Chapter 4
Chapter 4 of 16
StormySkizeBook 7 -- The Way it Should Have Been. Harry, Ron, and Hermione don't return to Hogwarts for their seventh year. Instead, they join forces with the Order of the Phoenix to find Voldemort's Horcruxes and save the wizarding world. Members of the Order teach them how to fight. Along the way, Hermione realizes that her feelings for Ron have changed -- and so have her feelings for two other Order members.
Disclaimer: All characters and settings of Potterverse are the property of J.K. Rowling and other sundry entities. Only the plot belongs to me. I am making no money. I play in this universe for the sheer joy of it. My only payment is the kind reviews and comments of those who read and enjoy my tale. This story is canon-compliant through HBP. DH has, for the most part, been happily disregarded, especially that sappy epilogue!
Special thanks go to my beta reader, JuJuJenn. She makes sure I stay focused.
Four
Minerva had not been exaggerating when she said it was time to work. A schedule was set up to give the three of them intensive Defence lessons. Remus and Snape handled most of their lessons. Tonks and Mad-eye Moody, when they could take time away from their Auror duties, also took turns teaching them how to cast a wide-ranging variety of spells and curses and how to defend against them. The end of each day usually found at least one of them with cuts and bruises to be healed. There was even an occasional broken bone to be mended. And they learned those spells, and a number of other healing spells, as well, since it was likely that there would be times when they would not be able to get to a Healer.
All of them became proficient at casting spells nonverbally.
The three of them worked with both Snape and Remus to learn Occlumency. Harry paid a lot more attention to the lessons this time around. While duelling with Snape in the moments after the events on the Astronomy tower, Harry had learned the importance of blocking his thoughts. When he allowed himself to think of it, he realised that even as he had been fleeing, Snape had been trying to teach him.
Legilimency was a much more difficult skill than Occlumency, but Snape maintained that it was important that they at least learn the basics.
They studied more and learned more over a four week period than they had learned in the six preceding years at school. Some days they spent as much as fourteen hours studying and practicing.
The Board of Governors met in special session the last week of August. It was decided that Hogwarts would open after all, but because they had delayed so long in reaching their decision, the first day of school would be the first of October rather than the first of September. Letters were sent to the parents of all returning students advising them of the new schedule.
Harry, Ron, and Hermione didn't return to Hogwarts when classes started. Instead, they remained at Grimmauld Place and continued their lessons there.
There was much speculation about their whereabouts when they failed to return for their final year.
When the Ministry questioned Minerva, she showed them a letter from Hermione's parents stating that they were withdrawing her from Hogwarts and that the entire family was moving to Australia.
The hiding of Hermione's parents her very vulnerable Muggle parents had been one of the first things the Order did after Hermione became a member. The Grangers weren't in Australia, however. Louis and Emily Granger had been relocated to America. They'd changed their names and were practicing dentistry in a small town near Salem, Massachusetts. When a Ministry official visited the Granger home, she found it locked and apparently abandoned, a 'For Sale' sign stuck on the overgrown lawn.
At the Ministry, Arthur Weasley told everyone that Harry Potter had talked his youngest son into leaving school and spending a year 'bumming' around the continent.
"He's broken poor Molly's heart," Arthur was heard to say to anyone who would stand still long enough to listen.
In actuality, Harry and Ron seldom left Grimmauld Place those first few weeks, but reports of their escapades were common. Almost overnight, 'Harry Spotting' became a favourite sport among wizarding folk.
Although Ron and Hermione had taken Apparition lessons, Harry hadn't been able to because he hadn't been of age before the previous school year ended. Now, he worked with Minerva and with Tonks to learn how to Apparate. Once all three of them had mastered the skill, Snape insisted that they learn how to do it without making the distinctive popping sound that usually accompanied Apparition. It took another three weeks of exhaustive concentration and practice, but soon Apparating silently was second nature to them.
One evening Snape began teaching them how to create Portkeys.
"Having an activated Portkey disguised as a button or a piece of jewellery could save your life one day," Snape said.
"Don't you need Ministry authorisation to create Portkeys?" Hermione asked.
"Ministry authorisation?" Snape sneered. "The Ministry is compromised. Seeking authorisation for a Portkey would be tantamount to taking out an advertisement in the Prophet announcing our plans.
"Grow up, you silly girl!"
Hermione flushed slightly, and Ron bristled.
"Don't talk to her like that!"
Much to Ron's surprise, Hermione took Snape's side.
"He's right, Ron. This is war. I've got to stop thinking like a student afraid of being caught out after curfew.
"Show me again, sir," Hermione said turning back to Snape.
Three hours later, all three of them could cast the Portus Charm, although only Hermione had managed to create a Portkey that would take them more than a few kilometres.
By the middle of October, Remus had returned to Fenrir Greyback's pack in the hope of gleaning information about planned attacks against the families of Muggle-born witches and wizards. He hated the time he had to spend with Greyback and his cronies, but he did what he had to do to fulfil his Vow as a member of the Order.
Because of her duties as Headmistress, it was nearly impossible for Minerva to get to Grimmauld Place more than once a week, and Tonks and Mad-eye were frequently called away on Ministry business. That meant that the greatest portion of their training now came from Snape.
As Voldemort's most trusted aide, Snape was summoned frequently. Most of these summonses came at night, but it was not uncommon for him to be called away during the day as well. He would clutch his arm and hiss softly through his teeth. He would usually instruct them to continue practicing whatever they were working on, or he would assign them reading from one of the many Dark Arts books that the Black library held.
Sometimes he returned within the hour, but most times he was gone several hours. Frequently, when called in the evening, he didn't return until the next morning. On those occasions, he would be even more surly and uncommunicative than usual. The others in the house soon learned that it was best to stay out of his way as he trudged wearily through the kitchen and made his way to the bathroom always his first priority on those mornings.
"I didn't think Snape ever took a wash," Ron commented one morning as he, Harry, and Hermione sat at the kitchen table having coffee and listening to the pipes in the old house clang as the shower in the second floor bathroom started. "But I guess he has to considering what he probably did last night."
Hermione stood so quickly, her chair toppled backward behind her.
"How can you say such a thing?" Hermione demanded.
"What'd I say?"
"He doesn't do anything! Voldemort rapes him!"
"He doesn't fight him off, though, does he? He probably likes it," Ron retorted.
"You're disgusting, Ron Weasley!" she shouted.
Ron turned to Harry as though seeking his support, but Harry just shook his head.
"Hermione's right, Ron. We've been wrong about him since the beginning. What he does what he lets Voldemort do he does for us. He does it for the Order and for every other witch and wizard who will suffer if Voldemort isn't brought down. He hates it, and I think if it weren't for us, he'd kill himself before he submitted to the slimy bastard that way."
"I was just joking," Ron mumbled.
"It's nothing to joke about," Hermione said. "Professor Snape doesn't deserve your insults."
"I wasn't insulting him," Ron protested.
"What were you doing, then?"
"Look, Hermione, I'm sorry, okay? At least I didn't say anything to his face."
"Good job you didn't," Harry said, trying to diffuse the anger between his two best friends.
"I'll say," Hermione agreed. She turned around and righted the fallen chair. "He'd have given you a first-hand example of how the Cruciatus feels."
Ron gave a mock shudder and both Harry and Hermione laughed, easing the tension between them.
When Snape entered the kitchen twenty minutes later, Harry and Ron were talking about Quidditch, and Hermione had her nose buried in a book.
"Potter!" Snape barked.
Harry and Ron both looked up. Hermione put her book down.
"What's the incantation for the Bone Knitting spell?"
"Uh ... Adjungo ... uh ..."
Snape had to stifle a smirk as he watched Granger practically sit on her hand in an effort to keep from raising it. She, of course, knew the answer. He was sure she was hoping she'd never have to rely on Potter to set a broken bone.
"Weasley, how many times can you use a Portkey before you need to renew the spell?"
"Six?" guessed Ron.
He heard Granger groan and saw her shake her head in an exasperated manner.
"Wrong, both of you," Snape snarled. "Yet here you sit, discussing Quidditch, as though such knowledge mightn't one day save your lives!
"Go and find the correct answers. I'll expect them when Miss Granger and I return."
Harry turned and left the room, but Ron just stood, glaring at Snape.
"Return?" Ron said. "Where are you going?"
"I have a potion to brew; Miss Granger will assist me."
"Why can't Harry and I help, too?" Ron whined. "We're tired of just sitting around."
"How many drams of asphodel are required to achieve the colour-change necessary in the Wolfsbane, Weasley?"
Ron flushed.
"Just as I thought," Snape said in a smug tone. "How many, Miss Granger?"
Hermione bit her bottom lip nervously. She glanced over at Ron, and he scowled at her.
She lifted her chin defiantly and turned her head to address Snape.
"Three-point-two-seven drams will produce the colour-change assuming that one is brewing a single month's dose."
Snape made no attempt to stifle his smirk this time. "And that is why Miss Granger will be assisting me, and you will be studying," he said.
"Go fetch your cloak, Miss Granger. We'll be leaving in ten minutes."
"Yes, sir," Hermione replied and turned toward the stairs.
"Show off," Ron muttered under his breath.
Snape didn't think Granger heard the cutting remark as she continued walking toward the stairs. Once she was out of the room, Snape spun back toward the younger wizard sulking in front of him.
"Miss Granger has been helping you since you were an incompetent first-year. Without her, you would have washed out of Hogwarts long ago, and that's how you repay her?"
"What business is it of yours, Snape?" Ron replied.
"My business is preparing the three of you for the fight of your life."
"Maybe we don't need your help."
"You're an ungrateful little snot," Snape hissed at Ron.
"And you're a ..."
"Ron!"
Harry had returned to the kitchen when he realised that Ron hadn't followed him into the library.
"Get him out of my sight, Potter," Snape said through thinned lips.
"Let's go, Ron," Harry said as he grasped Ron's arm.
"I'm leaving," Ron said as he shook off Harry's hand. "I can't stand the sight of him, either."
Harry pushed Ron through the door, and then he turned back to Snape.
"We do need you," Harry said. "Ron's just upset because you showed him up in front of Hermione. I'll talk to him."
"See that you do," Snape replied.
Harry nodded, and then he turned and left the room.
Hermione blinked back tears as she hurried upstairs to get her cloak. She'd heard Ron's muttered remark, and it had hurt more than anything he'd ever said to her.
Contrary to what Ron and many others thought, learning didn't come effortlessly to her. She worked hard to accumulate knowledge. She'd sacrificed all through her years at Hogwarts, often skipping after class activities, and sometime even meals, to study. As a Muggle-born, she'd been at a disadvantage at Hogwarts. She'd had to learn things that other witches and wizards, including Ron, had grown up knowing. She thought it was very unfair of Ron to expect her to play dumb just to spare his feelings. He should be proud of what she'd accomplished instead of trying to make her feel that she'd betrayed him simply because she'd answered a question he couldn't.
Her hurt turned to anger. If Ron wanted dumb, he could just start going out with Lavender Brown again! Not that she and Ron were 'going out'. Oh, they'd managed to get together a time or two, but the encounters had been hurried and furtive and unsatisfying at least for her. But their current circumstances, hidden away at Order headquarters and working twelve to fourteen hours a day, had made it impossible for them to develop any kind of normal relationship.
She'd always known that Ron was less mature than she was, but she'd been attracted to him anyway. Now his hurtful remark about her, as well as his thoughtless attitude toward Professor Snape, made her doubt he'd ever grow up.
She was going to have to do some serious thinking about her relationship with him.
Hermione gave herself a mental shake as she grabbed her cloak and hurried back down the stairs. She loved brewing and she was looking forward to working with Professor Snape. She wasn't going to let thoughts of Ron distract her.
Author's note: This story was written in response to the Post DH Challenge on The Petulant Poetess.
I chose prompt #5: Harry touches his scar; it hasn't pained him in 19 years. He hears hooting, rolls over in bed to see Hedwig sweeping in the open window at Privet Drive, and realizes that his 17th birthday isn't far off. Go for it... a new seventh year for the lot.
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179 Reviews | 6.67/10 Average
I really like this story, in fact I might say I love it :P
Am interested in how the Hermione/Snape/Remus love triangle is going to pan out lol. I love that Serverus stood up for her so immediately, god love him. why couldn't Hermione have slipped some tongue into that kiss on the cheek :P hehehe
Loved it
I am also really sorry about your Dad, I hope things are a lot better for you now. I also hope that you don't break your promise of updating within 8 months:P, unless I read that wrong and you were promising that you wouldn't be updating until 8 months from when you added the chapter, and if that's the case, I greatly look forward to May/June :D
Lots of love and thoughts for you
Bree
my condolences on the death of your father. it's never easy, no matter how old we are. great update and welcome back! thanks muchly.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much for your kind words.
I am so glad you updated! I am so sorry about your Dad. I know what it's like to lose a parent. I hope things get easier for you. My thoughts are with you.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I appreciate your kind thoughts. Things have gotten a bit easier, and I'm trying to concentrate on this story only and get it finished. I have quite a bit written, but still quite a bit to go as well. I'll keep at it. This fic will not be abandoned.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave a comment.
glad you are back. Nice chapter
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
Hooray! An update! I'm sorry to hear about your dad, and I'm glad you've started to dig yourself out the plot holes you were having trouble with. So happy to see this continued :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. I'm still struggling with a few plot holes, but I'm trying to patch them over.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave such kind words.
very nice so far. :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I appreciate your interest.
Wonderful chapter, the reader really feels the mood in this chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks. I thought they all deserved a night of frivolity.
Amazing!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I"m glad you're enjoying.
Very interesting... Lupin checking out Hermione, and Snape having conflicted feelings about her himself. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. At this point, I"m not sure that Lupin realises what's going on ... but Snape is very perceptive, isn't he?Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment ... and some stars!
Now I have another story to add to my Favorites! This really is how things should have gone after Dumbledore's death. So Remus seems to be taking a more personal interest in Hermione, and Severus has noticed. Fortunately, Ron's too oblivious to notice, especially given that he's often dangerously ignorant... add jealous vindictiveness to the mix and heaven help the Order. Great story!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.Yes, lots of emotions bubbling close to the surface. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Cute New Year scene. I'm glad you are back.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
I am really looking forward to the completion of this. Have you any idea how long it shall take? I love everything you have written but cannot abide an unfinished story (once I've started it) because I devour books! Excellent work!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I have not abandoned this story. There have been RL issues that have made writing very difficult for me, but I'm hoping to get back to this tale soon. Thank you for reading and for leaving a wonderful review in spite of how long it's been since I updated.
Just read through your story and so far I have really enjoyed it. I was very impressed by how smoothly everything seemed to go - that is, the course of the story all seemed very believable and natural. This is in part because you've done a great job of gradually allowing the relationships between the characters in the story to develop naturally and on their own, rather than rushing any of the interactions between various people. All in all I've found this an awesome story - the only blemish on my satisfaction is that I noticed how long it has been since you last updated, and this made me very sad. I desperately hope that this story is not abandoned, because I really want to read more (especially the Muggle party - I can't wait to read that chapter and see what you do with that scene). So pretty pretty please keep updating?
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
This story has NOT been abandoned. I lost my dad a few months ago, and the emotional drain has been so much that I've found it very difficult to connect with my fictional characters. I'm desperately trying to get back 'into' this story. I appreciate everyone's patience as I struggle with RL issues.
LOL It's like a costume party for this lot! Really funny.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
ees time to paaaaaaartay! ~sits in the dark strobey colored ravey club and plays E Nomine techno club mixes and rocks out to crazy german music~we all know snape likes some good german techno
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, my ... I may have given you a wrong impression ...I'm nearly 59 years old ... I remember the Beatles when they DID play at the Cavern.German techno? I'm not even sure what that is ...I'm thinking you like the story ... you did give me some lovely stars ... but German techno? Not is this, or any other lifetime, for me ... or for Snape ... at least not in one of my stories!Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review!(Poor, old, decrepit author walks away, shaking her head. German techno??)
Response from keske (Reviewer)
Yeah, I had too much sugar and got a little carried away. But yes, I do love your story. I suppose I was just in the mood to ramble on about the kind of music i was listening to. But don't worry, I love the Beatles! Here Comes the Sun is my longtime favorite...and Octopus' Garden ^.^I suppose what I was really trying to say was that I hope the group enjoys their time in muggle London and experiences some wonderful new things!But...um, yes. The band is called E Nomine...eh, if you want to look it up like on youtube or something XD (I...am one crazy kid, yes)
That breakfast after Ron and Hermione broke up was classic! Nicely done.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
It was brilliant to choose Liverpool for their party. In my humble opinion, it's one of the best cities for a good pub-crawl!! Makes me wish I could go out with them.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've never been to Liverpool, never been to Europe at all, though I would love to go some day. I do a lot of on-line research when I choose settings for my stories. I always try to get the geography right. I really chose Liverpool because I wanted to use the "Spiders, Insects, Beetles (Beatles), Bugs" reference. Little things like that just tickle me, and I love including them in my stories. Lots of times the subtle references don't even get noticed (or if they are noticed, they aren't commented upon), but I love putting them in there. And I wish I could go out with them, too ... sigh ...Thanks for reading and reviewing.
One thing I always figured was wrong with DH - thatDumbledore wouldn't have had some way of verifyingSnape's loyalty to at least one senior Order memberin an emergency. I understand why it couldn't becommon knowledge, but Dumbledore would have hada Plan B for Severus. I'm so glad to see him take hisrightful place. Yeeaay!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
That was one of my major complaints, as well. Dumbledore basically hung Snape out to dry. I understand the need for secrecy and all that, but come on -- couldn't just ONE other person have known Snape's true loyalties? Dumbledore expected Snape to be killed -- hell, even SNAPE didn't expect to survive. But shouldn't there have been some sort of contingency plan in place just in case, by some miracle, he did make it through? The only information left behind that proves Snape's 'innocence' are the memories that he passes on to Harry, and that scene in the Shrieking Shack when he does so is lame, lame, lame. How did Snape or Dumbledore know that Harry would be 'available' to receive those memories? I also feel that the 'promise' made in the very first book ("I can show you how to brew fame, bottle glory, and even put a stopper in death!") was horribly broken by JKR. In my personal opinion, I think she got pissed off by how popular Snape became in fandom, and she compromised her own story line in order to sabotage that popularity. (What? They love SNAPE? Snape is horrible! I'll show them!)That's just my opinion, of course, but I feel she truly wasted a valuable opportunity to prove the very values she purported to uphold -- that love and redemption are important and can make a difference.Oh, how I rattle on ... sorry!Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from AmyLouise (Reviewer)
I do agree absolutely that JKR didn't know what to do withSnape and his increasing fascination for readers - especially those who are old enough to appreciatesomething of his complexity. The one with the realtalent, and the true hero, was obviously Snape. Andhow does JKR reward him? By having a Potter namedafter him. That would have thrilled him no end, I'msure!
Hmmm.... I'm not seeing this party as a good idea. Let's see:- 8 free tickets from a mystery supplier- given to the brothers of the Weasley known to be Harry's best friend- and for a "private" party - packed with helpless mugglesI smell a trap! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wish I'd been clever enough to write a trap into the party, but honestly, it's just a party -- a chance for the folks who've been cooped up in Grimmauld Place to get out and 'frivol' a bit. I hope you won't be too disappointed.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I just found this story, and since I think DH wasn't as well-contructed as the earlier books, and the Epiloguesucked, I think it's worth reading. I like your start, andI'll be trying to catch up now.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I'll have to agree with you about DH and that awful epilogue. I hope you'll enjoy the way I tell my version of Book 7.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Cool! Can't wait to read what sort of mischief this lot can get themselves into!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I wasn't sure what kind of reception this idea would get. I'm glad you like it.Thanks for reading and reviewing and for leaving all the pretty stars!
Congratulations on becoming a validated author!Nice chapter, I chuckled over Hermione's warning the boys, I liked how Remus and Severus reacted to going to the Beatles and I'm left wondering if Severus would want to hold Hermione's hand. I know...terrible pun
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
It is a terrible pun ... I wish I'd thought of it!I'm glad you're enjoying.Thanks for reading and reviewing.Love the stars!
severus in liverpool! i can hardly wait! what a first rate idea! thanks so much
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wasn't sure what kind of a reception that idea would get. I'm glad you approve!Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Glad to see this again.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I've made a New Year's resolution to get this story finished. Nothing annoys me more than a story that is left to languish, and I'm ashamed to find myself the author of such a piece. It is a situation I vow to rectify!Thanks for all the shiny, pretty New Year's stars!
oh my gosh, are you and i kindred sprits or what. i began a story over a year ago, had most of it plotted out in my head and in notes (but didn't have chapters outlined or anything.... i'm obviously a novice!). after writing about 20 chapters, i was jonesing to post it, even though i had only about 20% of the story written at best. now, a year later, i'm at chapter 30, and it's about 3 months or so between posts because i'm having a hard time writing the 'filler' chapters inbetween all the planned out action. arrgghhh. so, i learned my lesson. anyway. i'm quite interested in this story and can't wait to see where it's going to go. i have a feeling that it may be a long one!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've actually written quite a lot of it. The problem is that it's all in pieces and I have to find a way to tie everything together. Also, one of my major plotlines had to be scrapped after I started posting. Now, the story is heading in a direction that is no longer viable and I have to try to re-route it in a way that still makes sense. Had I not posted the beginning chapters, I could have re-written and no one would have even noticed the detour!I still see the destination in my head ... now I have to use my GPS (Gimpy Plotting Skills) to get there without falling into a p(l)ot hole!Sometimes I wonder why I torture myself this way ... sigh ...Thanks for the encouragement!And happy New Year!