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Potions Under Duress The Love You Take
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The Love You Take

1: Chapter 1: The Predicament

2: Chapter 2: The Quagmire

3: Chapter 3: The Morass, Part 1

4: Chapter 4: The Morass, Part 2

5: Chapter 5: Complications

6: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

7: Chapter 7: Acclimatization

8: Chapter 8: Imbroglio

9: Chapter 9: Involvement, Part 1

10: Chapter 10: Involvement, Part 2

11: Chapter 11: Escalation

12: Chapter 12: Confusion

13: Chapter 13: Regrouping

14: Chapter 14: Recovering

15: Chapter 15: Regression

16: Chapter 16: Possession

17: Chapter 17: Confession

18: Chapter 18: Exposure

19: Chapter 19: Recognition

20: Chapter 20: Consternation

21: Chapter 21: Prostration

22: Chapter 22: Manifestation

23: Chapter 23: Manifestation, Part 2

24: Chapter 24: Validation

25: Chapter 25: And, In the End ...

26: Chapter 26: The Love You Take

27: Chapter 27: ... Is Equal To ...

28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make

The Love You Take

Subversa

1,365 Reviews   |   1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 978 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Erotica Potions Under Duress 153,637 Words 35 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Viktor Krum

Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Predicament

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Quagmire

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Morass, Part 1

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Morass, Part 2

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Complications

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Acclimatization

Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Imbroglio

Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Involvement, Part 1

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Involvement, Part 2

Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Escalation

Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Confusion

Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Regrouping

Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Recovering

Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Regression

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Possession

Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Confession

Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Exposure

Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Recognition

Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Consternation

Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Prostration

Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Manifestation

Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Manifestation, Part 2

Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Validation

Chapter 25: Chapter 25: And, In the End ...

Chapter 26: Chapter 26: The Love You Take

Chapter 27: Chapter 27: ... Is Equal To ...

Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make


About Subversa

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Subversa

Member Since 2005  |  33 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,367  |  226 Reviews Written  |  1,394 Review Responses

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0/10

Bentwaters

Morass indeed.  Lots of difficulty in untangling himself from this one no matter how hard he tries.  Of course we all hope he doesn't anyway! HAHAH Poor Sev, always so put-upon. ^.~Wonderful as ever.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

I really am terrible to him, aren't I?  It's a miracle that he ever comes when I ask him to play, anymore ...

Thanks for the note, my dear! 

0/10

inna_chy

You have another 'Draught' on your hands, my dear, and a healthy number of people waiting anxiously for your next chapter.

(One'd think that I'd know better than to start one of your stories this close to the beginning.)

Bloody brilliant!

Becca

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Oh, surely not *that*, love - but thank you for the imputation!  I hope you won't have to wait long for this one to be finished.  The scope is not nearly as large as HDODP.

Thank you for the note, my dear.  Lovely to see you! 

0/10

spikesra

I love the almost frantic need for relief and honor. We want more!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Ah, you've chosen the two biggest conflicts in this part of the story!  Thanks for the note!

10/10

HBAR

Things are not updating much as of late, so I am taking the opportunity to go back and revisit some of my favoites.  This holds up so well on a second read.  I was remiss in reviewing the first time around, so I am taking a moment to tell you how fantastic I find your writing.  I don't probably have to let you know, because you have an enormous following who do so each time you post, but even though I suspect it is a labor of love, it is a lot of time and effort on your part, so I want to ensure that you know how many countless hours of pleasure you have brought to me and many other readers.  You amaze me with every single word you put to paper.  Thanks for all of your hard work, each and every time you grace us with a story.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

I can't tell you how much I appreciate your sentiments.  SubHub would tell you that I work two jobs; the one for which I am paid in $$, and the one for which I am paid in reviews.  I probably spend nearly as many hours on the weekend writing as I do at the office working!  I am not updating Owned right now because I am writing for the SSHG Exchange on Live Journal, but when I am finished with my exchange piece, I'll be back to update again.  Thank you for your perceptive, thoughtful comments, now and always!

10/10

sevfank

Thank you, may i have another???  excellent story - more more more.....

Response from sevfank (Reviewer)

Sorry to have sent this twice - my computer decided to have a fit...

Response from sevfank (Reviewer)

Sorry to have sent this twice - my computer decided to have a fit...

10/10

sevfank

Thank you, may i have another???  excellent story - more more more.....

10/10

Fawkes_07

*megasnerk*  Poor Severus, indeed.  This is too funny for words.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

*grins*

You have the most devilish sense of humour ...

10/10

maria

Holy.  Shit.  Very intense - my heart is pounding right now.  More please!  

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Poor Maria!

*passes the ice water* 

0/10

Gwenog Jones

What a sticky (perhaps not the best word choice) situation.  I think that you have set yourself up with a mighty challenge.  It might be rather hard to convincingly depict romance blossoming from such a start.  Despite this, I have perfect faith in your abilities.  Very intriguing plot.  Great job!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Thank you for the vote of confidence, Gwenog, dear.  I agree that it is a mighty challenge.  Bless you, dear.

0/10

pygmypuff

Such self control, he deserves a medal! And really, poor Hermione, I do feel for her too!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

I really feel for Hermione, too.  Poor thing has no control over her body's demands, which must be crazy-making for an intellectual.  Thank you for the note!

10/10

my little secret

*lights up a cigar, feet still up on the table*Wheeeeee!!!!!  ~ j

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

LOL!  You do make me laugh, my dear.  Thank you!

9/10

DeeMichelle

What restraint! When will his body take over his mind???  ((and ignore his mastery at potions making.)) 

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

LOL!  Love the emoticon with the white flag ...

I think he wishes his potion was *just* a tad more effective! 

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for the update. I must say that Severus is brilliantly portraited in this fic, still snarky, but so clearly the honourable man we all love so dearly! The lengts he goes to save Hermione from herself, I am impressed. I look forward to read more!!!!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Dear

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

, I'm so happy to hear that you like my portrayal of Severus.  I do see him as a man hampered by his own honour.  Thank you for your kind words!

10/10

firefly124

I really do love the way you've captured Severus' reluctance and determination not to take advantage of the situation and shown how this isn't particularly fun for Hermione either.  Very IC and believable.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

*purrs*

More lovely words cannot be spoken to an author who writes the Potions master than to be told he is IC.  Thank you!!!

10/10

lora

This is wery , wery good . I love it . In  next chapter I hope you will theell ass more about Hermione "s fillings.

Response from lora (Reviewer)

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Hi, Lora!  Next chapter is already complete; it is all about Hermione's feelings.  Thanks for following so faithfully!

0/10

Mint Stick

Damn Dumbledore for putting Severus in this position! Although, once again, I suppose he did make what he considered the best choice in the circumstances - for Hermione, anyway (and one he could best justify to himself as well, I assume).

I wonder how long Severus's restraint will hold.  

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Damn Dumbledore indeed!  I can get behind that thought!  I do put Severus in some terrible situations, tho...

Thanks for the note,

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

! 

9/10

nata

Wow! Severus has some patience and self-sustenance. Having a young, willing, naked female on his lap, with his hands all over her, and he still manages to negotiate the necessity of maintaining her and his honour with himself. That impotence potion must have done its magic. I can see the reasoning behind his resistence, and I'm very glad you decided to make him so noble (Delicate Poison?). Thank you for giving us such an interesting Severus once again.

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Ah, you see the similarity between the painfully honourable Severus of HDODP and this one?  So do I, Nata!  Thanks for mentioning that.  Severus still wishes the impotence potion worked better, I think.  Thank you for the note, my dear.

10/10

Elisabeth

Oh, I hope that he left her a love letter. But that's an awfully obvious gesture, and he's never obvious. Lovely chapter, and nice to see Grandmother Prince again -- I never get tired of her!

0/10

Elise_Wanderer

I missed that reference to the beaded bag the first time through!  So it was a gift from Severus, huh?  Cool!

10/10

snapefan2007

this is a great story, i can't wait to read more!

10/10

ylang_two

I'm glad he's clarified his priorities--Hermione and his family.  They are the people he can fight, protect and even sacrifice for, not Dumbles who sees him as a bargaining chip, not a person. 

10/10

Lumiere

Mrmph, why couldn't she wake up before he left!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, you totally rock!

9/10

ylang_two

Oh man.  She's not out of danger yet or back to herself.  Probably won't see her tormentor/rival anymore since she inadvertently got rid of Bella. 

0/10

pygmypuff

What a fab chapter, I love it, I don't know how you do it, but you get them so right and there's not many fic writers that do it so perfectly.I loved that last bit, "Come along then" etc, it was melt-worthy, swoon-worthy and many other -worthy things, I'm off work sick this afternoon, I know I should be sleeping, but I am resting in bed with the lap top, and reading all the updates has made me feel much better!Loved the cliffy too, how could you make us wait!

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

Oh, what a lovely compliment!  I'm so pleased to know you think I get them "so right" - wow,

Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)

!  Praise doesn't get much better than that. 

Oh, melting & swooning are just about my favourite things ever!  Thank you! 

10/10

snapeygirl

Update soon!!!!

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