harry nodded and then pulled the cloak up to cover his head.
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I really like this story, in fact I might say I love it :P
Am interested in how the Hermione/Snape/Remus love triangle is going to pan out lol. I love that Serverus stood up for her so immediately, god love him. why couldn't Hermione have slipped some tongue into that kiss on the cheek :P hehehe
Loved it
I am also really sorry about your Dad, I hope things are a lot better for you now. I also hope that you don't break your promise of updating within 8 months:P, unless I read that wrong and you were promising that you wouldn't be updating until 8 months from when you added the chapter, and if that's the case, I greatly look forward to May/June :D
Lots of love and thoughts for you
Bree
my condolences on the death of your father. it's never easy, no matter how old we are. great update and welcome back! thanks muchly.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much for your kind words.
I am so glad you updated! I am so sorry about your Dad. I know what it's like to lose a parent. I hope things get easier for you. My thoughts are with you.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I appreciate your kind thoughts. Things have gotten a bit easier, and I'm trying to concentrate on this story only and get it finished. I have quite a bit written, but still quite a bit to go as well. I'll keep at it. This fic will not be abandoned.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave a comment.
glad you are back. Nice chapter
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
Hooray! An update! I'm sorry to hear about your dad, and I'm glad you've started to dig yourself out the plot holes you were having trouble with. So happy to see this continued :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. I'm still struggling with a few plot holes, but I'm trying to patch them over.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave such kind words.
very nice so far. :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I appreciate your interest.
Wonderful chapter, the reader really feels the mood in this chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks. I thought they all deserved a night of frivolity.
Amazing!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I"m glad you're enjoying.
Very interesting... Lupin checking out Hermione, and Snape having conflicted feelings about her himself. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. At this point, I"m not sure that Lupin realises what's going on ... but Snape is very perceptive, isn't he?Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment ... and some stars!
Now I have another story to add to my Favorites! This really is how things should have gone after Dumbledore's death. So Remus seems to be taking a more personal interest in Hermione, and Severus has noticed. Fortunately, Ron's too oblivious to notice, especially given that he's often dangerously ignorant... add jealous vindictiveness to the mix and heaven help the Order. Great story!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.Yes, lots of emotions bubbling close to the surface. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Cute New Year scene. I'm glad you are back.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
I am really looking forward to the completion of this. Have you any idea how long it shall take? I love everything you have written but cannot abide an unfinished story (once I've started it) because I devour books! Excellent work!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I have not abandoned this story. There have been RL issues that have made writing very difficult for me, but I'm hoping to get back to this tale soon. Thank you for reading and for leaving a wonderful review in spite of how long it's been since I updated.
Just read through your story and so far I have really enjoyed it. I was very impressed by how smoothly everything seemed to go - that is, the course of the story all seemed very believable and natural. This is in part because you've done a great job of gradually allowing the relationships between the characters in the story to develop naturally and on their own, rather than rushing any of the interactions between various people. All in all I've found this an awesome story - the only blemish on my satisfaction is that I noticed how long it has been since you last updated, and this made me very sad. I desperately hope that this story is not abandoned, because I really want to read more (especially the Muggle party - I can't wait to read that chapter and see what you do with that scene). So pretty pretty please keep updating?
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
This story has NOT been abandoned. I lost my dad a few months ago, and the emotional drain has been so much that I've found it very difficult to connect with my fictional characters. I'm desperately trying to get back 'into' this story. I appreciate everyone's patience as I struggle with RL issues.
LOL It's like a costume party for this lot! Really funny.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
ees time to paaaaaaartay! ~sits in the dark strobey colored ravey club and plays E Nomine techno club mixes and rocks out to crazy german music~we all know snape likes some good german techno
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, my ... I may have given you a wrong impression ...I'm nearly 59 years old ... I remember the Beatles when they DID play at the Cavern.German techno? I'm not even sure what that is ...I'm thinking you like the story ... you did give me some lovely stars ... but German techno? Not is this, or any other lifetime, for me ... or for Snape ... at least not in one of my stories!Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review!(Poor, old, decrepit author walks away, shaking her head. German techno??)
Response from keske (Reviewer)
Yeah, I had too much sugar and got a little carried away. But yes, I do love your story. I suppose I was just in the mood to ramble on about the kind of music i was listening to. But don't worry, I love the Beatles! Here Comes the Sun is my longtime favorite...and Octopus' Garden ^.^I suppose what I was really trying to say was that I hope the group enjoys their time in muggle London and experiences some wonderful new things!But...um, yes. The band is called E Nomine...eh, if you want to look it up like on youtube or something XD (I...am one crazy kid, yes)
That breakfast after Ron and Hermione broke up was classic! Nicely done.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
It was brilliant to choose Liverpool for their party. In my humble opinion, it's one of the best cities for a good pub-crawl!! Makes me wish I could go out with them.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've never been to Liverpool, never been to Europe at all, though I would love to go some day. I do a lot of on-line research when I choose settings for my stories. I always try to get the geography right. I really chose Liverpool because I wanted to use the "Spiders, Insects, Beetles (Beatles), Bugs" reference. Little things like that just tickle me, and I love including them in my stories. Lots of times the subtle references don't even get noticed (or if they are noticed, they aren't commented upon), but I love putting them in there. And I wish I could go out with them, too ... sigh ...Thanks for reading and reviewing.
One thing I always figured was wrong with DH - thatDumbledore wouldn't have had some way of verifyingSnape's loyalty to at least one senior Order memberin an emergency. I understand why it couldn't becommon knowledge, but Dumbledore would have hada Plan B for Severus. I'm so glad to see him take hisrightful place. Yeeaay!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
That was one of my major complaints, as well. Dumbledore basically hung Snape out to dry. I understand the need for secrecy and all that, but come on -- couldn't just ONE other person have known Snape's true loyalties? Dumbledore expected Snape to be killed -- hell, even SNAPE didn't expect to survive. But shouldn't there have been some sort of contingency plan in place just in case, by some miracle, he did make it through? The only information left behind that proves Snape's 'innocence' are the memories that he passes on to Harry, and that scene in the Shrieking Shack when he does so is lame, lame, lame. How did Snape or Dumbledore know that Harry would be 'available' to receive those memories? I also feel that the 'promise' made in the very first book ("I can show you how to brew fame, bottle glory, and even put a stopper in death!") was horribly broken by JKR. In my personal opinion, I think she got pissed off by how popular Snape became in fandom, and she compromised her own story line in order to sabotage that popularity. (What? They love SNAPE? Snape is horrible! I'll show them!)That's just my opinion, of course, but I feel she truly wasted a valuable opportunity to prove the very values she purported to uphold -- that love and redemption are important and can make a difference.Oh, how I rattle on ... sorry!Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from AmyLouise (Reviewer)
I do agree absolutely that JKR didn't know what to do withSnape and his increasing fascination for readers - especially those who are old enough to appreciatesomething of his complexity. The one with the realtalent, and the true hero, was obviously Snape. Andhow does JKR reward him? By having a Potter namedafter him. That would have thrilled him no end, I'msure!
Hmmm.... I'm not seeing this party as a good idea. Let's see:- 8 free tickets from a mystery supplier- given to the brothers of the Weasley known to be Harry's best friend- and for a "private" party - packed with helpless mugglesI smell a trap! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wish I'd been clever enough to write a trap into the party, but honestly, it's just a party -- a chance for the folks who've been cooped up in Grimmauld Place to get out and 'frivol' a bit. I hope you won't be too disappointed.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I just found this story, and since I think DH wasn't as well-contructed as the earlier books, and the Epiloguesucked, I think it's worth reading. I like your start, andI'll be trying to catch up now.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I'll have to agree with you about DH and that awful epilogue. I hope you'll enjoy the way I tell my version of Book 7.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Cool! Can't wait to read what sort of mischief this lot can get themselves into!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I wasn't sure what kind of reception this idea would get. I'm glad you like it.Thanks for reading and reviewing and for leaving all the pretty stars!
Congratulations on becoming a validated author!Nice chapter, I chuckled over Hermione's warning the boys, I liked how Remus and Severus reacted to going to the Beatles and I'm left wondering if Severus would want to hold Hermione's hand. I know...terrible pun
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
It is a terrible pun ... I wish I'd thought of it!I'm glad you're enjoying.Thanks for reading and reviewing.Love the stars!
severus in liverpool! i can hardly wait! what a first rate idea! thanks so much
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wasn't sure what kind of a reception that idea would get. I'm glad you approve!Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Glad to see this again.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I've made a New Year's resolution to get this story finished. Nothing annoys me more than a story that is left to languish, and I'm ashamed to find myself the author of such a piece. It is a situation I vow to rectify!Thanks for all the shiny, pretty New Year's stars!
oh my gosh, are you and i kindred sprits or what. i began a story over a year ago, had most of it plotted out in my head and in notes (but didn't have chapters outlined or anything.... i'm obviously a novice!). after writing about 20 chapters, i was jonesing to post it, even though i had only about 20% of the story written at best. now, a year later, i'm at chapter 30, and it's about 3 months or so between posts because i'm having a hard time writing the 'filler' chapters inbetween all the planned out action. arrgghhh. so, i learned my lesson. anyway. i'm quite interested in this story and can't wait to see where it's going to go. i have a feeling that it may be a long one!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've actually written quite a lot of it. The problem is that it's all in pieces and I have to find a way to tie everything together. Also, one of my major plotlines had to be scrapped after I started posting. Now, the story is heading in a direction that is no longer viable and I have to try to re-route it in a way that still makes sense. Had I not posted the beginning chapters, I could have re-written and no one would have even noticed the detour!I still see the destination in my head ... now I have to use my GPS (Gimpy Plotting Skills) to get there without falling into a p(l)ot hole!Sometimes I wonder why I torture myself this way ... sigh ...Thanks for the encouragement!And happy New Year!