Chapter 7
Chapter 7 of 16
StormySkizeBook 7 -- The Way it Should Have Been. Harry, Ron, and Hermione don't return to Hogwarts for their seventh year. Instead, they join forces with the Order of the Phoenix to find Voldemort's Horcruxes and save the wizarding world. Members of the Order teach them how to fight. Along the way, Hermione realizes that her feelings for Ron have changed -- and so have her feelings for two other Order members.
Disclaimer: All characters and settings of Potterverse are the property of J.K. Rowling and other sundry entities. Only the plot belongs to me. I am making no money. I play in this universe for the sheer joy of it. My only payment is the kind reviews and comments of those who read and enjoy my tale. This story is canon-compliant through HBP. DH has, for the most part, been happily disregarded, especially that sappy epilogue!
Special thanks go to my beta reader, JuJuJenn. She makes sure I stay focused.
Seven
Harry, Ron, Hermione and Snape stood in a circle peering down at Helga Hufflepuff's cup, which rested at the bottom of a battered old cauldron.
They were in the back garden of Grimmauld Place. A cool breeze was blowing through the hedges that surrounded the property.
"Oh, I wish there were another way to do this," Hermione said.
"We have no choice," Harry said. "The only way to get rid of the Horcrux is to destroy the cup. Just like I had to destroy the diary, and Professor Dumbledore had to destroy the ring."
"I know, but that doesn't mean I have to like it."
"It's just an old cup," Ron said.
Snape snorted. "Even the Dark Lord appreciated the significance of the vessels he chose to house his soul-parts."
"I don't get it."
"It's a piece of Hogwarts' history, Ron! Helga Hufflepuff was one of the Founders. The locket belonged to Salazar Slytherin, another one of the Founders. Hogwarts was important to You-Know-Who."
"Indeed," Snape said. "It wouldn't surprise me to learn that other Horcruxes are in items that belonged to Rowena Ravenclaw or Godric Gryffindor."
"Maybe it's time to do some research and see if anything that once belonged to either of them has gone missing," Harry said.
Snape arched an expressive brow. "That's actually an excellent suggestion, Potter."
"Don't look so surprised," Harry muttered, and Snape actually smiled.
A moment later, Harry and Hermione were smiling as well.
Ron just scowled. He was the only one who failed to find any humour in the exchange.
"We should get on with it," Snape said a moment later. "Are you ready, Potter?"
"Yes."
"Weasley? Miss Granger?"
"Ready," they said together.
"I'll cast the containment spell. It will allow your spells to pass through, but will prevent the protective curse surrounding the Horcrux from escaping. You'll need to act quickly. I'm sure the protective curse is very strong. I don't know how long I'll be able to hold the containment spell."
Harry, Ron and Hermione raised their wands and pointed them at the cup.
Snape raised his own wand.
"Impervio externus," Snape said.
A line of shimmering pale-orange light left his wand and stretched over the top of the cauldron like a piece of cellophane wrap.
"Now!" Snape shouted.
"Annihilio!" Harry, Ron and Hermione spoke together. Shafts of brilliant purple light shot from each of their wands. They passed through the protective barrier over the top of the cauldron and met at the very centre of the gold cup.
At first, it seemed that the cup had absorbed the energy of the three spells and remained unaffected. Then the cup began to glow. It seemed to swell and throb from within. They could hear a low-pitched humming which quickly escalated to a high pitched whine.
Suddenly the cup exploded fragments melted against the sides of the cauldron and flew up against the barrier. The shaft of purple light faded and the connection between the cup and the three wands was broken.
A black cloud rose from the bottom of the cauldron. It pressed against the protective barrier while inhuman screams issued from its smoky depths.
Hermione watched anxiously as the protective barrier pulsed and bulged. It stretched like an over-inflated balloon, and it seemed impossible that it would not burst, releasing the deadly curse upon all of them.
She could see sweat trickling down the side of Snape's face as his brow furrowed in even deeper concentration, and his grip on his wand tightened.
As though sensing that the barrier holding it was weakening, the black cloud seemed to swell and pulse even more. The screams increased in volume and pitch.
"We have to help him," Hermione said. She raised her wand and pointed it at the bulging barrier.
"Impervio externus!" she cried out, and another layer of pale-orange light dropped across the barrier, thickening and reinforcing it.
"Impervio externus," Harry said as he turned his wand against the swollen orange membrane.
The screams from within were muffled as the barrier thickened again.
Ron lifted his wand, but before he could cast the spell, the black cloud within the barrier began to dissipate. It seemed to lighten and melt as the screams faded.
A few moments later, the bulging membrane had shrunk back down, and there were no sounds at all coming from within the cauldron.
"Is it ... dead?" Hermione asked.
"With the barrier in place, there was no place for the Horcrux to go when the cup was destroyed. It simply ceased to exist. And with the Horcrux gone, there was nothing for the curse to protect. I believe it is neutralised, as well," Snape said.
"We will, however, take precautions before we remove the barrier completely.
"Potter, you'll need to lift your spell first," Snape said. "But be prepared to cast it again should that become necessary."
"Yes, sir," Harry replied.
Harry dropped his wand and broke the connection, but he immediately raised it again and aimed it at the barrier.
There was no reaction from within the cauldron.
"Now you, Hermione," Snape said.
Ron's head jerked up when he heard Snape use Hermione's first name. No one else seemed to realise what had happened.
Hermione dropped her wand, but as Harry had done, she immediately raised it again, ready to re-cast the spell if need be.
Again, there was no reaction from within the cauldron.
Snape dropped his wand, breaking the final connection.
The orange barrier disappeared. Harry and Ron immediately pushed forward, but Snape held up a hand to halt them.
"Your impetuosity may kill you yet, Potter, but it won't be on my watch. Stand back."
Harry threw a Snape-worthy glare at the older wizard, but he stepped back. He took Ron's arm and pulled him back as well.
Snape leaned over the cauldron, his nose nearly touching the rim. He pointed his wand into the cauldron's centre.
"Revelato," he said.
Whatever he saw in the cauldron reassured him. He straightened up and lowered his wand.
"Now you may see what you have wrought," he said as he stepped away from the cauldron.
Harry, Hermione and Ron stepped up to the cauldron and leaned in.
Small lumps of melted gold were stuck to the sides and bottom of the cauldron and were covered in what appeared to be a thin layer of black dust.
"Is that the curse?" Ron asked as he reached into the cauldron.
"No!" Hermione and Harry both shouted at once. Hermione grabbed Ron's arm, pulling him away from the cauldron.
"Were you born a fool or do you have to work at it?" Snape hissed.
"You said it was neutralised," Ron said.
Snape just shook his head. He whirled back toward the cauldron, aimed his wand at it, and muttered an incantation.
The cauldron disappeared.
"That doesn't mean it was safe to touch it, Ron," Hermione said. "There might have been some lingering, unpleasant effects in the dust."
"How was I supposed to know that?" he asked in a sulky tone.
"Have you ever actually read any of the books I've assigned you?" Snape asked.
Ron flushed. "Well, yeah, sure I have," he said, but he wouldn't meet Snape's eyes.
Snape curled his lip in disgust.
"You still seem to regard this as some sort of adventure a lark. This isn't a game; this is war, you stupid fool. You need to know how to defend and protect yourself and those around you. As things stand, you're more of a liability than an asset."
"I can take care of myself," Ron retorted.
"Against well-trained and powerful Death Eaters?" Snape scoffed. "I doubt you'd last two minutes defending yourself, never mind the others.
"I know I wouldn't want to have to depend upon your skills to save my life," he added.
"Not sure I'd want to save it anyway," Ron muttered.
Hermione gasped, and even Harry looked shocked by Ron's remark.
Snape's grip on his wand tightened, but he didn't raise it.
"You are fortunate that my desire to see the Dark Lord fall and my Vow to the Order are more important to me than proving to you just how inadequate your skills really are," he said.
"Anytime," Ron said in a belligerent tone.
"I don't have time to listen to your foolish braggadocio," Snape said.
"You're just afraid I might beat you," Ron said.
"Oh, yes," Snape said derisively, "I'm shaking in my boots."
Ron flushed again.
Snape waved his free hand in a dismissive gesture and then turned away from Ron and addressed Hermione.
"I have an important meeting this afternoon. Go to the lab and take care of the potion we started yesterday. It's rested long enough."
"Yes, sir," Hermione replied.
"Potter, take your friend inside and try to teach him something useful."
Snape stepped back and prepared to Apparate away.
Ron moved as though to follow him, and Harry grabbed his arm.
"Let him go, Ron," Harry said.
"Someday I'm going to give that greasy git exactly what he deserves," Ron said.
"Why don't we concentrate on getting rid of Voldemort first?" Harry said reasonably.
Harry and Hermione began walking toward the back door of Grimmauld Place.
Ron looked over and watched as Snape silently Apparated away.
"Someday," he muttered. Then he turned and followed Harry and Hermione into the house.
Author's note: This story was written in response to the Post DH Challenge on The Petulant Poetess.
I chose prompt #5: Harry touches his scar; it hasn't pained him in 19 years. He
hears hooting, rolls over in bed to see Hedwig sweeping in the open window at Privet Drive, and realizes that his 17th birthday isn't far off. Go for it... a new seventh year for the lot.
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179 Reviews | 6.67/10 Average
I really like this story, in fact I might say I love it :P
Am interested in how the Hermione/Snape/Remus love triangle is going to pan out lol. I love that Serverus stood up for her so immediately, god love him. why couldn't Hermione have slipped some tongue into that kiss on the cheek :P hehehe
Loved it
I am also really sorry about your Dad, I hope things are a lot better for you now. I also hope that you don't break your promise of updating within 8 months:P, unless I read that wrong and you were promising that you wouldn't be updating until 8 months from when you added the chapter, and if that's the case, I greatly look forward to May/June :D
Lots of love and thoughts for you
Bree
my condolences on the death of your father. it's never easy, no matter how old we are. great update and welcome back! thanks muchly.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much for your kind words.
I am so glad you updated! I am so sorry about your Dad. I know what it's like to lose a parent. I hope things get easier for you. My thoughts are with you.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I appreciate your kind thoughts. Things have gotten a bit easier, and I'm trying to concentrate on this story only and get it finished. I have quite a bit written, but still quite a bit to go as well. I'll keep at it. This fic will not be abandoned.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave a comment.
glad you are back. Nice chapter
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
Hooray! An update! I'm sorry to hear about your dad, and I'm glad you've started to dig yourself out the plot holes you were having trouble with. So happy to see this continued :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. I'm still struggling with a few plot holes, but I'm trying to patch them over.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave such kind words.
very nice so far. :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I appreciate your interest.
Wonderful chapter, the reader really feels the mood in this chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks. I thought they all deserved a night of frivolity.
Amazing!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I"m glad you're enjoying.
Very interesting... Lupin checking out Hermione, and Snape having conflicted feelings about her himself. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. At this point, I"m not sure that Lupin realises what's going on ... but Snape is very perceptive, isn't he?Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment ... and some stars!
Now I have another story to add to my Favorites! This really is how things should have gone after Dumbledore's death. So Remus seems to be taking a more personal interest in Hermione, and Severus has noticed. Fortunately, Ron's too oblivious to notice, especially given that he's often dangerously ignorant... add jealous vindictiveness to the mix and heaven help the Order. Great story!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.Yes, lots of emotions bubbling close to the surface. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Cute New Year scene. I'm glad you are back.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
I am really looking forward to the completion of this. Have you any idea how long it shall take? I love everything you have written but cannot abide an unfinished story (once I've started it) because I devour books! Excellent work!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I have not abandoned this story. There have been RL issues that have made writing very difficult for me, but I'm hoping to get back to this tale soon. Thank you for reading and for leaving a wonderful review in spite of how long it's been since I updated.
Just read through your story and so far I have really enjoyed it. I was very impressed by how smoothly everything seemed to go - that is, the course of the story all seemed very believable and natural. This is in part because you've done a great job of gradually allowing the relationships between the characters in the story to develop naturally and on their own, rather than rushing any of the interactions between various people. All in all I've found this an awesome story - the only blemish on my satisfaction is that I noticed how long it has been since you last updated, and this made me very sad. I desperately hope that this story is not abandoned, because I really want to read more (especially the Muggle party - I can't wait to read that chapter and see what you do with that scene). So pretty pretty please keep updating?
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
This story has NOT been abandoned. I lost my dad a few months ago, and the emotional drain has been so much that I've found it very difficult to connect with my fictional characters. I'm desperately trying to get back 'into' this story. I appreciate everyone's patience as I struggle with RL issues.
LOL It's like a costume party for this lot! Really funny.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
ees time to paaaaaaartay! ~sits in the dark strobey colored ravey club and plays E Nomine techno club mixes and rocks out to crazy german music~we all know snape likes some good german techno
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, my ... I may have given you a wrong impression ...I'm nearly 59 years old ... I remember the Beatles when they DID play at the Cavern.German techno? I'm not even sure what that is ...I'm thinking you like the story ... you did give me some lovely stars ... but German techno? Not is this, or any other lifetime, for me ... or for Snape ... at least not in one of my stories!Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review!(Poor, old, decrepit author walks away, shaking her head. German techno??)
Response from keske (Reviewer)
Yeah, I had too much sugar and got a little carried away. But yes, I do love your story. I suppose I was just in the mood to ramble on about the kind of music i was listening to. But don't worry, I love the Beatles! Here Comes the Sun is my longtime favorite...and Octopus' Garden ^.^I suppose what I was really trying to say was that I hope the group enjoys their time in muggle London and experiences some wonderful new things!But...um, yes. The band is called E Nomine...eh, if you want to look it up like on youtube or something XD (I...am one crazy kid, yes)
That breakfast after Ron and Hermione broke up was classic! Nicely done.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
It was brilliant to choose Liverpool for their party. In my humble opinion, it's one of the best cities for a good pub-crawl!! Makes me wish I could go out with them.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've never been to Liverpool, never been to Europe at all, though I would love to go some day. I do a lot of on-line research when I choose settings for my stories. I always try to get the geography right. I really chose Liverpool because I wanted to use the "Spiders, Insects, Beetles (Beatles), Bugs" reference. Little things like that just tickle me, and I love including them in my stories. Lots of times the subtle references don't even get noticed (or if they are noticed, they aren't commented upon), but I love putting them in there. And I wish I could go out with them, too ... sigh ...Thanks for reading and reviewing.
One thing I always figured was wrong with DH - thatDumbledore wouldn't have had some way of verifyingSnape's loyalty to at least one senior Order memberin an emergency. I understand why it couldn't becommon knowledge, but Dumbledore would have hada Plan B for Severus. I'm so glad to see him take hisrightful place. Yeeaay!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
That was one of my major complaints, as well. Dumbledore basically hung Snape out to dry. I understand the need for secrecy and all that, but come on -- couldn't just ONE other person have known Snape's true loyalties? Dumbledore expected Snape to be killed -- hell, even SNAPE didn't expect to survive. But shouldn't there have been some sort of contingency plan in place just in case, by some miracle, he did make it through? The only information left behind that proves Snape's 'innocence' are the memories that he passes on to Harry, and that scene in the Shrieking Shack when he does so is lame, lame, lame. How did Snape or Dumbledore know that Harry would be 'available' to receive those memories? I also feel that the 'promise' made in the very first book ("I can show you how to brew fame, bottle glory, and even put a stopper in death!") was horribly broken by JKR. In my personal opinion, I think she got pissed off by how popular Snape became in fandom, and she compromised her own story line in order to sabotage that popularity. (What? They love SNAPE? Snape is horrible! I'll show them!)That's just my opinion, of course, but I feel she truly wasted a valuable opportunity to prove the very values she purported to uphold -- that love and redemption are important and can make a difference.Oh, how I rattle on ... sorry!Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from AmyLouise (Reviewer)
I do agree absolutely that JKR didn't know what to do withSnape and his increasing fascination for readers - especially those who are old enough to appreciatesomething of his complexity. The one with the realtalent, and the true hero, was obviously Snape. Andhow does JKR reward him? By having a Potter namedafter him. That would have thrilled him no end, I'msure!
Hmmm.... I'm not seeing this party as a good idea. Let's see:- 8 free tickets from a mystery supplier- given to the brothers of the Weasley known to be Harry's best friend- and for a "private" party - packed with helpless mugglesI smell a trap! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wish I'd been clever enough to write a trap into the party, but honestly, it's just a party -- a chance for the folks who've been cooped up in Grimmauld Place to get out and 'frivol' a bit. I hope you won't be too disappointed.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I just found this story, and since I think DH wasn't as well-contructed as the earlier books, and the Epiloguesucked, I think it's worth reading. I like your start, andI'll be trying to catch up now.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I'll have to agree with you about DH and that awful epilogue. I hope you'll enjoy the way I tell my version of Book 7.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Cool! Can't wait to read what sort of mischief this lot can get themselves into!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I wasn't sure what kind of reception this idea would get. I'm glad you like it.Thanks for reading and reviewing and for leaving all the pretty stars!
Congratulations on becoming a validated author!Nice chapter, I chuckled over Hermione's warning the boys, I liked how Remus and Severus reacted to going to the Beatles and I'm left wondering if Severus would want to hold Hermione's hand. I know...terrible pun
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
It is a terrible pun ... I wish I'd thought of it!I'm glad you're enjoying.Thanks for reading and reviewing.Love the stars!
severus in liverpool! i can hardly wait! what a first rate idea! thanks so much
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wasn't sure what kind of a reception that idea would get. I'm glad you approve!Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Glad to see this again.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I've made a New Year's resolution to get this story finished. Nothing annoys me more than a story that is left to languish, and I'm ashamed to find myself the author of such a piece. It is a situation I vow to rectify!Thanks for all the shiny, pretty New Year's stars!
oh my gosh, are you and i kindred sprits or what. i began a story over a year ago, had most of it plotted out in my head and in notes (but didn't have chapters outlined or anything.... i'm obviously a novice!). after writing about 20 chapters, i was jonesing to post it, even though i had only about 20% of the story written at best. now, a year later, i'm at chapter 30, and it's about 3 months or so between posts because i'm having a hard time writing the 'filler' chapters inbetween all the planned out action. arrgghhh. so, i learned my lesson. anyway. i'm quite interested in this story and can't wait to see where it's going to go. i have a feeling that it may be a long one!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've actually written quite a lot of it. The problem is that it's all in pieces and I have to find a way to tie everything together. Also, one of my major plotlines had to be scrapped after I started posting. Now, the story is heading in a direction that is no longer viable and I have to try to re-route it in a way that still makes sense. Had I not posted the beginning chapters, I could have re-written and no one would have even noticed the detour!I still see the destination in my head ... now I have to use my GPS (Gimpy Plotting Skills) to get there without falling into a p(l)ot hole!Sometimes I wonder why I torture myself this way ... sigh ...Thanks for the encouragement!And happy New Year!