Chapter 11: Escalation
Chapter 11 of 28
SubversaNow Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Chapter 11: Escalation
Severus woke the instant the Dark Mark began to burn. His inner clock told him he had been sleeping for three hours; it was, therefore, around 2 A.M. on Boxing Day.
Fucking Morgen. She had wasted no time airing her perceived wrongs before their master.
The girl stirred beside him, turning so that her bare back was pressed against his left side. How could he provide for her needs, now that the Dark Lord was calling for him? Dumbledore had been far too optimistic, which was, indeed, one of his many flaws.
She turned again, so that her breasts were now pressed against the arm which still burned from his lordship's call. She sighed and snuggled her cheek against his upper arm, as if she was a puppy and he was a sure source of affection and protection.
With a muffled oath, he moved to a sitting position, his black eyes flicking over his shoulder to stare at the girl, who murmured but did not wake. Her hair, in the long, glossy ringlets, changed her appearance entirely, and he wasn't sure he liked it. Other men would notice her more if she looked less like a walking bird's nest and more like a pretty young woman.
He moved carefully from the bed, grumbling to himself over the loss of his clothing, and slipped stealthily through the hidden panel and along the passage into his own room. From the wardrobe, he pulled his twin to Hermione's beaded bag - his was black kidskin leather - and removed from it the necessary cloak and mask. He scrambled into clothing and donned the hooded cloak. Every moment he delayed was a guarantee of discomfort to come, but he could not depart without making provision for the girl.
'Scampy!' he called, and the house-elf popped into the room. 'Please wake my grandmother, with my apologies, and fetch her to me; tell her it is an emergency.'
'Right away, Master Severus,' Scampy said, 'but Mistress is not asleep. She scarcely sleeps any more.'
Scampy disappeared again and Severus involuntarily clasped his left forearm, dreading the interview to come.
The room into which he Apparated harking to the Dark Lord's call was overly warm, lit only by the fire burning in the massive hearth. Illuminated by the flames was a round bed, covered in white satin sheets. Sitting upon the bed, one leg crossed negligently over the other, was the Dark Lord, his freakishly white skin somehow whiter than the shiny satin bed sheets. He wore a green kimono-style dressing gown, and for the first time in many years, Severus saw his master's naked legs, hairless, with a grotesquely scaly texture.
What was far more disturbing was what was on the bed behind the Dark Lord. It was a woman, naked, her wrists bound together and resting behind her head. Black hair fanned out over her pillow, and her hooded eyes were fixed upon her lord. Bellatrix's body was painfully thin, greatly reduced from the succulent beauty she had been before Azkaban, when the Dark Lord had frequently flaunted her physical perfection before his Death Eaters. His lordship had found in young Bellatrix Black the ideal servant, who worshipped him in mind and body. Her family had believed the great man had the right idea about how to right the wrongs in the wizarding world to the benefit of the pure-bloods and at any rate, they were far too nervous of Lord Voldemort's displeasure to deny him their eldest daughter.
When Severus had first been brought to the Dark Lord's attention, Bellatrix Black had been his lordship's constant companion. Soon afterwards, his lordship had commanded that she wed Rodolphus Lestrange, son of one of the Dark Lord's oldest cronies. Rodolphus and his brother, Rabastan, had been classmates of Severus', and it had been common knowledge that Rodolphus was not interested in women but the manoeuvre had obtained for the Lestrange family the fiction that Rodolphus was embarked upon a proper pure-blood marriage, and for the Dark Lord, it had obtained a hefty contribution to his war chest.
Severus came forward and fell to his knees, lifting the hem of the kimono and pressing his lips to the fabric. Consciously, he closed his mind to every emotion and waited for the inevitable.
'Severus,' the Dark Lord said, 'how good of you to find the time to answer your master's call.'
'I live only to serve you, my lord,' Severus said, his eyes firmly averted.
A moan of sexual pleasure issued from the prone figure on the bed, but Severus did not react.
'I understand from Morgen Singer that you have a cursed student given into your charge,' the Dark Lord continued, apparently content to leave Severus upon his knees on the cold floor.
'Yes, my lord,' Severus responded, having learnt many years before not to provide more information until the Dark Lord saw fit to request it.
'Look at me, Severus,' the high cold voice commanded.
Severus raised his face and looked into the eerie red eyes of the greatest Legilimens the world had ever known.
'How is it, Severus, that you come to have in your keeping the Mudblood slag whom I intended for Albus Dumbledore?'
'Dumbledore forced her upon me, my lord,' he answered truthfully.
The Dark Lord stared into Severus eyes for a long time, and Severus saw memories passing before his mind's eye. With all his concentration, he offered up choice scenes sure to please his master and scrupulously hid others, for the sake of his other master.
'Ah, you spank her,' the Dark Lord said. 'Sluts enjoy spanking don't you, Bella?'
Severus dared a darted glance from the corner of his eye to Bellatrix, who responded to her master with a moaned, 'Yes, Master, yes please ...'
'Would you like to have Severus spank you, Bella?' the Dark Lord inquired, his gaze fixed again upon Severus' face.
'No, Master, please not Snape please, spank me yourself, Master ...'
His lordships' cruel mouth curved into a smile. 'Would you like to spank her, Severus? Variety is the spice of life for a man Lord Voldemort understands this. Lord Voldemort is generous to those who serve him well.'
Severus responded, 'I shall do so if you wish it, my lord but you know there is no love lost betwixt Bellatrix and me.'
The Dark Lord's smile widened. 'It is amusing, is it not, how dear Bella loathes you?' The smile disappeared as quickly as it had arrived. 'Come, Severus, sit beside me, here on the bed. I want you to see this.'
Obediently, Severus stood, his knees protesting the ill treatment, and he sat gingerly beside the Dark Lord, whose red eyes now rested upon Bellatrix.
'Open your legs, Bella,' his lordship commanded, and his most loyal servant obeyed with a whimper. 'Show Severus how wet you are for me.'
Understanding that he was to watch, Severus turned slightly so that he might do so, not bothering to hide his distaste for the spectacle of his most vituperative enemy in such a lascivious display.
'Abraxas Malfoy invited me to the party where I first saw Bellatrix,' the Dark Lord said conversationally, watching the woman writhe as if in response to his voice. 'She was fourteen, and a riper beauty I have never seen. She was fifteen the first time she turned up on my doorstep, offering herself to me. She was sixteen when I made her mine forever.' He glanced at Severus, as if to make sure Severus was attending to him. 'She wished to become Lady Voldemort, and do you know, there are times when I regret my decision not to give her that honour.'
As Severus watched, the Dark Lord stretched out one spider-like hand and placed it upon her belly, eliciting a low moan and increased begging. 'Do you know why Bellatrix lost her mind in Azkaban, Severus?'
Seeing that his master required a response, Severus said, 'The Dementors, my lord, prey upon the human prisoners, sucking all hope and happiness from them.'
'No,' the Dark Lord answered him, removing his hand once more from Bellatrix' flesh, apparently indifferent to the anguish this caused for her. 'It is because she was sexually imprinted upon me by the Eternus Perturbatio curse at the age of sixteen, and my absence drove her mad.'
Severus could not prevent the flash of horror which stole through him as incidents of the last twenty years, some witnessed and others only reported, fell into place like pieces of a jigsaw puzzle. But what of the persistent rumours amongst his followers that the Dark Lord's new body lacked ... certain functions?
'I'm sure you're aware that my progress along the road to immortality has deprived me of the carnal appetites of mere men,' his lordship said, as if in answer to Severus' fleeting thought. 'I could release her, of course, but she begs me not to do so is that not true, Bella?'
The dark head lifted, and blazing dark eyes stared out of the gaunt, crazed face. 'You mustn't, Master! Please! I'll do anything!'
Voldemort hissed, and although Severus did not understand what he was saying, he recognized that his master was speaking Parseltongue which meant that the loathsome Nagini was close by. There was a rustle, and the massive head of the snake reared up on the far side of the bed, then onto the mattress, and soon the entire length of Nagini was stretched out beside the naked witch. The snake butted her head against the Dark Lord's hand, as if she was a cat wishing to be petted.
'As you know, Severus,' the Dark Lord said, 'the curse victim can only receive surcease of the driving need fostered by the curse from the ministrations of the one upon whom she is imprinted. Nagini, here, is so close to me that she is able to act as my deputy.'
Severus struggled not to show his horror as Voldemort hissed at the snake, which began to slither along Bellatrix's bare leg.
'Of course, Nagini, in the desire to fulfil my orders, sometimes becomes a bit too enthusiastic, allowing the fangs to pierce Bella's skin but I always heal Bella before she become too ill do I not, my dear?'
As if on command, Bellatrix began to scream. Turning his attention back to Severus, the Dark Lord smiled. 'Poor Bella she never knows if she's going to receive the honour of my hand or mouth or the pleasures attendant on my precious Nagini. It brings me great enjoyment to hear her scream her pleasure she may perceive it as pain, but in the end, she always agrees that Lord Voldemort knows best.'
Now the smile disappeared from the Dark Lord's face and he drew his wand, levelling it at Severus. 'I cannot tell you how disappointed I was to find that you had deprived me of the knowledge that my old enemy was sexually bound to a teenage girl, Severus.'
Severus hated himself for being forced to show fear. 'My lord, I agreed only because I thought I could be of service to you. Dumbledore is more sure of me than ever, since I have obeyed him in this against my own very strong reservations in the matter. And I thought I would be able to bring you more information about Harry Potter by being in a position of such power over his best friend!'
Bella's screams were reaching a crescendo, combining sexual release with horror and pain, and in his excitement, the Dark Lord's vertical pupils were contracted to mere black lines in his horrible red eyes. 'That may very well be true, Severus only time will tell but, for now, you have displeased me very much and you know Lord Voldemort only punishes to instruct ....'
Severus felt himself falling almost before the first searing pain of the Cruciatus Curse began to course through his nerve endings; in the end, what he remembered most clearly was the counterpoint of his own screams to those of Bellatrix as the Dark Lord conducted his perverted symphony of pain and degradation.
Hermione woke slowly, blinking owlishly at the dim light peeking around the drawn drapes. A muttered 'Lumos' ignited the candles, and she squinted at her wristwatch, wondering why she was having so much difficulty waking up. Four o'clock? It couldn't be four in the morning it would be pitch dark outside! So, it must be four in the afternoon but why in the world was she ....
A shout from the floor below brought memory flooding back, and she was instantly alert. She had heard her professor's voice, and he was in distress. Throwing the bedclothes from her naked form, she grabbed clothing at random from the wardrobe, pulling on denims and a jumper with no underclothes, pausing only to stuff her feet into her trainers before she bolted down the corridor and raced down to the landing, where she paused before the great stained glass representation of Merlin and Nimüe to survey the scene in the hallway.
Professor Snape lay in a heap upon the marble floor, his Death Eater's cloak still hooding his head, his attenuated face chalky against the black fabric. Mrs Snape knelt at his head, wringing her hands and crying helplessly. Morgen Singer knelt at his side, chafing his hand and begging him to speak to her. Madam Prince stood over him, her lips pressed in a thin line. Standing at his feet, her long-fingered elf-hands clasping his ankles, was Scampy. Gathered in a knot in the drawing room doorway were the Tiberius Prince family, all five of them tense-faced.
'Severus Severus, I'm sorry!' Morgen wailed. 'Please!'
Hermione stormed down the stairs, grabbing the back of Morgen Singer's robes and physically jerking her to her feet. 'Get out of my way!' she cried. That done, Hermione crouched beside Professor Snape, pressing fingertips to his throat. His pulse was thready, but it was there. 'He's alive!' she gasped, tears starting to her eyes.
Eileen Snape stopped crying at this pronouncement, and Madam Prince was galvanized into movement. 'Get up from there, Eileen you're only in the way.' Eileen stood obediently, and Madam Prince took her daughter's place, her old-fashioned buckled shoes glinting oddly in the flickering light from the many-candled chandelier.
Hermione looked down the length of his body to Scampy. 'Can you help me move him to his room?' she asked, ignoring everyone else.
Scampy took the question as a command and immediately levitated the fallen wizard, directing his body up the stairs. Morgen Singer started forward, saying, 'I'll get him settled,' but Hermione was in front of her in a flash, her wand levelled with a steady hand directly at the redhead's chest.
'Take one step and I will hex you,' Hermione snarled. 'This is your fault! Don't you dare try to touch him! Are we clear?'
Morgen Singer lifted her chin, a look of unutterable disdain on her beautiful face. 'How dare you speak to me like that, you ridiculous little Mudblood!'
Hermione turned from the older witch in disgust, sheathing her wand as she started up the staircase after Scampy and the unconscious professor. 'Oh, sticks and stones, Morgen,' she said dismissively. She was on the landing when the unmistakeable BANG! of a well-executed spell rang out, followed by a feminine cry of outrage. Hermione whirled, drawing again as she did.
'I'm sorry, Aunt Morgen,' John Prince said, advancing into the entryway and retrieving his aunt's wand from the floor. He handed the wand to her and added, 'I couldn't let you cast at your opponent's back that's bad form, even for a Death Eater.'
Hermione bestowed a shining smile on John, who flushed in gratification, then she ran lightly up the rest of the stairs in pursuit of the house-elf and her professor.
Madam Prince had come to her before first light, waking her by sitting on the side of the bed lately vacated by her eldest grandchild.
'Severus has been summoned by He Who Must Not Be Named,' she said, only the crease between her eyes betraying her anxiety. 'The Dark Lord is aware that you are imprinted upon Severus, rather than Albus Dumbledore, and he will not be happy.'
Hermione tugged the bedclothes up to her chin, sharply aware of her nudity beneath the sheets. 'How could he possibly know?' she asked as she struggled to clear her brain of the cobwebs of sleep.
Madam Prince drilled Hermione with her keen blue eyes. 'Morgen Singer has wanted to marry Severus since she was old enough to put her hair up and let her skirts down. The families have no objection, but Severus is not interested.'
'Good for him,' Hermione muttered grimly.
'Like harks to like, Hermione. It would be a good match,' the old lady said, never looking away from Hermione's face.
'She's not like him!' Hermione cried, incensed and moved to express her opinion. 'She's nothing like him! She's vain and spoilt and petty!'
'You do not know her,' the old woman said dismissively.
Hermione persevered, as if Madam Prince had not spoken. 'He's brave and clever and honourable he would never snitch to Voldemort about her, even if she deserved it!'
Madam Prince quailed a bit at Hermione's blatant utterance of the Dark Lord's name, but she did not speak a word of censure. 'At any rate, Morgen went to the Dark Lord with her ... concerns after the incident between John and Severus last night.'
'And why?' Hermione demanded, changing course, her irritation now directed at the professor's grandmother. 'Why did you give me that chain and tell me to wear the Nexus, knowing what everyone would think of me?'
The old woman stood, glaring down at Hermione uncompromisingly. 'I will thank you to mind your tone with me, Hermione. I am prepared to allow you a certain amount of license because of your natural anxiety, but I will not tolerate your insolence.' She lowered her eyes to her hands, busily readjusting the sash on her dressing gown. 'Suffice it to say that there is little point in you owning the last Nexus in existence only to keep it rolled up in a sock in a cupboard.'
Realising that she was unlikely to receive a direct answer to her question, Hermione's mind skittered again to the fact that her professor had gone willingly into danger. A faint stirring of need touched her, like the first signs of hunger, and she looked up at the older witch in trepidation. 'How long ... what if ...?'
'Yes,' Madam Prince said. 'That is why Severus sent me to you. I am going to put you into an enchanted sleep, Hermione hopefully, it will hold you until he returns and is able to ... see to you, himself.'
Hermione raised a hand. 'No please I don't want to be asleep when he's in danger.' She knew it was a stupid thing to say, but instinct told her to remain alert.
'It is his wish, Hermione,' Madam Prince said sternly. 'Do you really wish to be rebellious? I will be forced to tell him about it, you know.'
Hermione had complied, feeling like a coward who was taking the easy way out, but also realising that she would be doing no one any good if she were awake, simultaneously worried about her professor's well-being and needing to have sex with him.
She entered Professor Snape's bedroom and closed the door behind her, hoping the closed door would discourage Morgen Singer or even the rather ineffectual Eileen Snape from entering to offer assistance. Scampy had laid him out in the middle of his bed and had already managed to undress him down to his shirt and trousers; as Hermione entered, the little house-elf removed his boots. As she did so, his eyes fluttered open.
'Headmaster,' he croaked.
Hermione hurried to his side. 'Sir it's Hermione. We're still at Prince House the headmaster isn't here. Shall I Apparate to Hogwarts and fetch him to you?'
At the sound of her voice, Professor Snape's eyes opened wide, and his burning black gaze fastened upon her face. 'No you will not leave this house,' he rasped. His attention seemed to wander then, and he looked fretfully down at Scampy. 'Water ...'
Scampy was at his other side instantly, levitating herself onto the mattress and lifting his head to allow him to sip from a cup of water. When Scampy gently raised his head, he groaned aloud.
'Oh, sir!' Hermione cried, the words wrenched from her as she gripped her hands together to keep from touching him. How she wanted to help him! 'Please what happened? What did V-' she caught herself. 'What did You Know Who do to you?'
'Cruciatus,' the cracked voice managed before his eyes closed again, and he seemed to lapse into unconsciousness once more.
Hermione stared at the wall over his head, her mind whirling. The Cruciatus curse caused intolerable pain. No one had ever been able to tell her why, precisely, but it made sense to her that it was caused by irritation of the nervous system.
'Scampy,' she said, 'I gave Professor Snape a potion for Christmas it was in a box with an unguent and a paperweight do you know where he put it?'
Scampy nodded, her huge green eyes frightened. 'Yes, young miss, but Master Severus said Scampy is not to touch it he said the box contained something very special ....'
Hermione leant forward. 'It's okay, Scampy you don't have to touch it. Just show me where it is, all right?'
Three drops of the potion, applied under his tongue, seemed to bring the professor some measure of relief; Hermione breathed more easily when he no longer moaned on every third breath.
'Scampy, I have an ointment I want to rub into his muscles can you help me undress him?'
Working together, the witch and the house-elf attended to the professor's needs. Mindful of his dignity, Hermione kept his private area draped as she worked on him. Scampy helped her roll him onto his side, and with firm, steady strokes, she rubbed the crème made from the Enchanted Mistletoe into the long muscles of his back and legs, reaching beneath the sheet to massage it even into his bum. Concern for his well-being had taken pre-eminence over the symptoms of the curse, but now that she was touching his skin, caressing the sculpted roundness of his bum, she wanted very badly to straddle him. Her erect nipples were abraded by the weave of her jumper, and her quim ached as moisture pooled between her thighs.
Struggling mightily to bring her mind back into order, she settled Professor Snape again on his back and covered him up to his armpits with the duvet, knowing how he preferred to keep his hands free and unencumbered.
'Thank you, Scampy,' she said. 'You can go now. I'll call if I need you again.'
The little creature popped out of the room, and Hermione stretched out beside him, her eyes intent upon his face, and she was on his eye level when his eyes fluttered open.
'What did you do?' he whispered.
'I rubbed your muscles with the migraine relief crème,' she whispered back. 'It seems to help with the spasms.'
The ghost of a smile touched his lips. 'It's a miracle nothing has ever helped like this before.' He moved his shoulders experimentally. 'The headmaster and the matron would always have to put me to sleep and keep me that way until the spasms passed it took up to three days, depending upon the severity.'
Hermione was surprised by his volubility, but it dawned upon her that the narcotic properties of the potion had undoubtedly loosened his tongue.
'Are you hungry?' she asked him, gratitude for his relative well-being flooding her but doing nothing to calm the rising storm of the curse symptoms.
'No,' he answered. He frowned slightly. 'What time is it?'
'Eight at night,' she answered.
'Too long,' he said, shifting fretfully on the sheets. 'You'll have to do all the work I'm too weak.'
Hermione lowered her lips to his ear. 'I can slip on top of you ...'
'No,' he said, 'it won't work. The Dark Lord cursed me an impotence curse. Short acting, but still in effect.' His lips thinned, and Hermione reached a finger to smooth over his lips.
'We'll wait,' she said, wondering if she could.
'I can smell you now,' he informed her baldly. 'Get out of your clothes.'
Double-checking to make sure the door was locked, Hermione warded it as well, adding a Silencing Spell for good measure. She pulled off the jumper and peeled out of the denims, conscious of his eyes upon her.
'So,' he said, 'you've given up wearing knickers just to keep me from Vanishing them?'
'No,' she said, approaching the bed. 'I got dressed in a hurry when you shouted downstairs.'
He looked from her face to her breasts to her mound. 'Hands or mouth?' he inquired.
She studied at him. 'How could you manage mouth?'
His eyes drifted lazily down her nakedness again. 'Kneel over my face, and I'll show you.'
If she had not been so driven for relief, Hermione would most likely never have had the nerve to follow her professor's directions.
'Place your knees on either side of my head ... spread your labia ... lower yourself until you can feel my tongue ...'
It might have been her terrible need, but it seemed as if the climax she reached writhing upon her professor's face was amongst the most intense she had yet experienced with him. It felt as if he had sucked her clitoris into the middle of his mouth and was flicking it with his tongue. By the time she moved off his pillow to lie beside him, she was trembling with reaction and glad to cuddle up to his warmth, pulling the duvet over them both.
'Kiss me,' he rumbled, his baritone like warm honey to her senses. 'Clean yourself from my face.'
Unreasonably aroused, Hermione did as he bade her, sucking his lips into her mouth, licking at his mouth, the very source of the warm honey she craved, delving ever deeper in search of it, clambering atop him and twining her fingers in his lank hair.
'Move down,' he told her at length, and she was amazed to feel, as she slid down, the silk-covered iron of his erection.
'I thought you had an impotence curse,' she said, positioning herself and sliding onto him with a moan of relief.
'It appears that impotence is not my natural state in the face of your shameless provocation,' he replied, and his hands, gaining ever in strength, rose to grasp her hips. 'Shut up and fuck me.'
In the wee hours of the morning, when he slept peacefully, Hermione pulled on her clothes and slipped through the door out into the hall, unsure of how to find and use the secret panel. She was startled to discover John Price sleeping in a straight chair set against the wall opposite the professor's bedroom.
He startled when she came out of the door and sat up, instantly alert, his wand in his hand.
'John!' she whispered. 'What are you doing?'
John lowered his wand and stood, smiling rather sheepishly at his reaction. 'Just making sure no one tries to do any more mischief to my Cousin Severus,' he said.
Hermione felt quite embarrassed, emerging from her professor's room at this hour with her hair in disarray, smelling of sex. She could smell their mingled secretions upon her skin and was terribly afraid that this young man could do so as well.
'Thank you,' she said and stepped to one side to move past him, down the corridor to her room.
'She doesn't mean anything by it,' John blurted.
Hermione stopped. 'Who?' she asked.
'My Aunt Morgen,' he explained. 'She's loved Severus all my life.'
Hermione frowned. 'John, if you loved someone, would you go to the most frightening Dark wizard in the world and tell that Dark wizard something that you knew for a fact would mean punishment for your loved one?'
John sheathed his wand and rubbed his hands over his face. 'No, I wouldn't, but I'm not as high-strung as my Aunt Morgen.' He nodded his head toward his cousin's closed bedroom door. 'If the man you loved scorned you and took up with another witch, would you just walk away?'
Hermione looked at him as if he was daft. 'What are you talking about?' she demanded. 'Professor Snape isn't "the man I love"! There's nothing stopping him from taking up with your aunt, if he chooses to.'
John crossed his arms over his chest. 'Oh, come on, Hermione. You put on the Nexus, he challenged me for you and carried you off to bed and the whole family knows it.'
Hermione felt her face flame. 'That doesn't mean ...'
John threw his hands up, as if he was trying to communicate with someone unable to understand simple concepts. 'You can't push him to that and then spurn him! He made his intentions perfectly clear.'
John Prince turned and stalked away, leaving Hermione standing outside her professor's closed bedroom door, mouth agape.
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Poor Hermione, and poor Severus too but I trust you to lead them to safe harbor.
That was wonderful. I love your work.
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Love this story. I've read it so many times. Good characterisations, good plot & very hot!
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For a moment I wondered why Morgan would fight to get someone who clearly didn't feel the same way about her. How could she possibly think she could screw Severus Snape over and win him at the same time? For that matter, why would anyone be in a relationship with someone who loathed them even if they could force them? But then as quick as I could click my mouse to the next chapter, I thought about all the stupid, silly things women think they can change in a man and realized she thinks that if she can just get Severus for herself, she can make him want her, she can change him. First of all, the slag has too hight of an opinion of her self. Second, the stupid cow hasn't been on earth long enough to learn what this old hag, who has been married to the same man for 33 years, knows. That is, you can't change anything in a man, no matter how long you wait. Not one single thing. You either take him as he is, because the benefits out weigh the bull shit, or you need to move on while you still have your youth and your looks.
Well, I hope Hermione learned an important lesson about life that I needed to be reminded of with regard to "great men". Many, many better men have been willingly sacrificed on the alter of their great master, even though he were a lesser man, in vain. It is the way of power and politics. If one can't change the situation, one possible choice is to resign one's self to his place in the game and do his duty with honor and valor. Ha! Severus Snape is not truly resigned when it comes to Voldemort. "Revenge is a dish best served cold," indeed! Our mighty Potions Master is patiently working his master's demise. Once that is accomplished his other master will hopefully leave him to live his life as he pleases, only Severus doesn't expect to live. He may have resigned himself to the part of a pawn, but he will take The Dark Lord with him on his way down. Severus' original creator was no better than Voldemort or Dumbledore. Thank heavens, worthy bard, that you have seen fit to make his end more sweet.
The first time I read this I had thought that Viktor had coupled with Hermione, but now I see he was gallant enough to stop when he saw her crying and rock her instead. He isn't like that swine, Ronald. Please let me know if I'm incorrect. It is very handy that Viktor was knowledgeable about Hermione's condition, was non judgmental, saw that is wasn't anything personal, Hermione wasn't rejecting him, and he understood compulsions spells. She really needed someone who understood and wouldn't judge at that moment. It was also very handy that Viktor's presence ending up forcing Severus to face his feelings when he was attacked by the green eyed monster. (And, I'm on referring to Lily.) I'm very glad Viktor didn't get in trouble for casting the imperious. He did it out of compassion. 5 stars to Viktor Krum. I'm also very glad Severus has sorted himself out. I'm sure Hermione is too.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
You are correct. Viktor did not force himself on Hermione when he saw her distress.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
You are correct. Viktor did not force himself on Hermione when he saw her distress.
Albus asks too much of Severus Snape. He is only human. By giving him permission to have a relationship with Hermione after graduation, is Dumbledore recanting the order to let her go when the curse is lifted? If Severus wasn't so distraught wouldn't he hear permission to become emotionally attached to Hermione in Albus' words? It's so tragic that a man like Severus Snape must sublimate he very feelings, his thoughts, his future and every thing he is or will be to a Master. Albus tells him what to do, how to do it, how to think and how to feel. He is nothing more than Albus Dumbledore's secret weapon. Severus' life is worse than that of a house elf to the Dark Lord. I imagine that Voldemort dosn't give two shits about what his house elves think or feel or what they do in their free time, as long as they do their job. Poor Hermione. She is a good girl. She is sweet, forgiving and level headed. She didn't ask for this, but she has done the best anyone could ever be expected to do under these circumstances. She doesn't want to be a burden to Professor Snape. I can't remember if she knows that Severus has been ordered not to become too attached to her because he has to act as if this never happened when the curse is removed. If she knew this maybe she could speak to Professor Dumbledore about letting her and Severus work that out on their own. Severus is gallant and won't force himself on Hermione if she doesn't want him. Dumbledore knows he wouldn't. There is no way for this to end well, except for these two to end up together. Surely Dumbledore is beginning to see this.
They are both daft not to already know they are hopelessly in love with each other. I can't believe the level of denial Severus manages to maintain. I guess he doesn't want to get his hopes up. But what now? Is he convinced? I'm not surprised Hermione followed him and I'm not surprised he knew she was there. I'm not surprised he didn't want to upset her but I'm a little surprised he thought he could actually get away with the whole thing. He should expect more from Hermione. She may not be Slytherin but she isn't stupid. Silly silly man! How many times will he continue to underestimate her?
Mighty kinky fun to be had doing the naughty with your hunky Professor under the feet of your friends if they were to look. I do think that Viktor's willingness to cast the imperious charm was to help Hermione. And he did apparently do her. I think he was also trying to give her some surcease from sorrow and getting a little delight of his own. I do think Viktor cares for her. But, the big BUT, she belongs to Severus Snape and the sooner he gets them promised to each other the better. Many marriages have be built on so much less than what these two have in common as people and what they have suffered together. All he needs to do after Voldemort is dead is have Hermione look in the mirror. If she sees her and Severus getting married, he will know that is the greatest wish of her life after the curse has been lifted.
I must say good night!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I want you to know that I am reading your reviews and enjoying them very much. I'm so glad you're enjoying this story; it is very, very near to my heart.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I want you to know that I am reading your reviews and enjoying them very much. I'm so glad you're enjoying this story; it is very, very near to my heart.
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What-an-Ass! Men are so stupid. Maybe if he promised to put a good word in for him, Ron would give him a blow job when he finished his duties to Hermione and they could be mates. If he promised never to cum in Hermione again maybe Ronald would let him bugger him after he was finished with Hermione. Ronald could become he right hand. Snape wouldn't be able to tell the difference between his own hand and Ron, but it would help him alienate and humiliate Hermione even more effectively.
It's been years, and I still need therapy for the mishandling of Severus Snape's fate in the DH. I don't know what I would have done if it were not for you, gentle writer, and those like you who have faithfully continued to craft a life befitting of Severus Snape and rubbing out JKR's embarrassment and shameful invention of such an Un-Snape-like demise. Nimue's colossal crystal dildo!!!! As if the greatest potions master in the world, supremely puissant wizard and preeminently consummate, hard core and lifelong spy would have allowed himself to be killed by the venom of Voldemort's familiar, known assassin and a weapon Severus Snape had had years to prepare against. PA-LEESE!
And for the sake of every god known to man, Hermione Granger would never SETTLE for Ronald Weasley as her mate for life!!!!!
BLESS YOU, MY DEAREST THERAPEUTIC CRAFTER OF THE WRITTEN WORD!
I wonder if she is too innocent to recognize his fury as the jealousy it is? I know he is worried too, but he is passed the "I was worried for your safely" type of anger. I know she is thinking, "why does he have to be so mean about it?" I wonder if he will ever believe she wants him on her own. There are enough chapters for that to happen, I think. Thank Merlin Dumbledore go hold of the map! I hadn't thought of it, yet.
So much happened in this chapter! The most important is obviously the fact that she mentioned before sleep. In the storeroom she wanted him again "...just me wanting you,- without the curse." Perhaps now she can remember to use the coin. It was a wonderful wonderful chapter!!!!! My neuropathy is killing me but I couldn't stop reading. I must go lay down now. I love this story. I wish I had the time to comment further. Maybe later.
The picture is magnificent! I have to admit that Severus Snape took on a whole new persona when the trailers first came out and I found out that AR was going to play Snape. I remember the first trailer when my heart jumped into my throat. That was the instant when I became obsessed with this character and this actor. I had found him attractive before but never was he so sexy. I was delighted and scandalized that there was already some fan fiction with this couple. I had never read smut before and had never been attracted to bad boys, though I was 40 years old. But the combination of Severus Snape imagined as I thought AR would play him was my undoing.
Back on topic: The chapter was tender and compelling. My heart is well and truly engaged with this Severus and Hermione and their plight. You have done a masterful job of making your reader become quite emotionally affected by what they are experiencing. What a relief that they have come to some kind of understanding! Hermione, now knows he desires her. Poor Severus knows only that for now, she needs him and wants him to desire her. I can't imagine all the fears and insecurity that must be racing through their hearts and minds regarding the future. How can they help but become attached. To fall in love. What Severus doesn't know is that women fall in love with men whom they respect and Hermione has great respect for him. How could he know that a good woman can come to love any man who is good to her. He has no idea that a good woman would find it very hard to resist the love of a man that finds her beautiful and intelligent, and who makes her feel desired and cherished when he makes love to her? I am hoping that Hermione's obvious admiration of his body in moments when she isn't in the grip of the curse will convince him that she sees him as more than a convenient shag in time of need. And need I tell you that your writing is extremely sexy without being vulgar? That it is the epitome of erotica? Surely not.(Not that I don't enjoy well written vulgarity.)
I'd venture, never did anyone wish more that Monday would never come. How long can one make a Sunday evening last without being too tired for another day at work, just waiting for clock out time, only to become so absorbed in one's work as to stay late anyway. It happens to me all of the time, though never have I passed such a charming Sunday evening as Severus and Hermione. What I would give to be on that work bench... I am certain I would never stay late at work again unless under severe duress.
Dear poor Severus! It's only the second time I've said it I think. Pitiful! Down right pitiful! He's well and caught in this as I expected he would be. I hope young Hermione will take pity and not insult his pride without meaning to. I suppose it's only a matter of time before his tongue and lips won't be sufficient. They must call a truce and get over the reason they are here and just accept that it is thus for the foreseeable future. Hermione will hopefully express some gratefulness at his thoughtful care even if he didn't want the job. I am beginning to think that this curse also has some affect on the one the victim is fixed upon as well. He seems quite perceptive. On the other hand, maybe he's just that good.
I hope he becomes more cooperative. I totally understand the way he has approached this problem. His is being gentlemanly and is intent on not taking advantage of this young woman. However, they will both do better in the long run, I think, if after he has assured her he has no desire to take advantage of her sexually, he goes with the flow and gives her what she wants. His clinical approach will be even more embarrassing to Hermione but is the proper thing to do until they work out some relationship that isn't simply student and professor. I hope that doesn't take too long. Hermione would feel less embarrassed if she wasn't the only person behaving so wantonly.
I shall try my best not to write "poor Severus" with my every review. I don't know why I feel more sorry for him than I do for Hermione at the moment. Her condition is horrible. Most horrible for the fact that she isn't in control of what happens to her. Even if it wasn't sex magic she would not be able to resist the compulsions another has placed upon her and must rely heavily and exclusively on some one else. It is made worse only by the fact that being sex magic, she will be humiliated when she can realize that Professor Snape is being forced to help her when she has a moment of lucidity. I suppose my sympathy lies with Severus because of his vulnerability. He is vulnerable to Voldemort. He is vulnerable to Dumbledore and between he and Hermione, I think the potential for a truly broken heart that can't be unbroken resides more strongly with him. I shouldn't assume Hermione to be so shallow though. She is the same age as he was when his heart was broken possibly permanently by Lily Potter. I say "possibly" due to my hope and expectation that the reason you have written this story is so that Severus can have the love he deserves and will find it with Hermione. Merlin!!! How much worse it would be to be fixed on Dumbledore. Besides the fact that he is not sexy in the least and Severus is sex incarnate, he's gay and would not enjoy her attentions at all. At least if Severus can allow himself to enjoy his new fate, Hermione won't have to feel so terrible that he is forced to do this against his choosing, though willingly. How happy the circumstance is that they speak the same language and he could use the book to tell her what the situation is and that she would be able to understand and appreciate that approach. Unfortunately, they will both be mortified for a while, I think.
"...and when the time comes you will set her free to live out her life as if Your Master had never interfered with her." Fuck that, Dumbledore. Poor Severus. Every thing he can never have has been dumped at his feet. I am hoping that Hermione will love him and he will let her. At least I hope Snape isn't likely to die in this version of Tom Riddle's demise. A bang up start!!! I'm hooked!