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Journey out of Darkness
StormySkize179 Reviews | 6.67/10 (179 Ratings, 0 Likes, 126 Favorites )
Book 7 -- The Way it Should Have Been. Harry, Ron, and Hermione don't return to Hogwarts for their seventh year. Instead, they join forces with the Order of the Phoenix to find Voldemort's Horcruxes and save the wizarding world. Members of the Order teach them how to fight. Along the way, Hermione realizes that her feelings for Ron have changed -- and so have her feelings for two other Order members.
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StormySkize
Member Since 2005 | 13 Stories | Favorited by 172 | 431 Reviews Written | 998 Review Responses
I am in my late 50's and I didn't even start reading Harry Potter until after the third book came out. My granddaughter got me 'hooked on Potter,' and while surfing the net one day, I found a fanfiction site. That was it! My first story, "Renaissance," was published on Ashwinder a month later and I've been writing ever since. I am primarily a HG/SS shipper, but I also enjoy reading and writing RL/SS. I live in Tampa, Florida with my wonderfully adoring and supportive husband, and three completely spoiled cats. (Kallie, Mysha, and Smudge {who was the inspiration for the cat that Severus gives Hermione in my story "Renaissance."}) I'm always happy to correspond with my readers and I answer ALL reviews. I'm always looking for plot-bunnies, so feel free to throw some ideas out.
Reviews for Journey out of Darkness
Oh yeah I'm liking it so far and can't wait for more. I wonder what your take on DH is.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
My 'take' is far different from Ms Rowling's. I hope you'll continue to enjoy. Thanks for reading.
I really like this beginning! I'm looking forward to reading more.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you.
Cool. I like this beginning.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I hope you'll like it all. Thanks for reading.
Smart of Minerva to make Harry take his vow first.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, yes, very smart. Thanks for reading.
Nice chapter - so glad you've updated!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.I've been struggling with this story, but I'm trying very hard to get back on track. I'm grateful for the patience of every reader out there.
This was a nice interlude with Harry and his past. Add another Horcrux down the tubes and we have a very satisfying chapter!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I had feared that this chapter didn't progress the story much, but I couldn't resist the urge to give Harry a glimpse at his parents' lives. I'm glad you liked it.Yes, another Horcrux gone. Just a coupel more to go.Thanks for reading and commenting.
ahhhhhhhh there getting closer and closer to defeating him, more soon please :)
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I'm trying to update once a week. I really can't do it more than that, else my writing won't keep up with my posting!I'm glad you're enjoying.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Severus seems to be calmer and more aproachable. I think it's an interesting twist in the character and I'm looking forward to seeing how it pans out.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I hope you will continue to enjoy the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
My, that was a sad one – Just the thought of poor Harry going through his parents' things...I am happy that they found and destroyed the Horcrux, though.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Just a couple more Horcruxes to go now. I'm glad you liked this, even though it was sad. I wanted to give Harry the opportunity to 'know' his parents.Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment.
Poor Harry. Too bad he couldn't have had more time to look. You did a lovely job taking us through the house.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I realise that Harry's interlude in his parents' home really didn't progress the story very much, but I wanted to give him that time with them. I thought he deserved it.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
wether it advanced the stroy or not - it fits in nicely and adds depth to the stroy, humanizes it.
I loved your description of the house and Harry's response.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much. I wanted to give Harry a chance to get to know his parents a little bit. I'm glad you thought I did a good job of it.Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment.
This hunt makes far more sense to me than DH. I'm glad Harry found a bit of his past.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I must admit, I was a bit puzzled by some of JKR's choices for hiding places for the Horcruxes. Of course, a lot of DH puzzled me -- that's why I'm re-writing it! I loved the idea of Harry having a glimpse of his parents' lives in a past he doesn't remember. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
This is a much better issue of where voldy would have hidden parts of his soul! Nice work with Harry in his parent's house!
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much.
i really love reading this story, its sooo obvious he likes hermione just be easier if he admitted it to himself, more soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
It wiill take a LOT for Snape to admit his feelings. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Chapter 12 is now up! Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment.
Stupid man. Ah, well. I can always hope that things work out the way I want them to.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
We've still quite a ways to go with this story. Things may yet work out the way you'd like them to -- and then again, maybe they won't! Please come back and find out!Thanks for reading.
Hermione is right. The best protection during this war is to be "dead". I wonder if they will use this principal later in for another strategy?I hope Ron has finally learned his lesson.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I'm not sure that Ron will ever truly learn his lesson. As to the other -- well, my lips are sealed!Thanks for reading..
I really like your style of writing & I like this story so far and am excited to keep reading, I just have one question about the prompt, what's with the, "19 years" bit when it says just after that hes about to turn 17? confuzzled lol
terrific chap. Poor Remus, he's thrashed up so. I really hope he surrives. Hermione was great and the tender almost moment between her and him was so sweet. But he's right - it can't happen - at least not yet!The bit about learning CPR from telly is a miss. You can't learn CPR from a telly. You have to have propper hand placement or you could shove the xiphoid process into the heart and kill your patient. Or you could misplace your hands and do severe damage to the ribs. Hermione's parents were dentists - they'd have been taught CPR in school and had regular refresher courses. They could have taught her. Don't know about Snape though.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Being certified in CPR myself, I realise that you need proper training to do CPR effectively and correctly. I am certainly not advocating that someone with no training should attempt CPR. That point conceded, however, I'll say that I believe that at the point that Hermione and Snape did use CPR, there was, basically, nothing to lose -- even if they did it wrong. Technically, Remus, with no heartbeat and no respirations, was already dead. I see it as a last ditch effort, an act of complete and utter desperation -- like the two year old who dials 911, or the mother attempting to lift a car off her child. I hope that you will see this scene through that filter of desperation and overlook the technical problem of two untrained people attempting CPR.I appreciate your comments, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story.Thanks for reading.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
I am so glad you said this and really applaud your response. I wk in a hosp and we had a 'man down' insident reciently where a 'visitor' tried CPR on him and nearly killed him because his hands were too low. I personally think everyone should be trained in CPR at least once in thier life. But that's personal. Please don't get me wrong - I LOVE THIS STORY. You've ensnared me and I am following along eagerly. I just freaked and - I'm sorry. memory association for the poor victim and that visitor hit me.
Wow, he got the shite beat out of him. Hmmm.... Uh oh, do I scent a remus/hermione/snape thing coming up? Hmmm
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Idle speculation is always fun, isn't it? There is definitely a Remus/Hermione/Snape thing coming up -- but maybe not in the way you might think!Thanks for reading.
ron strikes again. LOL @ what Snape told him.
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I think Ron has spent his whole life in his brothers' shadows. Even as a member of the Golden Trio, he doesn't really come into his own. Harry is famous, and Hermione is brilliant. Ron is just there. He's been let into the dining room, but not allowed to sit at the table. I think a lot of his behaviour is the result of insecurity. He's still a prat, though!Thanks for reading.
LMAO... Ron and his toast... that was funny and so like Ron. Snerk
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
I can see Ron thirty years after Hogwarts -- big belly, flat feet, belching and scratching his arse and bellowing for his wife (thankfully, in my story, NOT Hermione!) to bring him another butterbeer. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Love the characters' interactions
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Thank you so much!
Your characters are so very close to canon. Thanks for that
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Unless I'm purposely writing out of character, I try to be true to the personalities as they've been revealed in canon. JKR has never portrayed Snape in a very favourable light, but I find it hard to believe that he doesn't have a true core of morality. Thanks for your comments, they are appreciated.
Did I mention that I'm all for a re-writing of book seven? Haha
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
It's a dirty job, but somebody has to do it. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Thanks for reading.
welcome snape! :)
Response from StormySkize (Author of Journey out of Darkness)
Oh, yes, you can't keep a good man down. (Unless you're JKR, of course). Thank goodness for fan fiction! Thanks for reading.