New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Morass indeed. Lots of difficulty in untangling himself from this one no matter how hard he tries. Of course we all hope he doesn't anyway! HAHAH Poor Sev, always so put-upon. ^.~Wonderful as ever.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I really am terrible to him, aren't I? It's a miracle that he ever comes when I ask him to play, anymore ...
Thanks for the note, my dear!
You have another 'Draught' on your hands, my dear, and a healthy number of people waiting anxiously for your next chapter.
(One'd think that I'd know better than to start one of your stories this close to the beginning.)
Bloody brilliant!
Becca
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Oh, surely not *that*, love - but thank you for the imputation! I hope you won't have to wait long for this one to be finished. The scope is not nearly as large as HDODP.
Thank you for the note, my dear. Lovely to see you!
I love the almost frantic need for relief and honor. We want more!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Ah, you've chosen the two biggest conflicts in this part of the story! Thanks for the note!
Things are not updating much as of late, so I am taking the opportunity to go back and revisit some of my favoites. This holds up so well on a second read. I was remiss in reviewing the first time around, so I am taking a moment to tell you how fantastic I find your writing. I don't probably have to let you know, because you have an enormous following who do so each time you post, but even though I suspect it is a labor of love, it is a lot of time and effort on your part, so I want to ensure that you know how many countless hours of pleasure you have brought to me and many other readers. You amaze me with every single word you put to paper. Thanks for all of your hard work, each and every time you grace us with a story.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I can't tell you how much I appreciate your sentiments. SubHub would tell you that I work two jobs; the one for which I am paid in $$, and the one for which I am paid in reviews. I probably spend nearly as many hours on the weekend writing as I do at the office working! I am not updating Owned right now because I am writing for the SSHG Exchange on Live Journal, but when I am finished with my exchange piece, I'll be back to update again. Thank you for your perceptive, thoughtful comments, now and always!
Thank you, may i have another??? excellent story - more more more.....
Response from sevfank (Reviewer)
Sorry to have sent this twice - my computer decided to have a fit...
Response from sevfank (Reviewer)
Sorry to have sent this twice - my computer decided to have a fit...
Thank you, may i have another??? excellent story - more more more.....
*megasnerk* Poor Severus, indeed. This is too funny for words.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
*grins*
You have the most devilish sense of humour ...
Holy. Shit. Very intense - my heart is pounding right now. More please!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Poor Maria!
*passes the ice water*
What a sticky (perhaps not the best word choice) situation. I think that you have set yourself up with a mighty challenge. It might be rather hard to convincingly depict romance blossoming from such a start. Despite this, I have perfect faith in your abilities. Very intriguing plot. Great job!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thank you for the vote of confidence, Gwenog, dear. I agree that it is a mighty challenge. Bless you, dear.
Such self control, he deserves a medal! And really, poor Hermione, I do feel for her too!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I really feel for Hermione, too. Poor thing has no control over her body's demands, which must be crazy-making for an intellectual. Thank you for the note!
*lights up a cigar, feet still up on the table*Wheeeeee!!!!! ~ j
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
LOL! You do make me laugh, my dear. Thank you!
What restraint! When will his body take over his mind??? ((and ignore his mastery at potions making.))
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
LOL! Love the emoticon with the white flag ...
I think he wishes his potion was *just* a tad more effective!
Thank you so much for the update. I must say that Severus is brilliantly portraited in this fic, still snarky, but so clearly the honourable man we all love so dearly! The lengts he goes to save Hermione from herself, I am impressed. I look forward to read more!!!!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Dear
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
, I'm so happy to hear that you like my portrayal of Severus. I do see him as a man hampered by his own honour. Thank you for your kind words!
I really do love the way you've captured Severus' reluctance and determination not to take advantage of the situation and shown how this isn't particularly fun for Hermione either. Very IC and believable.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
*purrs*
More lovely words cannot be spoken to an author who writes the Potions master than to be told he is IC. Thank you!!!
This is wery , wery good . I love it . In next chapter I hope you will theell ass more about Hermione "s fillings.
Response from lora (Reviewer)
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Hi, Lora! Next chapter is already complete; it is all about Hermione's feelings. Thanks for following so faithfully!
Damn Dumbledore for putting Severus in this position! Although, once again, I suppose he did make what he considered the best choice in the circumstances - for Hermione, anyway (and one he could best justify to himself as well, I assume).
I wonder how long Severus's restraint will hold.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Damn Dumbledore indeed! I can get behind that thought! I do put Severus in some terrible situations, tho...
Thanks for the note,
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
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Wow! Severus has some patience and self-sustenance. Having a young, willing, naked female on his lap, with his hands all over her, and he still manages to negotiate the necessity of maintaining her and his honour with himself. That impotence potion must have done its magic. I can see the reasoning behind his resistence, and I'm very glad you decided to make him so noble (Delicate Poison?). Thank you for giving us such an interesting Severus once again.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Ah, you see the similarity between the painfully honourable Severus of HDODP and this one? So do I, Nata! Thanks for mentioning that. Severus still wishes the impotence potion worked better, I think. Thank you for the note, my dear.
Oh, I hope that he left her a love letter. But that's an awfully obvious gesture, and he's never obvious. Lovely chapter, and nice to see Grandmother Prince again -- I never get tired of her!
I missed that reference to the beaded bag the first time through! So it was a gift from Severus, huh? Cool!
this is a great story, i can't wait to read more!
I'm glad he's clarified his priorities--Hermione and his family. They are the people he can fight, protect and even sacrifice for, not Dumbles who sees him as a bargaining chip, not a person.
Mrmph, why couldn't she wake up before he left!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, you totally rock!
Oh man. She's not out of danger yet or back to herself. Probably won't see her tormentor/rival anymore since she inadvertently got rid of Bella.
What a fab chapter, I love it, I don't know how you do it, but you get them so right and there's not many fic writers that do it so perfectly.I loved that last bit, "Come along then" etc, it was melt-worthy, swoon-worthy and many other -worthy things, I'm off work sick this afternoon, I know I should be sleeping, but I am resting in bed with the lap top, and reading all the updates has made me feel much better!Loved the cliffy too, how could you make us wait!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Oh, what a lovely compliment! I'm so pleased to know you think I get them "so right" - wow,
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
! Praise doesn't get much better than that.
Oh, melting & swooning are just about my favourite things ever! Thank you!
Update soon!!!!