Chapter 2
Chapter 2 of 16
StormySkizeBook 7 -- The Way it Should Have Been. Harry, Ron, and Hermione don't return to Hogwarts for their seventh year. Instead, they join forces with the Order of the Phoenix to find Voldemort's Horcruxes and save the wizarding world. Members of the Order teach them how to fight. Along the way, Hermione realizes that her feelings for Ron have changed -- and so have her feelings for two other Order members.
Disclaimer: All characters and settings of Potterverse are the property of J.K. Rowling and other sundry entities. Only the plot belongs to me. I am making no money. I play in this universe for the sheer joy of it. My only payment is the kind reviews and comments of those who read and enjoy my tale. This story is canon-compliant through HBP. DH has, for the most part, been happily disregarded, especially that sappy epilogue!
Special thanks go to my beta reader, JuJuJenn. She makes sure I stay focused.
Journey out of Darkness
Two
Remus was as good as his word. He was knocking at the front door of the house on Privet Drive before the mantel clock had finished its twelfth chime.
Harry threw the door open.
"Happy birthday, Harry," Remus said by way of greeting, as he stepped into the painfully neat living room. "Are you ready to go?"
"I've been ready since I got here," Harry grumbled.
"I know this has been hard on you," Remus said.
"Yeah ... well, it's never been easy here," Harry answered. "No reason this time should've been any different."
"Are you all packed?" Remus asked.
"I never unpacked. I just took out what I needed and left the rest in my trunk. Mr. Weasley came by yesterday to pick it up. All I've got is what I was wearing yesterday," he said as he held up a paper sack.
"Where are your aunt and uncle?" Remus asked.
"They've gone out. There was some big dinner for Uncle Vernon's company."
"And Dudley?"
"Out with his friends probably looking for someone to beat up."
"So you've already said your goodbyes, then."
"Huh. They never wanted me in the first place. There're all glad to see the back of me. Aunt Petunia will be counting the silverware tomorrow to be sure I haven't nicked anything," Harry said.
"You haven't, have you?" Remus asked with a smile.
"My mum and dad left me all I'll ever need. I wouldn't take anything from these people even if they offered, which they didn't."
"Where's Hedwig?" Remus asked.
"She's at the Burrow. I told her to stay there after she delivered my last letter to Ron. Mr. Weasley took her cage with him when he took my trunk. I'm travelling light," he added with a small smile.
"That's good," Remus said. "Take my arm, we're going to Apparate."
Harry took a firm hold of Remus's arm and in a moment, they were standing in front of number twelve Grimmauld Place.
"I thought we were going to the Burrow," Harry said.
"There's a bit of business I have to take care of here before we go," Remus replied.
"Is this place still Unplottable?" Harry wanted to know.
"Dumbledore arranged for a new Secret Keeper," Remus said. "It's as safe as it ever was. We've even managed to shut up that awful painting of Mrs. Black, though we've yet to find a way to get it off the wall."
Remus opened the door, and Harry followed him inside.
"Let's go down to the kitchen," Remus said. "I could do with a cuppa."
They went down the stairs and moved toward the large kitchen.
"You're not tired are you?" Remus asked as he opened the kitchen door.
"Not really," Harry replied.
"Good," Remus said with a smile, and then he gave Harry a gentle shove into the room.
"Surprise!"
"Happy Birthday, Harry!"
The calls overlapped each other as Ron and Hermione, Mr. and Mrs. Weasley, and Professor McGonagall all called out to him at the same time.
The next few minutes passed in a flurry of hugs and kisses as each of them wished him a happy birthday.
"There's cake," Molly said a few minutes later.
They sat around the large table and ate chocolate cake and drank tea. It was the first surprise party Harry had ever had, and he was grateful. The only way it could have been better was if Dumbledore had been there.
"He would have been proud of you," Minerva said as she noted the wistful expression on Harry's face.
"Thanks for saying that, Professor," Harry said.
"You're welcome," she replied, as she patted his arm comfortingly.
When the last bite of cake had been eaten, Minerva cleared her throat to attract the attention of the people around the table.
"Now that we've had our fun, it's time to get down to the business at hand," she said.
Everyone quieted down and waited for her to continue.
"Albus Dumbledore created the Order of the Phoenix during the first rise to power of the Dark Lord. Your mother and father, Mr. Potter, as well as your godfather, were members. So were Arthur, Molly, and Remus. After the events on Halloween in 1981, the Order became far less active than it had been. It was never disbanded completely, however.
"This turned out to be a fortunate thing because, contrary to what the majority of the wizarding world believed, the Dark Lord was not dead after that famous encounter with you, Mr. Potter. He was quiescent for more than ten years, gaining strength and waiting for the opportunity to return to power.
"Now, more than ever before, the wizarding world needs the Order of the Phoenix. As the Dark Lord has recruited new people to his side, the Order of the Phoenix recruits new members as well.
"After consulting with two of my top aides," Minerva gestured to Arthur and Remus, "it has been decided that we would like to offer membership to you, and to Mr. Weasley and Miss Granger, as well."
Harry started to speak, and Minerva held up a hand.
"It's important that you understand your responsibilities as a member of the Order before you accept."
Harry nodded and Minerva continued.
"After the despicable behaviour of Peter Pettigrew, it was reluctantly acknowledged that a wizard's word cannot always be taken at face value. Therefore, to become a member of the Order, you must make an Unbreakable Vow."
Minerva then went on to explain exactly what they would have to promise in order to become members of the Order of the Phoenix.
"Do you understand the promises you must make and the consequences should you break the Vow?" she asked, looking from Harry to Ron and then to Hermione.
"Yes, Professor, I understand," Harry answered.
"I do, too," Ron said.
"I understand," said Hermione.
"Are you prepared to make such a Vow?" Minerva asked.
"I am," Harry, Ron, and Hermione spoke together.
"Remus, would you act as Bonder for us?" Minerva asked.
"I'd be honoured, if it's all right with Harry." Remus replied.
"Is that acceptable to you, Mr. Potter?"
"Yes."
"On your knees, then," Minerva said. She slipped off her chair and fell to her own knees, casting a quick Cushioning Charm to protect her aged joints.
Harry dropped to his knees in front of her.
Remus stood over them, his wand in his hand.
Minerva reached out and took Harry's right hand in her own.
"Harry Potter, do you come of your own free will seeking to join the Order of the Phoenix?" Minerva asked.
"I do," Harry answered.
"Will you be loyal to the Order of the Phoenix and to each of its members?"
"I will."
A thin tongue of brilliant red flame left the tip of Remus's wand and wrapped itself around the pair's joined hands.
"Will you keep secret the identities of all other members of the Order of the Phoenix?"
"I will." A second tongue of flame attached itself to the first.
"Will you keep secret any locations designated by the Order of the Phoenix as Unplottable, or those protected by a Fidelius Charm?"
"I will." A third tongue of flame joined the first two.
"And finally, will you obey my orders, and the orders of anyone I choose to act as my delegate, as you work with the other members of the Order of the Phoenix toward the defeat of the Dark Lord?"
"I will." A last tendril of flame connected with the others. Their hands now appeared to be clasped within a glove of fire.
Remus touched his wand once more to their hands. The fiery glove faded.
"Welcome to the Order of the Phoenix, Harry," Minerva said. She pulled him toward her and placed a soft kiss on his cheek.
"Thank you, Professor," Harry replied.
"You go on and get up. I think I'll just stay down here to proceed with the other initiations.
"Mr. Weasley," Minerva said, gesturing to Ron, "would you like your father to be our Bonder?"
Ron looked to his father and nodded. He went to his knees in front of Minerva, and Arthur came to stand over them.
When the Vow was completed, Minerva also kissed Ron on the cheek.
"Welcome to the Order of the Phoenix, Ronald," she said in a warm tone.
"Thank you, Professor," Ron said as he got to his feet.
"Your turn, Miss Granger," Minerva said.
Before she knelt, Hermione turned to Mrs. Weasley.
"Would you act as our Bonder, please, Mrs. Weasley?"
"Thank you, dear," Mrs. Weasley replied. "I'd like that."
Another Vow, another kiss on the cheek, and Hermione Granger was a member of the Order of the Phoenix.
"Welcome to the Order of the Phoenix, Hermione," Minerva said formally.
"Thank you, Professor McGonagall," Hermione replied.
Hermione got to her feet and then bent down to help Minerva up.
Remus hurried to Minerva's other side to help.
"Oh, I'm getting too old for this," Minerva said as she rose stiffly, holding on to Remus's arm for support.
"Nonsense, Minerva," Remus replied.
"I believe a celebratory toast is in order," Arthur said. He set a tray down on the table. The tray held several small glasses filled with an amber fluid.
"This is a fine cordial contributed by another Order member," Arthur explained as he handed glasses out.
When everyone had a drink, one filled glass remained on the tray.
"Who is that for?" Harry asked.
"That would be mine," said a voice from the kitchen door.
And Severus Snape stepped into the room.
Author's note: This story was written in response to the Post DH Challenge on The Petulant Poetess.
I chose prompt #5: Harry touches his scar; it hasn't pained him in 19 years. He hears hooting, rolls over in bed to see Hedwig sweeping in the open window at Privet Drive, and realizes that his 17th birthday isn't far off. Go for it... a new seventh year for the lot.
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179 Reviews | 6.67/10 Average
I really like this story, in fact I might say I love it :P
Am interested in how the Hermione/Snape/Remus love triangle is going to pan out lol. I love that Serverus stood up for her so immediately, god love him. why couldn't Hermione have slipped some tongue into that kiss on the cheek :P hehehe
Loved it
I am also really sorry about your Dad, I hope things are a lot better for you now. I also hope that you don't break your promise of updating within 8 months:P, unless I read that wrong and you were promising that you wouldn't be updating until 8 months from when you added the chapter, and if that's the case, I greatly look forward to May/June :D
Lots of love and thoughts for you
Bree
my condolences on the death of your father. it's never easy, no matter how old we are. great update and welcome back! thanks muchly.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much for your kind words.
I am so glad you updated! I am so sorry about your Dad. I know what it's like to lose a parent. I hope things get easier for you. My thoughts are with you.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I appreciate your kind thoughts. Things have gotten a bit easier, and I'm trying to concentrate on this story only and get it finished. I have quite a bit written, but still quite a bit to go as well. I'll keep at it. This fic will not be abandoned.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave a comment.
glad you are back. Nice chapter
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
Hooray! An update! I'm sorry to hear about your dad, and I'm glad you've started to dig yourself out the plot holes you were having trouble with. So happy to see this continued :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. I'm still struggling with a few plot holes, but I'm trying to patch them over.Thanks for sticking with it, and for taking the time to leave such kind words.
very nice so far. :D
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I appreciate your interest.
Wonderful chapter, the reader really feels the mood in this chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks. I thought they all deserved a night of frivolity.
Amazing!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I"m glad you're enjoying.
Very interesting... Lupin checking out Hermione, and Snape having conflicted feelings about her himself. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thanks so much. At this point, I"m not sure that Lupin realises what's going on ... but Snape is very perceptive, isn't he?Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment ... and some stars!
Now I have another story to add to my Favorites! This really is how things should have gone after Dumbledore's death. So Remus seems to be taking a more personal interest in Hermione, and Severus has noticed. Fortunately, Ron's too oblivious to notice, especially given that he's often dangerously ignorant... add jealous vindictiveness to the mix and heaven help the Order. Great story!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.Yes, lots of emotions bubbling close to the surface. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Cute New Year scene. I'm glad you are back.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
I am really looking forward to the completion of this. Have you any idea how long it shall take? I love everything you have written but cannot abide an unfinished story (once I've started it) because I devour books! Excellent work!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I have not abandoned this story. There have been RL issues that have made writing very difficult for me, but I'm hoping to get back to this tale soon. Thank you for reading and for leaving a wonderful review in spite of how long it's been since I updated.
Just read through your story and so far I have really enjoyed it. I was very impressed by how smoothly everything seemed to go - that is, the course of the story all seemed very believable and natural. This is in part because you've done a great job of gradually allowing the relationships between the characters in the story to develop naturally and on their own, rather than rushing any of the interactions between various people. All in all I've found this an awesome story - the only blemish on my satisfaction is that I noticed how long it has been since you last updated, and this made me very sad. I desperately hope that this story is not abandoned, because I really want to read more (especially the Muggle party - I can't wait to read that chapter and see what you do with that scene). So pretty pretty please keep updating?
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
This story has NOT been abandoned. I lost my dad a few months ago, and the emotional drain has been so much that I've found it very difficult to connect with my fictional characters. I'm desperately trying to get back 'into' this story. I appreciate everyone's patience as I struggle with RL issues.
LOL It's like a costume party for this lot! Really funny.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
ees time to paaaaaaartay! ~sits in the dark strobey colored ravey club and plays E Nomine techno club mixes and rocks out to crazy german music~we all know snape likes some good german techno
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, my ... I may have given you a wrong impression ...I'm nearly 59 years old ... I remember the Beatles when they DID play at the Cavern.German techno? I'm not even sure what that is ...I'm thinking you like the story ... you did give me some lovely stars ... but German techno? Not is this, or any other lifetime, for me ... or for Snape ... at least not in one of my stories!Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review!(Poor, old, decrepit author walks away, shaking her head. German techno??)
Response from keske (Reviewer)
Yeah, I had too much sugar and got a little carried away. But yes, I do love your story. I suppose I was just in the mood to ramble on about the kind of music i was listening to. But don't worry, I love the Beatles! Here Comes the Sun is my longtime favorite...and Octopus' Garden ^.^I suppose what I was really trying to say was that I hope the group enjoys their time in muggle London and experiences some wonderful new things!But...um, yes. The band is called E Nomine...eh, if you want to look it up like on youtube or something XD (I...am one crazy kid, yes)
That breakfast after Ron and Hermione broke up was classic! Nicely done.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
It was brilliant to choose Liverpool for their party. In my humble opinion, it's one of the best cities for a good pub-crawl!! Makes me wish I could go out with them.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've never been to Liverpool, never been to Europe at all, though I would love to go some day. I do a lot of on-line research when I choose settings for my stories. I always try to get the geography right. I really chose Liverpool because I wanted to use the "Spiders, Insects, Beetles (Beatles), Bugs" reference. Little things like that just tickle me, and I love including them in my stories. Lots of times the subtle references don't even get noticed (or if they are noticed, they aren't commented upon), but I love putting them in there. And I wish I could go out with them, too ... sigh ...Thanks for reading and reviewing.
One thing I always figured was wrong with DH - thatDumbledore wouldn't have had some way of verifyingSnape's loyalty to at least one senior Order memberin an emergency. I understand why it couldn't becommon knowledge, but Dumbledore would have hada Plan B for Severus. I'm so glad to see him take hisrightful place. Yeeaay!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
That was one of my major complaints, as well. Dumbledore basically hung Snape out to dry. I understand the need for secrecy and all that, but come on -- couldn't just ONE other person have known Snape's true loyalties? Dumbledore expected Snape to be killed -- hell, even SNAPE didn't expect to survive. But shouldn't there have been some sort of contingency plan in place just in case, by some miracle, he did make it through? The only information left behind that proves Snape's 'innocence' are the memories that he passes on to Harry, and that scene in the Shrieking Shack when he does so is lame, lame, lame. How did Snape or Dumbledore know that Harry would be 'available' to receive those memories? I also feel that the 'promise' made in the very first book ("I can show you how to brew fame, bottle glory, and even put a stopper in death!") was horribly broken by JKR. In my personal opinion, I think she got pissed off by how popular Snape became in fandom, and she compromised her own story line in order to sabotage that popularity. (What? They love SNAPE? Snape is horrible! I'll show them!)That's just my opinion, of course, but I feel she truly wasted a valuable opportunity to prove the very values she purported to uphold -- that love and redemption are important and can make a difference.Oh, how I rattle on ... sorry!Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from AmyLouise (Reviewer)
I do agree absolutely that JKR didn't know what to do withSnape and his increasing fascination for readers - especially those who are old enough to appreciatesomething of his complexity. The one with the realtalent, and the true hero, was obviously Snape. Andhow does JKR reward him? By having a Potter namedafter him. That would have thrilled him no end, I'msure!
Hmmm.... I'm not seeing this party as a good idea. Let's see:- 8 free tickets from a mystery supplier- given to the brothers of the Weasley known to be Harry's best friend- and for a "private" party - packed with helpless mugglesI smell a trap! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wish I'd been clever enough to write a trap into the party, but honestly, it's just a party -- a chance for the folks who've been cooped up in Grimmauld Place to get out and 'frivol' a bit. I hope you won't be too disappointed.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I just found this story, and since I think DH wasn't as well-contructed as the earlier books, and the Epiloguesucked, I think it's worth reading. I like your start, andI'll be trying to catch up now.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I'll have to agree with you about DH and that awful epilogue. I hope you'll enjoy the way I tell my version of Book 7.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Cool! Can't wait to read what sort of mischief this lot can get themselves into!Livvy
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I wasn't sure what kind of reception this idea would get. I'm glad you like it.Thanks for reading and reviewing and for leaving all the pretty stars!
Congratulations on becoming a validated author!Nice chapter, I chuckled over Hermione's warning the boys, I liked how Remus and Severus reacted to going to the Beatles and I'm left wondering if Severus would want to hold Hermione's hand. I know...terrible pun
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
It is a terrible pun ... I wish I'd thought of it!I'm glad you're enjoying.Thanks for reading and reviewing.Love the stars!
severus in liverpool! i can hardly wait! what a first rate idea! thanks so much
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, I wasn't sure what kind of a reception that idea would get. I'm glad you approve!Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Glad to see this again.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I've made a New Year's resolution to get this story finished. Nothing annoys me more than a story that is left to languish, and I'm ashamed to find myself the author of such a piece. It is a situation I vow to rectify!Thanks for all the shiny, pretty New Year's stars!
oh my gosh, are you and i kindred sprits or what. i began a story over a year ago, had most of it plotted out in my head and in notes (but didn't have chapters outlined or anything.... i'm obviously a novice!). after writing about 20 chapters, i was jonesing to post it, even though i had only about 20% of the story written at best. now, a year later, i'm at chapter 30, and it's about 3 months or so between posts because i'm having a hard time writing the 'filler' chapters inbetween all the planned out action. arrgghhh. so, i learned my lesson. anyway. i'm quite interested in this story and can't wait to see where it's going to go. i have a feeling that it may be a long one!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I've actually written quite a lot of it. The problem is that it's all in pieces and I have to find a way to tie everything together. Also, one of my major plotlines had to be scrapped after I started posting. Now, the story is heading in a direction that is no longer viable and I have to try to re-route it in a way that still makes sense. Had I not posted the beginning chapters, I could have re-written and no one would have even noticed the detour!I still see the destination in my head ... now I have to use my GPS (Gimpy Plotting Skills) to get there without falling into a p(l)ot hole!Sometimes I wonder why I torture myself this way ... sigh ...Thanks for the encouragement!And happy New Year!