New Chapter for The Self-Writing Parchment
The Self-Writing Parchment
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Hermione finds a mysterious piece of self-writing parchment in Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes that writes: Tell me your deepest desire. Thinking it’s a trick, she says, “I wish to see my soul mate?” and she suddenly finds herself at Severus’ feet.
This is my response to the Potter_Place Summer 2007 Prompt – #23
The warnings I have listed for this chapter are implied. I chose the rating of MA (NC-17) due to the story’s overall content.
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein
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Reviews for The Self-Writing Parchment
Considering that he's kept the relationship unequal, how can he really expect her to initiate anything. I really liked all the detail in that chapter.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Too true. But he's still afraid that she'll slip up the next time the Dakr Lord wants to see her, and he'll see something Severus wants kept quiet. Still, you know men.Thank you very much for sticking this out with me and for the stars.
Very nice Bea, I had chills a few times this chapter.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. Sorry about the chills. Which parts? Just curious.Thank you for still sticking with me on this story. Hugs~
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Oh, they were good chills. Severus grabbing Hermione's arm was one. It was easy to see he wanted her out of the range of fire and it was kind of sexy too.
this is an excellent story!I am a bit concerned about hermione's reactions to her unfortunate incidents and snapes temper. I say concerned because she seems a bit too compliant, like a little ewe amongst a whole pack of sheep dogs. it just strikes me as odd that she'd be so docile when, in her rooms with snape she could very easily give vent and anger to her problems and such, which snape would rationalize is his duty as a husband to put up with mione's temper... lol i dunno...just seemed a little off to me.thanks for writing! can't wait to read more!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. In as much as Hermione has grown to knw him, he's still her porfessor and now Headmanster. Even though she is living with him, he's keeping a distance between them. Hermioe feels very much alone with only Ginny to confide in, and she knows that she has to keep her head down. In essance, she is a ewe amongst a pack of wolves, and they have knives!Things will only esculate and with that will come rebellion. Christmas - Luna leaves, Easter - Ginny and... there is some following of canon here, a little.Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad that you are still with me on this tale.
I *absolutely loved* Hermione's stories of underage magic!And poor Draco! At least he's trying! But Hermione really needs a swift kick in the arse.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. Yes, she was just trying to get Draco to understand her a bit. But yes, Draco may be trying, but he still doesn't get it. Thank you for the review.
Awww...that was a fabulous ending to the chapter. I liked the Draco/Hermione interaction and conversation in this chapter too...great job.~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. Yes, Hermione is 'getting along' but keep in mind it's just cuz there isn't anyone else and she wants to avoid the Rat. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. Yes, Hermione is 'getting along' but keep in mind it's just cuz there isn't anyone else and she wants to avoid the Rat. Thank you for the review.
NO, Severus that's not why she's crying!! Stupid miscommunication in relationships! Wonderful wedding scene though. Beautiful job! I loved it.~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, I know! IF he'd only stuck around for a few seconds more until she looked up and saw him. *sigh* It will come up again, and he will find out. Hugs, Jen, and thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, I know! IF he'd only stuck around for a few seconds more until she looked up and saw him. *sigh* It will come up again, and he will find out. Hugs, Jen, and thank you.
I really liked this chapter! I especially loved the semi-lightheartedness of the shopping trip and Cillian's and Draco's reactions to Hermione's wedding robes. Fantastic job!!~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. Yep, Cillian shows jsut how much a ladies man he is in this, picking out her dress. Narcissa didn't like it much, but oh, well. LOL Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. Yep, Cillian shows jsut how much a ladies man he is in this, picking out her dress. Narcissa didn't like it much, but oh, well. LOL Thank you for the review.
Wow! Talk about a tense and nail-bitting chapter!! I'm glad Hermione's going to be okay. You did a fantastic job with the suspense and drama involved in this chapter. One more reason I love your writing...you never disappoint. Keep up the great work.~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much *blushes* I hope the blood and gore wasn't too much? I really owe SW69 credit, she gave me a lot of help with this chapter, considering I wanted to splinch Hermione literally in half! And I wanted it believable. Thank you very much for the review, and the compliments. hugs~
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much *blushes* I hope the blood and gore wasn't too much? I really owe SW69 credit, she gave me a lot of help with this chapter, considering I wanted to splinch Hermione literally in half! And I wanted it believable. Thank you very much for the review, and the compliments. hugs~
Wow!! Man, I really don't like Wormtail!! You did a great job with the dynamics between all the characters in this chapter...fantastic. You're doing a wonderful job with this story. I kinda hope she wasn't actually able to apparate; but at the same time, I hope she's okay. Can't wait to read on.~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Teehehe You're not supposed to like Wormtail! Thank you for the compliment, it's fun playing with these guys. Oh, brace yourself, the next chapter is rough. Hugs Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Teehehe You're not supposed to like Wormtail! Thank you for the compliment, it's fun playing with these guys. Oh, brace yourself, the next chapter is rough. Hugs Thank you for the review.
Wow, what a loaded chapter! I wish Hermione would give Severus a little break, I mean he is trying to save her life here. I do understand her side though and it's quite realistic; even though I really just want them to get together already! LOL! Wonderful chapter. ~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. Yes, there is a lot, and Hermione is still reeling. Don't worry, it's coming. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you. Yes, there is a lot, and Hermione is still reeling. Don't worry, it's coming. Thank you for the review.
Oh man, I'm so nervous for Hermione! I hope things don't go too badly. You're doing a wonderful job with this story. Keep it up!~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. I'll try.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. I'll try.
Very nice chapter...the long-awaited kiss!! WooHoo!! It stinks that Wormtail has to come back; I really liked him in that cage where he belongs. Oh well, great job!! Keep it up!~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yep, they kissed. I don't think Severus was expecting such a reation though. and yes, the Rat is back. Thank you for the reivew.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yep, they kissed. I don't think Severus was expecting such a reation though. and yes, the Rat is back. Thank you for the reivew.
I really liked the interactions between Severus and Hermione in this chapter. Great job. I like how you portray Draco in this story too. Again, wonderful job!~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much.
Man, how cruel is that...being able to get out of the house only to see your friends and have your captor put you under the Imperius curse. Wonderful chapter! I think Hermione's starting to develop a bit of an interest in Severus.~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I know! BUt he can't let her go at this point without really endangering both himslef and her. At least, I hope, Remus recognized the effects of the Imperius and will calm down Harry and Ron. In regards to Hermione, there is the reliance and dependancy factor she's feeling. It's not really recognized as an attraction yet, but the roots are starting - for both of them. Thank you for the review. hugs
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I know! BUt he can't let her go at this point without really endangering both himslef and her. At least, I hope, Remus recognized the effects of the Imperius and will calm down Harry and Ron. In regards to Hermione, there is the reliance and dependancy factor she's feeling. It's not really recognized as an attraction yet, but the roots are starting - for both of them. Thank you for the review. hugs
Well I'm glad Snape was able to help her out and I loved what you had him do to Wormtail. I kind of figured Hermione was pregnant after the mention of her missed period and the dizziness. This story is very intriguing...great job!~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. Yeah, kinda sucks what happened to her, but Severus really came through. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. Yeah, kinda sucks what happened to her, but Severus really came through. Thank you for the review.
Man, Wormtail is such a pervert!! I'm glad Draco was there to help...eventually. Can't wait to see what happens next, especially Snape's reaction to what happened. Great chapter!~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, I really make him a slime in this story, okay I see him in canon as slime, but that's MHO. and I look forward to reading your reaction! Thank you for the review, hon. As always, it's appreciated very much.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, I really make him a slime in this story, okay I see him in canon as slime, but that's MHO. and I look forward to reading your reaction! Thank you for the review, hon. As always, it's appreciated very much.
Another wonderful chapter. I like the fact that Narcissa is only supplying Hermione with lingerie...interesting idea. Keep up the good work!~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Oh, You'll see a few things Narcissa is doing 'for' Hermione, all with a ulterior motives - get back at Severus. You'll see why... enjoy!Thank you for the review. I'm glad you like this so far.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Oh, You'll see a few things Narcissa is doing 'for' Hermione, all with a ulterior motives - get back at Severus. You'll see why... enjoy!Thank you for the review. I'm glad you like this so far.
Interesting intro chapter. I think this is going to be another interesting take on a Severus/Hermione story. Can't wait to read more...so I will. LOL. ~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Welcome in. I have tea, wine and pumpkin juice. My coffee sucks, but I make great cookies! I hope you enjoy the read. Have patience, get through the first 4 chapters and be sure to see the subtle hints of his changing feelings for her. Enjoy!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Welcome in. I have tea, wine and pumpkin juice. My coffee sucks, but I make great cookies! I hope you enjoy the read. Have patience, get through the first 4 chapters and be sure to see the subtle hints of his changing feelings for her. Enjoy!
hey, the idea with the charms club is brilliant.and the scene with the fainting -cake? biscuite? was funny. but what to do next time. they can't always knock Cillian out.At least she had time to talk to McGonagall. what is this business of Snape which he isnt inclined to share with Hermione.Her position is so undesirabe. And how about the two boys wandering around. Will we hear about them?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thanks, I loved the idea of CHarms Club. You'll see more later... Cillian ate a Fainting Fancy, from WWW, of course! Nope, he will be more suspecious from now on, less trusting. Yes, she was able to talk to McGonagall, again, you'll see more of that. Severus is afraid that if he opens up to Hermione too much she will be in harms way. You'll see what Severus has been dealing with soon. Personally, I don't eveny the guy. Dumbledore never had it this bad...The guys are in hiding nad no one knows. As soon as the girls figure out how to communicate better than the coins, you'll find out more. It's not good. The brains of the trio is at Hogwarts! But eventualy you'll see bits and pieces, either through Severus or Hermione's POV.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thanks, I loved the idea of CHarms Club. You'll see more later... Cillian ate a Fainting Fancy, from WWW, of course! Nope, he will be more suspecious from now on, less trusting. Yes, she was able to talk to McGonagall, again, you'll see more of that. Severus is afraid that if he opens up to Hermione too much she will be in harms way. You'll see what Severus has been dealing with soon. Personally, I don't eveny the guy. Dumbledore never had it this bad...The guys are in hiding nad no one knows. As soon as the girls figure out how to communicate better than the coins, you'll find out more. It's not good. The brains of the trio is at Hogwarts! But eventualy you'll see bits and pieces, either through Severus or Hermione's POV.
Professor Snape is her soulmate? COOL!Bummer about her being tortured and raped and such, but it was good of Snape to have promised her that she wouldn't remember any of that trauma.I hope that things WILL work out between the two of them. I'm a sucker for happy endings.Great first chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, you'll see. No I didn't want to write it (rape torture etc) so I took the easy way out. Things improve in time. Enjoy!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yes, you'll see. No I didn't want to write it (rape torture etc) so I took the easy way out. Things improve in time. Enjoy!
this was a very thorough update, and yes, now we do know what is on Snapes mind. he is very much torn between the front lines.dangerous times at Hogwarts school. not Dolores again, waaah.A very trying Occlumency lesson, and teaching some news, both for him and for her. Is it soothing her to know that the dark lord is just playing with her? cruel games by a cruel master.At least he is trying to help her. and he wishes his Hermione to live her life as she dreams after the war. that is something to live for, isn't it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. Yes, I tried to give a little bit here. I didnt' want her to simply have it down the first go. But yes, when he uses Legilimency on her - he sees a lot about her. When this is all over, he still expects that she will leave him, or is Voldemort wins - she will be killed. we'll see... and yes, Voldemort is not a nice guy - he uses, manipulates and twists things ot get devotion.
Thank You for this update because I have awaited anxious and have great expectation .The chapter is full of informations about Severus manner but I would really like to know who is Belladona .I recoil that other female beside Belatrix was Belinda (Cilian sister).Hermione hold her self rarely well,strong but I wonder what will occur when her big break down will come.She has so much hard time ahead of her before the end.I would really like to know also how Hary and Ron are doing and if they have detect other horcroux.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Oh, gads! I feel like a complete dolt! Thank you for pointing that out! It's an error and I've fixed it. She is Belinda, (I used Belladona in a one-shsot and the names mixed up.) Thank you so much for bringing that to my attention. I'm so sorry for the confusion. So far, Hermione is holding on all right. Yes, things are rough, but they will get tougher, I'm afraid. We have no word from Harry or Ron as of yet - later. That will come, but later.Thank you again for your help with my mistake and I really appreciate the review.
Response from lora (Reviewer)
Pleas , pleas will you update soon ? I am so anxious for more . Best regards from Lora
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
I'm still typing in some SS/HG time into the stuff Hermione is dealing with and had to fix a class scene... I'm sorry. I am working on it!!
wow! terrific update. poor hermione. thanks so much and i look forward to the next chapter.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you very much. I'll be hopefully updating soon.
Thanks for the update! you are really doing a splendid job with this tale! a lot of angst for poor Hermione. five stars!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Thank you, doll. Yes, things are really rather rough for her. Thank you so much for the review.
He has been a busy Headmaster, poor guy!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Self-Writing Parchment)
Yep, trying to keep the school functioning and control the hostilities and all. Thank you for the review.